Wonderful Christmastime feedback

[short pike]

Hey so now that it's been out for a little bit, I was hoping to get some feedback on my cover of Wonderful Christmastime. It's probably the most effort I've put into a song, especially recently, so I would love to get any feedback, critique, compliments, criticism, everything is appreciated, on any aspect. Thanks!

https://icbcollective.bandcamp.com/track/wonderful-christmastime

[limpid moss]

this is actually amazing

great production

that switch at 2:25 is awesome and i love that it appears again later in the song

[short pike]

thank you i appreciate it!

but if anyone else has any constructive criticism or feedback that would be super helpful!

[prisma gyro]

ive got none but i rly love it? :3

[limpid moss]

only thing i can think of is the structure felt a little weird

but im very bad at song structure so sort of a weird criticism

[short pike]

Can you describe what about it feels weird?

[limpid moss]

at the time when i listened it felt like some parts went on a little too long

ill listen again now tho

on second listen idk where i got that idea from

the ending did get a bit cluttered with all the overlapping parts tbh

but other than that