Captivating Caves

[dry cedar]

I am back! Newest level going for certification. Any advice is appreciated. For some reason I thought of yoyble while making this level.

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io?play=7d69ca47-4236-426f-a60c-81652516e03b

<@&1178134658857308212>

@echo sierra

@errant pebble

Advice would be appreciated

@pure shadow

[dry cedar]

Waiting

[potent topaz]

make the end funner

[dry cedar]

I can decorate

[dry cedar]

@lofty plover can you check and maybe vote

[lofty plover]

I will do full review after chicken burger

Sorry I have so many lc reviews to do lol I been behind

I’ll start with this one

[dry cedar]

Ok thx

[errant pebble]

keep waiting...

[pure shadow]

First screenshot: This part is a bit tight for 16 players.

Second screenshot: This part is a bit boring, add something here maybe like the picture.

Third screenshot: Add arrow here.

Fourth screenshot: You can remove this part to avoid wasting time for players.

Fifth screenshot: Added gravity field here to make it fair for the last members.

Sixth screenshot: Remove this checkpoint because there are no traps ahead that can kill members so it is absolutely safe.

Seventh screenshot: Add a gravity field moving to the right here for speed (You can do it).

Overall, this level is pretty good and I loved some parts of it. But there are parts that feel a bit cramped and linear. Please make it wider to comfortably accommodate 16 players in public mode!

@dry cedar Reviewed! 😋

[errant pebble]

I thought it was 8p at first

[earnest pumice]

how?

did you not look at tags

[errant pebble]

I didn't

just the space, I think it's 8p

[earnest pumice]

oh that makes since

[dry cedar]

Ok thx

[errant pebble]

When you finish editing, ping me and I can try to review it.

[dry cedar]

@errant pebble done

@pure shadow fixed everything except screenshot 6

[echo sierra]

no review for me

That is perfect

[dry cedar]

Thx

[earnest pumice]

i think this would look better in a different theme

idk though

[errant pebble]

I love the name

[errant pebble]

1. Make it stronger

2. A gravity field can be placed here

3. You can make it like this

4. You can turn it into this, the original thing is almost non-dangerous

5. The gravity field could be stronger

Then you can add some more decorations. It looks very monotonous now. You can also consider changing the theme to Grassy or meadow. I personally don't like snow.

@dry cedar These are my opinions

@dry cedar And how did you manage to keep the level names inconsistent?

[dry cedar]

Idk I put 6 dots and it got into the middle

Since I couldn’t come up with name I just put dots

[earnest pumice]

hi bear

[dry cedar]

Hi gubernut

[earnest pumice]

@dry cedar

why is there no shortcuts in this level

i feel like this map is just gonna feel like noyos maps where everyone is just clumped together pushing eachother around

[dry cedar]

I couldn’t really incorporate shortcuts

And if you know the obstacles you can probably get ahead

[earnest pumice]

i guess that makes since

[dry cedar]

Ya kind of like that one seanysean level

[dry cedar]

@errant pebble check new I didn’t change some

[earnest pumice]

@dry cedar can i review level pls

[dry cedar]

Sure

Review

@earnest pumice Review

Review @earnest pumice

Review = @earnest pumice

@earnest pumice = review

Bye

I gotta shower

[dry cedar]

What about review

[earnest pumice]

okay iwill

[dry cedar]

[earnest pumice]

1 and 2: make these parts wider from the bottom and make the spawns more equal.

3: make this part wider too

4: add a platform here or a jump zone so you can jump up here as a little shortcut

5: add a secret shortcut up the gravity field like the picture shows

6: this part does nothing the gravity fields doesnt serve a purpose

7 and 10: delete the circled platforms

8: maybe add a obstacle in here

9: when you dash jump forward and into this you have no way to get out and if you go in the bottom one the jumping in it is janky

[dry cedar]

Ok thx

[earnest pumice]

what happened ?

