#Yale (2022-2023)
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200 characters
which is on average about 35 words
but the input box counts the words
*characters
Doesn't it count characters?
Ahhh college apps
WEBTOON lmao
I wrote about WEBTOON
your yale course is by far my fav piece of supp in the entire yale app
^^
same tbh
like would it be a very useful course? no not really but it sounds so cool
organization and time management
and it goes back to what I put about who Iād have speak
Oh lol I put balancing habitat preservation with economic growth
Anybody willing to read my yale supplements?
yo is anyone open to see my short answers
Sure if you want a second opinion :)
lmao
Sure
Sure
Would it be worth applying to yale as a super technical cs students who's into robotics and has no humanities EC
I mean they always need one but on a real one how strong is their Cs program
LMAOOOO NICE
guys what did you write for something that isnt mentioned in your application
does anyone know the deadline for the ferpa and recommenders to be completed? since i've received an email 6 days ago about the admissions accepting school documents and recommendations after the RD deadline
i talked about how i love dishing up relationship advice
cause ngl it gets me hype asf
For the yale "free exchange of ideas" essay I wrote about arguing about the existence of God with a friend. Is that too controversial? š¬
bro
That's what I wrote about pretty much
Gonna get rejected together š¤
thats so sleek
lol
it's the truth, but on a more showy side i think it shows that I care about my friends/peers lol
what school in yale had this prompt?
Arts and Science
wtfygfhgve
Does Yale do seperate essays by school? There weren't any options to choose schools
There was another prompt about community
They might have changed the prompt since EA
oh ok im so dumb, i totally forgot about the other one
I don't know how to do community essays. This was the only one I could answer š
what's the grace period for counselors to upload my transcript and stuff?
the way i'm fighting for my life to get this why yale essay below word count
can we ban sub 200 word "why x" essays
How can I say anything about Yale in 125 words
The fact that it's so low I think says something about the kind of essay they want
The don't just want a laundry list of what Yale has to offer
Yeah I need to think of smth specific
yes please
thank god, after like 3 hours of playing with it, i finally got it to exactly 125
Can I run an idea by someone in DMs
ahh the why yale is so short
I wanna figure out if my shit seems too generic
This essay is so dogshit bruh
sure
Sent
its either or right?
bro u gave me a heart attack i just checked it was either or
yeah either or dw
send me too!
yeah i was like, "when tf did we have a controversy essay" lol
anyways yale's basically done š doing one last review
struggling with this why us its so small
i cant think of something unique cause everyone and their moms write about yale's "and" š
I KNOW
just look up your major
find a professor
read his ressearch
say "professors x research y enthralls me and I want to work on his/her team
thats a terrible idea, ao's know how to sniff bs
they know you could give a random college to a random dude and as loong as they have a website, the kid will do his research in 5 mins, plus most research is beyond a HSer's capability to comprehend
maybe just look up student groups and connect them to your ecs, mention if you've had a convo with a yalie and if there's a 'vibe' you like like perseverance or social communication
I got an opportunity to converse with my cornell ao about how i was rejected , he said something along these lines, not something i pulled out off my ass
wait howd u do this i lowkey wanna do this for brown
well idk if brown has it
but i dead-ass went on a flurry of emails, emailed every person who was remotely assosciated with cornell's admissions on the internet
eventually some heeded my mails, forwarded it and so on, until i got a very brief text that wasnt 'applicant pool was so diverse' bs, instead it was straight up why we rejected you
payment failed for yale, parents are out, deadline is in 3 hoursš
maybe email yale? or call the office
Any credit cards at home?
or beg š
or ask friends or other family members and pay them back (let them know that you will)
i just found one thank god
im guna ask the parents but i dont want a shoutingšš
waiting for reply now
Unless theyāre really hard on cash I think youāll be fine, this payment thatās under $100 could change your entire future
yep
but damn these colleges are expensive
too expensive
i hate this why yale essay
like i was over the word limit i cut down now im 15 words below
theres no in between with a word limit like this lol
damn
they quick with it
alr i needa get off discord and submit ts
i was about to say like are u 2 days behind or smt
lol
yo mind if I use this as a template?
also cool if you send it for me to copy and paste?
