#World of Flowers

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fast moth
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<@&1178134658857308212> could you guys review this level pls?

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@odd ibex could you take a look at this level pls?

odd ibex
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nice name

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Sorry, this is kinda hold right, isn't it?

final spear
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hmmm

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the obstacles are fun but don’t feel very creative

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it feels uninspired

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nothing to make it stand out

odd ibex
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uh

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The design is cool bro

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But there are other issues I see

final spear
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also

odd ibex
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Like, there's no way 32p will fit in here

final spear
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please make the walls thicker

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THIS IS A 32P?

odd ibex
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Yeah lmfao

final spear
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ts feels like an 8p

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also

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make the walls thicker

fast moth
odd ibex
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I will review when you finish your review

fast moth
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!!!

final spear
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if you don’t nebula(ruru) will chew your ear off

fast moth
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Making a one block wide wall is bad

flat panther
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Sorry but this is just unfun and unoriginal

fast moth
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Oh ok

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😢

flat panther
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Also your level has the same structure as the one im working on lol

fast moth
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Nice you’re making a new level!!!

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I love your levels

flat panther
fast moth
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I think the deco of them is good. Am I right?

flat panther
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Like whole sections I just remove cause they jusy don't work

fast moth
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Do you know when you’ll be done with your level I’m exited to see it

flat panther
flat panther
flat panther
fast moth
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Thx😘

hushed estuary
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Too linear and I don't really even see obstacles

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Remember you're making races, races have race-lines, the more race-lines you add the more intense your race will be

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If you simply add one race-line for 80% of ur level where you hold d, that is the most boring you could make it

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Do you understand?

fast moth
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Totally

fast moth
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If you ignore the bad trials

hushed estuary
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Originality where?

fast moth
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On the level

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Like the Flowers

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Is it original or no?

hushed estuary
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No...?

fast moth
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Ok

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😢

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Why did you change your discord?

odd ibex
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Make trials more original

fast moth
odd ibex
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New obstacles that can be worked on 32p

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By the way, if you really want to make it a 32p, you need to make it,

  • a lot easier
  • much more space
  • unique design
  • fix the linear structure
raw tapir
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flower fields at home

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you should try to venture out a bit more all your maps feel very similar

robust adder
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I think you tried to venture out with the creativity and at least in my eyes that did not go unnoticed. The flower aspect has kind of been done but I think it’s a step up in design for sure. Big thing for me with this level is again the level runs very smoothly which is something you constantly do well. But this time I feel like you kinda had tunnel vision around creating obstacles / a theme which is a great thing to have in mind but it seems as though the rest of it was built around the theme which led to a lack of obstacles overall/ competitive player vs. player gameplay. It plays well as a single player but with other players I imagine it’s going to be too straightforward. I actually am a fan of the flowers though, I just think the other aspects listed hold the level back

slim shuttle
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goj trowel happy new year fr