[dry cedar]

Check goober chat and scroll up a little

[dry cedar]

I decided I at least want this in the game

It might be my last level

Idk

[earnest pumice]

no one even plays the game anymore so no point anyways

[dry cedar]

@earnest pumice I did what I thought was necessary

@lofty plover you forgot to look

[earnest pumice]

fr

a lot of pros are not gonna like this level i feel like

it’s way too spawn based

[dry cedar]

I’ll test spawn changes

@earnest pumice

@earnest pumice

[earnest pumice]

hi

i think you should make eight people spawn on each side

[dry cedar]

Hmm

That might be hard to manage but

I’ll do it

I’ll try

[dry cedar]

@turbid rivet review pls

[turbid rivet]

there should be more platforms here to land on

this should be strength 1

this could do with being 2 strength

no need for the wind

[dry cedar]

👍

@turbid rivet fixed

@earnest pumice Did the 8p on each side

I gotta shower now

[uncut nacelle]

I love it

many oppotunities for speedrunning routes..

[hybrid ferry]

👍🏻

[dry cedar]

@turbid rivet check now, btw I’m gonna check out your invading the factory level

[dry cedar]

@manic lichen review

[dry cedar]

@prisma copper review?

[rigid flint]

It’s incredible bear

[dry cedar]

Thanks

[dry cedar]

@manic lichen ?

[manic lichen]

yeah

I'm doing some stuff one sec

[dry cedar]

👌🏼

[dry cedar]

@turbid rivet check now me need review

[turbid rivet]

im boutta sleep

[dry cedar]

Ok😭 check when you wake up

I want to try and get this into whitelist before I leave

[manic lichen]

1. Maybe add something else underneath the disappearing block like you do with the other one
   Also, I think you can do more with the rectangles whether that's moving them or making jump/gravity zones pop out and back

2. Why is checkpoint moved weird not really a huge problem though. I don't really get the point of adding the jump zones because goobers will be able to pass the spikes no matter what

3. Why is checkpoint weird again, this is actually kinda annoying since it's easy to miss. Also, maybe add warnings on the jump zones so goobers don't die to it, but once again I don't understand the point of them (similar to 2)

First thing change the name please. But overall I feel like this level is more like a structured cave without many obstacles. Gravity fields and curved areas filled with floors kinda make this level feel bland. Because of this, this level is definitely too short. If I died in here I would surely get disqualified because I doubt half of the goobers will even die in this map. I like this map, but it just needs more to it

[dry cedar]

So you want me to lengthen?

Got it

[earnest pumice]

why not publish this

[dry cedar]

Not done

[earnest pumice]

why did bro leave lc

time for everyone to get no reviews again!!

[dry cedar]

I’m gonna delete discord in a few days

Once tourney is over in goober central

But I will not talk

In a few days

I’m taking a break from discord

For 1-2 months

[earnest pumice]

are you gonna come back

oh okay

[dry cedar]

Ya

[dry cedar]

@manic lichen made longer

@turbid rivet new review pls

@earnest pumice Can you review?

@lofty plover can review?

[earnest pumice]

i could but

[dry cedar]

But what

[earnest pumice]

do you like waffles or pancakes more

[dry cedar]

Depends who makes them

My dads pancakes are the best

[earnest pumice]

what a safe answer 💀

[dry cedar]

But a lot of people can’t make pancakes

[dry cedar]

Ik

[earnest pumice]

so which one do you pick

overall

which one

is better

[dry cedar]

Pancake

[earnest pumice]

YEYSSHAGAHAHA

[dry cedar]

Choc chip pancake

[earnest pumice]

bueberry is better

blubeery

blueberry

[dry cedar]

Blueberry is pretty good too

Depends where you get it

[dry cedar]

Review

[earnest pumice]

okay

[dry cedar]

?

