My Nice One

[scarlet juniper]

I think he posted it already

[reef prism]

oh kk

[azure garnet]

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=6f1e8821-8daa-4ded-86c5-1af8a9c7b9dc

that is the real on

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[errant axle]

i dislike it

[short gorge]

but but but its a cool level nebula how could you not like it

ok to be fr tho there are quite a few problems with this level

1. crampedness. 16 goobers are going throug here, make sure there is room for all of them without excessive shoving

2. unclear directional sense, especially in the first "cave" sectio where its a S shaped and its not very clear which path is fastest immidiately, and at teh bottom there are a multitude of different obstacles that do not relaly add to that section's value

3. splitting of paths at the rectangular part does not make sense, just make one or two parralel paths that have good obstacles instead, and make the descent part wider bc it is cramped rn

quick review cuz i need to do hw

ss1: cramped ahh, esp since goobers going to be close together at start
ss2: delete the softlock-like part that is no fun, the hammer could be a good obstacle but currently is buns, i would make a jump sectino there where if you fall (onto the blue ice position) you die, add a checkpoitn before then too if you do make that change
ss3: too cramped
ss4: delete top path and make another parralel horezontal path to make it more playable and less cramped

@azure garnet

ok lemme try to see what nebs would critique
ss1: whole section is just walking and jumping simulator, does not add value to the level
ss2: all 3 of these obstacles look like they have potential but execution wise its done pretty poorly

another walking simulator-ish part

use obstacles that are fun and add value to your level instead of making a ton of boring linear parts that are just hold left and keep jumping or smth like that

i think i covered about 20% of what nebula probably has to say about this level

goat level reviewer

[sterile mauve]

Thats lc now ig

Spend so much time on a level and get this feedback…

but it was said that that might be the case

:/

[granite plover]

can you stop saying ig all the time it’s kinda annoying

also just because someone doesn’t like your map doesn’t mean it’s bad

[granite plover]

i played it and yeah it should be way more simple imo

too much going on too much details

look at yoybles new cert levels they are simple and got cert almost immediately with needing barely any changes

[sterile mauve]

If you are unsure about something just say ig, why would it be bad

[sterile mauve]

fr back in the days i also used to think all you gotta do is spend very much time on a level

[errant axle]

this is definitely not the creators fault, but if i wanted to say anything id be repeating the same points ive been saying for months

Its exhausting and takes too much time, I'm still doing this for free 😭

LC was originally never for reviewing aswell I just brought the review culture into gooberdash

Its only picking levels but it expanded upon that at some point

[sterile mauve]

Maybe if you just made a post with the qualities a level should and shouldnt have. I think that would be great for creators

So you have some sort of standarsized guide

[errant axle]

all LC have different opinions, one might like cramped the other one doesnt

my opinion isnt fact

[azure garnet]

ok

iwill try to do it better

[dense zephyr]

Non non

[azure garnet]

ouioui