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formal lotus Jun 18, 2023, 8:54 AM

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I'm working on the second draft of my book and I've been doing a lot of rewrites on my first act. Overall, I think the chapters I am writing are much stronger than the first draft, but I have this nagging feeling that the chapters aren't flowing well together. AKA something feels wrong.

I am looking for someone to read over the first several chapter and let me know if they think the flow is alright and offer any sort of advice that could help the flow.

The story is a New Adult SciFi/ Fantasy. Please message me if you would be interested.

zinc tusk Jun 20, 2023, 4:58 PM

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hi i would like to help!

inner ruin Jun 20, 2023, 5:11 PM

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@formal lotus is this still open? I like new adult, I'd be willing to check your work out

formal lotus Jun 20, 2023, 8:39 PM

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inner ruin <@623524626848546817> is this still open? I like new adult, I'd be willing to ch...

Hey, I actually got quite a few feedback already. Would I be able to send you the next draft instead?

inner ruin Jun 20, 2023, 9:57 PM

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For sure

hearty cobalt Jun 22, 2023, 3:04 PM

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If you'd like, I can also give feedback on the next draft!

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