@elder lintel review pls

[elder lintel]

This is cool, but it is cramped, maybe add some fairly difficult shortcuts like this, would make it more skill based

[dry cedar]

I don’t really get, I can make shortcuts

[elder lintel]

The one I sent was like a small hole to skip going all the way to the right and then to the left again

[dry cedar]

Ok

[elder lintel]

you can do it a different way if you would like

[elder lintel]

did you ever post my level in the lc chat after it got 3 votes

because its still orange

[dry cedar]

Which one

[elder lintel]

#1363288150079705299

[dry cedar]

I don’t think I did

Since we have a lot of levels

In there

[elder lintel]

@manic lichen can you then pleasse

[dry cedar]

Is that all

[elder lintel]

i mean it would be better if you added some more things

/shortcuts

[dry cedar]

I know I am going to

[elder lintel]

ok thats all

good level

[manic lichen]

can I what

[elder lintel]

post #1363288150079705299 to level council to be put into game in the next cert wave

[uncut nacelle]

y'all....

.

[dry cedar]

@manic lichen made longer

@elder lintel added shortcut

[dry cedar]

@lofty plover can check out real quick and vote if you like

You never looked at it

[dry cedar]

@prisma copper review

[dry cedar]

@turbid rivet argh review me level🏴‍☠️

[turbid rivet]

you have so much on one side and nothing on the other side

also remove the platform cutting off the other part and add arrows pointing out

maybe make these slowly go up and down

this can sometimes be a bit too small for 16 players

[dry cedar]

That all

[turbid rivet]

im lookin around

this part feels a little bland

this part could be tough with 16 players

[dry cedar]

A little chaos is fun

[dry cedar]

Fixed

[dry cedar]

Done

[dry cedar]

That’s to keep the time balanced on both sides

[dry cedar]

Done

[turbid rivet]

where tf did the background go

[dry cedar]

So I can delete grass and fix some things

[dry cedar]

Fixed

[dry cedar]

Fixed

[turbid rivet]

its just really weird seeing two different sides, one with lots of detail and effort, and one with only a few platforms

also theres 2 arrows in this whole level

[dry cedar]

Ok check now

[dry cedar]

Not much need for arrows

[dry cedar]

@turbid rivet vote?

[austere orbit]

I'd like an arrow to go up at that starting area

I thought I was supposed to go right initially, or it was an alternative path

Especially with the gravity fields pointing right

Btw, this checkpoint is kinda useless since you can't die before the next checkpoint. It really doesn't matter, but I'll just point it out

This is kinda weird, since its really easy to just skip along the ground, so if you try to jump, you might not actually jump. You can fix this with a downward gravity field, but it looks ugly then.

[dry cedar]

Ok

[dry cedar]

Added arrows

[dry cedar]

Made it just a regular floor

[dry cedar]

And for this I can add a jump zone inside that goes down .5 and doesn’t repeat so you can jump

@austere orbit done thx for review

[turbid rivet]

add some disappearing blocks in the 2nd screenshot

[dry cedar]

Done

[dry cedar]

@turbid rivet ?

[turbid rivet]

maybe make this ever so slightly more open

[uncut nacelle]

can't you die after it though?

I haven't uh

played the level in a while so

[elder lintel]

why not give goobers more peace of mind

[dry cedar]

Fr

[dry cedar]

With the disappearing blocks or the regular blocks?

[turbid rivet]

regular blocks

[dry cedar]

If I fix do you vote

[turbid rivet]

i’ll look for more stuff

the level is probably good now but i don’t wanna vote when it’s good i wanna vote when it is as good as possible

not really as good as possible but i wanna make sure i get what i want in the game

[dry cedar]

I made it a little more open

[dry cedar]

@turbid rivet I don’t know why but you inspired me to make this level

[turbid rivet]

nice

[dry cedar]

Anything else?

@ember vessel I see you are online can you review

[dry cedar]

@pure shadow

[pure shadow]

Wait

This one is a bit far, let's bring them closer.

