#SkyLord's Glory
tiny falcon
not goobernuts glory is wild
normal ocean
<@1232779926692958281> <@&1178134658857308212>
MEZZZOO
exotic totem
SLIPPERY
jovial sierra
ME
tiny falcon
level council so dead here
normal ocean
not as dead as in shards
have you even been working on it?
normal ocean
oh uh
exotic totem
Thank you 
jovial sierra
That’s me
tiny falcon
ngl reviewing levels doesn’t even matter anymore for a long time now the lc is already filled with levels since typixel certs so slowly
jovial sierra
@exotic totem done
First screenshot: I don’t like the beginning, high advantage to front people. Also I don’t like one block parts, because they are 1x1.
Second screenshot: At first I thought we had to go to left, add arrow. Also this is too small for 16p.
Third screenshot: Too small, middle is empty and this area is too small for 16p.
Fourth screenshot: This area is too small for 16p.
Fifth screenshot: Too small and middle is empty.
Sixth screenshot: This area is also too small.
Seventh screenshot: I don’t like this cycle.
Eighth screenshot: I don’t like this part it is too small.
Ninth screenshot: Too small and bad obstacle.
Tenth screenshot: I don’t like ending and it’s too short.
jovial sierra
I see how it is
😭
tiny falcon
bear how much time of your life have you spent reviewing levels
jovial sierra
bear how much time of your life have you spent reviewing levels
Ummm
My estimate is
15-20 hours maybe?
I review in DMs too
For other people
tiny falcon
@normal ocean wbu
normal ocean
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Remove spikes
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This part looks so much like rise to the challenge with the desert themed bouncy blocks and disp blocks inside
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This is too difficult and the jerky linear movement on the platform makes it hard to time
4.It took me a while to figure out that I have to wall jump to get up which is a really boring feature in races. Also the saw might be a problem because bad timing on wall climbing will lead to death
This map just feels crummy and not fun to play. There are spike walls everywhere and each section is just fragmented. The flow is horrible, and many sections remind me of rise to the challenge. Your mapmaking style is very different from what I prefer to see, which is more like sunboy style. I'm sorry but this map is probably a scrap because there isn't much too it anyways
exotic totem
alright scrapping
torpid spoke
not as dead as in shards
lmao
river charm
If you fix the points that people said then I will review your level
exotic totem
@normal ocean
normal ocean
hi
normal ocean
1 (erm discord says I can't add this file guh idk why). I think you can add some more stuff up here and maybe some arrows
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These blocks move wayyyyy too fast and they're kinda unpredictable for noobs
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Boring design sorry
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Maybe add a warning as well as some more stuff....
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What is even happening
6 (I also can't add this file). The spinning saw design above the finish is so cool - you should use it in the race
I feel like the biggest problem is that your design isn't good. The flow is okay, but obstacles, deco, chcekpoint placement, and lack of signs all contribute to a poor level. I feel like the biggest challenge for you is actually making a "race" where goobers have to pass obstacles in order to get ahead of each other, and I'm just not feeling it in this level. Overall you should also add some more deco and make the level a little less linear, but it's still good to see you back
bro wtf
discord is so stupid it says "something went wrong"
WHY CAN I NOT UPLOAD ANY IAMGES
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
||slippery crashout||
tiny falcon
1 (erm discord says I can't add this file guh idk why). I think you can add some...
where is bros screenshots
obsidian fossil
WHY CAN I NOT UPLOAD ANY IAMGES
I am testing it, and it seems you cannot upload screenshots
(btw I just took a screenshot of it saying you can't post screenshots in this thread, and was about to send it in here 😭
(go to #general and look at the picture there))
guh
you can forward the pictures 🤔
oh wait
it fixed?
WHY ARE YOUR LEVELS SO FUN TO SPEEDRUN BRO
GAAAAAA
sub 30?
normal ocean
sorry mezzo I guess you just have to infer what I'm trying to say
obsidian fossil
1 (erm discord says I can't add this file guh idk why). I think you can add some...
for 6, I think it's his signature ending of races sooo Idk
normal ocean
er ok
obsidian fossil
YESSSSSSS
normal ocean
0/10 outfit frfr
obsidian fossil
cut off around 4.2 seconds in one foul swoopp
obsidian fossil
0/10 outfit frfr
fr
iuts my google account
I'm like lvl 5 opn it
or 3/4
I think 3
no 4
IDK
normal ocean
guh
normal ocean
oh nahhhhh
normal ocean
obsidian fossil
fr
what's that thing in the background
😨
🫢
it's this
😱
anyways ack to speedrunning
back*
exotic totem
1 (erm discord says I can't add this file guh idk why). I think you can add some...
