Roast my Short Form video

[vernal veldt]

Rate the editing only

[valid hazel]

This video is over edited. Subtitles is good, the bad and good visual animation was good. The rest is overkill.

[vernal veldt]

Okay, thanks!

[valid hazel]

I don't know what audience you try to reach but if it's teens and A young adults put some gta gameplay under the video

[vernal veldt]

I don't think the audience is teens

Gameplay is just not good for these kinds of videos in my opinion

[robust crest]

I gotta give you the editing skills which clearly are great especially the balancing animation frames. But it in a way too much interactivity in the entirety of video with transitions + colors + sounds can undermines the goal of video to deliver a message

[lunar violet]

a tiny bit too much. but the skills r good

[placid vale]

I actually like this a lot, I think for the future, audio improvement will help but other than that its solid

[vernal veldt]

Thanks for the feedback!

[vernal veldt]

Yeah, my client recorded it, the audio is not the best, but he will use another mic in the future I think

[pulsar steppe]

or subway surfers 😂

id say potentially add some light background music

nothing too overpowering though that would distract from the message