Omega Strikers Fan fiction!

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you are goin crazy friend

make sure to pace yourself

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i'm not doing the final part today, that's for sure

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good idea i think

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Is that a challenge I hear?

help, I can't stop

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not a challenge

rest

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So, technically I have finished the NaoxMako story
But as I went back to reread, I noticed a few inconsistencies or loose details, so I'm currently going back revisting the previous parts so they line up better with the ending

https://docs.google.com/document/d/111lJNhKb8V_ry4Od8u77sy2buC0EgelHFk_47H4r9uE/edit?usp=sharing

that's my revisisted version of part 1

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:o

might i suggest something

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sure

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whenever a new character is talking you should start a new paragraph

otherwise the dialogue gets mixed up

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I see, I'll keep it in mind for my next project as it's gonna take a lot of editing for this one

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fair

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It's all slowly coming together
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1s7Hj49UQQO0Bd4pNSn3cRTViuZs4SHghMqNTcxnkrLk/edit?usp=sharing

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Another day, another part
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Uz8Rh7fOy8-wkREWq2fiH59bx89qJ5Jgq3RVPae8g4g/edit?usp=sharing

[obtuse kraken]

you're knockin em out like crazy holy shit

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Mainly because I'm just reworking the original versions, but I'm finally writing the big finale

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hte-kQdlgeOw6I9gu0e2kY-ipyGCOOt7vVp4Z-ZehaU/edit?usp=sharing

Next part is the final one, really enjoyed making this one

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not mine but really cute https://archiveofourown.org/works/47957803

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-LUZTu3gAqjZCpIxdZP3pxrSBFve7e_iQ4Ya4hAMFi8/edit?usp=sharing

Finally finished it

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WOOOOOOO

next stop ao3

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Still waiting in the queue

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im cheering you on

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Wee

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Made the ao3 account

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WOO

if you want help let me know

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oh, i just looked at the format, good lord what am i looking at

i regret using italics so much now

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If you use basic editor rather than html it should convert?

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basic editor?

i completely missed the little button

it did convert, yay

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yay

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but there's indeed no font color

rip era's diary

btw, on the characters listing, should i include every character in the story or just the 2 the story goes around?

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whoever is prominent

basically anyone important

for me if they down show up "on screen" i dont tag them

or if they are only in one scene in one chapter and their role doesnt move the plot along

imagine yourself as someone looking for say, luna fics, and you search the luna tag and she is tagged in a fic where she says a single joke in chapter 25 or something, you would question shes even tagged

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naruhodo.

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so i guess is just nao and the onis

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prolly

unless rasmus and kazan show up more than that first scene

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kazan has a more prominent role in one of the other chapters

but rasmus just has that one appearance, then he's just mentioned at best

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i'd tag kazan then

(sorry i didnt read more than the first chapter yet)

also remember that character/character is romantic while character & character is platonic

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if you look at me fic i think its a good example for tags

either of my fics tbh

https://archiveofourown.org/users/Pantscada

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/52834414/chapters/133639000

how do you add other chapters?

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https://i.imgur.com/uipUl6V.png

BUT ALSO HYPE

gonna read this later

you should put other tags tho

like if you see on my fic it says additional tags, those are used for telling the reader what the fic involves

if you don't know exactly what tags to add, the tag editor has an autocomplete feature that can help, and you can always look at other fics tags for examples

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i see, the i really like demon drive's story seems fitting

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lol

those kinds of tags are just silly comments

not real tags

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done uploading all 5 chapters

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WOOOOO

don't forget to add the additional tags :D

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I really dunno what to add, i put demon drive and clarion corp

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basically like what the tone of your story is and stuff

like how collecting rainwater has like hurt/comfort or angst as a tag

and my dd one has sibling rivalry and stuff

basically so people will know what to expect

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i see

[tall haven]

Hello chat this is my first message here I think and I have a Luna and Atlas Fic to share
(It says part 2 because part 1 is a prequel comic that hasn’t been finished yet) (and also it’s based on this hc I have where the stars on Atlas’s arms are part of his skin and Luna has them too)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PSNM8f2vDe4yede4Lkv64Acigkjjkl2LDbAjEboEFQo/edit?usp=sharing

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YAAAAAAAAAAA

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b_XzKeIbf0OEA2qanBcwqD28VjpUwZdMg-_6eAPZ-rg/edit?usp=sharing

The introduction to something I'm working on

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👀

[fresh talon]

Asher's backstory is really interesting so see this as a prequel lol

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ASHER NOOOOO

this is really nice though

what's it about? just everyone's backstories?

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asher mentioned, time to read

[fresh talon]

I don't think I'll do everyone

Just whoever I feel like covering

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fair

if you want help with era's i'm here ahahaa

[fresh talon]

Lol

But yeah I headcanon that Asher lost her eye in a fight with the mobsters that ratted her out

She has both eyes right now

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:o

would line up i think

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oooh, this was really fun to read, cant wait to read more

[fresh talon]

Violence warning lol

Thanks!

Corrupt cop and shortstack mobster

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i have yet to headcanon how asher lost her eye

we're ignoring the fact that its canon that her eye works just fine and that she wears the eyepatch for the look

[fresh talon]

Lol

You'll see how I depict it

[pseudo epoch]

there's this one art piece that someone made, its really good, so i've just kinda taken that one

for now at least

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I made a revision for my Estelle backstory, mainly because I already made a continuation to it
https://archiveofourown.org/works/52959838

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b_XzKeIbf0OEA2qanBcwqD28VjpUwZdMg-_6eAPZ-rg/edit?usp=sharing

Updated with a new chapter

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yippee!!!! will read when i get the chance

[fresh talon]

Feel free to @ me when you have a comment since I might be asleep lol

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/52971937

[obtuse kraken]

YOOOOOOOOOO

PANTS COOKAGEEEE

OM NONMOAKFDNA

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[fresh talon]

@kind scaffold I added a new chapter btw

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👀

[fresh talon]

It's about Luna and Atlas this time lol

[pseudo epoch]

uh oh luna

[tall haven]

Luna content yippee

[fresh talon]

Yup lol

How did you guys like it @pseudo epoch @tall haven

I wanted to detail Luna and Atlas' relationship and how awkward things are between them

[tall haven]

I liked it, I think you wrote them both really well

[fresh talon]

Thanks!