👍 I'll try to fix some of that stuff
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gotcha
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slow the blocks down, add arrows to show where they go
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The cave part or the dissapearing block part?
4&5: idk what you're talking about
6: the floor hitboxes are weird but I can try to do it
obsidian fossil
I'll review after
normal ocean
👍 I'll try to fix some of that stuff
1. gotcha
2. slow the blocks down, add ...
- yeah
- yeah
- dissapearing block part|
- cave part
- The jump zone laser saw
- yeah
exotic totem
Updated
obsidian fossil
glory
exotic totem
narwhal what happened to your account
obsidian fossil
wdym
exotic totem
it's just graynarwhal, no sog, and it's level 4
exotic totem
ah
obsidian fossil
mezzo this side wasn't updated
obsidian fossil
lol
exotic totem
okay fixed
obsidian fossil
1: This part deserves more detail imo. Arrows, possibly?
2: I think inside these two platforms should be a different color than the parts ouside the platforms, and think about adding a background block where the black is. Also maybe arrows to the right.
3: You don't have to, but maybe an arrow and alert here?
4: This part feels empty. Maybe saws inside the circles, and/or some background blocks?
5: Same area as 4, maybe add an arrow around here?
alr that's it
@exotic totem
tiny falcon
apple
exotic totem
1: This part deserves more detail imo. Arrows, possibly?
2: I think inside thes...
- Got it
- Okay, and there's already an arrow there
- I'll see
- Backround 👍
- okay
@tiny falcon @tiny falcon @tiny falcon
tiny falcon
why you ping me
obsidian fossil
1. Got it
2. Okay, and there's already an arrow there
3. I'll see
4. Backround ...
oh right (2) there is 🤦 😅
@tiny falcon @tiny falcon @tiny falcon
tiny falcon
<@1049044445196193873> <@1049044445196193873> <@1049044445196193873>
what
obsidian fossil
alr
exotic totem
I stole the wr back from azby
obsidian fossil
yeah I knew sub 30 was psosible
@exotic totem https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=537a53c4-3e96-4005-b31c-97270705e518&ghost=1f2b9c61-9c23-476f-b4b2-393e0aac5481
so close
river charm
<@1319683261248835606> <@1252181152765182016> <@1303578007109369898>
This level has a little less backgrounds, you should add background 1 and background 2 to make the level more beautiful
exotic totem
okay
river charm
First Screenshot: This part looks a bit hard and crowded. You can delete some of them and make them move around.
Second screenshot: This part and the finish line victory part are a bit empty. You could add a small gravity field that rotates and moves to make it more fun for people not to get to the high line that I have seen.
Third screenshot: Why is there a downward gravity field here? This part might be difficult for beginners, you can remove it or reduce it to level 1.
Fourth screenshot: Move the checkpoint like the sketch. The goobers will go faster when they die.
Fifth screenshot: Add an arrow here, makes this level more detailed.
Overall this level has some parts similar to Spinning Planet level 6 DramaJoker 9 imo. You need to improve the background decoration 1 and background 2 more on this level to make it more beautiful, I like that. And also some parts are a bit too spiky but I think it's okay. You can follow what I said to make this level more classic style.
@exotic totem
gr
i'm a bit lazy to find the error in your lv :v
obsidian fossil
This level has a little less backgrounds, you should add background 1 and backgr...
more b e a u t i f u l
river charm
more b e a u t i f u l
🙂
obsidian fossil
goober dash is beautiful?
obsidian fossil
oh mnoo
tiny falcon
should i ping lc again
ping the lc in the rbr channel
exotic totem
<@&1178134658857308212>
jovial sierra
First screenshot: I would remove the spike and replace it with a checkpoint.
Second screenshot: I would add more stuff like jump zones or gravity fields.
Third screenshot: I don’t like this part.
Fourth screenshot: This part might be a little hard since it’s kind of cramped.
Fifth screenshot: These blocks move too fast and this part isn’t fun.
Sixth screenshot: I would add jump zones.
Seventh screenshot: I would remove the lasers and this part is kind of cramped.
Eight screenshot: These gravity fields are too strong. The circle ones.
@exotic totem done
sturdy lichen
how did i do this
exotic totem
hello
mint vortex
Ah
violet walrus
how did i do this
years of practice and patience
spare grove
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This part is too hard for new players, especially in a public.
