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[quaint plaza]

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io?play=5bbab042-b195-400f-84d1-40ad44b2e752

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Im still thinking about which theme i should use i think snow would be quiet cool too

[balmy peak]

Not real reveiw but u should 100% put a secret finish line here

[somber crag]

esports styule v2?

cool

[dull cosmos]

i liked this map and was gonna vote for it until i realized how bad the end was

[vast fiber]

Me too...

[quaint plaza]

from which point do you not like it anymore, so i can change the ending

[quaint plaza]

@vast fiber From which point would you like me to overwork the map

[quaint plaza]

Bruh, who of you disliked my map?

@dull cosmos @vast fiber Changed the finish 🫡

[vast fiber]

Not bad & JK

I’ll review later

I think you should limit your use of floor in these edge levels because it's easy to walk through.

[cosmic shard]

@quaint plaza would you put the map as public for review?

[vast fiber]

you see, the level also works on the edge they have limited floor usage to avoid going through

[quaint plaza]

ITs public by now

[cosmic shard]

thank you

[quaint plaza]

Ik

Its funny tho imo

but youre right ig

[smoky sleet]

No sorry

Due to the way the level is designed, (ex. the terraining & obstacles at the start are very linear, in a tunnel) it'll have lots of pushing & will feel cramped, resulting in it not being fun. You can definitely do better with the checkpoints too, I managed to skip two just playing normally.

A personal ick I have with levels is when they add some kaizo route/skip to let you go faster, just make your main level good and you would never have to add this imo
I tried to explain how to add skips well here --> #1366790388412711072 message

Though, I think your level seems super fun in singleplayer, and thats what I think it'd be awesome for. My advice to you is design your levels in a way where the player can create a route, not you yourself. That doesn't mean make it free to explore, but let the player experiment

Also regarding skips, this is what I mean. Imo this is how I enjoy skips the most

Of course it could have been made a bit better, but I think you see the vision

[quaint plaza]

There are some parts of the level tha allow pretty free playing like this one

[smoky sleet]

Nah, not really. You simply hold left in this part

[quaint plaza]

but you can supperjump to the ceiling earlier

[smoky sleet]

That is a good skip and I reccomend you keep that style of shortcut, but at the end of the day the section itself is not fun and thats more important

[vast fiber]

Special new player the probability of losing is very high

[quaint plaza]

wdym?

[smoky sleet]

idk either what he means, but id assume decent players will always outskill noobs in linear Hold L/R lines

[quaint plaza]

Is that a problem?

[smoky sleet]

Nah, but the outcome is that new players will struggle to keep with the pack and obviously lose. So we give them more options to play a part so they can keep up with others.

Just simple gamedesign imo

[vast fiber]

Yeah that’s my mean

[smoky sleet]

Its kinda hard to explain, but noobs will sometimes struggle to do a part, so if you give them more room to experiment they'll be able to clear it easier

thats why we also always say more space = better

not only because it removes cramping, but thats another reason

[smoky sleet]

i guess you can say more room for error

If that makes any sense

[quaint plaza]

But on "Goober Parade!" you also kinda hold right

And for a longer time so you dont even get a skip

Where is the diffrence?

[smoky sleet]

on Goober Parade! there are many ways to outskill your opponents with well designed skips. Thats the difference

[quaint plaza]

But i also have skips to outskill your opponent

[smoky sleet]

Okay we're getting offtrack lol

the difference in Goober Parade is not the skips, sorry for telling you that

its just not close to being as linear as this level is

[quaint plaza]

I held right the throughout the entire recording lol

That part is what i would call linear, mean while on qwert you change direction frequently

[smoky sleet]

But this is just manipulative

You left out 2 parts which you needed skill to cross, didn't do either of the two skips, what am I supposed to tell you?

[quaint plaza]

but if you do the skips on my map it wont be linear in any way too

but we were talking about the normal way werent we?

[smoky sleet]

This is such a pointless debate, I'm not going to change my mind about your level lol

we're just wasting time

[quaint plaza]

I know that, unless i change it in a way that makes you like it, and thats exactly what i want to do, but i want to know why you think about it that way bruh and you havent completly explained it to me yet

[quaint plaza]

*carefully choosing my words

[vast fiber]

WHat? I do not drown

[quaint plaza]

huh?

[vast fiber]

@cosmic shard pls vote

[carmine moon]

Review time!!!

[vast fiber]

vvote before

[quaint plaza]

[vast fiber]

[vast fiber]

Bỏ phiếu trước đã

[quaint plaza]

*Me waiting to hear that the level is missing decoration

[vast fiber]

ii's really

[cosmic shard]

I still have to review it

wait

[vast fiber]

vvoteherre

[quaint plaza]

You wanna do a 1v1 one day or this day?

i would like to see whos better 😏

…

What about LUCIFER

where is he?

