Thoughts on this 3k EC list?

[minor trail]

In the nicest way possible this is real hard to read

Also IMO Maru Skana needs 3 contemptors

Gotta get that distraction carnifex so that fulgrim can really shine.

Apart from that this list looks good, I don't know perfectly as I play 3ce

[charred kestrel]

Hmm yeah on mobile it was indeed terrible to read. Tried to make it better just now...

[minor trail]

Ah much better thx

[charred kestrel]

Yeah two more contemptor hard..Realistically i suppose could drop the Phoenix spartan and add two giving me 2x las, 1 melta with fists. But then the Phoenix are looking awfully exposed footslogging with only a 5++.

[twilit rain]

What about substituting the Spartan for a Warmonger Consul to join the Phoenix, giving them sonic lances? With the remaining points you could add at least one contemptor more 😄 Oh, maybe I´m missing something from the list, but you need either a Champion or a Warden for the Maru Skara

[zealous hazel]

A few things:
Fulgrim is bulky 6 so he only fits in a Land Raider with 3 terminators or 6 power armoured command squad.
I don't see either a champion or a phoenix warden and 1 of them is required for the Mara Skara RoW
No artificer on the Tactical Sgts means that ap3 will tear through those squads.
You could put Fulgrim and his command squad in the Spartan so they fit and the Phoenix Terminators in the Land Raider.

[charred kestrel]

Ufff yeah was using battle scribe and it didn't pick those up. Seems its still quite incomplete and I need to go back to pen and paper lol. Won't even let me take a Spartan for the Command Squad Tartaros, only if i select Phoenix the option even appears.

[zealous hazel]

no thats correct, you cant take a spartan for a terminator command squad, you have to take 1 in a heavy support slot for them