pls critique , tell me what i can improve on

[frail obsidian]

• don’t rotate for cross and try to learn how to plan some of it
• don’t rotate to find pieces
• don’t spam U moves to look for pieces
• learn how to do f2l cases in less moves (this is intuitive)
• don’t regrip to thumb on bottom to do triple sexy (also do triple inverse, it’s slightly faster)
• learn about eo to know when and why to rotate
• don’t regrip to thumb on bottom much, just learn how to do pinch U moves
• work on oll recognition and don’t spam U moves
• use both R2 and R2’ for pi. Look at jperm’s full oll vid and copy his execution (edge oriented cases only)
• don’t rotate for pll, just do U moves
• don’t tilt to look at all 4 sides to recognize pll
• work on U perm execution, don’t do M moves like you did, just ring finger push DB edge
• learn how to do doubleflicks
• don’t just sledge pairs in, use RU inserts since they’re slightly faster. Only time you should sledge insert is to avoid dot for LL

TLDR is just cross and f2l efficiency and fingertricks

[crisp wagon]

i can' say thing better than this

so try it

[swift oriole]

you didnt have to rotate from cross to first pair

u could of easily put in the redgreen pair

and could of did a y move

the y move can make sure the solved pairs are in the back

idk