Two Layer Race V2

[upper remnant]

Collab Level With SmoothBanana.NXbc<@&1178134658857308212>
https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=8734132d-c09b-4d67-b992-fbe2223c68fe

If you die, you get demoted from the top to the bottom. Good luck.

[scarlet jungle]

no need to make a new thread for it

[upper remnant]

ok

sry

its just more different that the original

[scarlet jungle]

np

[upper remnant]

any review is appreciated!

*dont make it silly plz just review proparly

@scarlet jungle review plz?

[blazing heart]

I like this

What if there was a race at the bottom if u die

So it’s not completely rng

And the longer u stay alive the higher up the checkpoint gets so you won’t be punished as much if you die late

[tribal parrot]

Or there is a race to get to the top so even if you die you can go back up!

@upper remnant think of this idea

[blazing heart]

Yeahhh

[upper remnant]

interesting idea

[upper remnant]

gonna be a bit tough to implement tho

[tribal parrot]

Levels take time

[upper remnant]

ik

imfiguring out

my space key not working lol

[tribal parrot]

Ping me once when you finish building

[upper remnant]

ok

[upper remnant]

@tribal parrot

@tribal parrot

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=2df3ae46-cb84-49e6-9a54-c4d732cc057c

I updated the level

[tribal parrot]

Ok

[upper remnant]

Additions:

1. A parkour course from the bottom to the top

I could not figure out how to add where dtying later respawns higher

😦

but anyway

yeah

Plz review

my mom making me touch grass

Ill check later

plz give full review if possible

[tribal parrot]

Make starts start moving up slowly

[upper remnant]

doesnt work

look at design

its in the main

lower part

[tribal parrot]

First screenshot: Why so many lasers.

Second screenshot: I don’t like this area

[upper remnant]

anyway

[tribal parrot]

I would just switch obstacles to the main

[upper remnant]

ok

ooooh

ok

i go touch grass now

fiz later

fiz

give full review

ill check then

bye

[tribal parrot]

I just told you what to do

[upper remnant]

that's it?

[tribal parrot]

Switch obstacles to main

Ya

Some parts could be done better but that’s fine

I have idea I’ll tell later

[upper remnant]

ok

thx

[hushed iron]

what if you camp here until 35 seconds and then finish the level

[upper remnant]

ok

[upper remnant]

the obstacles would stop people from completing the parkour course tho

it wouldnt work

[tribal parrot]

Idk

[upper remnant]

has to be seperated

why should parkour course be in main tho

@tribal parrot

[tribal parrot]

Better

I had an idea

[upper remnant]

tell me idea plz @tribal parrot

btw im doing revision so my response is slow

@tribal parrot

@hushed iron Bear said to put the parkour course in the main section to connect the two parts but I cant without disreputing the obstacle course coming from the top. PLz helpppp!

[upper remnant]

i will change this part btw

[tribal parrot]

Just don’t make the saws go so low

I thought of smth like climb

Like you climb through the main part and get to the top..

[upper remnant]

oh

[upper remnant]

wdym

would this part be ok istead of the other part?

[upper remnant]

@tribal parrot I also do not understand what u mean by that. could you please explain it a different way?

[tribal parrot]

The map Climb

[upper remnant]

Im sorry for not understanding the first time

[tribal parrot]

I thought you were gonna do smth like that

And get back to top

[upper remnant]

i thought making a seperate parkour course is better?

[tribal parrot]

Ehh

[upper remnant]

and the obstacle course coming from the sky would disrupt the parkour course to get to the top

therefore, should i remove the falling obtacles?

@tribal parrot im confunded!

help!!!

[tribal parrot]

It’s fine keep the falling thing

[upper remnant]

ok...

ok this is the level at the moment

if i want to move the parkour course to main i need to adjust the obstacle course or remove it

the problem is IDK how to change it

@hushed iron can you help

@hushed iron Bear said to put the parkour course in the main section to connect the two parts but I cant without disreputing the obstacle course coming from the top. PLz helpppp!

@tribal parrot idk what to do

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=2df3ae46-cb84-49e6-9a54-c4d732cc057c
Additions:

1. Updated the end part of the parkour course

@main olive

@tribal parrot i updated the end of the parkour course a bit

im confuzzled now

@main olive can plz review?

IM CRASHINGOUT

@tribal parrot

@tribal parrot

i updated the level

[tribal parrot]

Stop pinging

I see first ping

I’m busy

[upper remnant]

ok

sry

[tribal parrot]

It’s fine

[upper remnant]

i thought the system glitched

and it didnt get to you

none of level council helping 😦

[tribal parrot]

Ik I’ll help you tmrw or later if I have time

[upper remnant]

ok

tysm

[tribal parrot]

I would make longer btw

[main olive]

yo can you only ping once please

i saw it the first time.

in this section its extremelty hard to react to the lasers, i would probably remove them

prolly add a sign in the middle here cuz not everyone reads/registers the sign at the start

the saws here are also extremely hard to react to and youre done if you go into the elevator at the wrong spot

and the actual falling obstacle section is way too short

please add some more gameplay

and decoration

theres like no grass or bg block 2 its so barren

and also probably make the way to get back up for the other side

its kinda stupid if you have the farthest spawn and you have to walk all the way to the other side

especially with how short the falling gameplay is

and please only ping people once

in the nicest way possible we're real people not people here to serve you 24/7 feedback

we have real lives

[upper remnant]

really?

i only get free time 30 mins a day or less usually

[main olive]

ok thats cool?

