Zion_Golf

[west tartan]

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io?play=9b23903f-3bce-4e1d-9cbe-d48ea523b3ed This is my first level!!!!

Level made by Zion-RBR
Level Idea by Spino_Golf

I hope it get certified 🙏

[silk vigil]

can someone throw the box up into the square area in the first room

[west tartan]

noooooo😭

[ebon agate]

Bugs 😭

Actually I can pass that little zone without pushing boxes there lol

@west tartan

[west tartan]

i tried my best

sob

[ebon agate]

Try detecting a box is it there and make if a box detected and then the door will open?

[west tartan]

if I could but im new in this game

[ebon agate]

I suck at building maps

But better on speedrunning and inventing shortcuts lol

[paper wraith]

ok ima try an @umbral iron reveiw. Ss1: make the higher platform way lower cuz its way to high and to ez. Ss2: take away these gravity feilds they are so anoying. Ss3: just look closely at my screen look where the box is you HAVE to fix that or there is no way in a billion years this is getting certified. Ss4: the saw can randomly spawn here which got me TWICE so pls put a lil ! sign or smth. Ss5: make this harder all this is is pushing a box of a cliff. Ss6: Delete these bouncy blocks or ima freak out. Ss7: put the sign in the ground it just looks better. Ss8: No need for lasers here i get that ur trying to make a different trial but idk. Over the best "golf" out there (exept the og spino golf) but honestly this has a lot of potencial and keep pinging me if u want reviews 😘

[cedar summit]

That's prolly not possible

[ebon agate]

Idk

Prolly means there’s a way

[cedar summit]

Without complicated box entanglement magic idk, it's not possible

[ebon agate]

💀

Within my English skill

I didnt understand anything in it

Only thing I understand is box, without, magic, not, possible

[cedar summit]

Play Better Combo Lock by me

[ebon agate]

[west tartan]

thank you for reviewwing

ill change Ss2, Ss3, Ss4, Ss5, and Ss6

[shadow rose]

You should ask Klainer Spino for permission

[west tartan]

i asked him

and he taught me a lot

[shadow rose]

*taught

[west tartan]

lol sorry

embarassing

[ebon agate]

Hehe

[quiet sphinx]

1. I am NOT KleinerSpino
2. I did not tell him anything about your map
3. He will be mad if your map gets certified
4. You should not care, he does not own a copyright or something

Feedback for the map: Very nice. Especially considering you are new to the game and this is your first map. I really had fun playing it. BUT if someone copies a concept/idea of someone else and goes for certification he should try to improve it or at least give it a new twist in my opinion. Box-Interaction in your level is not really creative, tricky or challenging. Just push it once and the box action of the room is done. Your level would nearly play the same if you remove the "box-mechanics". So in my opinion its a downgrade to the original. But others may see it different. Spino-Golf is often considered too hard, maybe there is a niche for an easier clone.

[west tartan]

k ill change partly

im still thinking what "new gimmick" should i add to this stage

[lethal sparrow]

im also making a golf level but it gets insanely hard after a while