Iām so fucked
I have 5 out of the 6 written answers left and the one I DO have sucks ass
thanks man
I have 2 ideas for the speaker but neither of them are great
I canāt write about inspiration in 35 words and I canāt write about something unique in 35 words
Flirting vs harassment but itās Princeton short answer vs Yale short answer
any downside to writing only 110 words instead of 125 for the why yale answer
cause i cant get a 15 word sentence that fits in, anything that fits in is longer
if you have legitimate prior experience in the field i donāt think itās bs
i have 300+ hrs of research and published data in orbital mechanics and chaos theory
so i was like āhey cool! i like doing this stuff too and would really like x professorās guidance!ā
for princeton my first astrophys textbook i started learning out of was published by a professor there so i talked about how i was fascinated with xyz and how x professor helped me connect my quantitative skills to a field i loved
125 words is not enough šš
how?
how many words did u guys write for the topic that excites essay
192 rn
subject to change
in the next few hours lol
what question did yall ask the the speaker youll invite
Exact same
didnāt do a question, i said a topic
im at 182 after my brother took out a whole sentence saying its irrelevant š
what topic
i feel like mines is so lame
idk what to do
i focused on my major for that one
I cannot do any of the short answers I hate these
Do you think that if I made a funny response to one of the questions that Yale would auto reject me
no
these are sm fun to write
AHHHHH I hate these 35 word STs
for the inspiration question did u guys list or talk about 1 thing?
i donāt want what inspires me to sound too cliche š
If yours is super serious/a famous historical figure you could always try a more "fun" angle
Yeah I canāt say someone in my family
I have an idea for a speaker but itās not great
It can be anyone I'm pretty sure
That's like a real person
iām tempted
You can if you explain
I did someone pretty niche
i had dinner with this nobel laureate who lectured over the summer
we had a rlly good convo
i would love to have him lecture again
else i might do someone ancient
I was gonna choose Joji for a topic that I wonāt share because I donāt want ppl stealing lol
i wrote about my grandpa
Joji is definitely not niche in some areas but I donāt think his music will be recognizable to middle age people
i donāt think you need to worry ab that
is it fair game to paste a why major essay for the first question?
It also rlly isnāt abt me but more abt my interest
I sure did
I changed the āwhy usā part to delve more into a specific area of interest tho
I kind of separated my why major into 2 paragraphs, 1 abt major and 1 abt school itself
yea i have a section at the end of mine which is college specific
quick question before i submit, for the what inspires u did u guys list or talk about 1 thing?
2 paragraphs?? lol
one thing
2 paragraphs that are like 100 words each
ah okay
i wrote ab 1 thing
i feel like most of mine is going to be why major bc why school is another question
I donāt know if I should do the Joji idea because it rlly doesnāt say much about me, more about my interests
at least thatās how i did it for columbia
iām rlly lucky i omitted my chess stuff from my app
thatās been my trick up my sleeve
But itās kinda my best idea so far
i was going to copy and paste my why major essay from columbia to the yale one
for all of these āis there anything else about you?ā
me too
Iāve omitted my love for music from my app so thatās always my unique thing
its an author and criminal justice lawyer
i kept that in my app š
itās like my main selling point for awards
since i have 9x natl awards in piano
Itās bc I donāt do anything with music
I just love that shit
Only thing is that Iām pitch perfect lol
I like trying to make sheet music for other songs sometimes
ooo
Like if thereās a solid lead melody for a song I can get notes down for it
Mine leads up to 1 topic too
Wait āanyone who didā as in its optional?
not optimal
*optional
i start w/ watching & researching meteor showers and constellations, then go to building model rockets and watching rocket launches, then to orbital craft dynamics then to orbital dynamics in general
but 2/3 is dynamics
i hope thatās ok
yeah like one topic/initiative within my major
i narrowed it down to chaos theory and dynamics is that fine?