@vast fiber LUCIFER Vanished!

[quaint plaza]

The devil cantwin me for his site lol

[vast fiber]

Are @carmine moon met Poiluours?

[cosmic shard]

Of course, we can do this later

[vast fiber]

ellilot.cbnn

What level are you @cosmic shard @quaint plaza

malibellule: reviewing

[quaint plaza]

9 on my account i have rn and 11 on my old account

[vast fiber]

better than me

[cosmic shard]

1st and 2nd screenshot: Those parts kinda... hmm... Theres nothing here sorry

Overall, this level is crumped and obstacles arent really unique at all

[cosmic shard]

I'm level 11

[quaint plaza]

😭

hmm…

[cosmic shard]

I didnt liked this at all, but theres some potential

[vast fiber]

Add background 1 behind the disappearing blocks
@quaint plaza

This checkpoint is easily overlooked. @quaint plaza

[quaint plaza]

ill put it down and flip it so you get it automaticly

[vast fiber]

AAddbackground here too @quaint plaza

[vast fiber]

OOk@

[carmine moon]

Ss1: There is nothing and then a gravity field so you should add a gravity field to fill the void.

Ss2: The gravity field on the floors is not cool because it makes you jump a little and takes away the feeling of the block to goobers so you should remove it.

Ss3: Add an arrow on that section and the gravity fields that I surrounded are not useful because there is always a gravity field beside and it’s not beautiful (because there are too many gravity fields).

Ss4: You should add a floor here because the ice block should not be on that trial to personally.

Ss5: Theses disappearing blocks seems put randomly because there are places with a lot and spot with literally nothing.

Ss6: There is no block here and I don’t find this beautiful and useful on the level so you should add block.

Ss7: You should add sign like on the screenshot to inform goobers to go on the next section.

Ss8: this section needs arrow(s).

This level is pretty cool need more amelioration but seems beautiful you should add some Liana here and there because the level is too purple.

MaLibellule

@quaint plaza done

[vast fiber]

FFIXITTTTTTTT @quaint plaza

If you touch this checkpoint, when you die it will respawn at the exact spot you just touched.

And if you touch the checkpoint like the one above, it will take more than 5 seconds to get out.

[carmine moon]

How to have This design on the Wall?

[quaint plaza]

Got very deep down in the editor

and the ground will become glitchier and glitchier until copletly diffrent

[carmine moon]

And this level should also be a 8 one

[carmine moon]

Will it lag?

[quaint plaza]

no

not for me at least

but everything shivers a bit, and is a bit glitchy

[quaint plaza]

@smoky sleet Is there any map that you would say is perfect that i can use as an orientation?

[smoky sleet]

any KleinerSpino map

[quaint plaza]

alr…

thats bad im not that creative

[carmine moon]

@quaint plaza did you saw my review?

[quaint plaza]

*see

not yet i was playing

[quaint plaza]

ss2 if i would remove the gravity field you would fallthrough theplatforms and die

its a glitch the platforms dont work if you have a certain speed

[carmine moon]

Oh ok but you can just replace that by a block

[quaint plaza]

i think its funny as it is

[carmine moon]

Um ok

[vast fiber]

Are u fixed???

[quaint plaza]

not yet

[vast fiber]

K

[quaint plaza]

🐧

[vast fiber]

anyways

1/3

[quaint plaza]

@carmine moon I wont do lianas tho they dont fit the theme

[carmine moon]

Ok

[quaint plaza]

FINISHED!

[vast fiber]

k

lemme review

wait me 1 second

This shortcut is easy and fast, fix it @quaint plaza

[quaint plaza]

should i just remove it?

or make it harder

[vast fiber]

Uty

I don't see this shortcut as important.

Pull back the jump zone to the checkpoint @quaint plaza

[vast fiber]

Can reverse downward gravity field with strong force and add jump zone

This checkpoint can be removed because there are no dangerous traps in front of it. @quaint plaza

Add sign here @quaint plaza

Reviewed! @quaint plaza

[quaint plaza]

Finished!

[quaint plaza]

@dull cosmos i changed the finish…

[carmine moon]

Review Time!!!

Ss1: You should add a ramp here it would be more beautiful.

Ss2: I don’t really like this trial because I find the ice blocks too fast and I find it a bit bad when the disappearing block reappear and you are under it so you have to wait and I don’t really find this obstacle beautiful.

Ss3: You should remove the block that I put a x above.

Ss4 (screen record): You should maybe add a saw moving like in the screen record because it would add a place to die so that the other goobers can get ahead.

