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dapper stirrup Dec 15, 2023, 4:26 PM

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I'm posting the video tomorrow morning, if anybody could give me some feedback that would be fantastic! (I've been staring at this for too long and need your fresh and unbiased eyes)

The video is about how I broke a record finding stuff underwater on my scuba dive. I returned 3 items back to their owners. Still working on the title.

THANK YOU 🙏

balmy kayak Dec 15, 2023, 4:35 PM

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The metal detector is a bit lost in the weeds. What about placing it on the left, either in your hand or in place of your hand?

dapper stirrup Dec 15, 2023, 5:03 PM

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@balmy kayak coming through as per usual!!

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I considered removing the detector since it's not the main topic...

balmy kayak Dec 15, 2023, 5:26 PM

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dapper stirrup I considered removing the detector since it's not the main topic...

It does speak to "finding" stuff though.

dapper stirrup Dec 15, 2023, 5:41 PM

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It totally does. I think if I had more time I'd reshoot the detector and add it back in more visibly but I'm cramming to finish the video today and all night tonight. So I guess this time around I'm just looking for basic editing tweak suggestions

opaque ocean Dec 15, 2023, 6:25 PM

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I like it - but I agree with Brian. Your title with the image should get clicks.

balmy kayak Dec 15, 2023, 6:40 PM

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Attached without the metal detector – I personally find it visually distracting (in its current position).

balmy kayak Dec 15, 2023, 7:00 PM

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Another variation – I got plenty of time (unemployed) 😆

dapper stirrup Dec 15, 2023, 7:08 PM

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Wow thank you!!! I am leaning toward removing the detector too, letting the eye go straight to the $100

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I like it without the arrow, it lets us see that the dollar is floating

balmy kayak Dec 15, 2023, 7:19 PM

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dapper stirrup I like it without the arrow, it lets us see that the dollar is floating

Yeah, unnecessary and kinda distracting.

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Kinda reminds me of this ⬆️

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Which is good, because of how iconic this cover is.

dapper stirrup Dec 15, 2023, 7:40 PM

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I was thinking of this too!

balmy kayak Dec 15, 2023, 7:41 PM

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LOL, great minds my friend 😎

dapper stirrup Dec 16, 2023, 10:42 AM

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Ok here's the latest version, I removed the detector and tweaked the colors, brightness, contrast and vibrance

balmy kayak Dec 16, 2023, 10:47 AM

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Looks great! 👍

dapper stirrup Dec 16, 2023, 7:53 PM

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^^this is the unlisted video

balmy kayak Dec 16, 2023, 9:09 PM

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"I BROKE MY metal detecting RECORD!"

#I'd love feedback by TONIGHT!