[tall haven]

[pseudo epoch]

It was really good, the transition between characters was extremely smooth

[fresh talon]

Awesome--I was hoping it was

[pseudo epoch]

you wrote it very well, just a little something to remember is that atlas is a forced parent, he loves luna but he doesn't quite know what he's doing

[fresh talon]

Yeah that's true

Being an older sibling parent sucks ass but he's trying his best

Luna meanwhile is having a hard time since she's so young and her brother doesn't think like she does

And she doesn't exactly have friends

As you can see, three girls at school just...love her lol

[pseudo epoch]

also, similarly, she sees atlas as a bossy older brother, not a parent, which i thought you encapsulated well

[fresh talon]

Yeah it's a POV problem

I appreciate it!

I'm hoping the devs can give us a story mode in their next game

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FR

[fresh talon]

If not, then I can at least fill in my own blanks

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b_XzKeIbf0OEA2qanBcwqD28VjpUwZdMg-_6eAPZ-rg/edit?usp=sharing

Updated with Chapter 3

The focus is on Asher again

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[fresh talon]

Hope it's good lol

This one shows Asher working at her day job since she runs the gambling hall at night on certain days

[young vessel]

[fresh talon]

What did you think of it @young vessel

[young vessel]

W

[fresh talon]

Thanks lol

Not much is happening yet but it's a slow buildup

The cops are sniffing her out lol

[young vessel]

Yeah

[pseudo epoch]

so good
also amazing portrayal of asher
ryojin is just like me fr

[fresh talon]

Thanks lol

He's just curious as to why a human woman is so buff

Asher is happy he noticed and doesn't mind being gawked at. She's proud of her figure

So long as you look respectfully, you're good lol

[tall haven]

@fresh talon I added Luna getting the subway to school to my hc list and credited you, hope you don’t mind

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@tall haven Oh no problem! Go ahead lol. I wanted to lean into the cyberpunk-ish nature of the setting and have her get to school that way since she can't drive lmao

[tall haven]

I like the idea

[fresh talon]

Feel free to DM me this list. I'm curious to see what else you came up with

[tall haven]

Sure thing!:D

[fresh talon]

But yeah, she's trying to be independent lol

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b_XzKeIbf0OEA2qanBcwqD28VjpUwZdMg-_6eAPZ-rg/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 4 now

Luna is the focus again

[young vessel]

cuz luna, for chapter/writing

[fresh talon]

Thanks lol

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Made a continuation of sorts to my Estelle story
https://archiveofourown.org/works/52961080

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👀

[fresh talon]

@kind scaffold You might wanna check out my newest chapter lol

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i have to read chapter 2 stilllll

[fresh talon]

Oh lol

Take your time, no rush

[tall haven]

I love reading about my favourite character getting bullied (jk it was really well done and I’m excited to see more )

[fresh talon]

Thanks lol

Yeah sorry, but I wanted to depict a realistic issue

[tall haven]

I think you did a great job with it

[fresh talon]

She's smart as hell so naturally other kids are going to be jealous

And they'll find any weakness they can exploit to make her feel bad. In this case her missing parents

[tall haven]

To be fair I hc that she gets bullied too but it’s usually when SSR wins against popular teams

[fresh talon]

Gotcha lol

But this is before that

[tall haven]

True

She’d probably get bullied regardless because she’s smart and has a bit of an ego about it

[fresh talon]

Yeah her quotes in game show that she's a bit full of herself

"Makes sense. Choosing the smartest one in the room."

So the bullying is a reaction to some of that

[tall haven]

I like to think that her ego is all for show in Corestrike like a persona and then she’s actually pretty timid outside it

But that’s just a personal hc

[fresh talon]

Gotcha

But yeah it's only going to get worse from here

[tall haven]

Ah

Womp Womp

[fresh talon]

Let's just say you're probably going to want these three to die lol

[tall haven]

I kinda already do lmao, now I’m really interested

[fresh talon]

Full disclosure I don't advocate for killing children lol

But bullies are the exception!

[tall haven]

Yes

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You'll be satisfied by the end of it though

Luna will...defend herself let's say lol

[tall haven]

Yippee

[cyan tundra]

Wait, Luna angst?

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@cyan tundra yeah in my fanfic lol

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b_XzKeIbf0OEA2qanBcwqD28VjpUwZdMg-_6eAPZ-rg/edit?usp=sharing

You can read it here

[cyan tundra]

Maybe i can add a bit more into the Luna in the Donlas AU

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Hopefully you like it lol

[cyan tundra]

The being in her brother's shadow is gonna not be as relevant here where Atlas is dead, but... I'll be taking some notes

I'll repost it WARNING: THERE IN FACT IS GORE
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UfTemCEO-KZrvB1TcRWDhM5YySgSxW7XAV4gvJFCDuM/edit?usp=drivesdk

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i dont think you've warned enough

there is ALOT OF GORE

[cyan tundra]

[pseudo epoch]

my live reaction after reading it the first time:

[cyan tundra]

Just wait till i finish the sequel (Asher meets her untimely fate)

[pseudo epoch]

dont you dare

[cyan tundra]

Bro i already got like... 3 or 4 pages i cant remember before even getting to the fight/gore

So uhh

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[cyan tundra]

Tbh maybe i just don't feel like it's that bad because it doesn't feel like I wrote very much as I'm describing a single scene or smth idk

[tall haven]

Are we sharing our Luna angst?

