Critique My solve

[wanton sage]

https://youtu.be/bq7nAZfx44k?si=GDUADTYT1SO66o1r
I believe the solve took me about 36 seconds. Also if my grip on the cube or quality is bad mb, because I was recording on my iPad and I had to hold it in an uncomfortable position to record.

[deep garnet]

f2l needs a bit of workk in terms of efficiency, but its splits is ok. you could make it quite a bit faster with some practice tho (a better cube would help)
its likely cus the cube is horrible but ur locking up everywhere and ur fingertricks leave a lot to be desired

i really reccomeng getting a cheap speedcube atleast

in ur ll, you lose a lot of time pausing in the alg, mostly cus of lockups

ur cross is 5-6 secs from the vid
bring it down to 3.5 secs or so

[wanton sage]

I forgot to do U2 in the V perm alg

[wanton sage]

yeah but it’s gonna take a really long time to convince my parent s

Could anyone reconstruct my moves or smth?

[cedar eagle]

yea the main things im seeing is that you really need to learn all fingertricks and practice them a lot, and also immediately get a better speedcube bcz this one you have hurts to look at

also sledge or hedge a pair only in last slot

theres no need to sledgehammer a pair to insert it if its not last pair

just takes more moves and its slower

[wanton sage]

The second sledge set up a 4 mover so it wasn’t that bad

[cedar eagle]

@wanton sage im trying to reconstruct your solve, you scrambled from the wrong orientation

you scrambled orange front yellow top when you should be scrambling green front white top

@wanton sage x2 y' D' L B R2 F U2 F L' U2 D2 L2 B2 U2 F' L2 F' U2 B' D2

z y  // inspection
U' L U x' U' x z L x' R U R' D2  // cross (13)
U y' x U' L U L' x' // 1st pair (8)
U' y U' y L' U L' U2 L U L' U L2 // 2nd pair (13)
y2 U' R U2 R' U' R U R' U' R U R' U' F R' F' R // 3rd pair (18)
y2 U R U R' // 4th pair (5)
U' f R U R' U' f' U R U R' U R U2 R' // OLL 10
U2 y' R' U R U' R' f' U' R U2 R' U' R U' R' f R  // PLL - V

78STM  / 36sec =2.17TPS 

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the sledge may have set up a 4 mover, but the 3rd pair took 18 moves which is extremely innefficient, the most an f2l pair should need to be solved is 12 moves and thats on the most annoying cases

[wanton sage]

Mb I just scramble randomly I’ll have to orient it properly in the futur

[cedar eagle]

yeah, its important to scramble with the correct orientation so you can properly communicate

anw

x2 y' D' L B R2 F U2 F L' U2 D2 L2 B2 U2 F' L2 F' U2 B' D2

z2 // inspection
R' F U L R2 U R' D2 // cross (8)
U' L U2 L' R U' R' // 1st & 2nd pairs (7)
U' R U2' R2' U' R2 U' R' // 3rd pair (8)
y U2 L2 U2 L' U' L U' L2 // 4th pair (9)
U S R U R' U' R' F R f'  // OLL 32
M2' U' M2 U' M' U2 M2 U2 M' U // PLL - Z

51STM

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