[upper remnant]

ok

[upper remnant]

i thought u ai

[main olive]

bro.

like hahah nice april fools joke man

yeah man im ai

[upper remnant]

do my homework

[upper remnant]

write me a 500 wor essay on time travel in under 1 minute

its not hard for ai

[main olive]

im blocking you

please never ping me again bro

[upper remnant]

sry

[tribal parrot]

I serve 15/7

But rn is the part where I sleep

Cya

[leaden sedge]

he’s joking lol

actually maybe not

idk

[upper remnant]

happy hibernation!

[tribal parrot]

Thank you, bears sleep awhile

[upper remnant]

@tribal parrot its spring now!
I added some stuff to the level.

Additions:

1. Made level longer by adding more stuff to the obstacle thingy

Link: https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=2df3ae46-cb84-49e6-9a54-c4d732cc057c

@tribal parrot please review when possible

[upper remnant]

@tribal parrot plz review my updated level
Additions:
(1) Added a second parkour course on the left
(2) Updated falling obstacle course to make it longer

[tribal parrot]

First screenshot: This moves too fast. All of the obstacles do.

Second screenshot: I don’t like the saw section.

@upper remnant done

[upper remnant]

ok thx

[upper remnant]

@tribal parrot

I changed the level

[tribal parrot]

Ok

[upper remnant]

adjustments

wait

lemme save quick llol

lemme publish real quick

ill ping when done

@tribal parrot

published

its now 80 ssec long

approximately

[tribal parrot]

👍

[upper remnant]

Additions:
(1) removed switched signs

(2) made falling speed of obstaclle course slower

(3) removed spike section

let me know how u like!

@tribal parrot suggestions?

sorry for ping

throught u were offline

@tribal parrot ?

u there?

@tribal parrot how u like?

im sorry for multiple pings

@dapper cloud can you review plz

aw

@tribal parrot @tribal parrot sorry for multiple pings
I ping several times and noo response

plz have a look at lvl and tell if any improvements

[hushed iron]

theres nothing stopping people from camping at the end of the parkour section until 70 seconds and finishing the level

[upper remnant]

why

[upper remnant]

and where?

@hushed iron here?

[hushed iron]

yeah

[upper remnant]

then what?

@tribal parrot u there?
I updated level

@rose torrent review?

@worn marsh @scarlet jungle review?
Im trying to get feedback

@tribal parrot

@tribal parrot

@tribal parrot

u there?

i updated level

u hibernating?

its spring not winter

[tribal parrot]

I’m gonna say this once and once only

Ping me once after you fix smth and I will get back to you when I can, I have to sleep, study, eat, go to school, and live my life

So try and understand that I have things to do irl

Higher the top saw a little so they are separated more

Also this level isn’t that good for speedruns but that’s fine

Not I’m going to go to bed @upper remnant don’t ping me till morning I’m east Tim zone

[upper remnant]

ok

oh

east

ok

happy hibernation!

[tribal parrot]

Thank you

[upper remnant]

finished

[upper remnant]

not intended for speedruns

[tribal parrot]

Goobnight

And sub to my YouTube

Cya

[upper remnant]

ok

[upper remnant]

whats your yt name?

[upper remnant]

@ancient kayak review plz

@ancient kayak

[ancient kayak]

DONT PING TWICE

[upper remnant]

ok

oh

u didnt die

good job 👍

but can review?

its not really made for speedrun tho

[ancient kayak]

Its not a feeling of certifying

[upper remnant]

?

[ancient kayak]

Its more like a fun level for lobby

You want it to be certed or not?

[upper remnant]

so i should make it a lobby?

[upper remnant]

ya

review?

[ancient kayak]

Wait me a sec I was in lobby

[upper remnant]

ok

[upper remnant]

bro

revuew

QTN bro review

imma ping you in a minute

@ancient kayak

bro

did you forget

@worn marsh review plz

@ancient kayak review?

so hard

[upper remnant]

@ancient kayak

bro

i waited for an hour

@ancient kayak

[ancient kayak]

I am studying the level

[upper remnant]

ohhhhhhhh

[upper remnant]

ok

[upper remnant]

Wait... you studying the level for one hour?!

nvm im too impatient

[ancient kayak]

No I just finished lobby

[upper remnant]

wait what lobby?

[ancient kayak]

Ok I am done

[upper remnant]

are you going to review?

