#Snow (Hey Oh)

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lusty kindle
acoustic delta
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heyoh

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whats a hey oh

lusty kindle
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heyoh

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its a heyoh

acoustic delta
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heyoh

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polioil

keen basin
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I'm not doing a deep/full review rn, but

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I believe you can make a better design for snow snowflake 🙏

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This part got me confused ngl

lusty kindle
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its red hot chili peppers logo

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🤑

lusty kindle
acoustic delta
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then theres the everblaze is a nub sign which gives an instant 20/10 more points for me

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and because there are two on each side you get a 50/10 total

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paired with that theres the friendship bias which in total gives this map a 67/10

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i hope you like my first ever review

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matrixical for lc frfrfrfrr

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@lusty kindle

lunar ice
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ts not a 8p

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just make it 16p, and fix a few issues that I can list as soon as I play it for a bit longer

keen basin
lusty kindle
lusty kindle
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@lofty sluice you're a nub

keen basin
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fr

lusty kindle
keen basin
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No no, the gameplay on that part is fine, but when you throw a goober on that, the gravity field makes him think he's supposed to go up, but when he reaches there, nothing is happening, so he loses a lot of time once the map is already short, so you should make a way that he'll know exacly the way to go, I like that part, but it's very confusing. Take this example from Raise the Roof (Yoyble)

The player is thrown up, but he doesn't die, but the saw itself makes them go down again, and once only arrows aren't enough

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Idk if it makes sense mainly if you take what Nebula said and make it a 16p, but I think it's still worthy

lofty sluice
lusty kindle
lusty kindle
keen basin
lusty kindle
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1

keen basin
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😭

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Did you save?

lusty kindle
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🤑

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yeah

keen basin
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Alright, let me check

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It's better

lusty kindle
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nice

lunar ice
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Can you put a jumpzone on top of this? After a bit of speedrun testing I discovered the bottom route is faster but you need to wait so long to be able to get back up, that would probably fix it

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Also without that this would be a misleading trick

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So pick your poison ig 😓

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Other than that shortcut here please

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Lower the speed of these just by a little bit also

keen basin
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Nebula, this feedback is based on 8p or 16p

lunar ice
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Put these two on 5 speed, for people who get target griefed

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or 4 speed works too

lunar ice
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8p doesnt work for this anyway

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the gameplay is too easy

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And the space works just right for 16p, so why not

keen basin
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lol fine

lunar ice
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A bit more effort to make the player get a checkpoint please 😭

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I fear someone might get dashed over and lose the race if they die unluckily

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Also maybe something like this, so you dont fall into the spikes and have a lame finish

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Or at the very least

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Maybe even like this and keep both?

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Ok im done brainstorming for you 😭

lusty kindle
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or shortcut and cp

acoustic delta
lusty kindle
lunar ice
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idk why i said shortcut

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checkpoint obviously

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sorry its 1 AM I shouldnt even be awake 😭

lusty kindle
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lol

weak pasture
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.

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Ummm...to be honest, I don't know which way to go at this point.

fiery wedge
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you go the way you didn’t come from

weak pasture
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Newcomers might fall down here and get confused, not knowing which way to go.

acoustic delta
lusty kindle
lusty kindle
keen basin
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nope

fiery wedge
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doesn’t seem mean to me

keen basin
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You were supposed to be reviewing my map

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But no, because it's not cool to make fun of others, mainly in a certified map where all people of the game will play

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I know it's a joke ofc

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But would an 8y.o think the same?

acoustic delta
fiery wedge
lunar ice
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Just don't add those signs

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I agree

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Say it here, and if you want in any level thats uncertified

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I say just keep levels a tiny bit professional, thats also why I dont want a level to be called "67" or any brainrot like that

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It would just be unfunny or annoying in the future

lusty kindle
lunar ice
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sent to LC

weak pasture
weak pasture
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I'm eagerly awaiting your answer 😋

lunar ice
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Sent what

weak pasture
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Uncertifited Level

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DId u forget

lunar ice
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Ping me on it please