It seems like the right start is harder than the left start

[dry cedar]

That is was to get them to the same place at same time

I’ll move middle disappearing block

[austere orbit]

It was optional, I was just pointing it out

[dry cedar]

@prisma copper review?

[dry cedar]

@turbid rivet find anything else

[dry cedar]

No review

[dry cedar]

@manic lichen review

[earnest pumice]

bro really forgot he was the only lc that reviewed

[manic lichen]

guhhhhhhh

[dry cedar]

Guhhhhh🦭

[manic lichen]

@dry cedar bro did you even look at my review

what the guh

[dry cedar]

Shortcut Guh

[dry cedar]

Yes I made longer

[manic lichen]

this reminds me of caesar salad

[manic lichen]

THE CHECKPOINT AHHHH

[dry cedar]

WHT WITH THE CKEPOINT GUH

[manic lichen]

IT'S SO MISALIGNED AND EASY TO MISS

[dry cedar]

I WILL MAKE BIGWR

[manic lichen]

breh why are there two checkpoints here the first one does nothing 💀

umm not very interesting here

[dry cedar]

Fixed

[manic lichen]

also the crossed lasers remind me of anthill

[dry cedar]

Fixed checkpoint

[dry cedar]

I will add gravs

[manic lichen]

other than that it's better

also PLEASE make an actual name

[dry cedar]

This is an actual name

[manic lichen]

nuh

[dry cedar]

If I fix you vote

[manic lichen]

maynw

maybe

[dry cedar]

Ok

[dry cedar]

How about now

Spirits

[manic lichen]

just call it green cave or something it doesn't have to be that complex

[elder lintel]

spirits is cool

[dry cedar]

Worldx likes it

I like it

🦭 likes it

[dry cedar]

Do you like it

[manic lichen]

uh no

it doesn't have any connection to the map

[dry cedar]

So

It does actually

@manic lichen fine check now

[dry cedar]

I’ll continue this when I get back

Feel free to vote

This is to all level council

[earnest pumice]

erm so actually slippery it does actually do something

[winter summit]

whoh these are really cool

here i kinda got scared bc i thought the spikes would jump out because of the sepeartion

these animations like block by block, all the other animations are smooth

i feel like that lbock by block animation is really retro but doesn't really go well with the rest of the level

definately a good idea for like a retro-themed level tho really cool

[dry cedar]

I don’t know how it happened, I put in a random offset and that happened

[winter summit]

Interesting

[earnest pumice]

bro is not deleting discord

[dry cedar]

<@&1178134658857308212> I would like to continue working on this level

[lofty plover]

fr

[jagged anvil]

this would be such a fun race to have ingame

[uncut nacelle]

it helps you not have to go as far

[manic lichen]

erm

@dry cedar when did you return

[earnest pumice]

3 hours ago

[manic lichen]

I thought he died

[earnest pumice]

no he was stuck in my basement in my tickle traps

[manic lichen]

I see

[winter summit]

Hi bear

[dry cedar]

Hi, also who is this

[dry cedar]

Review

[winter summit]

i am a mythical sea slime tetrahedron

also known as thehermit

aka #justiceforgber Powershell_ISE

[dry cedar]

Oh hello

I remember

[winter summit]

i have just crashed google slides by pasting a 300x600 character colored ascii art in

ah well

it crashed my chrome

[dry cedar]

@ember vessel Review

@manic lichen review

@prisma copper review

[uncut nacelle]

I'll review after church

[dry cedar]

Thank you

[dry cedar]

Is church done

@pure shadow review

@slow carbon review

@errant pebble review

@echo sierra review

[dry cedar]

@winter summit review

@turbid rivet I think I did everything you said, review or vote. Choose one

[uncut nacelle]

now, yes

[turbid rivet]

its not needed but smth like this could be cool

[uncut nacelle]

1: The corners of the end looks off, I don't know if this is on purpose or not, if not I would fix it. (by "off" I mean the sizes of the ramps aren't the same.)