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Add air deco here and before it, it looks super empty.
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This is too hard
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In general just add some deco and it'll be mostly fine, but for now it's got a few cool ideas just not executed right.
Almost good.
river charm
br "too hard" :)))
What's that?
34 / 5.000
Why is this arrow pointing down?
Maybe eat the checkpoint 🙂
obsidian fossil
34 / 5.000
Why is this arrow pointing down?
good point
exotic totem
34 / 5.000
Why is this arrow pointing down?
so you eat the checkpoint
tiny falcon
@exotic totem why do i not have the record on this level anymore
exotic totem
Updated
violet walrus
mezzo you have a recognizable style to your maps
exotic totem
I pinged lc and only slippery and bear responded
I've had more non-lc reviews than lc reviews
normal ocean
guh
exotic totem
You've reviewed slippery you're awesome
@bleak cape
review
<@&1178134658857308212> requesting level to be put in update thread ||and for y'all to play the level||
tiny falcon
I've had more non-lc reviews than lc reviews
might as well ping every role except lc
jovial sierra
might as well ping every role except lc
Might as well ping me separately
tiny falcon
maybe typixel will review
bro rarely even certifies levels
tiny falcon
Might as well ping me separately
fr
normal ocean
@jovial sierra I guess this kinda counts
jovial sierra
<@1266786429225271346> I guess this kinda counts
Ok
jovial sierra
<@1266786429225271346> I guess this kinda counts
One more
river charm
Why is there a downward gravitational field on the right side and not on the left?
radiant turret
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radiant turret
why would you make such awesome designs only for them to be played for 3 seconds
you could extend and make so much more of these
My biggest issue is the fact you mrbeastify your level
it feels like you create an idea, then make a 3 second part with that idea and make another one
I mean correct me if im wrong, I tried seperating all parts and there are so many ideas you couldve used and made longer
But they're all condensed into 3 second parts
Like I cant even enjoy these ideas in a real game its so sad
ur level has nothing wrong with it, I just dont wanna send a level that is not taking opportunities
jovial sierra
@exotic totem look
jovial sierra
First screenshot: I would fill this space in with a wall.
Second screenshot: I would fill in the bouncy block.
Third screenshot: I would fill in both bouncy blocks in this area.
Fourth screenshot: I would lower strength by one.
@exotic totem done
normal ocean
@tiny falcon
tiny falcon
i think you accidentally made the left side easier than the right side
you should add more detail here like grass hanging or something
i think you should make this cool looking thing into a obstacle and put it in the circled area and scrap the old obstacle there
tiny falcon
SUPP IM SKYLORD
hi sky lord
mint vortex
Sup
exotic totem
My biggest issue is the fact you mrbeastify your level
this is probably the best piece of advice I've ever gotten
ngl
normal ocean
fr
exotic totem
<@&1178134658857308212> redesign
sturdy lichen
i pinned the link
exotic totem
thank you
normal ocean
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I'm not sure why but this area just feels plain and unappealing - there might also be gameplay issues since four goobers will run through here which might lead to unintentional dying
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The design circled around my goober looks a little odd, maybe try increasing the width by 1 to two blocks. Also, I don't really like the disappearing block on the shortcut
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Add a checkpoint at the bottom
Nice level, but it's still missing a couple things. One big issue is just the lack of obstacle design. One thing that I've learned form mapmaking is that obstacles don't have to be super complex, they just have to work well in a race setting, which is contrary to what you have in this level. The other problem is just the lack of deco and some minor design flaws, but other than that I think this map is great
normal ocean
I think the circles with gravity fields near the end
radiant turret
I think the circles with gravity fields near the end
what???
how are these too complex 😭 😭
all you do is dodge them and jump
dont remove or change them imo, they made this level cool asf
alpine marlin
dont remove or change them imo, they made this level cool asf
Agree with this, although the right side has a grav field and the left doesn't
So that should probably be changed
exotic totem
Agree with this, although the right side has a grav field and the left doesn't
they both have gravity fields
alpine marlin
they both have gravity fields
Right has a grav field pushing down
And left does not
alpine marlin
Nifty
exotic totem
radiant turret
- definitely could be cleaned up a bunch, I also wish the shortcut wasnt so messy to execute
- nerf, feels kinda kaizolike
- suggestion: distance these two saws, makes it look more clean
- i usually hugged the right wall here which made me die as the spikes were blind, so my suggestion is you change it like this
Also I think your ending doesn't work at times
But thats all from me, hope you change stuff, great level
Will also probably instantly send since other LC are ignoring this level
normal ocean
w obstacle
river charm
Wow look lv here’s better
exotic totem
- definitely could be cleaned up a bunch, I also wish the shortcut wasnt so mess...
gotcha, but what do you mean by messy?
exotic totem
- suggestion: distance these two saws, makes it look more clean
👍
exotic totem
- i usually hugged the right wall here which made me die as the spikes were blin...
