#A short level I created

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ionic herald
digital pulsar
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The background makes it very very hard to see where i have to go. I usually dont like to comment on deco but in this case the whole level is ruinde for me because of how you used it. Would you mind getting rid/changing it. Maybe its subjective. I would be curious if you yourself really like how it looks? I even tried to change themes but it just never pleased my eye 😅 which is kinda sad because i enjoyed playing the level as soon as i found out how to do it

ionic herald
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I’ll change background

olive crag
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the start is nice, dash saving is required if you're not in the lead

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bounce-into-field obstacles are common, and although this one is smaller it's better since there's more space for movement/players

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the warning to troll path is good, although the real path is very small (1 tile is too little, try 2 or 3)

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simple path here, no complaints

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some elims and levels have 1 block bouncers but with 4 players in this very confined area isn't great

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i like this part, simple timed squisher obstacle

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bad screenshot, but i highly recommend extending the checkpoints since it can lead to some unfortunate moments when if someone takes the middle and not the sides (ties or losses)

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haven't talked about the background and it honestly blew my mind

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it's very distracting and should probably be changed like spino said

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Final Score :
design : 9/10, very nice level with few area that don't have good spacing, player movement along with the background that hard carries your deco. Although it should be fixed, I still really liked most of the obstacles in this level
multiplayabilityâ„¢ : 5/10, although some areas can manage 4 players per side (level says this is 8p so i go by that) some, like the checkpoint bouncers and the jump zone segment that's 1 block wide isn't great.
skill req : cross between easy and pre-intermediate, most of the obstacles in this level are in the tutorial/can be learned with enough knowledge about the game and no advanced techniques such as dash jumping.
creativity : 8/10, many nice obstacles and simplistic yet fun level design, I don't have much to say here
Score 22/30

ionic herald
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Thanks

ionic herald
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@olive crag I’ll tell you when I’m done with it

olive crag
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okie !

craggy glacier
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pizza tower

olive crag
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yes

ionic herald
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@olive crag I did most of the stuff you said. Tell me what you think

olive crag
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way better

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at least 3 players can get up here at a time and since theoretically there will be 4 per side this no longer clogs and cramps the level

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jump zone optimization helps a ton

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and the fixed finish line eliminates unfortunate occurences

olive crag
ionic herald
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Thanks

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@craggy glacier if you think this is good can you send it to typixel

craggy glacier
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review time

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plz no spam laser

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also the bouncy blocks with elevators are kinda rng

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prolly remove the right path, and also the left path is an absolute mess

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this section is like idk kinda wack, i would make this easier a bit

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also just add more grass

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also a longer level would be nicer

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but some parts of the level do look pretty nice

ionic herald
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@craggy glacier I did most of that stuff. You can check it out now.

craggy glacier
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ok I’ll check it out now

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did u create a new level with a new link?

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cuz the link at the top is the same level I reviewed up above

ionic herald
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I’ll check if I did

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ionic herald
ivory harness
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not to be rude but i strongly dislike the background

ionic herald
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Ok