Greg Maddux

[uneven lichen]

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[ruby anvil]

more checkpoints pls

[uneven lichen]

Think these two will be enough

[uneven lichen]

@last geyser Wanna know your thought on this

[last geyser]

yo

Awesome, only 270 NODES were used

I'm wondering if this is a bit too difficult. Maybe you can change it to the right picture.

Can the strength be a little weaker?

You could probably add a gravity field here, I don't know why but I think it's better this way

I see you didn't use any grass. Would it be better if you added some grass? I don't know, you can try it.

Then I wondered if it was a bit too short.

@uneven lichen I just thought you were Japanese. I didn't recognize you. Haha.

Each level you make has a different style. Very diverse.

[last geyser]

It's amazing

[uneven lichen]

Yeah that's a point

I make it like this to be more winterpixel-like

[uneven lichen]

Nah😈 feel pain when facing this map

[uneven lichen]

It's inspired by redrace so ig it's long enough

[uneven lichen]

Thx

Currently researching wp's maps

This time Im tryna to let everything make sense

[last geyser]

👍

[uneven lichen]

Add this in the finish

[ruby anvil]

i’ve tried making a 5 pointed star look good before and it is difficult so good job on making a great one

[uneven lichen]

Hello everyone

[uneven lichen]

I make some small adjustments and really think this one is insanely good

[sweet anchor]

@uneven lichen is this not just rad race

the beginning

[hazy girder]

Greg Maddux omg he was my favorite player growing up

How do I get up on the right side shortcut? I’m not able to get past the long string of spikes

I like the level overall though simple but has a straight forward theme and easily navigable

[uneven lichen]

Yeah this is inspired by red race

@hazy girder

[uneven lichen]

Here

[uneven lichen]

His pitching style is the goat imo

Tho I'm not throwing like him, it's so difficult

[uneven lichen]

Guys give this a vote plz 😭

[uneven lichen]

@idle glen will this be a shortcut?

[idle glen]

hmm..

[devout ingot]

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[devout ingot]

Way too little space here

I like the gameplay but it would only work for 2 players

Though it looks really good I do wanna mention that and could definitely be certified with more space

[uneven lichen]

Okay I will figure out how to

[uneven lichen]

But I wonder if some winterpixel maps are too small too

Like redrace, movers ,longroad etc.

I was basically copying those maps' style

[devout ingot]

Definitely, and its an issue to me

Though they are classics and through time they became playable

[uneven lichen]

@devout ingot I made some adjustments plz check when free

[devout ingot]

Got it

I like it, but I'm gonna vote as im not entirely confident in its certifiability rn

1/3

[uneven lichen]

Nah I don't like that cycle now

and that bouncy

will change it later

[uneven lichen]

New version

[uneven lichen]

I just randomly ping

@tight atlas @soft cape plz review

[soft cape]

Give me a few

First screenshot: I would make a normal warning.

Second screenshot: I would add a ramp at the top.

Third screenshot: I would add a jump zone in the disappearing block.

Fourth screenshot: Add another arrow facing the top path.

Fifth screenshot: I would add jump zones where the lasers are.

@uneven lichen done

[uneven lichen]

For the forth, that's meant to be a shortcut so i feel like not to change it

Thx for your review

[uneven lichen]

Done

Now that's way far to a wp map lmao

[agile acorn]

Screenshot 1: Put a gravity field or a few bouncy blocks because guests won't be able to react that fast.

Screenshot 2: Put a platform or a Jump zone here to make it flow better.

Screenshot 3: Put some platforms here so that it's easier to get up.

Screenshot 4: Make the moving spikes one block less and put a checkpoint somewhere near the bouncy block.

That's it, pretty good level, it flows nice and looks good. Good Job!

done @uneven lichen

[uneven lichen]

For 1, I don't really wanna change this design, but I made some adjustment to nerf it. I made the spikes two blocks shorter and one block deeper, and add two checkpoint above

Actually only the middle path would have chance to die from the spikes

And for 3, that part is already quite easy to get up if taking the right side

but indeed there should be checkpoints

For 2 I think the ramp will be enough

Thx for the review

[agile acorn]

np

[uneven lichen]

@40

@sweet anchor Vote if you peak

[sweet anchor]

yeah i like this level it’s like red race but without cycles and wonky obstacles

@uneven lichen add more grass in the end parts and maybe make the level a bit longer then i will vote

[uneven lichen]

Nah this is it, the structure won't change

[sweet anchor]

okay gl

[uneven lichen]

@ruby anvil @lean merlin @tight atlas will you give this a vote

[uneven lichen]

Bro plz leave an answer 😭😭😭

[uneven lichen]

Please give a fck to this level please 😭😭😭

[uneven lichen]

https://tenor.com/view/baseball-base-ball-fail-slide-gif-16573805497771428108

[uneven lichen]

https://youtu.be/h7E2AQ-zogc?si=49Wsh0I6UqOO4JOq

He Hua is pretty good

[uneven lichen]

I mean you can vote for rejection if you don't like

Better than doing nothing 😭

Nvm random geometric problem

The radius is 3, calculate the pink area

1.5pi am I right

Yeah right

[novel ridge]

I vote for this fr

[sweet anchor]

you aren’t gonna change it at all so no point

[uneven lichen]

I'm not taking to you, you've done your job that's great

[sweet anchor]

i know you aren’t

[uneven lichen]

My point is not that telling them to vote

[sweet anchor]

why don’t you wanna change it at all though?

