A lvl about going to the moon
#Moon Expedition
wraith plaza
erm forgor to ping <@&1178134658857308212> @median spade @vivid slate @edgy basin Thx😘
echo hamlet
Why you pinged LC and nutt
opaque surge
Why would you make these arrows change direction every second?
This cane be better
Chaotic and the saw moving back and forth is unnecessary. Make something else for this
Uneven but it looks cool though
Why so many arrows?
Uneven triangle
Why is the checkpoint up there?
Really boring since all you do is go up, there is no obstacles
Uneven
Softlock
This flings you into the lasers
Unnecessary animation
Put blocks where the platforms meet to make it look nicer
@wraith plaza done
vivid slate
This level is too long
wraith plaza
<@1376007207237189633> done
k thx
wraith plaza
This level is too long
erm no
wraith plaza
Unnecessary animation
i rlly like to go all out with my animations
edgy basin
You are learning from your previous levels, and it shows. However, this one still needs some work as most obstacles are uncreative and some aren’t fun to play. The last section is way too long, boring, and empty, it should take at most, 5 seconds and have at least some sparse decoration. I also wouldn’t start the level off by killing the player, and the secret kitten award spot doesn’t feel like an award at all. You get behind the other players, all because you didn’t know that you weren’t supposed to get on top of the rocket ship thingy. Either make it feel like an award (shortcut or something) or remove it altogether. Some of these parts are just hard to read, there is so much going on that I get a sensory overload and don’t know what to do. Please make some parts more visually pleasing, and don’t have some many moving things. I do like the part where you can get smashed through the platform, so keep that part. Also, try and mix in some parts that aren’t gravity zones or jump zones or both. Be a tiny bit more creative. Once you’ve done that, I will take the time to do a thorough review.
@wraith plaza
holy crap that is a lot of yapping
echo hamlet
wraith plaza
You are learning from your previous levels, and it shows. However, this one stil...
alr bet this was kinda a draft that i did last night and wenesday
plush mason
<:jawdrop:1152081208889585684>
tytan is white now
echo hamlet
tytan is white now
Tytes*
echo hamlet
Damn
echo hamlet
<@1325888764677197826> you did me dirty in odd one out ðŸ˜
Sorry lol
I was at prize round
My wi-fi is very low so I was just chilling
Not really trying
echo hamlet
Bro that was sucking bad ðŸ˜
Skill issue
I also got pushed away by two players but whatever
wraith plaza
Chaotic and the saw moving back and forth is unnecessary. Make something else fo...
should remove this section?
twin meteor
Got theWR
opaque surge
should remove this section?
If you want to, sure
wraith plaza
alr @opaque surge @vivid slate @edgy basin im done and pls make sure to play the ending after you qualify i spent a lot of work on it
opaque surge
This flings you into the lasers
Still flings you into lasers
wraith plaza
@opaque surge @vivid slate @edgy basin and <@&1178134658857308212> am done everyones review
vivid slate
<@743467707890008104> <@1263186836076105751> <@1051188977090174996> and <@&117...
Later in the week
lost forge
Scsh 1: We don't need to die immediately
Scsh 2: Make one arrow point right and the other left and stay in that orientation
Scsh 3: The signs and blocks are not done properly, don't sync
I don't like the arrow direction switchingoverall
@wraith plaza
done
frosty temple
goon exposition
as for the level, I'm sorry but it's just a hot mess. The start makes you die as said by others, and the level itself is very linear and sloppy. Try focusing more on building a good outline for the map and then filling in the spots with creative obstacles
opaque surge
You can also skip quite a large portion of the level
wraith plaza
i just have like no clue what to put here
trim elk
as for the level, I'm sorry but it's just a hot mess. The start makes you die as...
how is it linear
wraith plaza
maybye multiple sections
and maybye not triangular idk
but @vivid slate you give amazing review so like
trim elk
how is it linear
i think midsection to end is very solid
echo hamlet
isr is alive
trim elk
hi
echo hamlet
those who's alive
trim elk
yes
trim elk
Scsh 3: The signs and blocks are not done properly, don't sync
with the exception of this
which has to change
vivid slate
but <@1263186836076105751> you give amazing review so like
Like what?
wraith plaza
i think midsection to end is very solid
really? good to know thanks
median spade
I don’t like how you get killed immediately and it’s a bit too confusing and messy
wraith plaza
I don’t like how you get killed immediately and it’s a bit too confusing and mes...
@median spade i changed that
wraith plaza
@vivid slate i understand if you have lots on your plate but could i please have a review it would phenomanal if you did😘
vivid slate
Yes
Review time!!!
