#Honesty is the best policy 💪🖤

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lofty loom
stray marsh
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you havent even convinced me to like your content let alone by your shirts…

lofty loom
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yeah i got on to my editor for that. i told her put it 45% into the video.. i was mad

stray marsh
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yeah i can imagine

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live and learn i guess 😅

wide coral
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Alright you asked for honesty so I'm not gonna hold back

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95% of that video sucked

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Ngl the idea is there. You've got a strong hook for sure.

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The thumbnail could be improved with the feedback on the other tab, but for the most part, I think people would want to click to watch someone eat a worm

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But when you say that's gonna happen in the video, you need to prove to them that the video delivers upon that expectation within the first 5 seconds

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Because I watched through the first 3 minutes and I wasn't sure if anyone ACTUALLY eats a worm in this video

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Then I did the thing everyone does... I double tapped to skip through the video to see if it happens. I just watched the best part (the worm eating) and left

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That's really bad for your retention

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To stop people from skipping, show them a sneak peak of bro eating the worm in the first 5 seconds and then cut it RIGHT when he's about to take the bite.

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Then cut out the part where you're talking about "I'm hungry", go straight into explaining the challenge

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I also think the challenge could be different

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Take inspiration from the Spill Your Guts show. The rules are super simple: you get asked an embarassing and uncomfortable question and you have to answer it. If you don't want to answer it, you have to eat something disgusting. This challenge is better than your basketball challenges because it makes the challenge itself (even without the penalty) more interesting to watch, because people love watching people answer embarassing questions

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Maybe you could do truth or dare, and if someone refuses to do the dare they've been given, they have to eat something DISGUSTING

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That way, there's multiple big disgusting moments (or at least multiple funny moments where someone does an embarassing dare) throughout the video and the viewer doesn't need to skip forward to the good part

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BC challenges like cup stacking and basketball are boring to watch

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And no one wants to watch you eat a gummy lunchable vs real lunchable. That's boring. Make one of them disgusting after each challenge so the viewer has no reason to skip

lofty loom
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I went off my competitors videos. Faze Rug was the best one. but thanks brodie

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and i’m not putting the worm in the first 3 mins. There gonna click off after the worm..

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but i appreciate it

wide coral
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No they're not bro, you don't show the worm actually being eaten, just a sneak peak of what's to come if they arch the whole video

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Watch*

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At least show the worm to prove that the audience is gonna get when they clicked for

lofty loom
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thumbnail ?

stray marsh