#Sapian

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scenic silo
nova ocean
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But this level’s really cool

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I love this style

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1/3

scenic silo
nova ocean
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It’s ok (:

devout token
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lemme take a look

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review comming in hot

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SS1: this is very cramped especiacaly (i cant spell) for 8 noobs SS2: This is a great skip DO NOT remove it SS3: This is very confuzing for new players as they dont know where to go (cause they bots) SS4: Remove the disapearing b;lock because it slows down flow SS5: this is just ugly

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btw make sure to click into the screenshots to see the whole photo

scenic silo
scenic silo
devout owl
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I like the new style, but there are still some things to change.

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Its a bit cramped in areas like this.

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I would get rid of these boxes.

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This bit has loads of things wrong with it, why put the saw so far to the right, its not like there are going to be players waiting to dash you, you need to make it a bit less cramped maybe and also when you fall after getting the checkpoint its likely that you will just fall straight back into it again, so put a platform there.

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This bit is really the only bit that is 8p size.

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Once you hit the bounce block it is basically a don't move, its easy to get into that two block gap, even though it should probably be 5-7 blocks, so you might want to actually put a hard obstacle last and not the easiest one last.

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I give this level 3/10.

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@scenic silo

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also w spot

loud trout
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"narrow roads" search doesn't show anything

marsh ibex
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just following it!

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to lazy to press the button

stark sage
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I don’t think 2 fading blocks are necessary and just waste peoples time

grand marsh
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not bad

marsh ibex
scenic silo
loud trout
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they just popped in for one message lol

marsh ibex
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sheeeeeer

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review incoming

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quick lil review before i head to bed
SS1: we have already waited 3 seconds to start so please removoe these two disapering blocks. SS2: the people in the front will get booted up to the top by the goobers in behind which is a sucky feeling IMO. SS3: i know you are going for a narrow vibe but you will most likely have 5-7 goobers rushing through this tunnel. SS4: I think that if you made this bouncy block a skip by lower how far down it goes by 4-5 blocks i think that could be a fun skip. What i would do with this extra space is to turn it into a trial that is then leading down to your finish line 👍

I really like this level but some things that you could improve on is

  1. Make it more themed (I dont know what Sapian means but this is not themed i can tell.)
  2. Even with the Narrow vibe you are doing you still need space which i think is this levels biggest problem at this point.
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Good job on this!

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You did a good level but def needs work @scenic silo

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So by google searching does sapian mean land of rabbits in spannish?