[pseudo epoch]

luna trauma? i suppose so

[tall haven]

I gotta explain some things before I share mine

So this is based on my hc that Atlas’ constellation arms are actually his skin and he’s been saying it’s a body suit as a cover up
Luna has the stars as well and that’s why we never see her without her gloves

Also part 1 is a flashback comic showing how they got those stars and it hasn’t been finished yet but all you need to know basically is that Luna looks like this

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PSNM8f2vDe4yede4Lkv64Acigkjjkl2LDbAjEboEFQo/edit?usp=sharing

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b_XzKeIbf0OEA2qanBcwqD28VjpUwZdMg-_6eAPZ-rg/edit

Chapter 5 up

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/839223/chapters/21306644#workskin found a really useful tagging guide for ao3

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Holy, a tagging guide

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b_XzKeIbf0OEA2qanBcwqD28VjpUwZdMg-_6eAPZ-rg/edit?usp=drivesdk

Chapter 6 now

[gaunt nova]

LUNA POOR BABY SHE NEED TO SEND JUNO IN ATTACK MODE

[fresh talon]

@gaunt nova unfortunately Juno ain't here yet lol

But yeah bullying sucks doesn't it

[gaunt nova]

dang thats worse

[fresh talon]

Yup

And now Atlas thinks his sister hates her due to that fake text from Hito

[fresh talon]

Don't worry she's gonna get them back

[pseudo epoch]

what the bullies will see

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/1077434433554088056/1183420150855241808/88v9jg.gif?ex=658844e6&is=6575cfe6&hm=c5dd63e5330bda617fb0ebf0d8abb6edfe55b6933c82e6d9b83b6af402501f85&

[fresh talon]

Something like that lol

[gloomy lantern]

I just read all of this and it was such good writing I might ship these two as well

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b_XzKeIbf0OEA2qanBcwqD28VjpUwZdMg-_6eAPZ-rg/edit?usp=drivesdk

Chapter 7 finished

[tall haven]

LETS GO LUNA

[fresh talon]

I take it you're happy lol

Also chapter 8 is done now

But what are your thoughts?

[tall haven]

Luna’s plan caught me off guard but I enjoyed the chaos

I’m excited to see what happens next

[fresh talon]

Thanks-

If you read chapter 8, let me know what you think

[tall haven]

@fresh talon some fanart

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WH

wow i should uh read this maybe

[tall haven]

Yeah Lmaoo it’s pretty wild even with context

[fresh talon]

Ayo wtf

You drew fanart of my fanfic?

[tall haven]

Yeah! I really like it

[fresh talon]

My story?

Wow...thanks!

[tall haven]

No problem

[fresh talon]

Feel free to draw other frames of my story if you want

Your art is amazing!

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aint nothin hits as amazing as rox fanart of a thing you made

[fresh talon]

Yeah I wasn't expecting that lol

Luna basically has power armor that she used to get back at her bullies

After they messed with her friends, she wasn't having it

Hopefully you read it @kind scaffold

@tall haven You captured her state of being calmly pissed off perfectly lol

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i still havent read chapter 2

[tall haven]

Thank you so much I might draw other frames in the future, most likely from the Luna storyline

[tall haven]

I’m glad I could ^^ I really like doing expressions and I’m pretty good at them

[tall haven]

the best part is getting to see the reactions from the person I’m making fanart for

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Take your time lol

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b_XzKeIbf0OEA2qanBcwqD28VjpUwZdMg-_6eAPZ-rg/edit

Chapter 9

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will this be on ao3

[fresh talon]

Yeah it will

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👀

hell yes

[fresh talon]

You sound excited lol

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i wanna read this without needing to open google drive every time

also give kudos and comments etc

[fresh talon]

Hang on

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/134470840

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YAY

[fresh talon]

Comment all you want lol

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[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/134470840

Chapter 10 is now added and everything is on AO3

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[fresh talon]

Hope you enjoy lol

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most certainly I love everything this community makes

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/135332566

Chapter 11

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/135428011

Chapter 12 up

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you are popping off

[fresh talon]

Thanks lol

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/135601105

Chapter 13

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/135717700

Chapter 14

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Made another of these, this time following Luna, Vyce, Kazan and Asher!
https://archiveofourown.org/works/53641096

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👀

[cyan tundra]

Luna, Kazan and Asher...

man i really should go finish that

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that sounds fun

[tall haven]

[cyan tundra]

Rox, you remember what i mean... right...

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da rox

[tall haven]

How could I forget?

I literally made concept art

[cyan tundra]

[fierce wharf]

THAT ENDING, AGH, MY HEART

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[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/135882454

Chapter 15 up--this chapter introduces Vyce to my story

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/136044163

Chapter 16. Vyce is the focus

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Chapter 17

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/136236832

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[honest tapir]

agh I have so much fanfiction to reeeeead lol

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yeah jeez i hope nobody posts more today

[young vessel]

Same

Unless its about Era

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/48186868/chapters/136281994 oops somebody posted more @stuck robin you're in this @drifting eagle you're in this too

[stuck robin]

AYOOOOOO COLLECTING RAINWATER???????

[drifting eagle]

WOWOWOWOWOWOW IN IN A COLLECTING RAINWATER????

Imma read this tonight!

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yusss

[severe stump]

Collecting rainwater... New chapter

[severe stump]

Currently waiting for chapter 18

[fresh talon]

Oh?

How do you like the way I've written Vyce?

[severe stump]

As a Vyce main and enjoyer, I found her characterization quite well written! I can see Vyce definitely using a skateboard
Also unrelated but "My blade knows no gender" has to be one of the best things ever said in an os fanfiction

[fresh talon]

Well one of Vyce's official interests is skateboarding lol

I didn't come up with it, but I used it. It's listed in game

But yeah, things are awkward between her and Octavia

[severe stump]

Whoops
I don't pay attention to likes and dislikes

[fresh talon]

I wanted to showcase a parallel. Octavia is rich and successful but lonely while Vyce is a poor bum with loads of friends

Did you like that?

[severe stump]

Yep! It's an interesting parallel
Octavia would most likely be more demure and quiet
While Vyce is a lot more talkative
It's interesting to see their differences

[fresh talon]

Thanks!

And how do you like Komachi?

I wanted to give Zentaro a rival so I made a ninja girl inspired by Naruto

As you saw, he refuses to hold back because the blade doesn't discriminate based on gender lol

[fresh talon]

@severe stump

[honest tapir]

Ugh, meant to read this when you first released it - anyways - amazing job as always, Pants!
This chapter made me feel all warm and fuzzy lol
Always love how you write the Ember Monarchs too, you really have their characters nailed down.

[kind scaffold]

THANK YOUUUUUUUUU

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/136533664

Chapter 18 up

Vyce confronts her stalkers

[severe stump]

All imma say is 100% deserved to the stalkers. good job vyce

[fresh talon]

It's gonna be even better when they end up in jail 😈

[severe stump]

Honestly

[fresh talon]

The sad part is that this has happened before. Idol fans IRL do crazy shit

[severe stump]

Yep

It sucks

[fresh talon]

Yeah but she dealt with them

Just gotta get her parents off her back

Victim blaming

[severe stump]

Yeah I gotta read the other chapters tho, I got to ten so shouldn't be too far away

[fresh talon]

Gotcha. Hope you enjoy!

