Omega Strikers Fan fiction!

[stuck robin]

I'm so glad you both enjoyed it!

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I LOVED IT

[stuck robin]

also don't worry ||his wallet is safe...for the most part ||

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[rustic agate]

Yay it worked

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no access for me

[rustic agate]

Oh

Hold up

How do I fix that

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when you click share you should be able to set it so anyone with the link can view

[rustic agate]

Oh ok

How about now?

If not then I guess I’m just gonna have to figure it out another time

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works :D

[rustic agate]

There will probably be a grammar issues here and there

[gaunt nova]

OHHHHHHH I LOVE MOMMY ASHER

[stuck robin]

I just got the nicest comments on both my A03 fics AAAAA

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DESERVED!!!!!!!!!

[old eagle]

I'm probably not gonna be around for much longer, does someone else want access to the master document so they can update it? If not that's fine 2 I guess

Document editing is now public, I just don't care anymore. Hope y'all have fun with writing I guess

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??

is something the matter?

[shadow charm]

Just got here, but yeah, something up?

You can talk to someone here or close if you’d like but if you want your peace, good luck I suppose.

[pliant frigate]

lets GO

[shadow charm]

How long do y’all think it’s been for Atlas/Luna since their parents went missing?

Been considering writing a fic for Atlas after my Asher/Era one and was brainstorming

A few months or a year+?

[gaunt nova]

easily 5+ years

[kind scaffold]

in the comic it shows a pic of them in the newspaper and atlas seemed like a teen at the time

so certainly many years

[gaunt nova]

I was trying to look it up

[kind scaffold]

it's on the wiki lemme get it

https://omegastrikers.wiki.gg/wiki/Atlas#Lore

[shadow charm]

Oh alright, yeah that’s…Gonna need a lot more thinking of if its been that long

Thanks all

[stuck robin]

according to lunchboy though it was like 2 years

[balmy wind]

Yea 2 years

[gaunt nova]

wow so they must be very young.

[kind scaffold]

what the heck

that pic to now does not look like two years at all

lunchboy i am calling your bluff

[shadow charm]

Growth spurt

It happens

Is there an actual compilation of lunchboy quotes or are we just hearsay for the most part

I fear writing something and then immediately getting the “acshually” comment

[kind scaffold]

i dont think we have like a collection of pics

but i would also really like something like that

might be worth asking #1077434433554088056

[shadow charm]

That’ll be like one near-guaranteed way to make Lunch never speak at all unless they’re 100% sure

Lmfao

[pliant cipher]

I come with reciepts

Its a bit vague but if Luna is currently 11 or 12 and she was 10 when they lost their parents, then it must've been 2ish years ago

(I like the idea better that it was like 5+ years ago or so but alas)

[shadow charm]

Oh wow, thanks.

[gaunt nova]

man lunchboy's version is more sad

[vagrant arch]

brilliant, this means the pacing with my fic works

otherwise id either have to write a shitton or make a timeskip and i hate timeskips

well

large scale ones

[pliant cipher]

Im glad y'all are writing about it tho, interesting yet very sad times

[kind scaffold]

same

[shadow charm]

There's only one thing more appealing than angst writing and that can not be discussed here

Hence, interest in atlas tragedy :^)

[pliant cipher]

[rich dune]

literally who cares as long as its quality
one of the best fics i've ever read was an undertale au angst longfic

[shadow charm]

I mean, yeah?

I didn't say anything bad about angst did I

[obtuse kraken]

It's just that well written angst is almost poetry, yk what I mean? So it's just. A joy to read

[shadow charm]

Absolutely agreed, it's slightly difficult to find well-written works in that field but when you do

[rich dune]

i would write it but i connect too much with what i write

[obtuse kraken]

Very understandable; I loathe drawing sadge even though I wanna do it so bad for similar reasons

[vagrant arch]

its why i love madoka magica fanfics so much

my favorite was called persephones waltz

[feral jetty]

i need to stop coming up with stupid fic ideas

i am filled with the unrelenting urge to write either "estelle and kai sit next to each other during barbenheimer and attempt to ruin each other's experience" or "obscura forcing rune to do fortnite dances after scoring goals" and i cannot decide which

[gaunt nova]

definetly Obscura forcing Rune to do a little dance

it would be so embarrassing for him🤣

"hit the griddy! Obsura demands it!"

[feral jetty]

"do the orange justice if you want to see your friend again"

and team maelstrom looking on in confusion as rune begins dancing furiously

[gaunt nova]

OH LORDE

[feral jetty]

obscura making rune do the floss and repeatedly asking him to go faster

[gaunt nova]

X would join him un ironically

[feral jetty]

oh god he absolutely would

[manic berry]

It's so hard to properly take Obscura seriously for me cause imagine creating a pact with an abyssal entity with dark powers that will slowly make you go mad

And then that entity says "Okay, now let's go play some soccer! >:3"

[rich dune]

"this thing is the bane of my life"
gets headpat by it

I think we need at least a little suspension of disbelief for everything obscura does

[gaunt nova]

I think Obscura is interested in the omega energy created by the sport and if he wins the championship then he will be able to take over the world

[vagrant arch]

rune would hit the sickest griddy in humankinds recorded history though lets be clear

[shadow charm]

Alright, posted chapter 1

LETS GOOOOO ERA ASHER

[obtuse kraken]

👀

Link us :3

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LINK

[shadow charm]

I uh, can’t

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name at least?

[shadow charm]

Chapter isn’t explicit but I rated the work overall because it will be

LilacFragrance

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based

[shadow charm]

Thanks for the interest though, always nice to see

Oh. That’s a sticker

Asher pog too big 😔

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actually looking through the fics the one with the most hits is also explicit

wonder why that is

and it's era/estelle

[obtuse kraken]

Huh

[balmy wind]

[shadow charm]

K e k w

Y’know how it is

I think looking through

I found a street fighter cross over…

I was surprised until I saw the E-tag rating

Then I was

Like, not in a judgmental way but definitely in a “that’s not an everyday character”

[kind scaffold]

yeah there is a fic that's got like a million characters

those always pop up

[shadow charm]

Only now do I realize that all my italics/bolds are gone

I absolutely despise copy pasting into AO3 😔

[kind scaffold]

omg yeah that stuff sucks

i always have to go back through my draft and see where i put the italics

and then manually reapply in the editor

[shadow charm]

Yeah that’s gonna need some combing, I had a lot of bolded X puns…

[rich dune]

I love "x-position"

[shadow charm]

At that point I just was like “yeah that’s all you’re here for X”

But I do enjoy writing him

[vagrant arch]

my strat is just asterisks around bolds, parenthesis around italics, etc etc

[kind scaffold]

valid

[shadow charm]

I should probably do that

If you switch to rich HTML format pre-copy paste, does it keep format?

[kind scaffold]

yeah i believe so

what i do is i copy my draft from scrivener with "copy special -> html" and then paste in the html format then swap to the modern editor and then i use the built in italics button on there while comparing to my scriv draft

[shadow charm]

Duly noted, that'll help a lot. Thank you

[stuck robin]

time to cook

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[stuck robin]

[obtuse kraken]

@frail root get over here gdi

[gloomy lantern]

I will not share details yet, but I am working on a fic

Perhaps

[frail root]

:D ?