[ancient kayak]

ss1 : Let the signs disappear after the block rised up

ss2: Have a sign here like dodge the obstacles

You are not going to believe what I am going to say, but that level was actually very good. It would be a good elim when you switch the format to an elim. So just delete the things down there and replace the finish line with a wall of spikes coming down from the top.

@upper remnant done

btw if you switch the format then you don't need to change ss1

[upper remnant]

omg tysm!

[ancient kayak]

Ping me after you switched it to an elim

And I will give you a more detailed rreview about gameplay

[upper remnant]

should i keep it a race or elim tho? I ask you first then get lc input

[ancient kayak]

elim I think

And stop using ping soooo much times you pinged bear like 24times you should say sorry to him in dms

Luckily you only pinged me 6 times lol

[upper remnant]

ok

ill make a seperate copy of the lvl and make it an elim. However, I need to do a practice AP test so i cant edit anything rn. Thx for the help!

im wayyyyyyyyyyy to impatient lol

[tribal parrot]

Go into my profile

[upper remnant]

@tribal parrot I be,ieve that it is morning for you so im pinging you again

i updated the level

[upper remnant]

@worn marsh review plz

[leaden sedge]

fr

[tribal parrot]

That was 9 for me and I was in school

[upper remnant]

oh

ill ping at 3:00 CST then

[upper remnant]

@tribal parrot review plz

[upper remnant]

@worn marsh review?

[worn marsh]

STOP PINGING ME sure ive been offline for the last 2 days I'm mostly online at sunday, Wednesday, and Friday. review soon

maybe in 1-2 hrs

[upper remnant]

ok sry

[worn marsh]

don't forget to ping smooth banana nxbc

aka Smoo_NX ( Ping for Review

More of an elim than an race

[upper remnant]

oh

check #1364628686686519549

elim version

[upper remnant]

good to know thx

@amber gazelle review plz

[amber gazelle]

oki

waiy me...

[worn marsh]

he wants as many reviews as possible

[upper remnant]

yes

i need feedback pls

[worn marsh]

I see creative potential for future levels but tbh for this level to be even decent it might have to be summer break

[upper remnant]

wdym

oh

suggestions

?

[amber gazelle]

But do you want this level certified or what?

[upper remnant]

i would like to

[scarlet jungle]

frankly I'm still trying to understand this but this is by far one of the coolest race concepts I've seen in months. I think like a multi-layer race would be better, or the ways to die should be reduced. Because I don't believe it's fair that a pro that dies at the very end finishes the same as a noob that dies at the very beginning. But I love this idea so much, it's like an elim put into a race, so keep it up

[upper remnant]

tysm!

btw wanna collab with me on this lvl?

[scarlet jungle]

sure I'd love to

[upper remnant]

yay

tbh i wanted a elim-style race too

[scarlet jungle]

you can dm me the link and we can work on it on seperate accounts and just copy and paste newly added portions to your versions

[upper remnant]

ok

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=2df3ae46-cb84-49e6-9a54-c4d732cc057c

heres the link

[scarlet jungle]

thanks

[upper remnant]

np 😉

[scarlet jungle]

I don't really have time to look at it tonight but I'll do it tomorrow

[upper remnant]

happy collabing!

[amber gazelle]

I have no opinion :v

Not because the level is bad, but it's good, I like it. 😋

[upper remnant]

Sliippery collab with me

we should make a new acc called HyperDestructor & Slippery and edit from there

@scarlet jungle

sorry for ping

just an idea

[scarlet jungle]

that's fine yeah you can do that

[upper remnant]

ok

[scarlet jungle]

dm me the email and password

[upper remnant]

ok

gotta study first

🙂

😉

can i make a fake email?

@ancient kayak slippery collab with me!

[ancient kayak]

Ok

If you're happy with race and you asked lc then go ahead, I'm sure you can do it you are a talented map maker|| unlike me ||

[upper remnant]

collabing with slippery ||he's an lc member||

[upper remnant]

its my first time actually trying to get a map certified btw

im sure you ca ndo well

[worn marsh]

Hey, you aren't that old to this server I know you just joined like 15 days ago

most people know that

[upper remnant]

?

oh

yeah

so?

[worn marsh]

most people know that slippery is a lc

like bear, shinara who retiered,

[upper remnant]

im collabing tho

[worn marsh]

you don't need to point out that slippery is a lc

and congrats on collabing

[upper remnant]

tysm 🥳

[tribal parrot]

I miss shiaa, amazing reviews

Always helped

[worn marsh]

true

[tribal parrot]

@upper remnant

[upper remnant]

@tribal parrot my school wifi is soooo crappy

i have 20 fps sometimes

and 500 resimms

😦

@tribal parrot btw can review?

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=f24ed71f-c687-4ade-8735-c8e4bfe28f90

Im trying to patch up the thing where you dont qualify if you die at the wrong time

[leaden sedge]

bro just triple pinged

[upper remnant]

@tribal parrot review?

