#inspiration

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subtle berry
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gonna start on the design now goobersmile

solar star
subtle berry
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i finish design goobersmile

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bitter briar
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YESSSSSS

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ITS FIRE

versed rock
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might be a small for public lobbies

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you should maybe try to add more space

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vagrant tusk
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muted bough
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subtle berry
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oh shucks i didn't know there was a skip ere

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ill keep it though :)

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muted bough
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elder rover
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too cramped

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ill rate everything once this level is larger

subtle berry
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built this one separately from v1, but v2 uses elements from v1

idle flint
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SS1: Change the obstacle because 1. the white lines and 2. (most important) it won't work in a multiplayer lobby because all of the random saws
SS2: Uneven number of saws between the top and the bottom. Also the gravity field is just unnecessary and too strong
SS3: Change this obstacle. I don't really like it and it maybe too difficult for noobs.

Also add decor. Most of your obstacles are good but the ones above really need improvement I think your first level was better

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subtle berry
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would it be just these 3 obstacles that make the second worst than the first?

idle flint
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Imo yeah

subtle berry
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thank you for your valuable feedback sir

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bitter briar
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yessssss

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looks fire

idle flint
subtle berry
versed rock
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Shortcut is WAAAY too op

subtle berry
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you mean in the first version?

subtle berry
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please review 🥺

versed rock
subtle berry
subtle berry
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finished the entire gp of v2, gonna deco it more

idle flint
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Much better

subtle berry
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finished deco

subtle berry
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there was another ultraskip but i just added ice everywhere and put a sign that said "no lol"

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🤷‍♂️

idle flint
subtle berry
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is the map too long?

elder rover
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On my first try I did it in ~100 seconds and I am a skilled player

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My biggest issue is that the level feels like a singleplayer level, because theres almost no section where i can pass a player

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but its honestly fun and i would vote for it with more polish in design (ill get to that once you fix the length, singleplayer issue)

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Oh also, that crusher section is incredibly annoying

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pls revamp

merry yacht
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This level has improved for me. But it's too long! On average it takes a new player 90 seconds to win.

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subtle berry
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imo the more long parts would be the crusher section and the dropper

subtle berry
subtle berry
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but it still only saved 15 seconds 😢

subtle berry
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i made it a bit shorter

limber sierra
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did i get wr?

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subtle berry
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tell me 🙏

limber sierra
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skillz

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years and years

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of training

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that one map

subtle berry
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thats insane

limber sierra
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this one map

subtle berry
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you bended time just to get this record

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how many years

limber sierra
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i think sub 1764 could be possib;e

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but im not sure

limber sierra
subtle berry
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😱

subtle berry
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absolutely insane

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crazy

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blasphemy

limber sierra
bitter briar
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oh yeahhhh

subtle berry
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@limber sierra

limber sierra
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gar

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woah

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almost sub 1764

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crazy

subtle berry
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its wr tho

limber sierra
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true

merry yacht
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Shorter but bit long

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merry yacht
subtle berry
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keep in mind this is like my 4th level ever 💀

subtle berry
# elder rover but its honestly fun and i would vote for it with more polish in design (ill get...

ok i think i somewhat addressed all of what you said goobnana

ss1, ss2, and ss3 are skips that i made that'll hopefully fix the "singleplayerness" of the level
ss4: i replaced the crusher section with simpler obstacles
ss5: i tried to shorten/take out unnecessary parts, but it still feels a bit long. ~75 seconds without skips and playing like a non-speedrunner, while most levels i see are done in around 30-40 (correct me if im wrong goobersmile)

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forgot another skip, i added little 1 wide gaps so if you're good enough you can skip this entire disappearing block part

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subtle berry
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please give your thoughts when you have time goobersmile

versed rock
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self review lol

subtle berry
subtle berry
limber sierra
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buh

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fr

muted bough
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i would die before i made a level without a crap ton of bg1 blocks

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muted bough
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