[obtuse kraken]

Welcome

You may consume a lot of fanfics from the pinned post

[frail root]

If I had a penny for every time I was dragged into a new chat area. I would have 2 Pennies

Which isn’t a lot, but it’s weird it’s happened twice

[frail root]

Oh neato

[obtuse kraken]

was I also the one who dragged you to Headchat?

[frail root]

I think so lmaooo

[stuck robin]

Welcome welcome!!!!!!!

[midnight berry]

mfw i keep forgetting if core strike is one or two words

[balmy wind]

1

Corestrike

[midnight berry]

thank you (but it Will keep happening)

[obtuse kraken]

HC that they're interchangeable

Problem solved :3

[midnight berry]

the irl equivalent of this problem is football (regardless of which version) so i think that's a good rule of thumb to work with?

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video games or videogames

[stuck robin]

but yeah it's usually described as corestrike

[vagrant arch]

football is one word so corestrike is also one word

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with that logic ten nis is also one word

[shadow charm]

Fut bol

Real question

You say Sport Players

Soccer players, basketball players

Is it Corestrike players

Or Corestrikers

[midnight berry]

i would personally like to switch the term to basketballers

but players are generally just referred to as "strikers"

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me writing era doing literally anything:

[obtuse kraken]

🥺

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"era looks up" and I'm like she's so cute

[obtuse kraken]

Aaaaaaargh that sentence along givin me diabetes she so CUTE

[gaunt nova]

How much did you put Era with Juliette but don’t spoil what happens

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sadly not in this chapter but the next two will have a good amount I'm excited for :)

[gaunt nova]

Oooooooo

[obtuse kraken]

Bonus chapters

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[stuck robin]

ERAAAAA

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era era

[obsidian tusk]

Do I say Era 3 times in the dark with a mirror to summon you?

[obtuse kraken]

Nah just say it once

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ye

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/48186868/chapters/123537466

i stayed up late to finish this i'm satisfied now i can move without worrying about this

[balmy wind]

WAKE UP GAMERS PANTS COOKAGE

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uwuuuuu

im going to sleep now

@stuck robin

[midnight berry]

👁️

[shadow charm]

Pog

[obtuse kraken]

Da Pants Cookage!

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[stuck robin]

AUGHHHHHH THAT WAS AMAZING

I posted a comment as well but omg this blorbo can pack so many therapy sessions in him

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THANK YOU

im so so glad you like it

[stuck robin]

OF COURSE I DO!!!!!

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[stuck robin]

I love Kai's mom being happy too even if she doesn't see her son often

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yusss

[stuck robin]

we have different hcs regarding her but yours is much sweeter than mine so I prefer yours ngl, sweetie pie that I'm sure she is

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whats yours

[stuck robin]

mine's that her and Kai's dad are not actually divorced (for the family image purposes, but that's absolutely faded by now), very much emotionally separated. She participates in a lot of charities and charity work specifically taking place away from Ahten City to avoid Kai's dad 😂 they see each other very rarely and don't really talk because of it but she's basically absent from the family in all but name

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waaaa

that's not too bad tho

[stuck robin]

Kai as a kid used to be hurt by it but at this point he gets it, even if he doesn't really agree

but yeah they don't really talk much in my mind, maybe like a ~4 times a year if that

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nod nod

[stuck robin]

the thrift store hc you came up with is super cute though, I wouldn't have thought of it myself

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thankuuuu i really enjoyed it

i just wanted another cameo and i was like estelle would be funny

and then for some reason thrift store

[stuck robin]

their interaction was really fun for sure 😂

I love how Kai was like "lol her disguise is so bad, let me tell it to her face", peak Kai behaviour

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TRUE

[stuck robin]

Era is so cute I hope I'll do her justice

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JKDSFADNKJF

I LOVE HER

she just wants kai to go 😭

[stuck robin]

yesss hehe im glad u caught that

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in am era based hawk

[stuck robin]

LMAO

[honest tapir]

Era

[stuck robin]

it she!!

[obtuse kraken]

Her

[stuck robin]

her!!!

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her

[young surge]

First off hi, Im somewhat new here. Ive known about the thread just haven't interacted until now, and second I was curious If anybody knows around how old the demon sister's may have been when Octavia gifted Vyce her guitar on their birthday or is that just up in the air? I've been working on a story involving the two and the guitar is a small plot point so I've been wondering.

[gaunt nova]

The two split up during highschool so anywhere before that?

[young surge]

So It's pretty vague then, got it. I can probably just leave specifics out of it, just wasn't sure if there actually was a time mentioned or not

[gaunt nova]

none of the character have official ages

[young surge]

But we at least know how tall they are

[lilac widget]

the closest we have to official ages is estelle in her late 20's, kai/era early 20's, and zentaro 13/14

so do with that what you will

[young surge]

Zentaro is really out here living the Genji lifestyle at 14 years old, at that age id be pretending I was the edgy ninja he actually is

[stuck robin]

Finii is also the youngest besides Luna (who is 11-12) according to Lunchboy

so Finii is around 11-13 I guess

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true

[shadow charm]

The more Era writing I see here

The more joy is sparked

[kind scaffold]

so true

never enough era

[shadow charm]

something something dawn of an era

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era of era

[vagrant arch]

HES NOT A NINJA NINJA DIDNT USE KATANA

AND THATS NOT A KATANA ANYWAYS

[young surge]

You're right he's an oni, my bad.

[stuck robin]

I love writing Kai being allergic to talking about his feelings

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YEAH

he sneeze

[stuck robin]

LMAO

[gloomy lantern]

Kai: "Hey Era, I-" loud sneeze "Sorry, allergies"

Era: "Kai, it's winter."

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"sorry, a cold"

[stuck robin]

SDHFJVSDHFVHJDSF

[honest tapir]

Wow, I just binged all three chapters of this, haven't done that with a fanfic in a while lol.
I'm a few days late to the party I guess, but great work, Pants, I'll be looking forward to more chapters (take your time writing of course)

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THANK YOU SO MUCH OMG

it means a lot to me

[honest tapir]

Of course!
honestly motivating me to get back to the couple fragments of OS fanfiction I've written, maybe finish something finally lol

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PLSSS

[stuck robin]

👀

also yeeee Pant's fic is fantastic fr

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[honest tapir]

It's pretty short and I don't think I'm really the best writer but the cookage is complete.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1J0pM0OEKM2YEqJ94rHQvyW2BT2je5x1CNWi1Q4fW_mY/edit?usp=sharing

[obtuse kraken]

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WOOOOO

will read when I can

[young surge]

Length isn't always a defining factor for a good story. Sometimes all it takes is a much more down to earth premise that's believable and just leaves you with a good feeling after reading it. Which is what I think you did really well, I enjoyed it

[honest tapir]

thank you very much

[kind scaffold]

yep length has nothing to do with quality

[shadow charm]

Kai daddy issues

Universal headcanon tbh

Good stuff, I enjoyed the read

[midnight berry]

not even a headcanon, that's just canon lmao

[gaunt nova]