[severe stump]

[severe stump]

I have read all chapters and I am very happy

[fresh talon]

Really? What's your favorite part thus far?

[severe stump]

Probably Luna and zen's story, I would love to see the aftermath of her dealing with the bullies along with where the rivalry of komachi and him will go

[fresh talon]

Thanks! You're definitely gonna see more of them soon. I'm rotating around the cast over time

Komachi is more akin to a friendly rivalry. They're going to have an arc together soon

[severe stump]

Nice

Can't wait

[fresh talon]

Thanks!

Things are gonna get awkward since Vyce needs to recover from her stalker situation lol

Now how should they be punished...

[severe stump]

I think dubu knows lmao

[fresh talon]

Lol

Something like that 😛

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/136781872

Chapter 19 up

[severe stump]

Kazan vs Zen that's gonna be interesting

[fresh talon]

Maybe lol

Have to hope he finds Kazan

[fresh talon]

You excited?

[severe stump]

yep

[fresh talon]

Sweet lol

How did you like Luna getting along with Atlas again

[tall haven]

More Luna content lets gooooo

[fresh talon]

@tall haven
How did you like it lol

[tall haven]

Loved it, you write her very well in my opinion

[fresh talon]

Thanks. Those bullies won't be messing with her again

As far as we know lol

[tall haven]

I think Luna showed them pretty well what happens when they mess with her lmao

[fresh talon]

Good point

But now we shift gears to more Zentaro 😛

[tall haven]

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lunba

[tall haven]

Luma

[severe stump]

Lrunma

[crystal eagle]

Hey I made an OS fanfic but I’m not sure how you guys would feel about a more violent story

Is it okay to post it here or should I just not

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as long as you tag it with like violence or gore or stuff it should be fine

[crystal eagle]

Got it

Includes violence, gore, fallacious language and 1 character with explicitly sexual themes, don’t worry it’s not an OS character
https://www.wattpad.com/story/363776184?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=ItsHapqy

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:o wattpad stuff

[crystal eagle]

Yeah, it’s what my friend mostly uses and this only exists because I lost a bet to him

So I figured I’d make it easy for him

[compact prawn]

Been thinking if I wanted to post this, but I guess it is OS related.
I made this one purely to practice a different writing format without much thought on the story itself, just something quick I came up with.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/126nAjSfnV9a7wyDYG6uHK0biJhZ4r76R776KCKsBem8/edit?usp=sharing

[cyan tundra]

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/136982779#workskin

Chapter 20 up featuring more Kazan and Vyce

[vagrant arch]

please... dont talk to me about how long its been.... https://archiveofourown.org/works/46856002/chapters/137157478

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HOLY

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

[vagrant arch]

i WILL fucking finish this i swear

[kind scaffold]

[obtuse kraken]

AAA HELOO HAJIMEMASHITE RETURN???

[severe stump]

WHAT

WHAT

WHAT

NEW CHAPTERSJm m]]]

[rich dune]

Im writing again. That said, Mage Mishap will likely go unfinished and I'm sorry–I wrote that without a solid idea of an ending, dooming it to be a half fic from the start 😔

[rich dune]

Inhales this whole btw

[kind scaffold]

[rich dune]

That said, those who care, you can look forward to my content, tho im gonna start off very unhinged and slowly work my way down

[severe stump]

It's unfortunate, but I'm looking forward to your next work!

[kind scaffold]

more kaya writing im very hypee

[rich dune]

I'll post my second fic (post-coming back to writing) here once i finish it, if i can

[vagrant arch]

awww thanks

[obsidian obsidian]

i should write more

[kind scaffold]

you should

[obsidian obsidian]

tho i couldn't link it here unfortunately

[kind scaffold]

why not

[obsidian obsidian]

i basically only write stories with angsty messy disaster characters and stuff that falls outside the rules here

write from what you know and all that

but ive been getting the itch to write again lately and i don't think i should let that motivation slide past me lol

[kind scaffold]

o

well you can at least post your profile?

and put warnings

[obsidian obsidian]

maybe?

probably should err on the safe side

[kind scaffold]

fair enough

[obsidian obsidian]

but im gonna lurk in here and hopefully catch inspiration from people too

[kind scaffold]

can at least post your uh name? on whatever site? :)

idk i just wanna see

[obsidian obsidian]

y'know in hindsight i should probably have just not said anything if i didn't think i could post it

[kind scaffold]

[winter haven]

applied for an ao3 account yesterday

[obsidian obsidian]

pog

[kind scaffold]

YAY

[rich dune]

ive been hit by the falling anvil that is writers block

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/347254691966615552/1050897140647469087/22BE7311-4C89-4CF1-99B2-2151232C484F.gif

anybody got any workarounds

[kind scaffold]

just write

head empty

or read things

or like go outside and have a nice time

[rich dune]

it is -6 C

nvm i know the solution

[winter haven]

coat :D

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/137267842

Chapter 21 up

[honest tapir]

The writers block has left and I’m finally working on a fic again, this one is gonna be a full fledged story instead of just a little short story however

[kind scaffold]

YAY

[honest tapir]

First chapter is almost done I think?
But like I have to finish actually planning the whole thing out lol

I have a basic idea of how I want it to go, but I like to plan out bullet points

[compact prawn]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/54206359/chapters/137260582

[kind scaffold]

woah whats this

[compact prawn]

An idea i got a while ago

[kind scaffold]

what is it tho

[compact prawn]

The main premise is Mako ending up in an alternate world trying to go back home

[kind scaffold]

:O

[obsidian obsidian]

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/137700967

Chapter 22 up

[obtuse kraken]

I can't believe I've become implicit in an Era angst fic

[kind scaffold]

👀

[subtle bridge]

^w^

[kind scaffold]

HELLO

RASSY NAMELESS ERA ANGST FIC COLLAB???????????

