3D World

[midnight needle]

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io/?play=5037ae0c-02ab-4958-9544-f6186fd0cafe

<@&1178134658857308212> Review it, pls

[vestal plank]

Theres too little space for 32p, and I also believe that whoever has the best starting position will probably be in 1st for the entire race if they play decently

Theres just no skill section in your level

[fast fern]

yeah prob make it a 16p, and add some difficulty because i think that you were trying to make it easy for 32p but likeeeeee its just too easy now

also add some grass

and uhm idk maybe just me but try and add offset to some of the spinning things

these two sections also feel really empty

[midnight needle]

@vestal plank @fast fern I made some changes

[merry temple]

too difficult cuz i suck

[midnight needle]

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[midnight needle]

and 6 more😆

Can you review this too?

[stuck tree]

when I have time

[vestal plank]

I think you're gonna have to rebuild this one

Sorry, but the difficulty feels very forced and unfair now which is definitely not fitting for multiplayer

And the individual parts are still super linear-holdright/holdleft-ish

Also, this obstacle is super annoying

[thorny sable]

K review time here's my thoughts

First i like the 3d idea i don't think it's been done before and i like creativity so you got a point for that

Second here's what you need to change and do

This part here is pretty empty try adding some 3d designs with shadows or blocks or whatever up to you

Here i don't think that's what sunboy meant by making it difficult cause now it's more of annoying than it is of difficult and i already see people struggling in this and with many people it would be complete aids so give it a rework

This part can use some polishing

And last the map seems pretty easy in most parts so add a cycle in here with idk 3d saws inside of a gravity field or something take your pick

@midnight needle cheers

[midnight needle]

@vestal plank @thorny sable I modified it, how is it now?

[thorny sable]

You never failed to impress me the new 3d platforms are pretty awesome but the gameplay still needs to be fixed ill let you know in a bit

[vestal plank]

one of my points is fixed, the rest are only a bit

I think if I suggest any further it would start being my level and not yours

To me the gameplay still doesnt work, thats why i suggested you rebuild it since ur trying to fix a broken layout by replacing the gameplay

[thorny sable]

Add another one of those in here

The down side you changed isn't good the old one was better by polishing it i meant add some shadows or designs with grass or whatever not change everything

And this part is still bad just try adding some normal play like spikes or lasers or something not necessarily a 3d design just something to make the lvl a little bit more fun

[merry temple]

You should add a 3d rotating cylinder design like how everblaze did it

[midnight needle]

@thorny sable Done

[thorny sable]

Move the signs to this placement so people would see the warning before they come close to the hole not after they fall into it

Make the jumping zone one block wider from the outside

And last make this a platform instead of a a bouncy block

This also might be an annoying jump for some people so maybe make it something like this

I know that i ask you to do a lot but it's only so your lvl would be good and it wouldn't be uncertified later just cause we didn't go through all the flaws now

[midnight needle]

Uh...I believe you posted the wrong post

But I've changed it.

https://discord.com/channels/798957956573429811/1337772068112044176

[compact pollen]

friggin packet yo

[thorny sable]

Oh yeah wrong channel lol

[midnight needle]

OK so how is it now?

[eternal trail]

@midnight needle nice level, nice skip

[thorny sable]

I'll check it when i have time

[midnight needle]

It's really amazing to find it

[eternal trail]

yep thx

[midnight needle]

<@&1178134658857308212> can someone review?

[compact pollen]

this is actually pretty cool

[midnight needle]

thx

[vestal plank]

sorry ive given you 3 reviews

[fast fern]

so this obstacle is pretty cool but uhm not really at the start of the level

if you jump into it it’s basically guaranteed death

just image 15 other goobers here

these two rotating spinning jumping sections should imo have different offsets for variation, it’s very boring just having them synced

this entire section just feels empty when you actually play it

like nothing stimulating nor exciting is happening

and this section could definitely use some spice

like just some extra deco and additional obstacles

[runic nebula]

i like the decoration and the gameplay is ok but idk if i want to give it my vote

just dosnt sit right with me

[midnight needle]

https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io?play=7c9313ec-fe3e-43ed-8e6d-ef1a29df2654

Leaving aside the decoration, is this layout feasible?