[upper remnant]

NOW i triple pinged

[leaden sedge]

actually now you qaudruple pinged

[tribal parrot]

Look at the very top of the ss, you can see the top of the block on the left, I would higher it so you can’t.

Sometimes when you get launched out you get launched right back to your death

@upper remnant

[upper remnant]

oh

ok

@scarlet jungle check review and plz update

[upper remnant]

what shouldi do abt that @tribal parrot

i need to remove a whole section?

[tribal parrot]

No do you

[upper remnant]

nvm i got spanish lesson

@scarlet jungle improve lvl

[hushed iron]

if you do nothing you gain height over time by dying until you get to the second highest floor

[upper remnant]

ik

i want to fix it but 😦

@scarlet jungle

can look at previous messages andimprove lvl?

[amber gazelle]

Can I cooperate with you?

[scarlet jungle]

yes please stop pinging me

I'm working on my own level as well

[upper remnant]

sry

[upper remnant]

um

ask slippery

[amber gazelle]

um

[amber gazelle]

@scarlet jungle slippery

[scarlet jungle]

yeah you can

I'll make a group dm

[worn marsh]

k I might as well collab but I'm online mostly on

Friday Sunday and Wednesday

[upper remnant]

Congrats @amber gazelle you are now part of the team!

[amber gazelle]

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io?play=8734132d-c09b-4d67-b992-fbe2223c68fe
Play and fix

Two layer race 2.0 🥰

[hushed iron]

you can stall here

[upper remnant]

ask @amber gazelle

he did it

not to be mean 😦

[hushed iron]

you just pinged him

[upper remnant]

to get his attention?

[ancient kayak]

... pinged again'

[upper remnant]

@urban elbow can you please review the current version of the level?

my parents blocked goober dash for a while so i hadnt had time to work on it so much.

@golden canyon can review plz?

@rose torrent review plz?

[upper remnant]

@dapper cloud can you please please please review this lvl?

[upper remnant]

@stiff fog review plz?

[tribal parrot]

He doesn’t review

He hasn’t then on it awhile

[upper remnant]

@rose torrent

can review plz?

@dapper cloud review plz?

[scarlet jungle]

bro wtf

[mossy rose]

I don't like some of it

well

not the gameplay

but

the signs are

they kinda get in the way

so I'd move them out of the way

[upper remnant]

ik

ill work on it

hadn't had the time lately

with the aps

[upper remnant]

@worn marsh review?

@rose torrent review?

@dapper cloud review?

[rose torrent]

i feel like this would not work for publics

[upper remnant]

😦

why?

[rose torrent]

kleiner has done something like this and its cool and all but idk if it would work in publics

too confusing

for noobs

[upper remnant]

how make less confusing?

[rose torrent]

its not the level its the concept

[upper remnant]

thats what i mean

more signs?

I can put more

@rose torrent

@golden canyon review plz

@tribal parrot review plz?

prodoglover my gd goat

[tribal parrot]

I’ll play rn

[tribal parrot]

Thx

[upper remnant]

I need to go rn but ill check later

tysm!

[tribal parrot]

Is intentional for ice block to be one over? I think it is

The only problem I have

Is that I don’t know if this would work in public’s

With the concept

Might need testing

[upper remnant]

how to test?

[tribal parrot]

In customs

[upper remnant]

wrong map

its in dungeon

theme

I think its this: https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=8734132d-c09b-4d67-b992-fbe2223c68fe

yes

thats right

sry for confusionn

[upper remnant]

oh btw

i cant do rn

sry

re-review correct map?

@tribal parrot

sry for ping

[upper remnant]

btw what u mean about not workin in publics?

[tribal parrot]

My only problem is that it doesn’t look aesthetically pleasing and it might be confusing, I also don’t think it would work in public

[tribal parrot]

I mean I don’t think it would work in real matches

[upper remnant]

😭

[upper remnant]

@worn marsh @dapper cloud review?

[upper remnant]

no reviews 😭

[mossy rose]

😥

Idk bro I have stuff to do

later 😭

[upper remnant]

😭

😭

😭

[north nova]

I mean like wtf

You can actually delete all these thing cuz they don't even matter

You put an elim idea into a race

Nah how do I describe this shi

I just can't

too ass to give it any comment

I'll just move a few fucking steps, wait for the garbage time to pass, then make a big jump and it'll be over.

Genius bro sofucking genius

You have to teach me how

認真問你啦除了對亞洲人狗叫你還會甚麼東西

Two month building this map

0 improvement

Great learning efficiency

[upper remnant]

lol

It just wasnt reviewed in 2 months or something

oh wait

@north nova thats the WRONG MAP

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=8734132d-c09b-4d67-b992-fbe2223c68fe

heres the right map

[mossy rose]

its like a 32/16 player race

bro

it's supposed to be where you try to get other players out

🤯 like think it through

AN ELIM race

ELIMINATION

cm'on??

do you just not get to knockouts or smth?

now that was mean but

I got fed up

I'm sorry dude 😓

[upper remnant]

i do lol

[upper remnant]

an elim this way wouldnt work right?