I feel like Kai doesn’t really hate his father he just wants to make him proud and I hope he does that

[shadow charm]

I write Kai to be a dad hater

The freudian take ./s

[kind scaffold]

yeah imo he absolutely hates his dad

[stuck robin]

OMG this was hilarious to read considering rn I'm writing a Kai and Jules interaction 😂

[stuck robin]

In my opinion it's a mix of both. He hates his dad, hates how his dad controls his life, but still desires his attention (at least around so-called "season one")

[kind scaffold]

true

[shadow charm]

I’d say he desires the attention but not in a good way

[stuck robin]

and then he remembers better times and gets confused and upset all over again, until his dad is cruel to him again and then the cycle repeats

[shadow charm]

More so a “fuck you I can do good without you” way

Living out of spite rather than hope

[stuck robin]

I love his feelings regarding his dad to be very messy it's so fun

[honest tapir]

it really is

[stuck robin]

yeah that's definitely hinted in his quote delivery

[shadow charm]

Man could’ve just played league of legends and gotten the same effect

Don’t know why he put up with the dad smh

[stuck robin]

it's the upbringing

man's been raised to uphold the family legacy at all costs, supposedly his only role model/parent in his life, they probably once got along (i.e. Kai didn't question his father's methods and his dad was just standoffish) until he lost to Estelle as a teen. It all went downhill from there (hc)

it was always strained but only got even worse after the loss to Estelle

[gaunt nova]

THATS IT making a Kai x Estelle fic and they makeout in the end

[stuck robin]

SHJDFVHDFKVSHDJFSJHFKBSDF

meanwhile I hc he full-on hates Estelle LMAO

[honest tapir]

the funny thing is how much Kai and Estelle mirror each other in their corestrike careers in my headcanon, they become one of the best strikers in the world, win like 100 some matches, lose once (those losses coming at the hands of each other) and go into a downward spiral before slowly climbing their way back to the top.

[stuck robin]

yes I love them as foils it's so yummy

but also love them even more when there's genuine dislike (Estelle) and hate (Kai) because they're allergic to realizing the similarities they have

[honest tapir]

they don't want to be alike at all but they are

it's so great

[stuck robin]

I also love the implications that Estelle was naturally talented w/out a rival so she defeated Kai and felt nothing about it, until he worked extremely hard, got a new team to beat her and she got blindsided by failure and spiralled like she couldn't have done that if she lost some matches, she probably didn't lose before

Kai being called the prodigy feels purposely ironic when he only got to this point through hard work and strategy while Estelle seems to have the raw talent

[honest tapir]

I also like to imagine that Estelle, despite her talent, was never referred to as a prodigy so like,
"The Ember Monarchs, lead by the young prodigy, Kai!"
"Prodigy? Him a prodigy!? They never called me that..."

[stuck robin]

also Estelle got wrecked by a 15 year old lol that's rough buddy

[stuck robin]

PFFF she'd be so mad

[honest tapir]

every little thing compounding to make them both that little bit more jealous of each other, I really need to write these two more, holy-

[stuck robin]

they just look so funny here like ma'am don't be so dramatic he's a cringy teen doing a silly pose like that

they would be really fun to write if I could figure out how to make it work, usually on the field quotes they just grumble/snap each others name and leave it at that

[honest tapir]

some way they're forced to be together for a bit off field...

Also random but I love how Era is in the background just admiring Kai in that art

[stuck robin]

meanwhile Kai and Jules interact like this for me 😂 they're so snarky

[stuck robin]

YES she's so cute

not subtle at all, Kai is romantically stupid

[gaunt nova]

OH the reason is because Kai's dad is considered the greatest striker of all time

[honest tapir]

Also a bit too focused on himself

[shadow charm]

I love X’s quote with Kai on the same team

[stuck robin]

she practically radiates her crush and Kai is just like "shE'S a SISteR tO mE"

[shadow charm]

Man’s literally staring into a mirror of himself

I wonder whether to write him as narcissistic in a selfish manner or in a “need to be better” manner

[stuck robin]

~~it's to mask his insecurities bc he may be a mess but at least he's pretty /j ~~

[honest tapir]

"I am one hot mess" finger guns

[stuck robin]

LMAO YES

[honest tapir]

I mean imo he started off just being like that for the sake of his image in front of the cameras, but the fame kinda went to his head lol

[stuck robin]

he is still very nervous of his image idk how often you play Kai but sometimes when KOed he frets over whether the cameras caught it

[honest tapir]

Not very often, but yeah I've heard that quote before

also his one when scoring where he's like, 'that could've been cleaner' or something like that

[stuck robin]

but yeah it definitely got to his head a little bit, but im sure sometimes the insecurities bubble up a little bit, I like to write him as the kind of person who bottles up their feelings until they eventually explode

yeah he's a perfectionist

[honest tapir]

yeah for me he lets his feelings out every once in a while, but always in private, or when he's alone or whatever... and that's a new Kai x Era fic idea.

Era walks in on him venting to himself

[stuck robin]

unrelated but one of my fave Kai quotes is "ohoho you scuffed my shoes" he sounds like a little kid

[shadow charm]

ty for this I literally have never touched him at all in game

[stuck robin]

Kai initially tries to deny anything is wrong to not make her worry but then eventually cracks

[stuck robin]

np, also the wiki has the quotes and audio files too!

https://omegastrikers.wiki.gg/wiki/Kai/Quotes

[shadow charm]

I never looked into his simply because I haven’t written him more than aconcept

I have the fandom version open solely because the wiki.gg likes to split every quote with a giant mp3 player 💀

[stuck robin]

ahh that's fair

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era

[stuck robin]

she be crushin!

[obtuse kraken]

Here too :3

[kind scaffold]

she's not looking at him there is she

but regardless ERA

[obtuse kraken]

Just sharing cuz she's too cute here

:3

[stuck robin]

I love this shot it's amazing, the squad's all there

X definitely encourages Era to make him yuge as his big entrance and Kai goes along with it because it helps their team look uber intimidating

[young surge]

X seriously gives me Gamagori energy in that shot, trigger truly was the right studio to do that trailer

https://tenor.com/view/gamagori-kill-la-kill-満艦飾-マコ-animation-gif-17427631

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HE IS GAMAGORI

[stuck robin]

idk who he is but the vibe absolutely is there

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JAY PLEASE WATCH KILL LA KILL

[stuck robin]

SHDFHJSDHFHDSFHDSFHHSDFHJSDKF

I'll try 😂

[young surge]

It'll be worth the watch trust

[kind scaffold]

yay

[young surge]

My oven is about to burst into flames after the week I've spent cooking this, hopefully you all enjoy this dramatic retelling of Octavia and Vyce's reunion!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qPErqGxN8lgg4k0irDTmeLPpVOMa-qtf_7t6MbNvFHk/edit?usp=drivesdk

[obtuse kraken]

👀

[honest tapir]

👀 Oni sisters content, reading this later.