[uneven lichen]

You see only 3 (now 2 of lc have given thier review

[uneven lichen]

I have this right isn't it? Changing the structure is really difficult and I just don't have time and motivation, especially when I personally think this one is good enough

[uneven lichen]

Back to this, I just want LCs to do something, if this one is really not passable plz tell me then

[sweet anchor]

all i basically said was to make it longer bro it’s not that big of a deal😭

[uneven lichen]

I think it is. And you know my goal is to make at least 3 lc vote, which I think won't have words on the length of this level, besides I don't really agree with your opinion here, so my decision is not to change it

If other lc all think this one is too short then I will fix this problem

This is how this certing mechanic works if I understand it right

[agile acorn]

damn @uneven lichen, didn’t think it was that deep

It’s not really that hard to make it longer

[uneven lichen]

What if

I really don't want to

If other lc say ok then it's ok

[sweet anchor]

you don’t have too

it’s just my opinion

[uneven lichen]

If they say nah I'll fix it or just give up this one

[sweet anchor]

never give up

[uneven lichen]

Yeah im tryna explain to him

[sweet anchor]

🔥

[uneven lichen]

Random pic everyday Greg Maddux special day1

[uneven lichen]

Day2 No more vote for certification, and still no vote for rejection, this one just got aired lmfao

[uneven lichen]

I'll ping the LCs who haven't do any review or give cert or reject vote

It's already been 3 weeks. You got the badge, you have to do your job

@tight atlas

@lean merlin

@daring pollen

@harsh swan

@full imp

@knotty horizon

@hollow rover

[hollow rover]

pls don't say slurs, its j*b 🤮

[uneven lichen]

Come on do some reviews

or at least reject if you really don't like this to appear on public

[knotty horizon]

1. Only one warning and one checkpoint is needed here

Overall I don't reject this level, I actually kinda like it. The main problem is that it's a little short for 8p, so dying basically means disqualification. The other issue is that I didn't see a lot of obstacles that could set back players and give all goobers a fair chance to win. However, the flow and design is great and the detail is so if you want to make another level you can use some designs from here

[uneven lichen]

Thanks for the review

I'll figure out how to fix the problems

[uneven lichen]

Hey you said you "didn't see a lot of obstacles that could set back players"

Oh yeah kind of

ignore this sorry mb

[knotty horizon]

np

[uneven lichen]

@sweet anchor @knotty horizon Big news: I lengthen the level!

Check out "Greg Maddux.1" or click the link, I've changed it

@agile acorn You might also want to give it a look

[agile acorn]

alr

I am away from home for the 4th of July weekend, but i can review when i’m back. @uneven lichen

[sweet anchor]

thanks

[uneven lichen]

Are you gonna vote for this version

[sweet anchor]

not yet

[uneven lichen]

Then what's the problem

[uneven lichen]

Hey yo

[knotty horizon]

I think you should add at least one square in the center so goobers don't just stay in the middle to go up

goobers who hit the checkpoint at the bottom will instantly fall down and it might be annoying for new players

erm what is this triangle

this is a cycle simulator

[uneven lichen]

I think I'll put them more inside

Oh you type first

[knotty horizon]

overall thoughts - beginning is really good pretty much up to the third ss - after that the quality of the design kinda declines

[uneven lichen]

Okay I'll be aware of that

Thx for your review again

[uneven lichen]

Can someone help checking the latest update?

this map's update

[agile acorn]

Alr, I can review in like an hr

@uneven lichen

[agile acorn]

@uneven lichen sorry, kinda forgot about this, I can review now

Screenshot 1: Move this bouncy block in more, the guests have really slow reaction times.

Screenshot 2: The add arrows here to make it look less empty.

Screenshot 3: Turn down the strength on these or add jump zones in them.

Screenshot 4: This arrow looks goofy, can you make it smaller?

Screenshot 5: Try to prevent people from falling off the edge and make it easier to get onto the saw platform thingy.

done @uneven lichen

[uneven lichen]

Thanks for all the solid advices

I'd like to just narrowed it this way

[agile acorn]

👍

[uneven lichen]

And I think dungeon theme fits better

[uneven lichen]

@tight atlas @knotty horizon can you help checking whether this version can be certified?

[knotty horizon]

these triangles look a bit goofy

the floors tricked me because I didn't know I fall through them

this transition section could be improved