as an astrophys major
i talked about what led me there
lemme find what research yale actually has
for columbia i bsād a little
i have some rlly long sentences
I hate these short answers
same they lowkey worse than the essays
well fudge
Yeah

um uhh umm
Time for a short answer
dude i hated those yale short takes
What was ur approach
@regal relic i play piano too
um
i was quirky for two
i wrote the short takes first whaaa
Obviously
LMAOO why would we copy it
okay just double checking lmao
If ur approach was āgive upā then idk if Iād wanna copy
fff idk i talked about 50M years so i guess galactic astronomy works
we dont want the recipe to yo mamas peach cobbler
Iāll gladly look at whatever
lmao it's a joke
but my short takes are kind of cliche and not amazing
orbital dynamics -> galactic astronomy?
idk
i guess they consider it as kinematics
that works
phiew, right on the limit
Oh wait we donāt need to elaborate as to why itās called such?
I don't know. I heard that some people did, and others didn't.
I mean it probably would be better if you did
I just didn't realize that before I submitted
Love tennis
short takes, ure fine
35w max
on goddd
iām thinking of writing something a little bit silly for what inspires you
i mean it's not like im gonna get in
āŗļø āx professor from another university inspires meā
my "something we dont know about u" is silly
Deadass just typed āJimmy āMrBeastā Donaldsonā
and the my course is silly too lol
i wanted to write "for something we dont know about you" as allergic to watermelon
but i opted against it because my dad said no
iām prolly going to be boring
im debating if I should take out the period at the end of one of the STs im at 201 characters
and just be like āi love chess puzzle š„µā
i audibly cackled
Almost did left handed
as the unique thing
I dont get how everyones short takes are so long š
LMAO ty
I know I was kinda fucking around
i donāt think thatās a good idea but itās funny af
ya i giggled
I think that he's joking guys š
yall wanna see. mine?
valid
anyone able to check a why major rq
Sure
i love my course one iāll send after i submit
my why yale is rlly holdin me back rn
āi like the bulldogā
explanation: because a well-rested body and a sharp mind makes perfect.
that one and the "enhance community" one got me too, do you know what u plan to major in/what ecs you're interested in at yale?
poli sci / sociology / south asian studies
125w is just way not enough for a why us imo
could it be?
yes
if itās still silly
DUH
i love that already
IGSK390
Thoughts? (Please do not steal!!!!!!)
iāll tell yāall after i submit
it has to do with sock knitting and galaxies
ill share my short takes after i submit as well
welp deadline just passed in western europe
does yale have a grace period
est gang here
yea til 12am hawaii time afaik
I wrote my course about women loll
CET>>
prolly a few minutes
got 5 hours to edit š„²
I wrote my supps in like 1 lmao, granted i recycled like 2 totally but smh, gotta do whatchu gotta do
Meowtronomy and purr-bital dynamics š¼
lmao, when u hate your previous supps
wrote them with a former williams AO so they should be fine
I did something similar
Except I have a former AO for a college
family connections lmao š
williams is a college
best LAC in the states lmao
My thing was that they were former
mine was a former too
gotta do what u gotta do
Ahhhh
look what i wrote
Ok so we got the same thing going
exactly aye, didn't even apply to williams for the sake of faireness im just like that
the hardest part ab writing these supps is that i overwrite and have to cut down SO MUCH
I applied to the college my person was an AO for š
do you think iāll get docked points for my sentences being like eons long
Feels a little like cheating but I wonāt get in anyways
like 1/4 of word limit long
Try to find any way possible to split them a bit
they gon get u inn
Hell nah bruh what
jk lmao
I wish
I like the mrbeast
def mr beast idk if talking about filthy frank is a good idea š
very sensible tbh
second to last one be quirky like yale
yea thatās what iām going for
š if it got me into ssp it can get me into yale
manifesting
Why couldnāt you stop 8 puzzles ago
You should add me on chess.com so I can totally definitely beat you with my 500 Elo and about 3 games played
mayhaps after jan 5
i havenāt played chess in forever
like actually iām sad i havenāt had the time
I was gonna be done after Jan 5 but now I have to do a peer Rec
Yeah
But THEN Iām done
š¼
I canāt even think of what to write
i told my friend i needed it days ago and he wrote it up for me
very stressful and now the person doesnāt have a backup
This person told me to write it a while back but Iāve been so busy Iām gonna do it probably on the 5th
my friend wrote about how iām really really good at pattern recognition
and talked about a game of chess i crushed him in months ago and how i told him āthese are all of the lines you couldāve playedā and we laughed together
think abt something like that for your friend
I might write about the persons personal improvement but that means writing some bad with the good so idk
i think he wrote me 500+ words
yeah he expanded on that for me too
The thing is the bad is p awful
and talked about how i now talk in classes and am a treasure trove of knowledge for discussion
maybe donāt mention it as much
iāve grown from smth like that too but they used another form of growth; i grew from being very reserved to sociable and willing to contribute whenever possible
it was such a great rec fr
Yeah Iāll try to think of smth else
But the improvement from the very very bad might impress AOs idk
i wouldnāt talk about the very very bad if theyāre violent or harmful to others
That is good, but can you maybe explain the chess jargon? I'd have no idea how good 3800 is, or what Elo (it's capitalized, and so is Chess.com) is.
