#Blue dash!
south kindle
mighty hatch
@south kindle
please for the love of everything funny in this world
stop making new threads
ill get to your level soon
i have things to do irl and other levels to review here
just stop creating and deleting threads
it's getting incredibly annoying
south kindle
I tried to delete the old one
mighty hatch
we don't want you to delete older ones
what we want is for a level to stay contained in a single thread
not 5
south kindle
Oh ok I won’t make any more (:
south kindle
mighty hatch
i can give you feedback soon
south kindle
Ok
worldly rapids
bro fry guy make your own map layout bro
this is sky born showdown
your not fooling me
worldly rapids
did you get inspired by sky born showdown?
south kindle
Yes
mighty hatch
(first screenshot) : this is kind of a simple start, it's just basic jumping.
(second screenshot) : this is kinda cramped for 8p, and it's kind of a bland hallway.
(third screenshot) : another common gravity field with speed ups, no complaints here
(fourth screenshot) : basic jump zone parkour, no complaints here.
(fifth screenshot) : ok this hallway is incredibly cramped, there is little to no space for players to wait between saws and this being 5 tiles high doesn't help it either.
(sixth screenshot) : this first spinner is annoying since it doesn't throw you into the gravity field, adding an extended floor to the right of the field would help.
(seventh screenshot) : this spinner creates a cramped obstacle due to how big it is, please extend the height of this room if you want to keep this.
(eighth screenshot) : this spinner is just annoying, I'd recommend removing it.
(ninth screenshot) : basic saw parkour, no complaints here but from what i can already tell this level is absurdly bland.
(tenth screenshot) : gravity field into a 3 block tall hallway, fun.
(eleventh screenshot) : this obstacles is stupid (gravity field) requires timing and if you mistime it you're all the way back up due to its strength.
(twelfth screenshot) : if you manage to survive the night the obstacle from the previous screenshot you need to keep control not to get flung into spikes by spinning fields that are barely in the shot.
(thirteenth screenshot) : more basic saws, no complaints but the lack of enjoyability™ is really starting to get to me
(fourteenth screenshot) : you can't really get past people in these types of sections, i recommend a full-on change here.
(fifteenth screenshot) : another blasted spinner giving more bland gameplay.
(sixteenth screenshot) : this feels inspired from skyborne showdown but poorly animated, it's a decent obstacle but it's mimicry so no points will be given for this.
(seventeenth screenshot) : end build up is good, there's no wacky things before the end.
Final Score :
design : 3.5/10, your level's flow is varied throughout the entire level, it's not fun to play in certain sections due to poor spacing in major sections and the entire level is linear (one dimensional).
multiplayability™ : 4/10, very few important sections have enough space for 8 players to do what they want, and this is due to the small hallways and poorly designed obstacles.
creativity : 2.5/10, i would rate this high if it were blandness but alas it's creativity and there's little shown in here with obstacles that make this feel like a 70 second of uninspired slop. The repeating saw obstacles and spinners are a testament to this.
Score 10/30, D Tier
civic jetty
RIP
civic jetty
Ur determined to take my job as well???
dusty gate
Ur determined to take my job as well???
Yessir
south kindle
Can you tell me what to change?
somber wagon
red dash
south kindle
Can my level get certified? If no can you guys tell me what to change?
south kindle
I updated some parts can you just tell me what you think about them. <@&1178134658857308212>
south kindle
Do you like the other obstacles that I added @mighty hatch
mighty hatch
the new obstacles are pretty good, i like the gravity field and rotated floor one
sacred moon
I tried that but I couldn't get it to softlock 
dusty gate
They should have people test the map for softlocks
sacred moon
aren't there already people who do that?
dusty gate
I don’t think so
sacred moon
us?
dusty gate
Yes we do
sacred moon
so we are people who test the map for softlocks lol
dusty gate
Nvmd
sacred moon
ok xD
dusty gate
It’s like you know how level council gives reviews
We tell people where softlocks are
sacred moon
ohhhhh I see
south kindle
Can I have 1 more review @mighty hatch
mighty hatch
you can have 1 more but before i start writing you need to be 100% happy with your current version
re-ping me to confirm
south kindle
@mighty hatch
mighty hatch
https://gooberdash.winterpixel.io?play=e425c95e-64df-4b28-b71d-8dc35bc2f7af
is this link the link for the current version
south kindle
This is the link to the current version @mighty hatch
south kindle
Ok
civic jetty
This is gonna be a big one lol
mighty hatch
(first screenshot) : start remains the same, no complaints here.
