#Skybound Kingdom
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cool, but...
Hi this is ur third level today
Do you mind um.. keeping it down a bit?
Well...because it's a weekend, I have some time. I won't post on weekdays.
😆
So...How is it?
We have alot of levels to review, I barely got done with my queue 2 hours ago and theres already 4 more threads im in now
It takes time for me to check, alot of us play the level for a 30 minutes to a hour
Just keep it down please, 2 levels a day is enough
spend that time checking your own level for issues
Sure
um
you still haven't checked mine
ping me on it again pls
ok
Please make less levels, im not going to review a half finished level
This is ok but its doesnt look like youve invested alot of time into it
i love this obstacle
@lone mortar I can review if want
if you say anything bad about the obstacle in my screenshot it will not end will for you
bro that part is what i don't like the most
That is my favorite part on it
it feel unpublished
Let me polish it now.
OK
I decorated it a bit, how about now?
@lone mortar
cool
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this part is very boring
this is my favorite part, nothing wrong here
this part is ok
this might get too tight with multiple players
this part is good, I like that you can go super fast through it if the know the correct path
This section is a bit lackluster in terms of gameplay, id change this for something new
this bouncy block is pretty hard to miss without a dash, make this easier please
good part, no issues here
Please dont put cycles directly before the end, its annoying for speedruns (and the part below is a spam section, so you might be too fast and cant stop in time for the lasers in a actual race)
overall a mostly good level, I might vote for it if fix the issues I talked about, we‘ll see @lone mortar
OK
@woven oyster I fixed it
1/3
@winged fog @covert gazelle What do you think?
this is really good but like
the beginning is kinda scuffed
make the thing immediately take you up
because i thought you had to go to the side and i ended up missing the elevator thingy
Yeah, but if you get dashed off at the beginning, you still lose a ton of time. Why not just create walls there? Like, just don't let goobers die there
I fixed
@patent pagoda Is there anything else that needs to be improved?
First screenshot: I would extend this a little because people don’t like the length of the block in avoid the lasers and this is smaller than that. Both will have 4 players most of the time. Also add something on top like a gravity field or smth.
Second screenshot: This part is kinda small for multiple goobers but I think it could work out.
Third screenshot: Add another arrow on the block to the bottom right of me. For iPhone users.
Fourth screenshot: Why is this bouncy here? I don’t really see any use for it. Maybe you could make it go down and back.
Fifth screenshot: I would add something more background here and I’ll show you what I mean in the sixth screenshot.
Sixth screenshot: So I hate when levels use this theme and then make it go high up in the sky because I just don’t like how it goes from very dark to very bright and it just hurts my eyes
@lone mortar done
I don’t know why but the bright to dark hurts my eyes
Haha, this is the feature of this level
Ik its fine but I just never liked that but it doesn’t really matter
Done
@tame quarry you forgot one thing
What
CHICKEN BUTT
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Your way too funny
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Cmon, surely you can find a more fair design for this checkpoint
@covert gazelle I fixed
2/3 @woven oyster
@polar vector can you review it?
love it