or if it has to do too much with mental health
yeah true
Yeah itās mostly mental health/emotionally harmful stuff so Iāll try to think of smth else
Maybe say āinternational master levelā instead of 2500 elo
is it a good idea to anwer the new yale course question with a joke
WGM puzzle level š„ø
I almost did that
i did
that makes fun of the trust fund babies at yale
what was yours
"...and solved a 3800 rated puzzle--one of the hardest on the site." Maybe?
mine was major & art related and silly
kk iād need to cut smth out since iām at the word limit
do you think the dates are relevant
like the ones in parentheses
kk thatāll help me cut down
Actual
my why yale is soooo
i just really like puzzles
ugh
Ah same
i did too
mine is very risky though
what was your joke
my course name is funny but the desc is normal
my desc is funny too
What is it, if yāall donāt mind sharing
well just a funny class that will (prolly) never exist
mine was major related & related to art
im thinking of submitting something along the lines of "how to not spend all of your parents money"
1500 is awesome
but probably not
HAHAHAHH
šš
damn lmao, could not be me xD but it's fun ig
thatās hilarious but yale wants u to spend all ur parents money
yea kinda
LOLL
try, how to spend a loooot of your parents money (but on stuff thats worth it, like a good education)
āHow to loot your parentsā dabloonsā
š
āThe perfect application: how to donate a building to an Ivy League schoolā
āHow to get into Yale 101ā
Donate a building and fund an orphanage
Also 36/4.0
I know someone with a 1560 who donated a bulk of money to ukrainian orphanages and teaches coding to orphans for free in russian
applied to mit was deferred
And be a professional writer
Thereās a kid that Iāve kind of cited as āthe perfect studentā since 7th grade
Deferred from MIT
how to create a 503(c)
i do that in english for ukrainian kids owo, got rejected from my ED
dude i have no clue what inspires me
teaching english tho not code
I donāt do anything like that, deferred from my EA
accepted into other EA tho !!!
which ea?
life, passion, money, seeing Elon's downfall
iām waiting on gatech 
Fuuuuck GAtech
For their EA date
me USC, UMass and UF lmao
āGeorgia students get it tomorrow other people get it next yearā
i know if i put āthe mysteries of the universeā iād get laughed at by an ao for being cringe
fax
Elons downfall tho
mine prolly cringe af too
That inspires me
me too, shouldve put that š
i alrdy submitted
Andrew Tate
getting arrested
Playing Games, Playing Genes, Playing God. Creating and using computational models and designs to play with genetic modifications or other biological aspects, testing the limits.
this was my course
thatās rlly good wtf
sheeeeeesh
playing god š
he got released tho i believe
iāve gotta find 200 words to talk about my community in this community essay
lmao
what ommunity are u talking bout
I did perspective for that one
Reusing 1 essay for every Ivy League:
Yale community essay iām talking about how i work with the state board of education to improve the post secondary conditions for students in low income areas statewide
my community is a low income area
i could try to tie it in with space
& my astro club
i kinda want to talk about my model rocketry demo i did for middle schoolers
ah ok wait princetonās hold on
sheesh thats firee
welp guys I wish you the best! yall are amazing, im going to sleep now!