👍
exotic totem
Also I think your ending doesn't work at times
the gravity circles?
radiant turret
gotcha, but what do you mean by messy?
The random wind blocks make it hard to align and you kinda cant do the shortcut while flowing through the level, you have to stop and align yourself
which also ends up meaning you'll dash players back in publics
that would be kinda annoying
exotic totem
oh okay
exotic totem
@radiant turret what do you think
I didn't change it yet but i have this test version if you want to play it
idle ledge
Review Time!!!
Ss1: This section you should change it because it’s like the exact same thing as the last trials but with bouncy block so I think you should change this because I feel like the trials is very long and a bit boring.
Ss2: I don’t like this obstacle because it’s too hard because there are too much spikes and you can be dash and die with no chance to catch up and it’s not much beautiful personaly.
Ss3: You should add arrow in this section because you see on the screenshot the last one is far.
Ss4: You should also add arrows in here.
Ss5: You should also add arrow s here.
Ss6: You should also add an arrow in this section.
This level is good but the trials need to be more ameliorate because they are basic. I also don’t really like the theme of it but this is just my opinion so you choose. GOOD JOB!!!
MaLibellule
@exotic totem done
exotic totem
ss1: nebula told me not to mrbeastify my levels
ss2: will fix it next update
ss3: sure but I think the path is pretty obvious
ss4: sure
ss5: okay
ss6: sure
the amount of arrow criticism is wild
exotic totem
@radiant turret @idle ledge updated
idle ledge
Ok I will rereview during the week
exotic totem
thank you
idle ledge
Review time!!!
Ss1: I really don’t like this section because the first time you go you’re fast and the second time you’re very slow and always hard because a goober can come fast and make you kill. So pls change it because it’s like the only problem of the level.
Ss2: Add a checkpoint here because the trial before could be very hard for beginners.
Ss3: Add a sign on that section.
Ss4: Add a sign on that section to show the way.
Ss5: Add a sign here.
This level is cool but have a big lack of decoration. The trials are all similar a bit because they are literally all blocks moving but I guess it’s ok. Good job!!!
MaLibellule
@exotic totem done
exotic totem
Ss1: I really don’t like this section because the first time you go you’re fast ...
ss1: no
ss2: it's an 8p there shouldn't be any noobs
ss3: okay
ss4: okay
ss5: the finish line is right there
okay explanation on one: you can choose to go fast by jumping fast, and if you fail, you have to do it slower, and if you get killed by someone, that's just skill
exotic totem
normal ocean
sorry I have lots of homework to finish but one major thing I noticed was the slight lack of creativity for obstacles. It's ok to use moving blocks like once or twice but it feels like spinning/moving blocks are just the whole theme of the level
exotic totem
tardy oak
I'm not joking 💀
exotic totem
Thank you
gentle sigil
This part is much too unpredictable.
There is not enough decoration in this corridor.
tardy oak
This part is much too unpredictable.
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There is not enough decoration ...
RICHARD FINGER!!
idle ledge
Omg 😱
exotic totem
Thanks Smoothbanana
dusky mural
richard finer?
exotic totem
This part is much too unpredictable.
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There is not enough decoration ...
not changing the first part but I'll add some deco
exotic totem
@normal ocean what do you not like about the level
normal ocean
you
dusky mural
tawdry oriole
3/3
exotic totem
Thank you
tawdry oriole
is this in the lc chat?
No not yet, ask smooth banana or someone to upload it
exotic totem
@river charm can you upload this please
tiny falcon
<@1319683261248835606> can you upload this please
he sent frozen proof not this lmao
exotic totem
violet walrus
he sent frozen proof not this lmao
river charm
<@1319683261248835606> can you upload this please
Uploaded
tiny falcon
exotic totem
How's certification going with this one
exotic totem
um
normal ocean
shame on you
exotic totem
i'm sorry
normal ocean
exotic totem
slate aspen
guh
idle ledge
Wasn’t it certified?
tardy oak