11.82 3x3 Ao5 with Reconstructions Please Critique.

[old sierra]

Solve 1

B2 U F' D2 L2 B2 L2 B' D2 R2 F U2 F' R' D2 F L' D L' U' F

z2 // inspection
B'UR'U'LF'D2R'D2 // cross (9)
U L' U L U2' L' U L // 1st pair
U2y'UL'U'Ly'U'RUR' // 2nd pair
U'L'ULy'U'L'UL // 3rd pair
RU2R'URUR2FRF' // 4th pair
U r' U' R U' R' U2 r // OLL
R' U' F' R U R' U' R' F R2 U' R' U' R U R' U R U2 // PLL - F

71STM /13.72=5.17TPS

Solve 2

B L B2 U2 L2 D2 L2 F2 U B2 U' F2 L2 D' F' L F2 L D2 R' U

z2y' // inspection
LDB'D2R'D2 // cross (6)
LU'L'y'U2LUL' // 1st pair
L'ULRU2R'y'UR'U'R // 2nd pair
U2 R U R' U R U' R' // 3rd pair
y' L' U2 L U L' U' L // 4th pair
U' S R U R' U' R' F R f' // OLL
U' R' U' F' R U R' U' R' F R2 U' R' U' R U R' U R U // PLL - F

68STM /12.46=5.46TPS

Solve 3

F' D B2 D2 L2 D' F2 L2 U' L2 B L B R' F' D L D' U2

z2y' // inspection
D2RLF'L'D'R' // xcross (7)
Uy'U2RU'R'U'RU'R'U'LU'L' // 2nd pair
RU'R'URU'R'U'FU'F' // 3rd pair
U' R U R' y' U R' U' R // 4th pair
U' F' L' U' L U L' U' L U F // OLL
U2 R' U L' U2 R U' R' U2 R L // PLL - Ja

61STM /11.52=5.3TPS

Solve 4

D' B R2 F' D2 F U2 B' L2 F2 R2 D2 U2 R D F2 U2 L R2 F2 R2

x2 // inspection
FL'Dr'UrRU'R'D // xcross (10)
U' L' U L U2' L' U L // 2nd pair
y U2 R U2 R' U2 R U' R' // 3rd pair
U' R' U' R U' R' U R // 4th pair
U'RUR'URd'RU'R'F' // OLL
U R2 U' R U' R U R' U R2 D' U R U' R' D U // PLL - Gc

62STM /11.27=5.5TPS

Solve 5

B2 U F2 U L2 U' F2 D L2 F2 D' U' R' F2 L' D' B2 U' L F D2

y2 // inspection
R2L2F'D2 // cross (4)
U'R'FRF'UFU'F' // 1st pair
U R U' R' // 2nd pair
y2U2R'FRF'RUR' // 3rd pair
U2 L F' L' F U' L' U L // 4th pair
R U R' U' R' F R2 U R' U' F' // OLL
U' R U R' U' D R2 U' R U' R' U R' U R2 D' U' // PLL - Gd

62STM /11.49=5.4TPS

Sorry you all I’m new to critiques just got level 5 and was muted when I posted the reconstructions in one go I didn’t know you shouldn’t do that😭🙏

11.82 3x3 Ao5 with Reconstructions Please Critique.

[worldly sleet]

i think the cross might have been too long? i would've done B' U2 R' F L
but even if we go with your cross, there was a double x-cross, just do U2 f R f' D2
first pair was nice
you should've rotated to y on second pair to R' U' R U f R' f' with a better view of the other pairs
third pair was nice
i would've done fourth pair like R' D' R U' R' D F R F'
the rest was pretty fine ngl

[worldly sleet]

the cross wasn't that bad
the blue-orange pair was paired up to be a 3 mover but you didn't take advantage of that with U' L U L'
but your method of the first pair wasn't bad
the second pair can be done by y' U R' F R F' R' U' R which is objectively better than yours
and i have no issue with the rest of the solve

[old sierra]

Thanks for the critiques🙏

[worldly sleet]

hey man i'm not done yet
i will critique the rest whether you like it or not
now lemme cook rq

[old sierra]

Yes that is an issue I’ve been noticing in my solves I tend to not notice free pairs and go for long options

[old sierra]

Greatly appreciated cook🙏

[old sierra]

I’d actually learnt the insert for the 4th pair but for some reason I never used it

[worldly sleet]

nice xcross 😉
nice orientation on the second pair i'd probably miss that ngl
you forgor free pair (blue-red) with U2 F' U' F 💀
here's a nice way to orient all the edges on this case (4th pair) U2 R U' R' U' F' U' F
AND THE OLL... cubehead a video on this oll case it's criminal that you don't know it QAQ
it's R' U' (R' F R F') x 2 U R
and i think the Ja perm could be better (with block facing left, do:) l2 U R U' x R F2 r' F r F2

[old sierra]

Imma let you finish roasting😂

[worldly sleet]

nice xcross 😉
no prob with second pair i'd do it like that too
third pair also nice
the fourth pair... it was nice until you did U' R' U R
you should've done y F R' F' R for back sune
no problem on the rest of the solve as well
nice job on a solve that's similar to what i'd do

[worldly sleet]

oh you did this to yourself by posting 5 solves
now lemme finish cooking the last solve

[worldly sleet]

there was an xcross after ur cross with U2 L U' L' D2
it's so depressing that you do so much stuff that'd be great but you whiff it at the end QAQ
i'd probably not do the first pair like that, i'd do y L' U L2 U' L'
but it gave you a great second pair so i'm not complaining
and there's not that much wrong with the rest of the solve

and that's that
i'm done cooking
bye