[mossy rose]

I was talking to someone else

he doesn't understand your map and I was explaionging it to him

[mossy rose]

I think it would work

[upper remnant]

i tried

[mossy rose]

oh wait

yeh it wouldn't

[upper remnant]

I updated the level

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=8734132d-c09b-4d67-b992-fbe2223c68fe

The top floor has a addition

@leaden sedge

can you review plz?

@amber gazelle an review plz?

[leaden sedge]

sure

[upper remnant]

its a wierd concept

weird

[leaden sedge]

but i’m pretty sure i’ve played this map before and i didn’t like it so hopefully it’s better

[upper remnant]

i cant spell

[upper remnant]

when

cuz i updated it slightly ust now

[leaden sedge]

hm

i think this concept could maybe work but

it’s definitely not the best currently

cause rn it’s just don’t die in the last 5 seconds before the finish line

[upper remnant]

?

wdym

theres another finish line that comes after the first

[leaden sedge]

please ask someone else to review i don’t wanna be rude or anything but i just don’t like this map that much

[upper remnant]

why 😭

@solemn pond ccan review plz

@tribal parrot can review?

u reviewed wrong level last time i think

also

ill try make more aestetically pleaseing

*I cant spell

i do know that prodoglover is da goat

[tribal parrot]

I’ll check out in a little bit but only one review

[upper remnant]

wdym one review?

but ok

[tribal parrot]

Since I quit reviewing

Well I’m on a break

[upper remnant]

NOOOOOOOO
MY GOAT

[tribal parrot]

I’ll be back in a few weeks

[upper remnant]

have fun with family and friends!

also

congrats on lvl 50!

[tribal parrot]

Thanks

[tribal parrot]

Thank you

[tribal parrot]

this level is way too laggy

[upper remnant]

hmm

wirld

not for me tho

[tribal parrot]

Delete unnecessary blocks

That will help with lag

[upper remnant]

ok

idk about the recharger thing now 😭

[upper remnant]

i fixed a bit @tribal parrot

[upper remnant]

@mossy rose review?

[mossy rose]

nrn

[upper remnant]

@amber gazelle can you review this level?

@blazing heart review?

[amber gazelle]

To certify?

[upper remnant]

just review?

sry i was learning linear algebra

[upper remnant]

or certify i guess

[solemn pond]

Nice ideaa

Generally, is it possible for you to design the level a little bit cleaner obstacle wise?

• Ice blocks on the sides looks ugly in my opinion

• Too tight!!

• Those saws are blind lol

[upper remnant]

ok thanks for feedback!

[upper remnant]

@solemn pond updated

@golden canyon review?

[upper remnant]

@hushed iron @tribal parrot review?

[tribal parrot]

Tmrw

[upper remnant]

wait

shoot

i forgot your not lc

sry

[tribal parrot]

All good

[upper remnant]

da goat

[amber gazelle]

Is this the level I did?

[upper remnant]

yeah

i updated

[upper remnant]

@tribal parrot review plz?

@vivid surge review?

[tribal parrot]

Later

[upper remnant]

ok

[tribal parrot]

I’m at my pool

[upper remnant]

i modified

[upper remnant]

nice

[tribal parrot]

Thanks

[upper remnant]

happy swimming!

I assume that bears swim?

[tribal parrot]

Yes

[tribal parrot]

Thanks

[upper remnant]

@scarlet jungle review?

[upper remnant]

@stiff fog review?

@worn marsh review?

[upper remnant]

@tribal parrot revview?

im feelin impatient for some reason

[tribal parrot]

Hold on I just got out of the shower

[upper remnant]

ohhhhh

so sorry sir

or maam

[tribal parrot]

All good

It’s sir

[upper remnant]

ok

sorry sir prodoglover

[tribal parrot]

When I finish up my chores I’ll do this

[upper remnant]

ok

[upper remnant]

@scarlet jungle review?

[scarlet jungle]

1. I get that it's really cool to have your name in the level but it kinda obscures the obstacles which might affect gameplay - maybe move your sign down to the bottom (second layer)

2. Not really sure why you have all these gravity fields as they can be bypassed, and a floor is just so much better

3. Fix some design issues here - the blocks are asymmetrical and the triangles don't line up with the gravity fields

4. I hate this bouncy block cycle

5. Why is the sign floating?

Couple of extra things

• I'm very concerned that this level will cause a lot of ties since the finish line might move down to goobers at the same height
• There aren't any rechargers or things that allow players to "grief" each other
• It might be unfair because someone could die at the beginning and climb back up and someone else might survive and die at the very end, so the "better" player would actually lose
• I think it's possible to die at the perfect time so that the finish line passes you (not sure why this is important though)

The main thing I wanna say is that the idea is good, it's just the execution needs some work. Most of your falling obstacles could be better in many aspects, and the "parkour" to get back up undoubtedly needs improvement. Great work so far though, I just won't vote for this at the moment

[upper remnant]

@scarlet jungle wrong level sry

[scarlet jungle]

breh

[upper remnant]

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=8734132d-c09b-4d67-b992-fbe2223c68fe

heres the lvl

sorry for the inconvenience

[amber gazelle]

Cool lv

[upper remnant]

@solemn pond an you rereview the obstacles?