gn!
i thought the same
got rejected
tbf i reread my opposing view essay a month later and cringed
completely changed it
Mine is rlly solid I think
idk it was the only opposing perspective convo Iāve had in forever
my friend and i shared ours for princeton after we submitted and we wrote on the EXACT SAME THING
JUST DIFFERENT CONVOS

woo submitted
š
agh i feel like my app is so clunky
itās so heavy with astro
it reeks of astrophys
Same
my 400 isnāt as much astro related thankfully
I focused more on my interest in SETI though
ooooo
orbital mechanics here
i tried to play into the galactic kinematics stuff they do
I think colleges like when you focus on a certain thing. Shows dedication or something
if i were an ao not interested in astro iād throw my app in the trash
Nice. Orbital Mechanics is rad
Same. I really hope they find alien life atleast somewhat interesting
astrobio is a lot more well known i think youāll be fine
So when do results come out
Hopefully š¤
march
I wrote about debating the existence of God with a friend š
oooo
Might be too controversial now that I think about it
ya i talked about public policy, thatās my 3rd choice
i think itās interesting
I don't think that's very controversial
^
It was fun to write about though
WTF the short takes donāt let you do line breaks or italicize??
thatās kinda poopyā¦.
ah shit i just saw that they have to be under 200 characters
š
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
my first short take looks way worse without that formatting
Orbital Mechanics reminds me. Epic games is giving away KSP on Jan 5th. Everyone start ksp š«
There's a limit in the app if you exceed 200 characters dw
yeah I know š
wait what
i have 35 words
is it fine or does it have to be under
let me check
Should be fine
I remember hitting a limit and not being able to write more on my 'guest speaker' short answer
kk
Oh fr
Mine too
what inspires me? i donāt know
I canāt think of anything that isnāt basic
@gaunt quarry
i had to plead a lot to get my 3rd recommender on commonapp
hi
I donāt think so
is 7/21 for essays
Please tell me itās essays and not colleges
yeah u can do it it's just rly annoying
if u alr had to plead with them esp lmao
cuz they need to mail it physically
or do some stupid online form that seems to be more complicated than every other school's system
itās for.. itās for
colleges š«
im ded
YOOO
Let me send you my famous Reddit comment
ok one 35 word supplemental left āØ
265 votes and 53 comments so far on Reddit
ok listen
i have no excuse
there is no buts
i was just in nyc for 3 days and enjoyed life a little

but if i get done before 9pm im going to start on jhu and knock it out tn
Only failures enjoy life!
LOL
after school š«
I'm doing an impression of Asian parents
lmfao
i was having the time of my life enjoying nyc nonstreet food
And now you pay!
No but seriously, good luck
I believe in you
Just do it one sentence at a time
literally itās gotten a lot easier
Awesome!
just copy paste
Factual
i have like 5 different lengths of the same essay
itās awesome
i feel like jhuās just gonna be a copy paste of my yale 400
Love to see it
nicee
towards the end, maybe last 8ish supps out of 40 š it was just complete copy paste lmao
at least for me
yes me but 7
Yeah I have one final essay, a "Why us?" for UChicago, that's totally going to be a blatant copy of my Cornell "Why us?"
oh i thought uchicago only had one
the weird ass prompts
i was gonna apply but then didnt lmao
And they want a Why Us essay on top of that š
I hated that uncommon essay
I wrote about being abducted by martians and proving the Collatz conjecture to them to save myself and then developing a new field of mathematics called MARS
Hell of an essay
Emphasis on Hell
You're free to read it if you'd like
Yeah sure
No no no
š
well yes i agree every X prof is good is not bs, specially considering your extensive background
but just the obvious ones where the kid had no idea an is blatantly listing stuff
ok true
Lmao classic Alex behavior
painfully accurate
"Please indicate the number of the prompt you choose."
how did yall do this lol
"Prompt #1
Blah blah blah..."
ah perfect thank you š
just submitted yale š
congrats!!!
