#Sky Flying Castle

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drowsy pendant
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<@&1178134658857308212> Can you give it a review?

vast blaze
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I’ll review all the levels you posted after work 👍

drowsy pendant
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👍

nova pumice
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the spacing of the level would be much better as a 8p

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other than that i think its good

drowsy pendant
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@narrow scarab @lusty lichenCan you review it for me?

drowsy pendant
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Alright, maybe later?

next crane
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@narrow scarab HAPPY BIRTHDAY

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on superbowl day is pretty interesting

narrow scarab
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yes

drowsy pendant
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Is it your birthday today? Happy birthday!

sweet mulch
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Purty Gud in my opinion

stable edge
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my favorite she/they player

misty glade
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overdecorated in my opinion. its really hard to see a clear path. too much going on in too tiny space

grand lintel
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This level is confusing me a bit, but you design it pretty well

drowsy pendant
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I will make the level a bit simpler

drowsy pendant
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How about now?

grand lintel
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Better

drowsy pendant
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Thanks

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@misty glade What do you think?

lusty lichen
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When I saw these arrows, I thought they were kinda contradictory. I think just remove the top path since its confusing, and you lose time by going that way. Either that, or leave out those arrows imo.

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Pretty neat, I especially liked the visual on this

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I've personally never liked the crates with move animations, as I think they act very weirdly. Its fine tho

stable edge
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this decoration in the level looks a bit ehh

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  1. a. (!) i would suggest putting a disappearing block each to encase the starting areas and make sure the spawn advantage isn't that great
    b. (?) the caution signs at the top look kinda out of place tbh

  2. (!!) putting dash rechargers here just look super ugly and also make this path look desirable which is NOT the goal with a hard shortcut, i would remove the rechargers here

  3. (!!) this part looks and plays really weird, i can only imagine this in a public, my advice would to make this part a straightforward downwind and nothing more

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i can't really suggest much more other than to make your levels play simpler, the main offender of this being at the end

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and also make your levels look a bit nicer with more background blocks is my suggestion, but it's all up to you in the end

wispy charm
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Ok let me give you a tip

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You have this really great theme, fun gameplay and awesome creativity
but you try to cram it all into one little space

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Make your level BIGGER, give your player room to breathe in

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your level won't only become longer than 19 seconds, it'll also feel better to play and look at

delicate slate
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yeah this guy has potential

drowsy pendant
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Thanks,you just made my day

drowsy pendant
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I will revise this one tomorrow. If you can, please review my '(r)Ferris Wheel' first.

drowsy pendant
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If I change the original 16 players to 8, then the space won’t be too small, right?

wispy charm
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the problem is it looks bad and plays bad

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even in singleplayer

drowsy pendant
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Is this better?

wispy charm
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before i say anything

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does this play better to you?

drowsy pendant
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yeah,I think so

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Bigger and simpler

drowsy pendant
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@misty glade Can you also review this for me?

wispy charm
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SO much better

drowsy pendant
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Is there anything that needs to be changed?

wispy charm
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imo, i still wish you redesigned the layout
You have multiple concepts in ur level and i feel like if you take One part for each concept and make it the best it could possibly be it would be much more fun

drowsy pendant
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...Alright then... but this is a bit difficult...

mellow elbow
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@drowsy pendant extend the floor cause I can stand on it

drowsy pendant
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This... shouldn't be a problem, right?

mellow elbow
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Well if a goober falls on the right side they get stopped

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All you have to do is extend the floor a little more in the wall

drowsy pendant
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How about now?

mellow elbow
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Good

mellow elbow
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I can do one later if you want

drowsy pendant
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yeah

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Thanks

mellow elbow
drowsy pendant
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sure

wispy charm
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speedrun seems fun

drowsy pendant
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Bruh...

mellow elbow
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I would add another jump zones here

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Put an arrow here since I can’t see the other ones

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Add a floor for this shortcut

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That’s all imo

drowsy pendant
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@reef crypt @soft ridge Can you give it a review?

drowsy pendant
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@delicate slate @twin flint @graceful pumiceCan you review it for me?

twin flint
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I don’t review levels

drowsy pendant
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sure

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sorry