@tribal parrot happy 4th of july

[tribal parrot]

Thanks you too

I think I deleted the screenshots

[upper remnant]

wait you reviewed?

[tribal parrot]

What I wanted to say is make the openings bigger i think and also remove all lasers

[upper remnant]

erm

wait

[zinc prism]

But do you want me to review ???

[upper remnant]

in the obstacles?

[upper remnant]

sure!

[tribal parrot]

Ya

[zinc prism]

Ok

[upper remnant]

sure

[tribal parrot]

Lasers make rng when falling down

[zinc prism]

I am going there

[upper remnant]

will do when have time

[upper remnant]

is it dungeon themed btw

slippery wasted his time reviewing the wrong map yesterday 😭

[tribal parrot]

😭

Didn’t he help create it

[upper remnant]

he dropped

hes always welcome to recollab again i guess tho

[upper remnant]

anyway can you review plz?

[zinc prism]

Image #1/#2 I don't really like this challenge. It seems empty and too easy. Either I should change it or improve it.

Image #3 I think this shortcut is too strong for people who are strong and have too big an advantage. I advise you to make it harder or simply remove it.

In conclusion, I love the concept, but it lacks a bit of difficulty in places after dying. In short, I think that after some improvements, it could perhaps have a chance of being certified.

@upper remnant

Finish

[tribal parrot]

Later

[zinc prism]

@leaden sedge I think you could like this tipe of level

[leaden sedge]

@zinc prism

[zinc prism]

Ok sorry

[upper remnant]

thanks!

ill probably close off that section then

[upper remnant]

cosed off

@worn marsh review plz?

[upper remnant]

@tribal parrot review?

[tribal parrot]

@upper remnant done

[upper remnant]

where

[tribal parrot]

Oh come on it didn’t load

[upper remnant]

😭

i was looking foward to a review from the GOAT

[tribal parrot]

I’ll review again in my car when I’m driving home

[upper remnant]

ok

[tribal parrot]

I think I still have the screenshots

I didn’t play whole level

But I have some feedback

6 screenshots

[upper remnant]

my map must be god awful

goober world record awful

😭

is it dungeon themed btw

[tribal parrot]

No

One person had 30 screenshots

[tribal parrot]

Ik

[upper remnant]

HOLY BURGERS?!

https://tenor.com/view/holy-cow-holy-cow-gif-25938150

[tribal parrot]

My first real review ever

It had 30 screenshots

[upper remnant]

breh

[upper remnant]

your map?

wait a sec

are you in your car?

[tribal parrot]

No

I’m at a winery with my family

[upper remnant]

noice

dont get drunk!

||we dont want a drunk lc i think||

||no offense||

[upper remnant]

hope your family doesnt bully you?

[tribal parrot]

No

[tribal parrot]

Not that old yet

Close but not yet

[tribal parrot]

My brother does but he’s my twin and I’m the older one so it doesn’t matter

[upper remnant]

YOOO

FIRST PERFECT CROWN ROUND LETS GOOO

[tribal parrot]

Nice

[upper remnant]

ooof

[tribal parrot]

+48?

[upper remnant]

no punches and kicks hopefully

[upper remnant]

nah

+infinity frfr

[tribal parrot]

Nah even then I would win

[upper remnant]

best crown

[upper remnant]

good

also

1 question

[tribal parrot]

I went +48 first 2 days then quit

[upper remnant]

if your at the winery with your family

why are you on discord?

[tribal parrot]

I check my phone

[upper remnant]

oh

[tribal parrot]

A lot

[upper remnant]

to make sure its not stolen

im quitting rbr btw

im getting consistent 11 fps + 15 resims per game

rbr = rubbish bot robbing

[tribal parrot]

Fr

[tribal parrot]

Fr

[tribal parrot]

Aw too bad maybe we can play together every once in a while tho

[upper remnant]

ok?

[tribal parrot]

?

[upper remnant]

im unsure about my computer

it lagged out once

and i could get it to respond for 10 minutes after

in school

1/600 fps

[tribal parrot]

Wow

Play on iPhone fr

[upper remnant]

i dont have a phone

[tribal parrot]

Ok

[upper remnant]

my parents said they wont buy me one 😭

i have to work to earn money to buy one

[tribal parrot]

Ya that makes sense

[upper remnant]

@tribal parrot review?

i thought maybe you came back?