Ss1: I don’t like this trial because if you’re too high and there is a saw coming you will always die because you can’t go up or go down to dodge it.
Ss2: I don’t like how the lasers move and when you arrive from the gravity field you will always die because you will be project in them.
Ss3: I don’t like the shape of this trial so you should add wall like in the screenshot and add a way to die in this trial.
Ss4: Add a block like in the screenshot.
Ss5: Change this trial because it’s not a trial and not really cool.
Good job!!! I see a big changement between you now and you when you start. The level needs more decoration everywhere.
MaLibellule
@wraith plaza done
@wraith plaza done
wraith plaza
Ss1: I don’t like this trial because if you’re too high and there is a saw comin...
alrighty thank you but just btw i cant put any grass beacause... we are on the moon and there is no grass on the moon but yes i will try to fix some stuff
vivid slate
Oh ok I understand but try to use the two backgrounds to make the level more beautiful
wraith plaza
ok
wraith plaza
btw anyone want to put a quote in the lvl?
twin meteor
btw anyone want to put a quote in the lvl?
Carrot - valla
opaque surge
No - creditcardman
wraith plaza
alr u guys r in
median spade
yes, the optical illusion was fact checked to be true, and the fact check was fact checked to be true, and that fact check of the fact check was fact checked to be true, and then the fact check of the fact check of the fact check of the optical illusion was deemed false by yet another fact check, however the fact check of the fact check of the fact check of the fact check of the optical illusion was indeed determined to be false by another fact check and confirmed that the fact check of the fact check of the fact check of the optical illusion, which was thought to be false, was in reality agreed upon to be correct based on the fact check proving the fact check of the fact check of the fact check of the fact check of the optical illusion was false, inevitably leading to the unanimous result of the fact check of the fact check of the fact check of the optical illusion being true, and ultimately concluding that the optical illusion was affirmatively and undeniably correct in its statement. -GooberNut
@deep rampart do you liek my quote
wraith plaza
yes, the optical illusion was fact checked to be true, and the fact check was fa...
word for word
median spade
no i was just kidding lol
wraith plaza
OMG I SHOULD HAVE JUST COPIED YOUR TEXT INSTEAD OF WRITING THE WHOLE DAMN THING OUT
IM SO STUPID
median spade
dang
wraith plaza
or is 6drama joker9 just trolling
deep rampart
imagine not having pronouns pregnant/man
echo hamlet
Weird/Everblaze
twin meteor
didnt know u where a female <@1049044445196193873>
fr
twin meteor
not that it matters
fr
wraith plaza
Ss1: I don’t like this trial because if you’re too high and there is a saw comin...
@vivid slate done
vivid slate
Review Time!!!
Ss1: Add blocks there.
Ss2: Add arrows here.
Ss3: The checkpoint here is exceeding so make it more small by one block.
Good job this level is very cool!
MaLibellule
@wraith plaza done
wraith plaza
@vivid slate thanks
wraith plaza
@vivid slate done also <@&1178134658857308212> could i have some votes i really think this lvl is worth certifacation
deep rampart
Imo like a third of the map or more isn't cert worthy including the beginning spaceship
The laser part might be too hard for noobs
Not enough decor or unique designs
I'm not rly that great at pointing out flaws bc I feel like some parts just have to be scrapped and redone with smth actually interesting enough for cert, no offense
Great level, but not unique enough for cert
There are some unique sections but not enough or they're too short or they're not used multiple times in slightly different ways like in theory of everything with the pick da path ig
Take this #1394677136601780356 message as an example of what makes some cert lvls good
And XmrPysim by yellowstorm, it has these cool lookin unique land platforms
Idk why im writing this im just bored at 1 am lol
Just try making ur lvl unique and cool looking and decently fun gameplay and decor
🫃🫃🫃
opaque surge
Everblaze doing a review on a level that isn't a kaizo????
echo hamlet
Everblaze doing a review on a level that isn't a kaizo????
I thought the same
deep rampart
Everblaze doing a review on a level that isn't a kaizo????
Fr I was bored at 1 am
wraith plaza
Take this https://discord.com/channels/798957956573429811/1394677136601780356/13...
ok thx
wraith plaza
Not enough decor or unique designs
kinda hard to put decor on the moon but will try
deep rampart
wraith plaza
????
wraith plaza
<@&1178134658857308212> i get that you got lots on ur plate but just a review or smth would mean the world
craggy latch
First impression: coherent structure, too many gravity fields, not enough decoration
take for example this segment
It just looks out of place
wraith plaza
@vivid slate and @craggy latch i tried to add some design but its kinda hard tell me if i need more