(second screenshot) : this also remains as a good zone, no complaints here.
(third screenshot) : same as the previous one, but the immediate lack of linearity (especially in a more modernized age of level building) really takes off points for your entire level.
(fourth screenshot) : this is a great improvement, but please make the saws go back into the blocks since it'll look nicer.
(fifth screenshot) : this is another great improvement, with a forced push into the gravity field into the next zone. good job!
(sixth screenshot) : i personally love this obstacle, but could you please offset them perfectly (like one every 6 tiles or so). overall no complaints here.
(seventh screenshot) : this obstacle is kind of lame, compared to the more creative things you'd see in other levels.
(eighth screenshot) : basic saw parkour, no complaints here.
(ninth screenshot ) : this hallway is still incredibly small, i recommend fixing it like you did to the other one in the fourth screenshot.
(tenth screenshot) : this obstacle still sucks to play around since it's cramped and annoying.
(eleventh screenshot) : this is a continuation to the tenth screenshot, this obstacle is also hard to play.
(twelfth screenshot) : pretty good obstacle, saws feel kind of big in my opinion.
(thirteenth obstacle) : this obstacle definitely needs a rework since you can't get past anyone here and kinda takes out the race in racing.
(fourteenth screenshot) : this was a great obstacle change, but instead of the blocks falling all at once (since it can lead to many unfortunate accidents) could you make them fall one at a time ?
(fifteenth screenshot) : I'm not a huge fan of this obstacle due to the bad animation, but it works.
(sixteenth screenshot) : end build-up is same as previous review.
Final Score :
design : 5/10 (previous review received 3.5/10), you've made a couple good changes to this level, but the length is still very long, certain obstacles are either too cramped or difficult for multiple players to play evenly and last but not least your level remains linear (one dimensional). on a brighter side you fixed a couple of the problems from the first review.
multiplayability™ : 5.5/10 (previous review received 4/10), level has improved here a bit, but some obstacles were not fixed properly leading them to have bad areas for multiplayer (see thirteenth screenshot)
creativity : 3.5/10 (previous review received 2.5/10), level continues to have no original obstacle and is very simple offering little challenge overall. but i will say that i am happy that you made some changes removing certain elements making the race feel less like a 70-second loop.
Score 14/30 (+4), C Tier (previous review received 10/30, D Tier)
three days late
life is great
mighty hatch
this still isn't a great obstacle
as much as it pains me to say this, your current level is too bland to be certified
also the obstacles here are a) repeated b) forced death since you can't escape them
mighty hatch
extend the room width-wise to the rightmost area of the red
trim pivot
your level can be sent right now but its lacking any reason for me personally to send it
cool super unique design? cant find it
fun situations for public lobbies? those dont exist
stuff i havent seen in other levels? nope! most of your gimmicks and obstacles are already mostly present in other levels
i dont want to be harsh (even though i am right now) but your level does not stick out and i would become tired of this level quickly. we have other levels that do what you did better and i dont want to send another boring level i wont want to actually play.
@mighty hatch youve been the main reviewer for this level, do you see what i said differently?
mighty hatch
i cant immediately tell someone something isn't great
but i can see what you're saying
trim pivot
well then i think its @south kindle 's job to add something unique and fun to his level
its never about making everything the most perfect it can be, i just want to enjoy a level
i dont want to fall asleep half way through the level
mighty hatch
level continues to have no original obstacle and is very simple offering little challenge overall.
i said this in both reviews
or something similar
south kindle
K I’ll try to add something fun to the level
trim pivot
i would also like if you tried just a bit more with adding shortcuts and better design
mighty hatch
@south kindle i honestly don't think this level can be certified (at this point it's just an amalgamation of stolen concepts from other levels and parkour a 4 year old could do) unless you're willing to remake the vast majority of it
nebula and i have both given our "verdicts" and the rest of the smurfs haven't given this the time of day since we have already
south kindle
So is there anything I can do to make it better?
mighty hatch
i want you to take a look at levels in both the editor and races
and try to grasp their flow and well-designed and original (kinda) obstacles
and when you feel inspired enough, return to the editor and brainstorm a fun and balanced obstacle no one's seen before
it can be inspired
it just has to stand out enough for this not to fade into obscurity if it were to get certified
trim pivot
So is there anything I can do to make it better?
yes there is, but the logical solution would be too give up on this level and get more experience by creating other ones
since youve already confined urself to a layout you wouldnt have really changed anything in that regard anyway
just get new ideas, make new levels and we can rate those
south kindle
Ok