YAY
if i say i wanna be considered for the ba/mm will it hurt my app?
11:59 based on ur timezone
doubt it
Gl everyone
Why are they even having extensions again ā
time to start my yale supplements šŖ
bffr
š
so real
fuckFUCK
I DIDNT INDICATE
RAAAAAAAAAA
is there a way i can fic that š does it matter that much
should i email?
submitted š„µ
congrats!!
for yale, how would I submit my social science research abstract
it only shows science/engineering
do i just submit under that ?
social science is a science
i think ur good under science/eng
im so pissed i forgot to indicate which supp i was answering.
should i email now or after they download the application?
THAT WAS MY BEST SUPP TOO
bruh
Anything like this for Yale?
Common App said my application was due by 11:59 my time, so I submitted at 11:07, but when I submitted it said it was 12:07 EST
will I be okay?
yes
No
Yes
sad
I want you to be so fr
Did you actually finish
no
lol
Deadline has already passed lmao
these were my short answers
these were mine:
What inspires you
From an old shirt to an embroidered handkerchief to a dusting cloth to a recycled mop.
The imaginative obligation of rejuvenating the seemingly mundane has driven me throughout.
Your yale course
"Pandora's Plethora": a course where students choose 2 courses, 1 they excel at, 1 they struggle at; and correspond with the profs to put together a project integrating the 2 curricula.
What historical fig youād invite to your res college
Crumbling marriage, disdainful job, a frustrating obsession with the (seemingly) unattainable . "What kept you going?", we stare down Albert Einstein as he emphasizes perseverance in STEM and in life.
Something not conveyed anywhere else
The last leg of my aunt's treasure hunt involved ankle deep mud. The pre-existent footholds were tempting, but the struggle of creating my unique footprints brought about seamless joy, it still does.
omg i love yours
Dystopian literature
As a bme applicant
very cool
i want to share my course bc i thought it was neat
Intergalactic Sock Knitting and the Art of Galactic Fashion: Learn to knit stylish socks accessorized with all the latest celestial trends, from shimmering star sequins to interplanetary embroidery.
I had a few more characters but had to cut down for yale .__.
knitting and astro is an interesting combination fr
yeah it corresponds with all of the artsy stuff i blabbered about
my what inspires you is so generic š
Motivated by my mother's journey as an immigrant and her unwavering determination to overcome challenges, I strive to pursue my own dreams and be the success she never had the opportunity to realize.
it connects to my commonapp essay & i mentioned it in my app so i think iām safe
come'on its what inspires you written by you it can never be generic
also, i'd say its incredibly mature to realize such insightful topic about responsibility at this age and you're doing great!
also Einstein is very cool
i wrote about huygens
the waves one? or the bio one?
I would invite Huygens to discuss his theory that "light is a wave motion of the medium which fills all space,ā a fascinating principle used to analyze diffraction patterns and oscillations of stars.
waves
I'd be intrigued to hear huygens out tbh, thats a great response
anyone got portal yet?
nope
Yes
yes
nope
nope
yep
Does anyone have the portal yet?
Look up š
Soz š
does having a portal yet or not mean anything
dont start portal astrology so soon
It means they want you so bad they're too shy to send a message š
It means u submitted later than orhers
Ill check how many hrs it took me to get mije
Thank youuuu
took nearly exactly 36 hours
for mine
i think
oh 12 hours
lol
š
submitted 10pm
got it 10am
That's decent, guess mine is just taken long
Yeahhhhh that makes sense
I wish I did but my laptop was down for like an hour or two lol
Maybe they split it into batches? Some get in the first wave others get in the second
LMFOAOAOAOA
yalls short takes are so good mine are generic asf š
mine suck dw
well you have the wave eqn in ur status,
applying physics?
wait is the equation shrodinger
gradient of a scalar field
i submitted 6pm and iām still waiting on my portal
same
same
i got a little tired of mine:
not my best work but i was super series in my other essays so i figured iād lighten it up a lil ^.^
Means ure rejected bruv, in less than 24hrs they got the time to review all their apps already
yale admission butt dialed me and they were talking shit about my mom šµāš«šµāš«
Ah fuck im sorry lad
what .___.
