ROAST MY "HOOK RATE" THUMBNAIL & TITLE

[ruby rock]

Hello everyone, here are 4 thumbnail options for my next video. A roast wil be greatly appreciated:

Implemented from the previous roast:
-Keep title to 2 words.
-Add more lighting to my face
-Zoom in to focus in on myself
-Add Mark zuckerberg for association to facebook on version 3.

I can mix and match versions. E.X. Use colors from version 4 and Zuck from version 3.

Here are the titles I am considering:

Version 1: Facebook Ads: The Untold Story Behind HOOK Rates
Version 2: Supercharge Your Facebook Ads: Analyze HOOK Rates to Increase Sales
Version 3: Facebook Ads - What You're NOT Looking At (HOOK RATE)
Version 4: How To Improve Ads By Analyzing Facebook's HOOKRATE

Here is the actual video(posted in the video roast channel)
https://drive.google.com/file/d/14SY9O-pp24bgGTyE_GTW8dAjcEwcB-hu/view?usp=share_link

Version 1:

Version 2:

Version 3:

Version 4:

[nova fern]

I think version 2 is my favorite! I don’t think you’d need to add mark zuckerberg if you already have the facebook logos cause people will know its related to facebook anyways! But it still does look good with him if you decide to keep him!

[ruby rock]

@nova fern thank you for the feeback

[astral bough]

Maybe an alternate title: 'Facebook Hook Rate: What You NEED to know'

[astral bough]

And the third version is my favorite. I prefer it with Zuckerberg, but even if you took him off that composition would still be my favorite.