[subtle bridge]

Maybe 😁 we will have to see

(yes

[kind scaffold]

YAAAAAAAA

[subtle bridge]

i think i will e writing most of it BUT nameless has definitely contributed alot of ideas ty nameless <33

[kind scaffold]

nod nod nod nod

[obtuse kraken]

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/138130708

Chapter 23 up

[kind scaffold]

you are so fast and consistent i respect it a lot

[fresh talon]

Thanks lol

Let me know what you think

[kind scaffold]

i have sadly not been in much of a reading mood lately but i will defo read this when i get the chance

[fresh talon]

Gotcha. Thanks

[kind scaffold]

[fresh talon]

All I want for my birthday is to have good feedback on my work lol

[kind scaffold]

thats true

i find it helps to build up relationships with people in the communities surrounding the thing you like and write for cuz then people are more willing to look at your stuff if that makes sense

and build a connection to the things you make

cuz like in my experience people are much more willing to engage with things made by people they know and talk to vs someone who likes drops a masterpiece every now and then but never interacts if that makes sense

[fresh talon]

Yeah that's true

Kinda feel awkward talking to so many people at once tho lmao

[kind scaffold]

that is fair and honestly i wouldnt recommend trying to talk to general or os chat but there is #1077434433554088056 chat which is the comfiest and most supportive place in this server and your fic definitely seems very headcanon heavy from what i know i bet people would love to talk about that kinda stuff with you there

[fresh talon]

Yeah that's a good idea

I also intend to mostly stick to the writing corner here

I don't play the game much anymore, but I'd love to write for it

[kind scaffold]

saaaaame

yeah headcanon chat is full of writers and artists

[fresh talon]

Sweet lol

[kind scaffold]

[winter haven]

writing is harder than i thought

i can write BANGER essays but creative fiction is proving difficult

and the tactics i use to write essays don’t really translate over to fanfiction as much as i thought they would

[kind scaffold]

idk I think you are awesome at comics

what's your like method

[winter haven]

well for my comic scripts i don’t have to make things flow super well when i write it LOL i smooth it all out with the drawings instead

for essays a lot of it just comes really naturally for me so i didn’t ever do any formal first/second drafts :p i just write the whole thing and read thru it once or twice to make sure everything flows together and transitions nicely

and prior to writing i can plan out like “ok these are my key points i want to hit on so here’s how i can transition A into B and B into C” so on and so forth

and then i can just. write it

so like. now i’m writing this fanfiction and i’m suddenly struggling to make things smooth

grahhhh

[kind scaffold]

key points is kinda how I write too

for me it helps to outline everything I'm gonna write from beginning to end first

and then slowly start adding to it in more in more detail each draft

like
"so then era walks in and x is cooking" for the outline
and then draft one is like
"era steps into the kitchen and the smell of fried rice hits her nose. she turns her head to see x at the stove."
and then usually I keep my first draft in lower case so that I definitely go over it when I do second/final draft and it usually doesn't change much beyond that for most of the writing

[winter haven]

ohhhhh :0 that’s smart, using all lowercase

cuz yea you go thru it and it’s like “oh i didn’t go over this part yet”

[kind scaffold]

I just randomly started doing it one day and found it helped me so much to distinguish which parts were edited and which weren't

[winter haven]

ok so i think with my NYE comic i technically DID do a first draft/final draft but it was like.. the script was the first draft and the comic was the final. cuz reading back on it i’m realizing i actually changed a lot from the initial dialogue

[drifting eagle]

oh yeah just wanted to pop in and say ur vyce mako comic was amazing

[compact prawn]

Personally when it comes to writing i absolutely dread building scenes and describing characters

[drifting eagle]

esp. these panels

[winter haven]

this is part of my next comic script, very messy and loose and i add notes in for myself so i guess this is like the “outline”?

[winter haven]

OH THANK YOU!!!

i’m glad you liked it :3

[winter haven]

FR DESCRIBING PEOPLE WITHOUT BEING REDUNDANT IS SO HARD FOR ME

[kind scaffold]

that's pretty nifty yeah

[kind scaffold]

this seems like how I draft stuff too tbh

[kind scaffold]

I struggle a lot with writing vivid descriptions and am jealous of people who can do it so well. stuff like the game dredge or baldurs gate 3 narration I'm always like feral for being able to do

[compact prawn]

The struggle is real

[cyan tundra]

i should attempt to finish my Era angst today

[compact prawn]

wait wtf

[kind scaffold]

better finish it up

[compact prawn]

pain

[compact prawn]

do you guys set a specific lenght per chapter?

[kind scaffold]

i try to keep it within a ballpark depending on the fic

like i will write the first chapter and t hen use that as a benchmark for how long the rest of the chapters will be

so like if my first chapter is 2000 words then i'll want all the other chapters to be minimum 1k, max maybe 4k

[compact prawn]

[kind scaffold]

but i also never want to purposefully cut my chapters down if i think there needs to be things there

like if i make a 6k chapter for my 2k fic i'm usually not gonna be like "oh i should cut this down a bit" cuz generally speaking everything in there is pretty necessary. but if a chapter does get too long it's good to try to find a point near the middle to cut it in half and just put the second half as the next chapter

because readers will likely expect each chapter to be a similar length, and having that expectation be thrown around with wild word counts will harm retention

it is always better to keep things shorter if you can

paragraphs especially

most people aren't gonna have a good time reading big blocks of text

[compact prawn]

I'm still trying to find a style for paragraphs

[kind scaffold]

wdym

https://i.imgur.com/kMs7Vuy.png like this vs this? https://i.imgur.com/hJHmzLb.png

indent vs like spaced out lines

i believe ao3 has a custom style you can use for indented fics but i have no idea how to do that otherwise i'd use it

i write indented though i just think it looks nicer

[compact prawn]

i guess more so knowing when to break into a different one

[kind scaffold]

ah so a useful method i learned is to think of it like a camera in a movie

each time the camera cuts is when you start a new line

so like, when another characer starts talking, or the scene changes, or time moves forward

whenever the focus is shifted

so like in that first pic example you can imagine the camera is focusing on era while she is talking. she mentions texts, which causes x and kai to take out their phones. that's where the camera cuts to show them doing that

then camera cuts again to kai because he started talking

in that second pic i break the paragraph up between the first and second one just cuz the first paragraph was getting a bit long more than anything

paragraphs should be at minimum, three sentences long. unless you have something really impactful you want to keep to a single line, that's where rule breaks come in play

as seen again in the third line on the second image

it's only two sentences but it is emphasized

mostly because it's the end of a scene and there is a horizontal line after that

which the horizontal line i use for major scene changes and time jumps

the horizontal line after that paragraph is because it cuts to the next morning and is a general tone shift as well

