I might change the list to something like this
HQ
Legate Marshal w/ Archeotech Pistol, Master-Crafted Paragon Blade, Heavy Artificer Armor, Iron Halo, & Cyber-Familiar (170pts)
Tactical Command Tercio w/ your current setup (205pts)
Elites
5-Ogryn Charonite Section (200pts)
5-Ogryn Charonite Section (200pts)
Troops
Veletaris Tercio (416pts)
-6x Hermes Veletaris Sentinels
-Storm Section w/ Vox Interlock in Aurox
-Your Flamer Section w/ Vox Interlock in Aurox
Veletaris Tercio (416pts)
-6x Hermes Veletaris Sentinels
-Storm Section w/ Vox Interlock in Aurox
-Your Flamer Section w/ Vox Interlock in Aurox
Veletaris Tercio (416pts)
-6x Hermes Veletaris Sentinels
-Storm Section w/ Vox Interlock in Aurox
-Your Flamer Section w/ Vox Interlock in Aurox
Fast Attack
Carnodon Strike Squadron (225pts)
-Turret Twin-Linked Lascannon & Two Lascannon Sponsons
--2x Carnodons w/ Searchlights
Thunderbolt w/ Hellstrike Missiles (135pts)
Thunderbolt w/ Hellstrike Missiles (135pts)
Heavy Support
Armored Tercio (480pts)
-Strike Squadron w/ Vanquisher Battle Cannon, Hull Autocannon, & Dozer Blade
-Strike Squadron w/ Vanquisher Battle Cannon, Hull Autocannon, & Dozer Blade
-Strike Squadron w/ Vanquisher Battle Cannon, Hull Autocannon, & Dozer Blade