#Roast my Animation Vidcon Experience Video!
steel wyvern
unique seal
Very interesting! You use your voice very well and kept my attention right through. Know nothing about this genre, but my initial impression was some of the animation at the beginning seemed static for a bit too long, maybe it just needs a small zoom in or out as the story dictates, but lacked some movement in my opinion. Maybe I got used to it as your adventure moved along as did not notice it so much from about half way through. My biggest take away was the emotion in your voice though, am going to have to work on that. Is it just lots of practice and playback or are there other techniques people could work on to help their video`s?
steel wyvern
Very interesting! You use your voice very well and kept my attention right throu...
Thanks so much! That was very helpful! But I’m afraid I don’t understand what you are saying at the end there. Are you saying the emotion in my voice needs to change and I have to practice something?
unique seal
Thanks so much! That was very helpful! But I’m afraid I don’t understand what yo...
Sorry, did not explain it very well, was very impressed with how you use your voice and think a lot of us could learn from that to improve our story telling and video`s in general. Do you have any tips for us to do this?
steel wyvern
Sorry, did not explain it very well, was very impressed with how you use your vo...
Thanks!! I’m a voice actor so it comes a lot from acting classes, improv, theatre, and watching cartoons and trying to do impressions
I think my storytelling training also helps knowing where to build up and put pay offs
unique seal
I think my storytelling training also helps knowing where to build up and put pa...
Your skills really shine through, it has encouraged me to play around with my voice more as sound way too monotone after listening to you and realizing what is possible.
steel wyvern
I recommend experimentation paves the way for new opportunities! But also I think your voice works for your soothing content
celest nebula
Hey Claudy, I just watched your video all the way through and it was super entertaining! Kept me hooked the whole time (and also made me really want to go to vidcon haha!!)
I agree with Mark your voice acting is really good and keeps the video dynamic and fun! Also the animation is super good as well, I love your cartoony style and the video reminds me of JaidenAnimations, a youtuber who I love lots! Your fun personality shines e the video and makes it a fun experience overall! Keep up the good work and I can’t wait for part 2!
steel wyvern
Oh my gosh thank you so much!! That is so good to hear!! I also like Jaiden Animations!!
hidden anvil
this video was amazing, nothing was boring or made me want to click off the video. this is great for viewer retention. overall i think its great
steel wyvern
this video was amazing, nothing was boring or made me want to click off the vide...
Oh my gosh thank you!!!
strong plank
Amazing video! Watched the entire thing from start to finish, subbed and turned on all notifications 😃 Can't wait for the next!
My only suggestion: Consider adding some background music. It will add another layer to your content and fill some of those quieter moments.
steel wyvern
Amazing video! Watched the entire thing from start to finish, subbed and turned ...
Yes!! Thanks I do want to put background music! I’m just being so picky idk what to go for
strong plank
Yes!! Thanks I do want to put background music! I’m just being so picky idk what...
I feel like something jazzy might work well for your content.
steel wyvern
Ooh jazzy aye? Jazz is fuuun
strong plank
Right? Might be a good fit for your playful style and sense of humour.
The YouTube library has some good stuff if you're on a fixed budget and don't want to worry about copyright and monetization issues down the road. You just gotta spend some time digging through.
steel wyvern
Yeah that’s where I’ll go first I also have storyblocks so that helps
paper topaz
Hey Claudy! Just watched your video, and perused your channel, and subscribed : )
One thing you did well: Your hook was amazing. I thought you were a famous YouTube who had own show and I some how missed your session (!). STRONG voice and storytelling throughout.
One thing to improve: Delivering on the Title Thumbnail Combo and the first 30 seconds of the video: You set up this EPIC hook with the show and then, I kinda got confused on where you were taking the story. Maybe giving something like: "Here is part one of my crazy VidCon Stories", Also I'm not sure who the character on the right of the side of the thumbnail. Could be an opportunity to simply : )
KEEP GOING! I worked at YouTube for 3 yrs and got to work with Rebecca from Let Me Explain, and Jaiden Animations helping them think through their videos and give YouTube Consultations and Coaching. You're going to be right along side them one day. 🎨🚀