#underground platforms

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neat bison
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if you want the whole level

solid peak
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dont ping me 4 times please

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you pinged the role, thats enough

neat bison
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didn't know

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im new to discord

neat bison
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@lyric ibex

lyric ibex
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I’ll review in a little bit

low osprey
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where did you even hear that

neat bison
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from a few community levels

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I know its stupid

dry sequoia
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This is really good!

neat bison
lyric ibex
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First screenshot: Move the dash rechargers to the middle of it, which is one block to the right. And make them not disappear.

Second screenshot: I would add a gravity field here pushing players forward into the level.

Third screenshot: This obstacle is fine but feels a bit empty.

Fourth screenshot: I would switch these so that the disappearing block on the bottom is closer and the one on the top is farther away.

Fifth screenshot: I know what you wanted but I don’t really like this obstacle.

Sixth screenshot: I would connect the floors into the wall by just extending them.

Seventh screenshot: I don’t like these swinging platforms I would redo this whole area. And why do you have that one saw. Delete that saw.

Eighth screenshot: I don’t like the gravity fields in the checkpoint.

Ninth screenshot: I don’t like the floors going up and down. I would delete them and replace them with floors like in the last part of vertical world.

Tenth screenshot: Delete this moving floor. It’s annoying and won’t work in public’s.

dry sequoia
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Can you ask for level Council?

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Your reviewing is very good as well.

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(Uh what are you typing for so long?)

lyric ibex
lyric ibex
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Eleventh screenshot: This area is too cramped.

Twelfth screenshot: I would add a jump zone in the gravity field.

Thirteenth screenshot: These are too close together.

Fourteenth screenshot: I would delete the floors and just add more jump zones.

Fifteenth screenshot: This is a cycle and no one wants to play where they have to stay on a moving platform. I would replace this whole area with something else.

Sixteenth screenshot: Delete these lasers and replace this area with something else. People will just keep on dying to them.

Seventeenth screenshot: Higher the roof or lower this part down a few blocks since rn it’s too cramped.

Eighteenth screenshot: This part is too cramped.

Nineteenth screenshot: I would just put the end here. Not add a floor that takes you to it

@neat bison done

dry sequoia
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Oh ok.

lyric ibex
dry sequoia
dry sequoia
lyric ibex
dry sequoia
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(Well, as per what I've seen so far)

lyric ibex
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People have asked for me to become one

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But I haven’t yet

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They have to pick me

dry sequoia
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I of course haven't played goober dash for long so I'm not a expert or so.

lyric ibex
lyric ibex
lyric ibex
dry sequoia
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Well anyways you definitely deserve Level Council, you were very helpful. Thanks a lot!

solid peak
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your level was clearly made with 0 effort spent, it looks like a troll. you placed spikes in the void lol

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wasting LC time & trolling us will obviously gather that reaction

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other lc had a similiar confusion when looking at your level, something tells me you knew what you were doing

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all in all you clearly didnt take your submission seriously, so expect the same from us.

dry sequoia
solid peak
dry sequoia
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Although I dont need a review now as bear already reviewed it.

winged coyote
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i dont really see how this is a troll lol, and it definetly looks like effort was put into this

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i think the creator just needs a bit more experience using the mapmaker

blissful falcon
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hey @neat bison the link was deleted

neat bison
blissful falcon
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new to discord just lemme test it

lyric ibex
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Link updates

neat bison
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I know but then I didn't

blissful falcon
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@neat bison @lyric ibex test the updated version?

blissful falcon
neat bison
blissful falcon
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eye roll

neat bison
blissful falcon
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just join lobby sgv

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custom game

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i doubt you tested it

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with more than one person

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don't say how

neat bison
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yeah That level is way to crampy I know, thats why I made sandcastle rush

blissful falcon
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can you just test it

neat bison
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sure

blissful falcon
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sandcastle rush has a low chance

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of cert

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YOU ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO RUN AWAY

neat bison
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srry thought is was a race

blissful falcon
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you're supposed to see how cramped it is

neat bison
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k

blissful falcon
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divided by 4

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oh and im going troll mode

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actually divided by 8

neat bison
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I know its crampy

blissful falcon
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and about half of the people will be tryna fight you like an elimo

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like this elimo

neat bison
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but sandcastle rush is better than this right?

blissful falcon
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by -0.001%

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barely remotely worse

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but you have potential

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and you lost?

neat bison
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its just, I dont want to make another of those open maps that are boring to race

blissful falcon
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6 dramajoker 9 used to be barely bad at making levels

neat bison
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more like caidens funhouse

blissful falcon
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and look at him now

neat bison
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true

blissful falcon
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by the way the next round is starting

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and you lost

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kinda like that elimo

neat bison
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after this round Im gonna eat so I have to stop then

blissful falcon
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what I did is what half of the people are doing in both of your levels

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anyway this round is for fun

neat bison
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gotta go sorry

blissful falcon
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k

olive marsh
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this flows so well i love it sm