Ss5: The checkpoint here is too big of one block so change this it’s not beautiful.

Ss6: This arrow is not centered so move it by 0.5 to centered it.

Ss7: This checkpoint is also too long on both sides so change this it’s not beautiful.

Ss8: This gravity field is too slow so make it faster by 1.

@quaint plaza done

[quaint plaza]

Ss 8, if i would make it faster it removes the chice wether its good to use the jumpzone or not

so i wont do that i think

then, the checkpoints are to loong because they look ugly when they end before going into the land

[carmine moon]

But I prefer when they are not too long I find it way less ugly when they don’t exceed

[quaint plaza]

🤷

Ig we're diffrent on that point

[carmine moon]

I think you should and if you don’t like like that add a floor crossing the checkpoint

[quaint plaza]

Done

[carmine moon]

Okiii

[vast fiber]

I forgot to vote 😭

[quaint plaza]

I changed the finish by now

@dull cosmos response when?

[dull cosmos]

i don’t like how glitchy the blocks are at the ending part

[quaint plaza]

but…they are meant to be, if you wont to i can make them like all the other blocks

@dull cosmos Fixed it 🫡

[dull cosmos]

1/3 i don’t really like the kaizo part but wtv

[somber crag]

i like it

wow goobernut actually doing smth instead ofcat gifs

[quaint plaza]

Smoothbanana already vorted i think @dull cosmos

lol

[dull cosmos]

https://tenor.com/view/cat-slow-motion-cats-cat-cats-slow-mo-slow-motion-gif-17596303

[quaint plaza]

fr

[carmine moon]

Review Time!!!

Ss1: Slow down these ice blocks they are too fast.

Ss2: Add an arrow here.

Ss3: Add an arrow here because new goobers won’t know where to go.

This level is cool and should be certified good job!!! 😘

MaLibellule

[quaint plaza]

https://tenor.com/view/cat-black-cat-yikes-meow-gif-20848302

the ice blocks should be slower, they are so fast because its so much work to make them slower

[carmine moon]

But do u want this level certified yes or no if yes make it

[quaint plaza]

i want to but if it doesnt matter wether the blocks are slower than i wont put the effort into it, if level council tells me to do it i will ofc but your not lc

[vast fiber]

add background behind disappearing blocks

[quaint plaza]

@glacial peak What do you think?

[quaint plaza]

@spring linden How `bout you?

[spring linden]

er

[quaint plaza]

yes?

[somber crag]

slippery was just barking

[quaint plaza]

done

[quaint plaza]

i dont want you to bark i want you to review/vote

[quaint plaza]

@spring linden RESPOND TO ME AAAAAAAAh

[spring linden]

hi

there's a lot so I'm waiting to review it tonight because I don't have enough time rn

sory

[spring linden]

1. This is such a weird obstacle area and there is lots of potential as well. The ice blocks can be utilized as a better obstacle and you could maybe add something on the ceiling

2. Erm I don't really like this shortcut since it takes away the idea of a race and just rewards pros with avoiding the map

3. These lego looking bricks could definitely have more to them

4. Kind of a minor issue but when you run onto a bouncy block from the side it sometimes pushes you sideways instead of up, not sure how to fix that but maybe move the bouncy block down by like 0.05 or something

5. 

6. Try extending the spikes and upper chunk to cover the whole gravity field and see if you like it. Also consider getting a little more creative here rather than repeating the same obstacle

7. Guh why

8. I'm not sure if this was intentional or not but I don't really lean any way on this shortcut - just wanted to point it out for you

This is very sigma map but first off you should probably change the theme or something or else dramajoker won't be very happy. The other main issue I found was just the lack of creativity on some obstacles. Lots of areas are blank and don't seem very fun in multiplayer. However when designing obstacles make sure to keep in mind that playability far more important that the technicality. Anyways I have some elims to playtest, keep up the good work, and sorry for the delay on review

[spring linden]

@quaint plaza

[quaint plaza]

i have been lazy ik 😭

i should fix some stuff on this level

[spring linden]

oh I don't really care if you change it or not I just wanted to make sure you saw it

[quaint plaza]

i did

i already changes some of it

[quaint plaza]

@spring linden made most points

7 i am fine with it rn o dont se any problems

and why change the theme drama joker doesnt have a copyright

[quaint plaza]

@dull cosmos @vast fiber everything i did alright with you?

[somber crag]

@quaint plaza secret ending fr

[quaint plaza]

naaaah

[vast fiber]

Not bad

[empty glacier]

you can broken key this

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=5bbab042-b195-400f-84d1-40ad44b2e752&ghost=1f2b9c61-9c23-476f-b4b2-393e0aac5481

[quaint plaza]

i dont get what was special on that run

[empty glacier]

broken key means you can't use the left and right keys, only dash and jump

[quaint plaza]

so what?

is that bad?