[young surge]

Enjoy

[gaunt nova]

This was a good read I felt bad for both girls I couldn’t pick sides and I feel like whoever the third member is going to be should be the key to reuniting the sisters

[gaunt nova]

Shimmer I see you typing

[young surge]

Thank you for having a look at it! The in game story about their argument made it sound like an incredibly hard moment for them so I tried my best to replicate it to the best of my ability. I really dont think there is necessarily a right or wrong side, they both have their own views on life and how they've turned out which obviously clash when together. But yeah, i am incredibly interested who might be their third

[young surge]

I was nervous sorry

[gaunt nova]

No

*p

[midnight berry]

the things i search to write...

the fun part about being a writer is that i'm probably on a watchlist based on my search history

[obtuse kraken]

What're you doing to Kai, huh bunners

Why are concussion and syncope there

[midnight berry]

don't worry, kai's fine

outside of crippling daddy issues but that's normal

[obtuse kraken]

Excited for the cookage

[kind scaffold]

very excited👀

[stuck robin]

felt this so hard

also whenever searching for oc names, you have to go on baby name sites and now you're getting ads for nursery furniture

[obtuse kraken]

LMAO no way

In a way, they aren't wrong. We are naming our babies

[stuck robin]

TRUE

[rich dune]

Not me constantly naming my characters greek/latin word roots 😭

[lunar hull]

I'm so far behind on getting my fix moderating the posts people make here

[obtuse kraken]

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[lunar hull]

[stuck robin]

I know I was cooking the beach fic but now with the s2 announcement I'm wondering if I should wait to see if there will be any material I can use as inspo/references -> plus got another idea for a different fic last night so time to cook something else

[kind scaffold]

you should continue as you were

don't hinder or slow yourself cuz of new stuff

you can always make more and you don't wanna potentially muddle your original vision unless you're sure it can enhance it imo

[stuck robin]

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[stuck robin]

thank u Pants

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yus

[stuck robin]

on my pink/purple agenda

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[obtuse kraken]

Da aJaynda

[stuck robin]

LMAO

[honest tapir]

Guys, gals, and non-binary pals I have cooked up another very short (but hopefully very sweet!) OS story! Hope you enjoy!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/104oJL33bUsUI725mYK7legwyEmz5R09HT8m1oC9Jy0k/edit

[obtuse kraken]

👀

Oh, uh, do turn on public access kindly

[honest tapir]

Oh whoops, one sec

[young surge]

Ohh, another story in such a short time? Look at you go

[honest tapir]

Should be good now, first time I’m doing this from my phone so a bit scuffed lol

[honest tapir]

I legit haven’t had the chance to actually read this all the way through until now
This was a good one, you portrayed the emotions and pain of both the sisters well and I liked the ending quite a bit, good shit, Shimmer!

[young surge]

Aww it's alright, you got around to it eventually in the end.
Thank you so much! I really appreciate that, I tried my best to make them sound believable

You don't want to know how many times I've listened to Thousand Absolutes and Vyce Versa just to get their emotions right

[obtuse kraken]

You did capture the sibling dynamic so well Shimmer. As an older sibling to a very rowdy younger, can confirm

[obtuse kraken]

Asher and X content auhming so fast

Lil snack but a good one

[young surge]

Thank you so much, that really warms my heart to hear!

[obtuse kraken]

@cyan tundra if you would

[cyan tundra]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NwHLnRHUBetVPnp9YZnCWK8Os-r6IpmHpemUXVzlpjs/edit?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FjIh2KahX-koL5vRCqeDApKAAbNMHBHllz3Uhw5NQow/edit?usp=sharing
when the uhm uhh (posted both)

[kind scaffold]

HYYYYPE

against an oc team too? :O

[cyan tundra]

||https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qOC_HzG8XHvW8p0AkHhxFzWtHMkBD9Q7qhKNXwdIq1w/edit?usp=sharing|| Cyber is this goober

spoilered because its more OC than fanfic

[kind scaffold]

[midnight berry]

blitz cooked because bnuuy prank brainrot and i probably needed to write something lighter while cooking something heavy https://archiveofourown.org/works/49405144

[kind scaffold]

WOOOO

[honest tapir]

Ooh I’ve got some good food for late night reading!

[raw timber]

People of the os fanfic thread

I need help

Specifically need 2 volunteers

[cyan tundra]

For what

[raw timber]

Just something quick

You got a sec to spare?

[cyan tundra]

Yeah

[raw timber]

Pick a number 1-18

[river robin]

Can I also pick a number

[raw timber]

Yes

[cyan tundra]

9

[raw timber]

Thank you sir

[river robin]

15!

(its a very silly number)

[raw timber]

alright

I guess there’s no harm in saying what it’s for

[cyan tundra]

Wait

These are striker numbers, each number indicating a striker?

Maybe?

[raw timber]

I’m using os as writing practice and the numbers

[raw timber]

Yeah

[cyan tundra]

[raw timber]

So X and Rasmus

This could be fun

[cyan tundra]

Get atlas in there

Make a traffic light fic

[raw timber]

that’s actually such a funny idea

[river robin]

mmm Rasmus <3

[raw timber]

Maybe in the future

[cyan tundra]

[gaunt nova]

no way crow's was the rasmus pick

[honest tapir]

Crow how did you still pick Rasmus

[river robin]

...

Secret <3

[kind scaffold]

rasmus is the 15th striker

[raw timber]

@cyan tundra @river robin it’s done if you’d like to see it (if the ping is annoying I’m sorry)

I j figured since you gave me the characters you’d like to know

[cyan tundra]

[raw timber]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/103yBGVLTHCpaIFL8xQwPh6Ot6DsVkJLXR43Pc1b6l0s/edit

[river robin]

I LOVE RASMUS

GIVE YOUR RASMUS BASED OFFERING TO ME, MORTAL

FOR I WILL CONSUME IT LIKE THE FLESH OF A FRESH ROAST BEAST

oh nvm the links right there

[raw timber]

I don’t know why it isn’t loading fully on disc but

I’ll probably post it to the archive later

[cyan tundra]

Kai's dad mentioned

[river robin]

hmmgmhm rasmus and X < 3

theThem Real <3

I praise you for the food I will cherish this like it was a drop of water in the desert

[cyan tundra]

Very awesome read

[river robin]

It brings me a lot of joy to see the dynamic I imagined between the two be written out by someone else

I will save this for later it is going in my bookmarks for eternity

[raw timber]

I thank you both for the high praise

This was mad fun

[balmy wind]

Just read n waawaa it so good

[raw timber]

I wanna do it again

Need two more volunteers

[honest tapir]

pick a number again?

[raw timber]

Yessir

1-18 that aren’t 9 and 15

[honest tapir]

17

[raw timber]

DAS MY MAIN

Thank you

If I don’t get another in like 5 minutes could you give me another one

[midnight berry]

13

that's octa/aimi, i assume?

[raw timber]

Thank you friend

That’s Vyce/Asher actually

[midnight berry]

or vyce/aimi, i forget which twin is which

oh yeah i forgot asher came second

[raw timber]

We move

[midnight berry]

anyway have fun, kareoke is listed in asher's likes

[honest tapir]

Yooo my two favs

[raw timber]

I’ll see what I can do

[raw timber]

Vyce is my it girl and Asher is p cool in my humble opinion

[raw timber]

Idea

Asher is a family’s woman

Vyce has a strained relationship w her sister

The math is comin together

[kind scaffold]

:o

[honest tapir]

Imma somewhat steal ColoureCraze’s idea here and ask for a number between 1-8

[kind scaffold]

6

[cyan tundra]

2

[honest tapir]

Pants was first, so number 6 off of my fanfic ideas list 🙂

Y’all are getting a Byte Breakers fic

[stuck robin]

ayooo???

