24.53 Single I average 23.50 what should i work on?

[strange pecan]

Scramble: U2 R2 B2 U' D F' U L U2 D2 F L2 F' U2 B U2 B2 U2 B R'
Reconstruction:
Cross
X U R X D F
First Pair
Y’ R U2 R’ Y R’ U R
Cross
Y’ R U R’ Y’ Lw’ L U M
Second Pair
U R U’ R’ Y U’ L’ U L
Third Pair
R U R2’ U’ R U’ R’ U R
Fourth Pair
U R U2 R’ U R U’ R’
OLL
F U R U’ R’ F’
F’ Rw U R’ U’ Rw’ F R
Pre AUF
U’
PLL
R U R' U' D R2 U' R U' R' U R' U R2 D'
AUF
U2

[true slate]

Don't capitalize x y z

They're supposed to be lowercase

Do you have rec btw?

[mental cliff]

x // inspection
U R x D F // cross 1?
y' R U2 R' y R' U R // first pair
y' R U R' y' Lw' L U M // cross 2?
U R U' R' y U' L' U L // second pair
R U R2 U' R U' R' U R // third pair
U R U2 R' U R U' R' // fourth pair
F U R U' R' F' F' r U R' U' r' F R // (2l) OLL
U' R U R' U' D R2 U' R U' R' U R' U R2 D' U2 // PLL

solution written out better

and you didnt include unecessary moves that you did in the video, or the video itself, so its just solution critiquing

obviously it doesnt work and i cant fix it because i have no clue what you were doing with 2 parts of cross

[true slate]

Does the solution work?

I'm confused

[mental cliff]

i just copied it so that it was written better

but it doesnt work

and i dont know what was supposed to happen because theres 2 cross stages apparently

[strange pecan]

like camer video?

[strange pecan]

i didnt do a video

[mental cliff]

yeah you shoudkve