[winter haven]

eating this up

[kind scaffold]

hi i love writing

that leveled me up based

[compact prawn]

[kind scaffold]

https://tenor.com/view/spongebob-angry-shoutung-audience-gif-5898640

me when writing talk

https://www.youtube.com/@ShaelinWrites/featured linking good resource also

[compact prawn]

[subtle bridge]

How I look after I read fanfic the entire night until the brink of dawn

[kind scaffold]

KJGHVJHGVCJHGC

[kind scaffold]

wuba actually also made an art of this scene

[subtle bridge]

JCBDJDH

🥺

[compact prawn]

for better results make sure to turn up brightness to max and put the screen 0,1mm in front of your eyes

[kind scaffold]

yes

[subtle bridge]

Love how collecting rainwater is getting fanart and its both era going insane

[kind scaffold]

there is some others

[subtle bridge]

Gove it

Gimi

[kind scaffold]

rox made this of the first therapy session

[subtle bridge]

JJFJDJJD

[kind scaffold]

nameless made the cuddle puddle

[subtle bridge]

OMG ROX MADE THE MINI STTIKERS

?

[kind scaffold]

fancy era from the epilogeu also made by nameless. this one made by someone which isnt directly collecting rainwater but you made it in response to it so i counted it

also yes rox made the critters

and this by rox which isnt from the fic itself but it absolutely would be a thing featuring era support group

[subtle bridge]

I FORGOT ABT THAT ONE FJEBJD

[kind scaffold]

[compact prawn]

i think i'll settle with this for the first chapter

[kind scaffold]

based

anyways i love the cr art it gives me eternal life

[compact prawn]

still trying to come up with tags

[kind scaffold]

tags can be hard but you usally dont need too much

just enough to tell people the vibes of the fic

like if it 's slice of life or drama or angst etc

or my favorite, angst and fluff

or hurt/comfort

similar things

[compact prawn]

i really need to overclock my brain for this

[kind scaffold]

dont think too hard on it

[compact prawn]

proceeds to think in extreme difficulty

[kind scaffold]

[compact prawn]

i got 8 tags

[kind scaffold]

that's fine

i usually have less than that not counting like characters and jokey tags

[compact prawn]

then its ready i guess

time to move on to chapter 2

[kind scaffold]

[young vessel]

GET HER BACK NEXT TO KAI, WAAAAAAA

[kind scaffold]

idk if you read it but if you know you know

[young vessel]

I mean

I read the first like 7 parts

Ik she madge

But like

I feel very sadge for era

She looks so sad in the cornwr

[kind scaffold]

7!?

but yes she is sadge

[tall haven]

Yeah I made the Omega Critters™️

[subtle bridge]

YAY

[tall haven]

It was so fun to see random pfps change throughout the server

[neat halo]

this thread must be revived

finally restarting on my effort to finish my complete byte breakers history fanfic, just a fully fleshed out zen/aimi/finii story that I hope has a satisfying conclusion

its been like 5 months tho so its gonna be so awkward without my flow lmao

[severe stump]

Just keep going at it when you feel so you got this

[kind scaffold]

i believe in youuuu

just go at it and dont worry about flow that's what second drafts and editing are for

[compact prawn]

second drafts?

[kind scaffold]

yes

important

do them

[compact prawn]

I don't even make the first one

[kind scaffold]

thats also important i highly recommend it

[winter haven]

🤝

[cyan tundra]

[kind scaffold]

[compact prawn]

we do a little bit of just winging it

[neat halo]

I always find a habit of going back and revising as I write maybe it’s writers block or just my perfectionist brain speaking

also tyy all for the support!

[kind scaffold]

i find it is best to not edit as you write

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/138516502

Chapter 24 up

[burnt cliff]

i should actually take some time to read these

ty

for the good reading

[kind scaffold]

true

[fresh talon]

No problem lol

[compact prawn]

So question, do you guys have any way to go about spotting weaknesses in your writing?
As much as I say I want to improve on my writing, I'm also not too sure what is it that I'm kinda lingering on or how to approach that

[kind scaffold]

i guess it depends on artist eye vs skill thing

for me i know i dont like how i write descriptions

and i think i'm lacking in it

but i think the best way to spot that is like, read things

and like, lowkey compare yourself? thats a terrible idea idk

oh

i think a great way to detect weaknesses is to read your writing out loud to yourself

or to put it through text to speech

read things that are similar to what you are writing

[compact prawn]

hmm never thought of the hearing approach

recently i've just been randomly swapping things around just trying to guess if it ends up better as i don't know what i'm going after really

[glossy kettle]

This is big. So much this.

Reading it out loud does wonders for your brain’s ability to comprehend if it makes sense outside of your head.

It separates what you know you’re trying to write vs what you actually wrote.

[kind scaffold]

you can also use sites like uhhhhh https://hemingwayapp.com/ and https://paraphrasing-tool.com/

i used to use paraphrasing tool in the past but i dont really use it now

hemingway editor is great it tells you issues with readability in your writing

[glossy kettle]

And obviously big important thing with writing is making sure what your character is saying sounds like something an actual human would say out loud in a conversation.

or Oni, or AI cat, or space lizard, etc.

[compact prawn]

but no blobbo? dem

[kind scaffold]

yeah definitely the most important thing with fanfic is making the characters act like the actual characters

[compact prawn]

not the characterization

[kind scaffold]

important

dont make me tap the sign

[compact prawn]

[kind scaffold]

if you wanted to write characters doing what you want them to do then you'd be making original works

people read fanfic because they want to see characters they love doing stuff, if those characters aren't accurate then the readers are not reading fanfic, they are reading an original work with the wrong labels slapped on, and that makes people not want to read it

if you're ever unsure you can always ask for beta readers, do more research on the characters, etc

[compact prawn]

That's a big sign to tap

[kind scaffold]

the sign more or less reads "dont make readers go 'they would not fucking say that'"

[compact prawn]

Back to the writing board it is

[kind scaffold]

[neat halo]

Huh, I think I’ve failed in that regard

[kind scaffold]

it dont hurt to cross reference or ask for beta readers

omega strikers wiki has everyone's voicelines you can read and listen to

and backstories and trivia

and the comics for the ones that have em

[neat halo]

True, I’m currently writing Zentaro’s backstory right now… and I wanted to emphasize a massive change between him before leaving home to him after leaving home, so I made him sound like an innocent, sort of proper kid with a lot of spunk who doesn’t have much edge

AiMi and Finii should be easier to write, though I might go around asking for beta readers

[compact prawn]

Estelle called, she has nothing to say, she has no backstory

[burnt cliff]

she does-

it's just....not the best

[compact prawn]

who was her previous team? what did she do during her hiatus? why does she even like corestrike? how did she got into it? why is she rich?

