#NIght fury

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sonic sierra
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review:

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first impressions, this is really cramped for a 32p

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and way too hard

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i really like the decor around this area

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but

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it feels crowded for a 32p

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and also the saws there, goobers will be bumping each other around and stuff

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its not really feasable to put that many saws there, without some sort of pattern, and expect 32 players, many of whom may be noobs, to not be pushed around and die

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i dont like the laser at the starting zone

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its assymetric and is unnecisary

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i would put like a dissapearing block there or a block that drops after 3 seconds, just to eliminate some spawnpoint bias but I dont think that is really needed for a 32p

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make this part a lot easier to navigate

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as i said, many noobs will be in the game at 32p, this is a bit of a hard obstacle for them, and people will be knocking each other out of the gravity fields

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you could put this x gravity field obstacle near the end where people will be more spread out

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here i don't really know what is going on, it will be confusing to people playing while other goobers are around and its hard to tell if its a jumpzone or a full block

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if a goober comes out on the very left they may get killed by laser before hitting the checkpoint, so move the laser up a bit

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i would add a floor there or move the checkpoint to be over the hole in the ground

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because

  1. the saw goes over the checkpoint which can spawnkill people
  2. the issues demonstrated in the video is fixed
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(saw covers half of checkpoint)

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also i know this part will be really cramped and if we get like 16 goobers trying to get through at once it will be chaotic

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im not sure what you are trying to do in this tunnel, but if a ton of goobers get off the saw thing in waves then this will be crowded too

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i think it looks pretty big but we have the issue of goobers stepping on each other

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also make those recharges instant respawn to make it fairer esp when there are 32 goobers on this map

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this second saw wont hit you unless you jump...

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this whole section is a waiting game, i dont really like it

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it will group up the elite and good players towards the end

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meaning really good players looking to get first for their prize round cant really do that easily

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and give the players behind an advantage

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since they can use the blocks the first player already touched

sonic sierra
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@weak nimbus dont post the same level 3 times

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if you make a change to it, just say you made a change to it here

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and then post the new link

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this way its easier for us to navigate through #1137869397898305536

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if you want to change the tags right click the original post and edit tags

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so you can make it a 16p instead of a 32p

sonic sierra
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also if you want this to get certified add the for certification tag and ping gooberdash level council

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although i think this level still needs a bit of work

weak nimbus
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ok thanks!

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I made a change to the level

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this is the improved version

sonic sierra
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👍

weak nimbus
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this version is a 16p instead of 32p

sonic sierra
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you can also click on your original post up there and do edit tags i think

weak nimbus
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👍

sonic sierra
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if you want some more people to review ping gooberdash level council

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or just ping some good reviewrs like bear

weak nimbus
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how do I ping the gooberdash level council?

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This is my first time using discord

sonic sierra
sonic sierra
weak nimbus
weak nimbus
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can you certify my improved level?

weak nimbus
quasi bridge
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Hi

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I don’t think I’m the guy ur looking for xD I’ve never played gber dash

stone rock
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1st screenshot: More Deco here imo
2nd screenshot: Too cramped
3rd screenshot: That saw takes too much to back
4th screenshot: Too cramped

Note: it's a very small level, but have good decorations

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sinful oriole
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@primal plover will review this level soon

primal plover
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I strongly agree with tytan I think he covered it all tbh

sonic sierra
quasi bridge
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lolll

weak nimbus
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Sorry

weak nimbus
woeful orbit
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@weak nimbus stop pinging us, me, slippery, and goobernut all have lives and the rest of lc do too. So we have to organize discord into our lives.

weak nimbus
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sorry, i just really want my level to be certified

stone rock
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Everyone does

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But, I think you need to start another level

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You always learn more

quasi bridge
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It’s all good tho, no worries :)

stone rock
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🐻

weak nimbus
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so when you do have the time can you let me know if its good?🥹

weak nimbus
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I can wait but not toooo long🥹

proper aurora
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Too many cycles/waiting parts for me, also the amount of suicide dashing this level could have is lethal nana_korobi

I don't really see many skill parts either, I wish you made your level Skill (please don't take that as superbuffing your level, I just want Platforming and not spamming jump)

Also please work on your terraining, design.
For new creators, this sort of look is fine, but it will make your level look uninteresting for us LC. Check how other certified levels do terrain & design and try to find your own style out of it

Though I like that you expanded on some of your ideas and added new ideas into them, please keep doing that. Imo thats what I took from this level most, you are an awesome creator with lots of potential and the right mindset, but more learning is neccessary. Goodluck with future levels but unfortunately this level is a no from me

stone rock
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@weak nimbus