[honest tapir]

Granted it may take a bit, but it’ll be the next thing I write.

[kind scaffold]

WOOOOOOO

[outer ridge]

I wrote a Juliette x Estelle story a couple days ago (it’s pretty bad but I’m blaming it on my sleep deprivation) figured I’d share it here :3 https://archiveofourown.org/works/49417603/chapters/124710673

[kind scaffold]

YAAAAAAA

very good ship

[outer ridge]

Omg so I’m not the only one

YAYYY

[raw timber]

Quick

Would you guys classify Vyce and Octavia as red skinned or orange skinned

[raw timber]

Also we’re keeping this in the backlog we will be reading

[gaunt nova]

I know she looks orange but I think all the onis are supposed to be red

[raw timber]

Thumbs up

[raw timber]

@honest tapir @midnight berry timezones are wack so I have no idea if y’all are still awake but

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10w97Ambz6gzI4xxrmy-YWRpDfFAVPJmwTXjMcObcXIo/edit

[stuck robin]

ah yes I saw this! I still need to read it but it looks very promising :3

[gaunt nova]

Man the way I was internally gushing at every mushy moment I was like FAAAAAAAAK every time superb read

[outer ridge]

AAA I’m so glad you like it!!! Ty!! <3:3

[young surge]

I feel like im just as bad at keeping up with reading these but I've gotta say another great interaction that while maybe wasn't the most complicated dynamic was simple and charismatic nevertheless. Great job, Rip Luna

[stuck robin]

I'm doing some cookage, hopefully I'll have something out by tonight or tomorrow

[kind scaffold]

👀

jay cook

also yeah I sadly haven't been able to read the past like 50 things sent here nor work on my own stuff

feels like shit

[stuck robin]

tbf you did go through a pretty big life change 😂

sometimes life is like that and we barely have time for our hobbies :')

[kind scaffold]

[stuck robin]

I'm a little nervous to be attempting fics so close to uni time but ah well when the plot bunnies are here you gotta write em

[kind scaffold]

untrue but go off

[stuck robin]

😂

[raw timber]

It’s that time of day again

I’ve played too much os I need a break

Could I get two volunteers

[young surge]

For exactly?

[gaunt nova]

oooooh let me help

[obsidian tusk]

Volenteers?

[raw timber]

Hi yes

Typically when I play too much and need to destress

I ask two people to pick numbers 1-18

And I write about the numbers selected because they symbolize striker numbers

[gaunt nova]

2

[raw timber]

Thank you sir

Btw the only caveat is that it can’t be 9/13/15/17

Cuz I’ve already done stuff for them

[gaunt nova]

1

[raw timber]

I wanna give it a bit more see if someone else replies but

If it’s been a bit I’ll take 1

[jovial drift]

omg this exist wtf

[kind scaffold]

5

[stuck robin]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/49533169/chapters/125014792 launches this into the chat like a paper plane

[obtuse kraken]

👀

[kind scaffold]

WOOOO

a new tab opens for me

[stuck robin]

shjvkgshvshgsvhHSKVHJSKSH

[kind scaffold]

I will read in xx amount of time

[obtuse kraken]

You're killing me Jay
The only reason I am not dead yet is cuz I have to read the next chapter AAAA
Excruciating angst thank you

[stuck robin]

SJFBJHSDFBHJSDFKHSDFHSDFHSDBFJHKSDSDF you are welcome 😌

it'll get better over time haha

[obtuse kraken]

[glass atlas]

[stuck robin]

eheh

[cyan tundra]

you know what

imma do the same thing

someone pick a number between 1 and 18

[kind scaffold]

5

[cyan tundra]

now, higher or lower

[kind scaffold]

lower

[cyan tundra]

generated 11, gonna keep not doing the rune/vyce thingamajig

i dont remember the right word in english

[kind scaffold]

?

[obtuse kraken]

Don doing the thingamajig

[cyan tundra]

Procrastinating

That's the word

[obtuse kraken]

Nice

[honest tapir]

👀 Jay cookage

[honest tapir]

This is gooood, I don’t even ship X and Kai but I love the way you portrayed the way they interact with each other and I’ll be looking forward to the next chapter 🙂

[frail root]

I scarfed this down like a starving man and then flailed like a fish in a fish market

[stuck robin]

SHFKBJHSDHFKHSDFSDFHJHSB thank you guys!

[stuck robin]

psst psst if you like it so much, leave a comment on a03 if you can, it fuels me

[jovial drift]

Alright, open your up for the comment plane

[kind scaffold]

true AO3 comments are the best ever

[stuck robin]

yesssss

OMG 3 NEW COMMENTS HELLO thank you guys

[kind scaffold]

THAT'S AMAZING

when I read I will comment

[stuck robin]

thank you Pants!!!! :DDDDDD

[frail root]

[stuck robin]

[honest tapir]

Back to cooking my Byte Breakers fic (which is turning into a AiMi/Zentaro fic tbh lol)
AiMi knows all of Finii's tricks at this point.

[stuck robin]

HAHA poor Finii

meanwhile in Jay cookage corner time to attempt chapter 2

[kind scaffold]

I LOVE THEM

ai.mi not being able to see transparent materials like a Roomba sbdbfb

but she's learned tm

[obtuse kraken]

LMAO

[stuck robin]

flashback timeeee

baby Era and Kai

[obtuse kraken]

Oh my GOD WHAT ARE YOU COOKING JAY

[stuck robin]

chapter 2, gotta give those crumbies

cute moment before I come in with the hammer

[obtuse kraken]

Oh my

[stuck robin]

[kind scaffold]

CHAPTER 2 HYPE

haven't read 1 yet but I SWEAR

[stuck robin]

HGASVDHGASDGSADGSHADGSAD IT'S OK

take your time I know you're busy af

[jovial drift]

Someone promote this man to head chef

[stuck robin]

woman actually but aha thank you

[jovial drift]

GODDAMMIT

[jovial drift]

I THOUGHT EVERYONE IS A DUDE IN DISCORD

[stuck robin]

NO LOL

[jovial drift]

MY ENTIRE LIFE IS SHATTERING BEFORE MY EYES

[kind scaffold]

just remember the acronym

girl stands for guy in real life

women simply don't exist

[stuck robin]

so true

chilling in obscura's void

[kind scaffold]

writing that hurt me

[jovial drift]

I am so sorry for making you say that

[kind scaffold]

cbjhgvb

it was all me dw

I was just reminded of it

[gloomy lantern]

I have a Google Doc of a finii centered fic that I highly doubt I'm ever going to actually complete cause I do not have the motivation to do it and I'm debating sharing the link here as it is.

[midnight berry]

same, actually. one for one?