2: I think this part is a great opportunity for a way to die by a spike or saw. Bottom left circle: possibly a saw outline? Top left circle: spike or saw in this area?

3: This part is really hard to get out of, unlike the bottom. I don't know how you could fix this without adding a gravity field or lowering the strength of the gravity field pushing you towards the spike, both of these options being (in my opinion) bad or unethical. When a goober is getting pushed towards the spike, they probably won't realize it and keep on holding the button to push them to the right, so maybe add an alert/warning sign as well.

I don't know any other problem with this map, it's well made and feels like a goober dash classic.

One of the only problems I have is lack of warnings, maybe add a max of 3-5 more? (there aren't many places that need warnings)

The lasers at the end might be a good use of warnings.

that's all, good job

[dry cedar]

That would cut through a lot of the level that I want them to see

[turbid rivet]

1/3 anyways

[dry cedar]

1 was on purpose.

2 done

3 it’s fine

@ember vessel You are online so vote

@lofty plover can you vote, you never did check out the level

[dry cedar]

@jagged anvil

[jagged anvil]

bet

honestly I cant find any problems with it, to me its a perfectly functional map⭐

It doent add a whole ton to the game but its still fun 🤷‍♂️

I lovethis part also

not much of a review idk sorry

[dry cedar]

Thank you

If only I could get a level council member on

[jagged anvil]

lemme read their stuff

[austere orbit]

I dunno, this bouncy block is a little funky, as it looks kinda weird, and is a bit out of the way to even hit, since the slope likely prevents being bounced

One really minor thing is that you could spawn and get bounced

[dry cedar]

Wouldn’t that help?

[dry cedar]

Should I delete then?

[austere orbit]

Not necessarily, I think I would be more surprised being bounced than anything.

[austere orbit]

That one, yes

[manic lichen]

@dry cedar

I've reviewd this before

[dry cedar]

Vote

[manic lichen]

noober

no

[dry cedar]

I review as much times as they need

[dry cedar]

No review for goober evil layer

[manic lichen]

okay fine

and it's lair

not layer

[dry cedar]

Same thing

Dear

Deer

Red

Rid

Too

To

Their

There

They’re

[manic lichen]

erm actually red and rid are pronounced differently 🤓

[dry cedar]

Fair

Fare

[dry cedar]

Oh yeah oops

Koop

Coop

Vote

VOTE

[manic lichen]

nop

change the name first of all

[dry cedar]

Wdym

Captivating Caves

[manic lichen]

it's called captivating cabes or something

change the thread name

ok

[dry cedar]

Done

[manic lichen]

what's the point of this

why not just make a wall or something

lmao what did I do

I feel like you could do more here - make the blocks move or have gravity fields pop out or something idk

similar here; you could make these spikes come out after a warning

[dry cedar]

Wdym

[dry cedar]

?

[dry cedar]

I could do gravity field thing

[dry cedar]

I could make spikes move down them back up

[manic lichen]

like at the start

why is there extra space

it just confuses players at the start

boring vert section (floor spam)

[dry cedar]

Transistion

[manic lichen]

shorten the checkpoint by one block on each side

[manic lichen]

yeah exactly I feel like you can do a bit more

I get the idea of this section it's just a little bland

[dry cedar]

I’ll add chains

[dry cedar]

Ok

No matter what you always find a way to make my levels better

[manic lichen]

bro I know you can make a better obstacle

[dry cedar]

I seriously can’t

[manic lichen]

for some reason I feel like you could add spinning squares that shoot out of the bottom here idk why I thought that

[manic lichen]

use your goober brain

[dry cedar]

@earnest pumice Took it

[manic lichen]

better obstacles here too

[dry cedar]