[young vessel]

Best backstory: Rune tbh

[young vessel]

Rasmus & someone maybe idk. Modeling. Uhhhh, cuz it’s fun. She practiced maybe? She got good so she got bank.

[compact prawn]

oh right modeling, woops

welp 1 question down

[young vessel]

Nah

2

Corestrike fun

[compact prawn]

idk, its weird how little we know about a member of the "main team"

[young vessel]

Anna the last one

Yeah

Ig she supposed to be kinda mysterious

Idk

I personally dislike her as a character tho

[compact prawn]

but Dubu also is mysteriuous, and evne then has more story associated to him

[young vessel]

Cuz he’s the best

[compact prawn]

[burnt cliff]

i always felt the luna/atlas story was the best but everyone has opinions

[compact prawn]

i'm on the demon drive train, but most characters have something going on for them (except Estelle)

[young vessel]

#1 story thing im deadset on and will never change my opinion of is that Demon Drive backstory/personality/lore is infinitely overrated

Obv their backstory is not bad, but its just wayyyyy too overrated

Also, as a Clarion fan, am salty cuz how rigged that one event was

Just with how high popularity got them

[compact prawn]

onis 2 stronk

[young vessel]

No

Bad timing cuz they literally just released Mako

[compact prawn]

I have an opposite effect with Nao's lore, I don't want to know much about her backstory, but rather how her story would eventually unfold

[young vessel]

So DD following was just massively boosted

[young vessel]

Thats why i love Clarion so much

Its mysterious backgrounds that have a developing story

Pretty much every other story is concluded

[compact prawn]

idk about that one

Atlas and Luna are still parentless

Rune still has Obscura

[young vessel]

I said pretty much

[young vessel]

Why you think Rune’s is my fav

Its a good, explanatory background, it’s mysterious, and it has good lore/plot setup

[compact prawn]

I can only think of Juliette's story being concluded with her getting to the pro league championship

[young vessel]

By concluded i mean like cant really do much else story-wise

Juliettes is concluded

Kai is mostly done

Dubu is not concluded

All Estelles can do is beat Kai

Atlas and Luna isnt concluded

Juno is mysterious but hard to develop

Drekar is concluded

[compact prawn]

Juno wants ice cream

[young vessel]

Rune isnt

X has no story

[compact prawn]

How is Drek'ar's concluded?

[young vessel]

Era is pretty much concluded, but still a lot to do

[young vessel]

Hes content staying on earth playing corestrike and learning the worlds ways. He doesnt have much story-wise left, but theres def stuff fanfic writers can do

[burnt cliff]

juli's story ends with her losing

what an arc

[young vessel]

Aimi is concluded

[burnt cliff]

👏

[compact prawn]

But what about him wanting to be accepted by humans?

[young vessel]

Asher is barely a story

[young vessel]

I mean, not much of a story can be told with that tho

Obv there can be

Ok i messed up

Concluded was a bad word to use

[burnt cliff]

gambing addiction

[young vessel]

What i meant was there isnt much to do with their stories

[young vessel]

Thats over tho

All she doing now is playing corestrike for money

Zentaro has a lil bit left

[burnt cliff]

i forget is there a reason shes playing-

[young vessel]

All of clarion corp is still juicy plot

[burnt cliff]

like a valid reason

[compact prawn]

Asher plays for the mone

[young vessel]

She needs to pay off debt cuz her gambling ring got busted by police

[burnt cliff]

oh so shes a criminal

makes sense

[young vessel]

DD has story left but its so rigidly defined by their backstories its hard to do other stuff with it

Finii is pretty much done

So yeah

[compact prawn]

When did Finii's parents finally recognize her?

[young vessel]

Only ones with really cool stuff to do is maybe Dubu, Atlas/Luna, Rune, and Clarion Corp ppl

[young vessel]

They didnt but as i said, its less conclusion and more story potential

[compact prawn]

then its not concluded

[young vessel]

Its not concluded, but theres not much potential

[young vessel]

I know, did you not see me correct myself?

[young vessel]

.

[young vessel]

.

[young vessel]

.

[burnt cliff]

its not that i hate estelle-
she's just boring

[young vessel]

For me its both

[compact prawn]

she just doesn't have much going on

[young vessel]

Thats what I corrected myself to

Not that its concluded

[burnt cliff]

theres not really a character i hate tbh

[young vessel]

But that its boring or linear story

[young vessel]

For me i hate Estelle and Octy

And somewhat Kai

[burnt cliff]

it took me forever to realize octy is a nerd
it clicked finally two days ago

[young vessel]

Kai is Estelle but delivers his lines with a funny tone and has a better backstory

Octavia and Estelle are just both way too snobby

[burnt cliff]

snobby nerd lol-

[young vessel]

Kai is snobby but slightly funnier about it

[young vessel]

Why i hate her

The combination sucks

But like

Era >>>>>>>>

And X

Those two are just

[burnt cliff]

true

[young vessel]

https://tenor.com/view/perfect-nice-great-excellent-the-boys-gif-15593741

Also Era’s hot

[burnt cliff]

but-
i cant play him well and i never see him bc low elo
ive been trying to find ppl to help me practice

[young vessel]

Im saying character/personality

Not in game

[burnt cliff]

oh no i like all three monarchs

[young vessel]

I could try to help sometime

[burnt cliff]

personality wise

[young vessel]

The lore of the team is great but Kai’s personality is

His interactions bring him up tho

[burnt cliff]

its hard to find a character i dont like personality wise
except well-
y'know

bc boring

[young vessel]

Fr

Wait no

Luna’s a rat

[burnt cliff]

i know she probably has interesting traits somewhere but like-
even her story is just....i don't respect it nor does it make me like her
loses once i quit

[young vessel]

Rat

[neat halo]

honestly I think paired with atlas her story isn’t SO bad

I guess atlas in general is just better

[cyan tundra]