itās true check their website
HOLLY SHIT YALL TOUCH GRASS ISSA JOKE š
least anxious a2c members
oh thatās nice
Fr š
:o
i love yours so much
That Yale course sounds so good
Please I don't have enough sleep this jump scared me
i only liked my yale course one
Love this one š
thought it was a nice play with my name š¤·āāļø
That's so creative
thank you š
The anthill idea sounds really interesting
awhhh thank you ā¤ļø
these r soooo good ahhhh omg
my app was wayyyy too astro centric š
tysm :))) fellow the secret history enjoyer? 
ahahah i said i resonate with donkey from shrek for an emory supp
shreks taking over uni essays
yes! i used the Ishiguro one so they didnāt think i was going to college for the bacchanals š¤š¤
these were mine lol
donna tartt and kazuo ishiguro are some of my favorite authors!
i loveee your number three so much, the wording is just beautiful to me @regal relic
Huygens ā¼ļø
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ngl, i really had to reflect to come up with that roku one š
CRPYTOGRAPHYYYY thatās so cool
i can see youāre interested in technology 
okay no offense but these are way better than what i was expecting considering you write them in like an hour
no thatās really cool
i wish i put smth on piano
this was my why
mayhaps i def donāt think itās cringe
oh i thought it was mid š thanks yall
this was mine, not as specific as I wanted but 125 words
also the part it cut off is "continue my studies in New Haven"
also like
this is really good
These were my short takes I went more serious than others - Iām not that good with the funny/lighthearted things so I thought Iād just give them thisš
Honestly my essays were kinda bland but whatevs
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honestly, that's still a great why yale, only thing i see is that the transition between the two paragraphs probably could've been better
also
you wrote 125 words of a bullet list?
didn't they say not to do a list
Yeah tbh my 400 word one and my Common app are the ones carrying my application lol

I did this in like 20 mins anyways so
My short answers r just mid like I hope they focus on the longer essays
i think as long as they get a good sense of your character depth/interests, they're good
Honestly I like how stanford and Harvard go about it they donāt even ask āwhyā bc they know theyāre the bestš
you shouldāve just put into chat gpt and formed an essay
I considered doing the and thing but I decided against it
yeah i hate why us essays below 200 words
like what do you want
why is the yale and thing so commonly used
what yale and thing
dartmouthās 100 word why us
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Literallyyyyy like what do you want me to say?! āUr awesome leg me in?ā
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did anyone choose the opposing viewpoint or whatever for the 400w
i feel like everyone chose community
i did
oh nvm
I did community
it was actually fun to write that one ngl
No I was too #scared
I went for the safer one
i wrote about oobleck = beliefs
In my opinion
i was going to use my princeton opposing viewpoint but decided i couldn't flesh it out much more
for that 400 w esssay
Oobleck so goofy
like in itself
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so like
Touching it is so weird
i think mine was off topic :/
Thatās really good omg
i donāt like my 400 word one but several people told me they thought it was fine so idk
Why does it feel like sm more than 400w
because my sentences are long
chat gpt gave mine a 95 š
this eats
this oneās mid i think
no thatās amazing tf
My topic that excites you essay slaps icl ive been reusing it for everything
heres my shorttakes very mid
i SUFFERED writing that one
same
i just change my hook every time
i have 5-6 hooks
my topic that excites me was lowkey sentimental
This is mine - upon reading everyone elseās⦠Iām doubting myself but whatevs
no that looks amazing
I hate how itās just 200 words tho thereās no spaceeee
i rlly like how the illustration adds to it
i could probably take the textbook name out of mine
itās written by a princeton guy š
i rlly enjoyed that book and the intersection so i hope it shows in my writing
Thankyou lol i thought that would be a bit more directed to yale bc of their humanities vibe
This is really cool bc thereās sm imagery but its a stem theme so it shows versatility in both ends
tysm š basically i was describing this
wait have u done isef?
cuz i think ik u lmao