[tribal parrot]

Not yet

I’m walking to the car rn

[upper remnant]

ok

[tribal parrot]

Nvmd

Have to wait another 10 minutes

[upper remnant]

had a nice time?

[tribal parrot]

Taking pictures

[upper remnant]

can i see one?

dont have to if you dont want ofc

@ancient kayak review?

[tribal parrot]

Ok

[upper remnant]

yey!

oooooooo

wowie'

[tribal parrot]

That one is kind of bad

Doesn’t look as good as it is in real life

Ok

I’m in the car

First screenshot: I would just make it on your account and make it say some designs were by slippery. Then make the sign disappear after that so it gives enough time for players to read it but it doesn’t distract the players.

Second screenshot: Imo I think the entrance could be bigger.

Third screenshot: The upcoming obstacle is very messy imo.

Fourth screenshot: I would remove the lasers.

Fifth screenshot: Messy and I don’t like laser.

Sixth screenshot: It explains itself.

@upper remnant IT LOADED BUT TOOK 10 MINUTES

[upper remnant]

@amber gazelle

[amber gazelle]

ok

[upper remnant]

we need to work on this

[amber gazelle]

what's that

[upper remnant]

erm

i wonder what happened

thats not supossed to happen lol

[upper remnant]

fixed

[upper remnant]

@amber gazelle

[amber gazelle]

bruh

@upper remnant it's ok?

where are you

[upper remnant]

srm

sorry

was wathing movie

lemme try

[leaden sedge]

what movie

[upper remnant]

angry birdz

[upper remnant]

@solemn pond review?

updated

[upper remnant]

@golden canyon reviwew?

[upper remnant]

@worn marsh review?

@tribal parrot happy 5th of july!!

[tribal parrot]

Thanks

You too

[upper remnant]

can you review the parkour course to level maybe?

@idle moon can you review pretty please?

with sprinkles on top

[tribal parrot]

Wdym

[upper remnant]

when you die then go to the thingy to get back to the top

the 'parkour' course

[tribal parrot]

Oh ok

[upper remnant]

bro what dou you think?

[tribal parrot]

Did I seriously forget to pot my review

😭

[upper remnant]

slippery said its horrendous

i kinda agree

[tribal parrot]

Then change it

[upper remnant]

just wanted you rthoughts too

[tribal parrot]

I can’t rn since I’m playing with midnight snake

[upper remnant]

k

[upper remnant]

@idle moon review?

[tribal parrot]

Did you fix the obstacle course

[upper remnant]

erm

the parkour?

btw

can a lc vote for a level that they made

||dumb question||

[tribal parrot]

No it isn’t I used to have the same one

[tribal parrot]

No they can’t

[tribal parrot]

Ya

[upper remnant]

erm

i think so?

slippery is working on a seperate copy of the level

then well compare levels

@zinc prism i fixed your suggestions btw

[tribal parrot]

I’ll review after that then

[zinc prism]

Now I am busy but maybe tomorow

[upper remnant]

you can review the parkour course tho

the one to get from bottom to top

[tribal parrot]

I have like 15 levels to review and I’m super busy😭

I’ll try and review soon

[mossy rose]

😭

gl bro 🫡

[tribal parrot]

Thanks

[solemn pond]

its possible to camp infront of the tunnels that lead you back to the main arena

[upper remnant]

where?

the top tunnel has a 5 gravity field so should be possible

but ill check it out

[upper remnant]

@dapper cloud review?

[leaden sedge]

gl with that 😭

[heavy stratus]

The gravity field here are not really beautiful I suggest you to transform this in just one big gravity field block. I like the concept of an elim in a race it’s original and should be a new levels certified according to me. Sorry I don’t know what to review in this level but yes try to make it more beautiful. Good job 😘

@upper remnant done

[upper remnant]

thx!

@scarlet jungle will you work on the level copy?

i didnt see updates on it

i added countdown to the level until obstacles

[upper remnant]

also why cant you find what to review

just interested?

but thx for feedback!

[heavy stratus]

Idk this level is so different of normal level and original so I don’t know how to review it so I don’t want to give you a bad review

[upper remnant]

nvm that i accept all suggestions!

elim race 😉

[heavy stratus]

I will try to review it tomorrow

[upper remnant]

ok

[upper remnant]

@golden canyon can you review my lvl pls???

[upper remnant]

@stiff fog review?

[stiff fog]

fix the skip

also the map isint dangerous enough for there to be a gimic with "levels"

and also the way to get up levels disadvantages high ping players who cant do fine movements inbetween spikes

[solemn pond]

damn I'm skilled af

[golden canyon]

this is a cool concept and i really like how the level looks and how many places there are to kill people

however,

• depending on where you spawn theres a chance when you go down floors you will be stuck repeatedly dying, especially near the end
• depending on when you get to the top, theres a chance you get immediately thrown into an obstacle after exiting the gravity field
• realistically all 8 players will be somewhere in the top 2 floors, and because its so cramped it would be very easy to get suicided

again, because of the nature of this concept really only the last 10 seconds or so matter and rn theres too much chaos for me to feel confident having this in the game. maybe a few of us could test this later but from a quick playthrough this is what i feel

[upper remnant]

ok thx

[upper remnant]

oh i see

ill try fixing that

@golden canyon do you think that if i added dash rechargers to the top floors it would be better?