[empty glacier]

it's just a fun thing ;-;

[quaint plaza]

sorry if i misunderstood lol sounded like bad feedback to me because im being stupid

[quaint plaza]

@spring linden you're opinion?

on my changes

you gonna vote? (plz)

[neat shoal]

this is mine lol
https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=5bbab042-b195-400f-84d1-40ad44b2e752&ghost=ec7cac36-b473-4510-bc77-b4cd5d809c0a

nvm its the wrong ghost

sad'

i got 210

[quaint plaza]

i got 156

[spring linden]

your*

[dull cosmos]

lol

[pseudo terrace]

this is great

[vast fiber]

Fr

1/3

[quaint plaza]

im so stupid

anyway your opinion?

[quaint plaza]

so…i made this an 8 player race a while ago, but forgot to change the tag (im sorry 😭 ), shoul i change it back to 16 player or should keep it?

[vast fiber]

Up to you

[dull cosmos]

@vast fiber i don’t know anyone in lc named “me”

also you forgot to add the square

[vast fiber]

Added, sorry and thanks to remind me

[pseudo terrace]

keep it as 8 player

things i dont really like:

the gap seems unfair

the gravitybouncy is inconsistent. i would prefer a normal bounceblock

at this place it NEEDS to be consistent imo, so i would also put a normal bounceblock there:

[quaint plaza]

?

[quaint plaza]

you dont land in tha gap bc the gravity is pushing you to the right very strong

[neat shoal]

broken key wr?

lol

[pseudo terrace]

if i didnt land in the gap multiple times i wouldnt have written it

[quaint plaza]

bruh

[pseudo terrace]

also you have goobers jumping you down

[quaint plaza]

how?

[pseudo terrace]

why the gap?

[fervent niche]

I think there are spikes missing on the block because all the others do have spikes

[pseudo terrace]

if you think noone lands in it remove it

[quaint plaza]

design

[pseudo terrace]

lame

[quaint plaza]

no its meant to be like this to make the shortcut easier at that location

[pseudo terrace]

you can keep it, i just dont like it

[quaint plaza]

i'll make a checkpoint after the gravity field and it'll be fine ig

[fervent niche]

Ah ok

[south knoll]

2/3

[empty glacier]

beat it lol

[quaint plaza]

[rough veldt]

Hiii, can someone certify my race named The Race Of Grass? Link here: https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=2c135315-68ca-4e06-b07a-f7f7b8866663, so Please certify i want this level to be certified!

[fervent niche]

It would be best for you to create a post with the required tags and ping the council

[quaint plaza]

I like that race, with a few things changed it could eventually get certified:

Here is how: - Create a post for your level
- Add the tags 32p and For Certification
- Ping @ Goober Dash Level Coucil

[quaint plaza]

@vast fiber i have three votes you lucifer and Goobernut
🥳

[vast fiber]

K

thanks to remind

sent to LC

[quaint plaza]

i removed a secret finishline i had once made to troll a custom if you are wondering why this level is marked as edited "1 min ago"

[glacial peak]

@quaint plaza hey, this level is marked for uncertification due to being stuttery, as it is 10000 blocks down, obviously i doubt youd want that, so i made a non-stuttery version. i think ty can make it uploaded to your account, but you can also make your own version if you want

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io?play=ad91d722-ee8c-4021-91a5-76143c3e819a

[quaint plaza]

I'll make my own version rq

[glacial peak]

alright

[quaint plaza]

Can i remove the skip on the ceiling?

🥺

[cosmic shard]

Please

[glacial peak]

you can change whatever lol

[quaint plaza]

Here is the new version https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io?play=8d5e35a0-bbc4-4e09-ad6c-6d50249c6531

[glacial peak]

thanks

[quaint plaza]

Thanks to you actually

was great to have some stuff fixed

[cosmic shard]

Why keep the shortcut

[quaint plaza]

Near the finish?

[cosmic shard]

Yeah

The other one is fine

[quaint plaza]

why not?

[quaint plaza]

the other one was terrible

[cosmic shard]

Whatever, both skip a lot of the map, but the first one is okay since it's hard basically

[quaint plaza]

Say you when you made Seanyseans punch

🤭

[quaint plaza]

the second one is way harder…

some people quite liked it

[cosmic shard]

There's only one skip on it

[quaint plaza]

There are two ones?

[cosmic shard]

Idk, do what you want

[neat shoal]

@quaint plaza

[quaint plaza]

grrruuhhhhhh!!?!?!?!?!

[neat shoal]

Fr

[quaint plaza]

sry for that

Thx for pointing out

😅