Ill make them gravity fields that rotate a little and move up and down

[earnest pumice]

took what

[manic lichen]

remove lasers

you can just have offset ice blocks for the transition jump zone here

[earnest pumice]

@manic lichen

[manic lichen]

other than that this level looks good

[dry cedar]

Nah that weird

[manic lichen]

no you're weird

[dry cedar]

You made me sad

[manic lichen]

what

[earnest pumice]

i like this obstacle

[manic lichen]

noooo I'm sorry I meant you're unique

[dry cedar]

😢

[earnest pumice]

what did i take

[dry cedar]

My goober brain

[manic lichen]

my toes

my toes is = mitosis

[dry cedar]

@gilded summit you gotta get his toes back

[gilded summit]

guh

ok done

[earnest pumice]

i downvoted this map 😈

[manic lichen]

ok bear after you make changes I will vote

[earnest pumice]

if this map was made a year ago it would be considered a masterpiece

[manic lichen]

if you finish them in less than an hour I won't vote

[earnest pumice]

bro is the opposite of sunboy

[manic lichen]

I just really like levels with good effort

unlike your levels

jkjkjkjkjk

[earnest pumice]

me personally i think almost every level is bad except mine

[manic lichen]

almost

what's the exception

[earnest pumice]

i was just kidding

[dry cedar]

Undownvote

[dry cedar]

No

[earnest pumice]

what if i upvote and downvote

and penguin

and turtle

and fire

and fish

and goobnana

and three

and 100

and cyan heart

and brain

[runic notch]

light blue heart*

[dry cedar]

What

[dry cedar]

Added some jump zone in spots

[dry cedar]

I tried and I don’t like

[dry cedar]

I’m keeping

[manic lichen]

ok

now review mine

[dry cedar]

I don’t like adding thing

[dry cedar]

Keeping

[manic lichen]

guh

no

no

you have to change it

[dry cedar]

I made some small changes

[manic lichen]

it's bad section

[dry cedar]

What would you do

[manic lichen]

like for an obstacle?

[dry cedar]

No for the e bad section

[manic lichen]

uhhh idk if I had an idea I would've put it in my own level

[manic lichen]

which one

[dry cedar]

The one you said

[dry cedar]

.

I gtg

[manic lichen]

bruh

review my level later

[dry cedar]

I will tmrw

[uncut nacelle]

fr 😭

[pure shadow]

Cool levele

1/3 🟨

[uncut nacelle]

2/3 fr

[gilded summit]

2.03/3.18

@dry cedar want me to give chagpt the lvl code and ask it to review it rly weirdly lol

[uncut nacelle]

I do

[gilded summit]

Ok bet I'll do it when I get home

[gilded summit]

Ok I cooked up the prompt

[gilded summit]

ok

lmao

[gilded summit]

go look at my review

or chatgpt's

same thing

[manic lichen]

@dry cedar

review evil gooners lair

[dry cedar]

Ping me in it

[uncut nacelle]

YOo

it's been released

[gilded summit]

Ffr

[uncut nacelle]

( I know you sent it to me in dms)

I never read it

💀

nor will I

for not atleast

[gilded summit]

Lol 💀

[uncut nacelle]

I have stuff to do 😭

and I need to sleep soon

[gilded summit]

Nub

[earnest pumice]

@dry cedar

why do you not publish this level

[uncut nacelle]

,

comma?

[dry cedar]

@manic lichen vote?

[dry cedar]

Done

[manic lichen]

ye

1/3

wait no

2/3

[dry cedar]

No its 1/3

[manic lichen]

I thought boyble voted

[dry cedar]

Oh yeah

I forgot about that

[manic lichen]

do you want me to put this in whitelist

[dry cedar]

Yes pls

[manic lichen]

@dry cedar you still need to shorten the checkpoint here

[dry cedar]

Oh yeah

[dry cedar]

Done

[ember vessel]

3/3

[uncut nacelle]

YOO

WHAT

[dry cedar]

@manic lichen