[upper remnant]

uh

what skip again?

lemme checks

[golden canyon]

idk what that would change, i think it is griefable enough rn

[upper remnant]

ill prob add floors to prevent people from immediately landing in obstacles at the top then

@urban elbow review?

[heavy stratus]

I have and idea Instead of trial like that to go back to the top I would make several floors like the one at the top and if you often die you will be lower and will not be able to go up

[upper remnant]

i wish

that impossible without conditional inputs tho

[heavy stratus]

Ok

[upper remnant]

i also thought of it 2 months ago

never could do it

😭

[heavy stratus]

Ok I understand

[upper remnant]

i just updated the lvl btw

[heavy stratus]

Yeah I saw this

[upper remnant]

@golden canyon updated so that there are floors stopping people from immediately being thrown into obstacles

looks kinda bad

[heavy stratus]

Sexy😂

[upper remnant]

wdym?

[heavy stratus]

What?

[upper remnant]

@zinc prism rereview?

i am very hyper and VERY slippery

[heavy stratus]

The only thing I don’t like are the trials to go up I find them a bit chaotic and not beautiful instead of this you should make like trials in normal level to go up it would be more beautiful than now and less chaotic

[upper remnant]

sure

lemme dm slippery and banana

[heavy stratus]

Ok

[tribal parrot]

I liked blue theme

@upper remnant idk how this level will work in public’s. I would need to test in customs.

That’s all

[upper remnant]

no other suggestion?

[upper remnant]

ok

ill try

[tribal parrot]

I need to test

[upper remnant]

ill make a blue theme

Two layer race CASTLE

[tribal parrot]

Your choice

[upper remnant]

@tribal parrot made a castle themed map version

@dapper cloud can you please review map?

[upper remnant]

@mossy rose review again?

[mossy rose]

buh

sure

[scarlet jungle]

the parkour still needs so much improvement

[upper remnant]

ok

[scarlet jungle]

please please please make actual obstacles instead of just random placed blocks that are duplicated on each side

[upper remnant]

but like what is wrong with it

idk

[scarlet jungle]

it's literally luck

you just spam up and hope you don't hit some randomly thrown around spike

[upper remnant]

ok

just bouncy blocks maybe?

[scarlet jungle]

I mean sure

but make them obstacles

this is a race

not a parkour tag lobby

[upper remnant]

[upper remnant]

like this?

[scarlet jungle]

https://tenor.com/view/my-honest-reaction-my-reaction-animal-cursed-gif-7333588490945652950

do you know what an obstacle is

[upper remnant]

yes

its something that stands in your way

[scarlet jungle]

yeah so I want you to make actual obstacles

that move

and have variety

[upper remnant]

ok

moving bouncy blocks?

[scarlet jungle]

that could be one obstacle

but please don't make it the entire way up and then just duplicate it

[upper remnant]

ok

[upper remnant]

@scarlet jungle i remade the obstacle course

its probably still pretty bad

[scarlet jungle]

everything just spins and moves randomly

[upper remnant]

wdym

[scarlet jungle]

there's no structuring or design effort or anything

you're just putting random movement on random blocks

[upper remnant]

i had no idea what else to put

@amber gazelle can you try t o improve obstacle course

[plush hatch]

erm

@heavy stratus review?

[heavy stratus]

👍

Sorry I have nothing to say about this level it’s cool

The only think is the design it’s not really beautiful

[silver kiln]

@plush hatch I have never reviewed a level but I'll try.
First, I don't think this level will work because the players get randomly qualified if they are all at the top. Also, you could be afk for 90 seconds and then go up and still win.
I think in the part in the screenshot it's also a bit random how fast you get up.

[plush hatch]

oh sorry

any decor?

[heavy stratus]

No it’s ok😂😂😂

[plush hatch]

suggestions for decor?

[heavy stratus]

Idk maybe use background 1 and 2

But who don’t move

[plush hatch]

or grass i suppose

@golden canyon can you rereview? I kinda ran out of ideas

ig that the main part is the parkour to the top; do you have a review for that, my dragonfly?

@heavy stratus

[heavy stratus]

This is to go up?

The part with gravity field

?

[plush hatch]

where to go up to the top

this part

[heavy stratus]

I don’t like these part. You should change them to something more like a normal level.

[plush hatch]

k

[plush hatch]

@worn marsh review?

@plush hatch review?

[heavy stratus]

Do u change what I said

[plush hatch]

i time yet

no time

i will tho

during school

[worn marsh]

jeez k

later

[brazen rose]

995 messages is crazy

[plush hatch]