[obtuse kraken]

Maybe sharing the wip will give the little push to finish it but even if not, would still love to see it

[gloomy lantern]

It's only two paragraphs so here ya go
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JXsfmHwmlHrbmLqEFfztYJbrrBb7GD9LIEd38EN6QUY/edit?usp=drivesdk

[obtuse kraken]

Poor lass; someone get her a hug

[midnight berry]

i see you're also trying to psychologically damage a fictional child. it might be a couple paragraphs but it's good!

[gloomy lantern]

I just had the idea and was like "I could make a fic out of this" and then I never continued it

I was actually thinking of having one of the Ember Monarch members talk with Finii later on in it but as we can all see I never got that far lol

[midnight berry]

here's my end of a one for one. here's Visitors - between writer's blocks and constant revisions i'm deciding to drop it for now
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mfSDz6ApAejx9uQPhDELwwK9THwndKiYuSX8IMJwluE/edit?usp=sharing

[obtuse kraken]

Oh my God it's that one

[midnight berry]

the concussion tab comes back

[obtuse kraken]

Yuh

[gloomy lantern]

Just read through what was there, pretty good

Anyways after sharing my fic I started having ideas

[obtuse kraken]

Thank you for this, bunner; it's so angst-fluff I love it so much

||"you know what would he funny" was a banger line I had to pause reading to laugh at how accurately Finii that was lmfao||

[midnight berry]

||kai really goes "damn you a fan" and i couldn't write past that ||

[obtuse kraken]

||I also adore Kai's depiction here;; he's kind without losing his cocksure attitude and genuinely feels warm and cozy||

[obtuse kraken]

So real xDD

[midnight berry]

||i tried to keep his outward attitude constantly cocky because according to all of his lines He's Just Like That||

oh shit i'm a slightly different shade of blue now

[gloomy lantern]

Baller

We now match in terms of blu

[obtuse kraken]

Da colour intensifies

[obtuse kraken]

Yuh! And it works so well!

[vagrant arch]

As a reminder to keep myself honest I'm working on Hajimemashite Chapter 4 and want it done by Mondays end

Ping me whenever you feel like to remind me to get back to work I'm very forgetful

[obtuse kraken]

Is it not Monday for y'all? I can never figure out time zones

[vagrant arch]

Monday in two hours

Er

One hour

One hour and three minutes

Two minutes

[obtuse kraken]

Stop counting xD

You got this!

[vagrant arch]

Hell yeah I do

[stuck robin]

omg bunner this was so good your Kai characterization is PERFECT and so is Finii, the dialogue and the story itself felt so natural to them 😭

[midnight berry]

i try my best

[kind scaffold]

[jovial drift]

Self reminder to read this

[jovial drift]

Self reminder to read this every day

[gloomy lantern]

Restricted access to my wip Finii fic cause I finally have motivation to continue it some

[midnight berry]

[stuck robin]

[obtuse kraken]

Hell yeah

[honest tapir]

[kind scaffold]

[cyan tundra]

[rustic agate]

[stuck robin]

sorry to break the streak but sneak peek go brr, featuring Era's low self-esteem:

[kind scaffold]

ERA

[stuck robin]

The girl looks down. She’d been foolish, thinking things would be any different here.

“Hey.” Someone nonchalantly calls, making the witch blink up in surprise.

It’s Kai. Another rookie, the one who had been watching her. He ignores everyone’s shocked expressions as he brushes them off to approach the outsider. Unlike her, everyone seems to adore him. He has the charisma, the looks and the talent, all features that Era lacks. He constantly has people in his wake, practically falling over each other as they clamour for his attention. Attention which Era couldn’t help but notice he insincerely returns.

Attention that’s currently on her, sharp and exacting. The others blur into the background as she meets his gaze, fearing the worst.

He smiles warmly instead, holding out a hand.

“Want to join my team?”

[kind scaffold]

WAAAAAAAAAAAAA

I LOVE THEM

[stark flare]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/19UlCxEqvabGCzMQfRDpoKNVzY0ad-8V1fOjckq03JK4/edit?usp=drivesdk

Haven't written fanfiction in years, but had an idea about Octavia offering Zentaro a place on Demon Drive.

[kind scaffold]

👀

[undone compass]

never really published the little thing i was thinking about so i decided to throw it up after some tweaks https://archiveofourown.org/works/49704001

[stuck robin]

omg!!!! Looks super promising!

I'll read tonight or tomorrow morning I love introspective fics

[kind scaffold]

YOOOOOOO

[vagrant arch]

this is good

Okay on that note yall

Im struggling with something

Hajimemashite Chap 4 is about halfway done but now I'm rethinking how I want it to go

Cause originally this was gonna be slowburn, so I don't want to advance things too fast, but I can't think of anything that can like

happen, in this chapter

its like transitory right now and I don't like that

[stuck robin]

you could market it as more like an interlude

some chapters are just like that and it's okay, I've definitely done that before

[vagrant arch]

thats true! but also i dunno if i want to

hmmmmmmmmmm

maybe ill just write one of the oneshots in my folder while I mull it over

[obtuse kraken]

Da Jay cookage

[vagrant arch]

yeah im gonna work on hajimemashite chapter 4 after i decide what i want it to be so uh

I got a list of oneshots I still need to write, can i ask yall to pick one based on the name

[obtuse kraken]

Ooh, that'd be rad

If you're unsure which to go for first, that is

[vagrant arch]

which i am

Okay! So

A Moment, Frozen (Feat. Atlas and Rune)

Black Swallowtail (Feat. GlitchWitch)

Burning Bridges (Feat. GlitchWitch)

I Told You, I'm Not An Assistant (Feat. GlitchWitch)

Luna Makes A Mockumentary (Feat. Luna Juno and Atlas)

One More Round (Feat. Juliette and X and other assorted characters)

Up In Smoke (Feat. Finii and Ai.Mi)

[obtuse kraken]

Okay shit I get why you're unsure which to go for first lmao

[vagrant arch]

My adhd is So Powerful

im gonna get these all done eventually but fuck i dunno which one to start on

Makes Two Servings was the first one I got done but i havent written anything all month and i feel antsy

[gloomy lantern]

Up in Smoke seems like a fun one

[obtuse kraken]

Burning Bridges sounds so angsty
But Luna and Up in Smoke sound so much fun too lmao

[obtuse kraken]

Yeah that one was so cute

[vagrant arch]

Okay thats two for up in smoke, one for Luna Makes a Mockumentary, and one for Burning Bridges

Up In Smoke it is! I will be back rubs hands devilishly like snidely whiplash

[obtuse kraken]

Good luck! Excited to see your cookage!

[gloomy lantern]

More finii writings!

