#32p

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@half ember Can you review?

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I just wanna see what you think

half ember
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Sure

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@spring orbit done

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Really liked it

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First screenshot: I would add a dash rechargers here so you can get through quickly.

Second screenshot: This part is kinda cramped for 32p. It’s not the space that’s cramped it’s the area between areas.

Third screenshot: I would add an arrow pointing right, here.

Fourth screenshot: I would add a dash rechargers here.

Fifth screenshot: I would also add a dash recharger here.

Sixth screenshot: Add a sign that says smth like “Climb the wall!”

Seventh screenshot: You can also add a jump zone sticking out of the wall.

Eighth screenshot: This is taken from your other level which is my favorite by you. I guess you can keep it. Not a problem.

Ninth screenshot: Add another arrow pointing at a 45 degree angle. So North south.

Tenth screenshot: Add a finish line here or a passage that leads to a secret finish area.

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A lot better than you worst map which is vertical world, imo

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Which is horrible on iPhone

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And super linear

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I really like it

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OK

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half ember
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Because or portrait mode

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Oh..

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Ok I fixed

vagrant glacier
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this part is just simply jumping on a wall, cmon you can do bette than this bro

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this part is like really bland, and also how are you supposed to get ontop

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and also i feel like there could be some more ways to die

worn pilot
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Ok first of all, thanks for not limiting yourself to one concept/object, this feels so fresh and new compared to your other stuff

I love the level, but the gameplay seems odd in some cases. Gamesense will be really awesome in this one though so I'll vote for it if these get fixed:

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  • Do something except lasers here, maybe blocks moving up and down or anything else. Lasers will be a nightmare
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  • Make sure these rechargers respawn instantly, its a 32p and more than one person should be able to take them
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  • Like sunboy said, this is boring. You could add a tunnel here or literally anything, maybe experiment with the route like shown in the video. Just not only climbing up a wall please
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  • Add checkpoints
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I fixed

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worn pilot
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I dont think you really properly fixed 2 points

worn pilot
worn pilot
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OK, I'm going to give up on this, so overall it's not bad, right? I'll fix it later, maybe in a week.