Estelle is a good character, it's just a shame that she needs quite a few headcanons to patch up those holes

[kind scaffold]

i love estelle

[old eagle]

That's every character in the game xdd

[cyan tundra]

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/138823966

Chapter 25 up. Focus is Zentaro again

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/139007761

Chapter 26--more Zentaro

[compact prawn]

These two:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/54430840/chapters/137883871

[kind scaffold]

omg

remaster

[compact prawn]

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/139339036

Chapter 27 up

[burnt cliff]

gasp

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/139614835

Chapter 28

Kazan and Zentaro fight

[winter haven]

:0

[severe stump]

Was the shotgun in the umbrella a black lagoon reference? It was the only thing I thought of when I read that line

[cyan tundra]

Umbrella shotgun... That gives me ideas

[fresh talon]

Kingsmen lol

[winter haven]

splatoon dev speech bubble

[severe stump]

Ah okay

[cyan tundra]

Uhh... Sure, yeah, we'll go with that

[winter haven]

have you played splatoon

[fresh talon]

Did you enjoy it?

The chapter

[severe stump]

Yeah this was a great chapter can't wait for what's next for zen and komachi

[cyan tundra]

No, but i know what you're talking about

[winter haven]

ok cool :D

[fresh talon]

Thanks lol

And she's jealous that her grandma gives him so much attention lol

Zentaro will help her though

[severe stump]

ngl im jealous too lmao

[fresh talon]

Oh really

I wonder why

You like the well-endowed granny maybe 😛

[severe stump]

Hmmm might be bigger reasons

[fresh talon]

No one can resist ninja melons lol

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/139812157

Chapter 29. Features a bit of Asher and Kazan

[severe stump]

Zen made new friend

[fresh talon]

Panda hacker lol

But Kazan is looking to cause more trouble lol

How did you like it?

[severe stump]

Its great so far have you considered adding other characters to the mix?

[fresh talon]

I will over time

I plan on adding Mako and Juno soon

I wanna expand on and develop certain characters

[severe stump]

Sounds good i love this story so far

[fresh talon]

Thanks lol

I like to throw in a mix of original characters with the canon ones

So you'll see a bit more of Cozali, Tenchi, Komachi, and Gijutsu soon

As well as Farid

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/140242252

Chapter 30 features more Zentaro and some Ai.Mi

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finished a fic finally 🥳 https://archiveofourown.org/works/55294207

ashtelle being gay and medieval

[obtuse kraken]

what did she mean by that /j

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sdfghsdfghadfg

look that Wasnt what i was implying but

yknow

Asher

[gloomy lantern]

Here have a little WIP fic I have yet to finish but I don't feel like waiting until then to share
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JXsfmHwmlHrbmLqEFfztYJbrrBb7GD9LIEd38EN6QUY/edit?usp=drivesdk

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:000 lets go

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MALLA FIC

HALO FIC

[glossy kettle]

Been a while y'all. I have once again finished something. This one's Datablade. Covers some Ai.Mi and Zentaro banter designed to portray what I imagine to be some very hectic early days of their rooming together.

These two are fun to write, hopefully I did em justice.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BT0PexKdirQwy4Z30svIlna8hwcJnBmiQhVy2rIauSc/edit?usp=sharing

The paragraphs look a little chunky in spots, but I can't really tell when reading it myself because I know what all the words are supposed to be, so if I need to up the line spacing or something lemme know.

Now time to repost this in #1109615120021209249 because they're probably starving.

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👀

[obtuse kraken]

@frail root

You want jt

Cmon

I know you do

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/140701210

New chapter featuring Kazan fighting an OC

[gloomy lantern]

Sharing this idea I had here because it's a good one but idk if I'm gonna try writing it:

An OS horror fic where the Omega horribly mutates Rasmus in a way akin to Resident Evil or Shin Godzilla

[obtuse kraken]

i'm kinda surprised it hasn't been done yet;;

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I’m cooking something malicious guys

[obtuse kraken]

Honestly I respect it

Absolutely screaming what the fic is about for sure /hj

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what the

[winter haven]

yo wait this is gonna go hard

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ok heres actual cooking

do yall fw my yapping ,, be nice 🥺

[kind scaffold]

this is very very good

can I make one little note tho

[drifting eagle]

Been writing short stories of OCs in the community, through the lens of Asher and Dylan Surplus' home life. I hope y'all enjoy

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mmhP5H2LTRq7849qTBp1z3RFYqM0huIW9amh5uDP9fc/edit?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ShxSa5OEL1By0IilPZPtVxufyaAmJt4e6rJy_FIXROI/edit?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Qk0LeOlRxg4d2WbOVtGq2H-_7ZHO6hQm3brfPdX1P_c/edit?usp=sharing

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👀👀👀

[drifting eagle]

Featuring:

• Colin, Asher's cousin
• Brecken, DragonClaude OC
• Crow, CordialCrow OC
• Fanari, hbcat13 OC
• V, Wiwi OC

[old eagle]

Fuck it I made this channel it's time to write some cringe ass furry shit

[obtuse kraken]

fuck yea!!!!

welc back orca;; very happy to see you

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hell ya!!!

more cookage 🥳

[kind scaffold]

YAAAA

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/140955367

Chapter 32 up. Features more Ai.Mi and Zentaro

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/55675378 new ashtelle one shot hopefully it's. decent

[fresh talon]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/53145406/chapters/141555274

Chapter 33 introduces Mako

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guys wake up...

i need help finding a time skip fic with era and nao

https://archiveofourown.org/works/56916550/chapters/144725890 guys i found ittttt

[winter haven]

@kind scaffold ITS SO GOOD

GRAHHH

GRABS YOU

im so excited for more .........

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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

IM GLAD YOU LIKE IT

EVEN THO THIS CHAPTER IS LIKE ENTIRELY EXPOSITION

[winter haven]

they way you write is so. Chefs Kiss

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🥺

[winter haven]

pls be sure to let me us know when it gets updated :3

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oki i will ping you next time

so far i pinged four people for it and only one has responded im guessing the rest are asleep or beebu

[winter haven]

YIPPEE

[severe stump]

i hate how relatable era is

first cookage in a while

[kind scaffold]

trueee

it's great for me cuz it lets me write down my own issues by pretending i'm her