[obtuse kraken]

I'll give it to you straight: yours is one of my favorite depictions of Juliette I've seen so far I will be stealing taking inspiration from a lot of what she's like here if I ever write smth with her in there;;

[frail root]

yes pls

[kind scaffold]

sometimes you gotta skip to the good stuff or put in a new character or even just shoot someone or something dramatic like that

[cyan tundra]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/15FTsur1V3sQEN6Exlt3VS2CHsgZl0kciUuJ5hJFNIuo/edit?usp=sharing
a little bit of a short one

[kind scaffold]

WOOOOO

@lime coral read your Juno and drek fic and I loved it a lotttttt

[stuck robin]

unfortunately I have to write Kai's dad

[lime coral]

The second chapter will be finished someday tm

Appreciate it though

[kind scaffold]

WOOOO

[kind scaffold]

o no

[undone compass]

tank u

[frozen olive]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1__K6-CBdNJbrdmGozQuE86hLS2FOmX7Ykv01N-UTJGQ/edit?usp=drivesdk didnt know this thread existed so i guess ill drop this here, currently unfinished and on pause rn but my story is gonna be about the ember monarchs (kai, era and X) going through the leauges together in core strike

[kind scaffold]

EM CONTENT WOOOOOOOOOOOO

[frozen olive]

hopefully it's alright, people tell me it's good besides grammar errors n stuff but I'm not sure

[stuck robin]

EM CONTENT????

wait this is the story I was following omg I'm so excited to see the most recent version of it!!!!!

that was so cute I love them just hanging out before practice 😭 I never thought much about how they interact with Maelstrom as a whole but this definitely made me ponder it, the interactions so far were really cute

[frozen olive]

damn i didnt know people actually liked what i was writing when i get some motivation to write i'll probably announce it in #1127411030973239316 ive been kinda down on the motivation for a while but i hope it kicks up again soon

[obtuse kraken]

Yuh!

[runic moon]

Yo. thinking about fucking around and writing some Kazan bs. lil oneshot things probably. Will it make sense? Questionable! Will I post it here? Also questionable!! Anyways, which of these should i go for?

Closing the Box: Kazan talks to his sister.

Arm, an Arm!!: Kazan has gone a little too far with an assignment.

Keeping up Appearances: Kazan is late to the Corestrike game…

It's Raining Somewhere Else: Kazan and his sister have a good day.

True Convenience Store Horror Story: Juliette recounts a strange thing that happened when she went out for a snack at 3am.

Other: suggest something to me haha.

[kind scaffold]

I like the sound of it's raining somewhere else

[stark flare]

Maybe one on how he became so crazy

[kind scaffold]

isnt that what his backstory is

[fierce wharf]

Well, there've been fics that took the descriptions in character bios and fleshed them out into more vivid scenes. Read one yesterday about the fight between Vyce and Octavia at that one gig.

[feral jetty]

please i need this 3am convenience store kazan encounter

[vagrant arch]

i second this

[kind scaffold]

very true, they're very fun to write

[young surge]

I had this idea for a Kazan related story I wanted to write although I still need to read up on the guy's lore first

[frozen olive]

bit of an update to this, got some motivation so I'm getting back on this, adding more to earlier sections and continuing the main story more, open to suggestions on interactions people wanna see

[balmy wind]

Just read the fic n holey gnomey I love it so far!

[frozen olive]

adding a bit more right now before I head to bed, it's mostly just grammar fixes but I did add a bit more to the earlier interaction with Kai and era when she was making pancakes, and more near the end, but thank you

[honest tapir]

Me: I should work on the Byte Breakers fanfic
Also me: Rasmus recruiting Kazan

[obtuse kraken]

[stark flare]

Octavia is right to not trust Rasmus

[kind scaffold]

THAT'S SO GOOD

[young surge]

I really need to read crazy man's lore

[vagrant arch]

may or may not be looking for beta readers

[river robin]

Whiplash...
Rasmus mmm

[rich dune]

Looks at you

[vagrant arch]

[vagrant arch]

Rammy

[river robin]

You should
Gimme

[obsidian tusk]

yeah let me drop this here.
for context el wiwi had made a design for X's older brother, named V. I took the X and his bro relationship and made a few things.
have fun

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oBYZ7LJ3IIKTjlEeeco0X2VPFGou2VVwBnnsOEKPQWE/edit?usp=sharing

[obtuse kraken]

[frail root]

YESSS

I was looking for thisss

AHHH THERES EVEN ANOTHER ONE

Bless

[obtuse kraken]

Oh God I missed the second one

Thank

[obsidian tusk]

Yeah imm just add onto it when make more V and X stuff. So I'll just be like

"It's updates"

[obtuse kraken]

Just keep notifyin us about em pls lol

[obsidian tusk]

Will do

Plus I'll post em separately then update the doc

[obtuse kraken]

Ooh, awesome

[obsidian tusk]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cJb0Qm8snodUaXPxorLF_ErEgnuC_JfEYzOaeWt2CyI/edit?usp=sharing

have fun yall

for the oni sister fans

and poor zen stuck there too

[kind scaffold]

WOOOOOOOOOO

[obtuse kraken]

[cyan tundra]

[honest tapir]

Oni sisters content

[honest tapir]

Finally got the time to catch up on some fics, this was a nice little read!
also poor Zen lmao.

[obsidian tusk]

thank you thank you

[frail root]

(his ego grows once more)

[gaunt nova]

guys reminder that there are OS fanfics on Wattpad I made those

[kind scaffold]

link link

[gaunt nova]

https://www.wattpad.com/story/351221618?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Martin726&wp_originator=erTua%2FtZ2xngS6NVZPQuj2DGLizvaLWcN%2F1oipmLyJRW50GIAcdt9JeT9aiKfsKbF90YDAXJoZqc72iFg514eAy6ou3LSS%2FmdZQMeoKZ%2FKDWeodEmOA7oZZJj6jHoJYM

[kind scaffold]

[obtuse kraken]

[obtuse kraken]

Wtfrog since when did Wattpad get blocked here

[kind scaffold]

oh no

[frail root]

Well that’s being revised

Even as we speak

[honest tapir]

I know I said I was working on a Byte Breakers fanfic but tbh I wasn't happy with where it was going so here's a random idea I got with Vyce and Kazan instead.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/166GzkX8EPCDZSZFhVShrckay1ucWHZsTEBTqvKNw8dI/edit?usp=sharing

[kind scaffold]

hype

oops

HYPE

[frail root]

Been writing X and Kai content

And..

I’ve been writing X a little…

Too flirty?

Is this..

My preferences

I think

But no.

It’s not

Also can’t believe no one’s said anything in this channel for over 4 days, writers, you’re an integral part of our community pls, wake up

[gaunt nova]

fanfic ideas are a little dry rn

[frail root]

but that’s what this channel is forrr

Brainstorm…

Plsss

I need to read…

fanfiction

or I’ll die..

[cyan tundra]

X and Kai?

I know of something new that's X and Kai

[river robin]

im sorry i just feel as if my rastelle contents kinda subpaaar

[midnight berry]

too busy with classes to cook :finiitired:

[obtuse kraken]

Have a lil heart, Crow;; you've had it proof read we know it's impeccable it's your turn to realize that

[stuck robin]

Uni has been so intense I've barely had time to write either

[frail root]

I DONT CAREEEE GIVE IT TO ME

pls

[frail root]

Sob.. I’ve read over your story so many times.. but I’ll wait for no matter long king for the next chapter

[stuck robin]

HSVFVKSHDFKVHDS WHICH ONE

oh LOL

it's in progress dw I did start it

[frail root]

YESSS

thank you…

[stuck robin]

you're welcome :3

[river robin]

NO THE TIMING OF THE SCENES IS SUPER OFF

[frail root]

DONT CARE HAND IT OVER

[vagrant arch]

ideas? I have lots

motivation? dont ask

[river robin]

ok

[obtuse kraken]

👀

[river robin]

I will simply finish rastelle chapter understandable

[frail root]

YEAHHHH

[river robin]

IM WARNING YOU THO CLAIRE
THE PACINGS DOG

PROSE? DOGWATER

IMAGERY? DOG
DIALOGUE? WASHED
CHARACTERIZATION? ABOUT AS GOOD AS ATLAS FORWARD AHTEN CITY

[frail root]

YEAHHH

[honest tapir]

literally me

[river robin]

Why did you yeah this

I mean in proper news I'm working on an accompanying illustration to the chapter but why

[frail root]

CHAPTER WOOOO

[river robin]

i have realized that in making a past rastelle fanfic and wanting to make accompanying illustrations that I have to design Pastmus and Pastelle

[obtuse kraken]

👀👀👀

[frail root]

wow

[river robin]

Go. Eat.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/50383579/chapters/127295257

[kind scaffold]

WOOOOOI

[gloomy lantern]

I took the time to read through this entire thing and I do not regret a second spent

[obtuse kraken]

Alas, the auhming will have to wait till I'm done with classes
But fr what a title LMFAO I can't wait

[obtuse kraken]

Reading this rn and God damn, Crow
You've written them so cute so far I am melting

Oh shit I've reached the angst now

[river robin]

I have lured you into my trap

[obtuse kraken]

You're killing me....

(is the image spoilered or...)

[river robin]

yaya its spoilered!

[obtuse kraken]

Don't wanna spoil the fun for other readers :3

To class! Rest in the evening

[obtuse kraken]

||AIMI CAMEO LESSGOOOO||

[kind scaffold]

some day I'll read

[obtuse kraken]

You should;; it's very well written Crow has done an amazing work

[kind scaffold]

I am certain it is amazing I know crow

[river robin]

you all are so nice to me

I still think theres some general pacing issues with the fic but it means a lot to me that yall like it

[cyan tundra]

I shall read when my classes are over

[river robin]

[cyan tundra]

this so good

i love

(sorry, forgor to do it earlier)

i will probably auhm the first 1/3 or something a bit more, since i'm at one point going to be writing my own Pastelle content

King moment ||more like Saien, but still King||

[kind scaffold]

nobody is perfect but that's the best kind of art if you ask me

[eager halo]

So when i finish with my prologue ,i May share here the prologue of my omega striker X ben 10 Fanfiction here

[obtuse kraken]

Definitely :3

[obtuse kraken]

@eager halo

maybe sommeone here can help you out

[eager halo]

Okay so i Need help with proof read a fanfic i'm making

Then Is Omega striker X ben 10

Fanfic

[eager halo]

We should wait

Anyway how Is a description of a grey matter species

Like how you guys would describe a galvian

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1absG3HzHZ2_rk8hnq3ApVcljWKSTZZdfgMMYMvunyKg/edit?usp=drivesdk

That's the fanfic i'm working on

[eager halo]

It Will take some time

[glossy kettle]

"I wrote a thing... Do I post the thing?"

"People might not like it if I post the thing."

"But it's not that bad, what's the harm in posting the thing?"

"I haven't posted a thing before. I don't share recreational writing. I look back on it a week later and delete it instead..."

Guys help, my brain is fighting with itself, what do I do?

[kind scaffold]

what do you think we're gonna say thoooo

post it post it

this place exists to share and enjoy and encourage each others writings

if you are proud of it even remotely then feel free to share

[honest tapir]

What Pants said, won’t get harsh critiques here, we’d love to see what you’ve written if you’re willing to share 🙂

[kind scaffold]

yeah, and we'll only give constructive feedback if it's what you ask for

i know first hand how annoying it can be to share something just for someone to comment on it as if i'm asking for feedback when all i wanted was to share it

and then THEY get mad at me because "ugh its the internet you cant control what people do" no but i can get mad at you for it fucko

ahem anyways

[glossy kettle]

LOL, I don't mind constructive feedback. Improving is important after all. Just naturally uneasy about sharing work because I don't do it. Well, ever. This game though, it's world is full of untapped potential.

[kind scaffold]

IT IS

[glossy kettle]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-WBEstEpb8c3ah0rxLWTXnskGqyTJBWz9YKXK95nKu8/edit
Regardless, here's what I've got. If you couldn't tell by the title it's about Kai's father. Basically I wanted to make a take on the character that presented more to think about than what the game left us with, but also fit with the material the game gave us to work with. This character I think gets thrown to the side as typical abusive/hateful/bad dad villain fodder, but the situation he's placed in allows for so much more than that. I wanted to explore that potential a bit. See if it was possible to make something more out of it. Hopefully that idea sounds interesting, and hopefully I did it justice to boot!

[obtuse kraken]

👀👀👀👀

KAI FIC

[kind scaffold]

:O

[obtuse kraken]

COME HERE YOU MONSTER YOURE MAKING ME LIKE KAI DAD HOW DARE YOU

I'm...
I'm gonna cry

How... How did you make me sympathize with a character that doesn't even have a name...

[kind scaffold]

[frail root]

Kai fic

[frail root]

Kai fic… and you don’t @ me…

nameless…

O-oh.::

That was..

Snifffle

That’s..

That’s illegal..

You can’t make me.. feel bad…

[obtuse kraken]

I WAS GONNA

I LOST INTERNWT

[glossy kettle]

You have no idea how many lines I had to stop and rewrite because I remembered the character I was referring to had no name LOL.

[obtuse kraken]

[kind scaffold]

so true

[frail root]

YOU.

Post this on ao3, NOW

[glossy kettle]

I’ll take that as a compliment?

[kind scaffold]

yessss

post itttt

[glossy kettle]

That would require me to make an account or something, and that sounds like it takes effort.

Maybe one day, but for now I’ve got ideas that I need to pen down.

[kind scaffold]

fair

and account is worth ittt

[vagrant arch]

Ao3 accout very worth

All you have to do is submit a request

[stuck robin]

this is so good omg I love this interpretation of his character (esp since it's unlikely we'll get it in canon) so this felt this one deeply

[glossy kettle]

I'm glad I could sell it well! I was going to gush about the angle for a good two paragraphs worth of text, but maybe I'll save that for the next time I write about it.

[obtuse kraken]

Next time

[eager halo]

Finii 12

Aliens

-Blobbloxian
-Moonwrecker

• Grimm freeze
• Trickyote
• wind twist
• flame show
• Nightrun
• wonder dash
• techy kat
• Fairy wild
• Atomic jumper
• Alien F

This Is what i smoke,i Better return writing my fanfic

For aliens

[obtuse kraken]

👀

These I assume are Ben 10 aliens renamed for the fic?

Outside of Juno and Drek'ar?

[eager halo]

Actually i din't thought of drek'ar ,but Grimfreeze Is the necrofiggeran

I think the Only Canon Aliens i used ,would had been the celestial sapien and grim freeze

Now then i think

Idk how would ben interact with finii

[obtuse kraken]

What's a necrofiggeran...

[eager halo]

I think It was big chill species