#poetry comp
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<3
the lust the crave
designing ones grave
the mist of touch
lost in mind full of grudge
I like poetry
i can't write poems for my life lol
we see we loose
no destiny no use
scars and sins
will we pretend to let it in?
tbh i don't see the head or tail...but it sounds nice
Oh damn, sahil good
💯
Life
Life love and daffodils
the rings of stars
the deliquent strings tiding self to wrath
the cold breeze of love
striking the spine with gold of my clate
daffodil pog
the daffodils of spring
the velvet grass i lay on
the clear glow of sky
wheres noone is in demise
this is not a competition this is a massacre
run run for your lives
It will take me few days to write two lines of poem✋ 😭
What about a poem about reminiscing nostalgia
alas! i lost , the dream was shattered in crumbs
the lost in dread of hopeless romanticism
we see no death but will we ever live again
for again it will be done , one day on dusky dawn
will be waiting prolonged till i see her face in this song
woo
i thought u all were writing too
where do you come up with this...
it would take decades lol
yes theres no rhyming schemes , tahts free verse poetry
okay lemme try
ok next topic
This one?
ok
the songs left unsung
the doors never opened
would one day lead me back
to nostalgia
That’s really nice, I would like to analyse both poems
i look back on the day
so life no dread of unknown
we laughed we cried
on the dreary road of long lost summer
reminscing of the wind
of grudge and pale skin
seen no light in a million years
butterfly colors and golden fiers
i
that was good man
i dont write poems bruh sahil
give topic to write on
o
Put aechtwo’s poem and sahil’s together
youre p good <33
It actually makes sense to me
depression
yes<3
my fav is back 😔
its back baby 
i tried so hard and got so far
but in the end it doesn't even matter...
linkin park
the tears richocheting on the fine lawn of bones
panic , all my demons laugh
for weak and pale skin turn blue around
I curse myself for the sake of love
theres literal no sign of hope in world
yes thats me who laughed in vain
the one with seemingly happy smile on face
but wheres its gone i see no life
my scars show the sign , even tears dont fall behind
so depressing lol
not really poetry but :")
"i remember how your eyes widened and your lips slowly curved with joy as you unwrapped a gift you got.
but now, the spark is gone.
no joy left behind.
i remember how every day youd be up around the same time the sun was and the first thing you did was come down with a face ready to take on whatever life threw at you.
alas, all thats left of you, is a shell.
a shell of the person that once was.
now all you do is stay wrapped up under covers.
crying.
screaming.
hoping that someday
something
would change.
that you,
would go back to how you were.
that you,
would feel what you did.
alive.
and happy.
but that day
is not
today."
i should really go to sleep

f that would make an amazing speech
is it over?

omg
is it?
idk
nexttopic
amazing
grief <3
aw thank you

I liked it 😩
I love this ✨
i think i would go sleep almost quarter 12...have a class early inthe morn..but if you are doing this tomorrow then i would love to join in
the sorrow of a thousand moons
laying upon me in this room
the thoughts of loosing myself behind
is reignign my soul and all my mind
yea sure sleep man
gn
uwu
sleep well <3
goodnight
im glad you did 
thank you

Loved it ✨
@glass portal That must be some dark place if these poems came from the heart🥺 ❤️. You write beautifully!!
I will probably copy these and keep them in a note, with the poet as you, to read again.
@muted thicket can't believe this is the first time you tried writing a poem🤯 . Sooo good
And @dry moth that writing makes you get lost in the passage and feel the sadness🥺 ❤️ . It was amazing and 😢
You all are sooo talented
🙌
I can't write like this even if I sit all day long.
aww im glad you think so 
we all have different talents, myst 
True!! Will be reading it all if you guys write more😌
thanks myst and it really is! i am a bit surprised myself...glad you liked it!!
Good that you discovered this new talent then😋
Just write whenever inspiration hits you
I WANT TO WRITE TOO!
GIVE ME TOPIC!
||NO UWU||
ur topic : || rick rolled ||
i have a rough draft for that
it would be a pleasure to read it
Rick rolled and bumped his head
And for once he has not said
Never gonna give you up, no
For he was the one down.
On top of the hill he jumped, so
Rick rolled until next dawn.
wowoowow
sorry it's a bit dark hehe
as quentin tarantino watcher. i love dark
hellow
unarchiving 
i was wondering where this went
why doth not he understand what comes out of mine mouth?
its simple
as simple
as counting on thy fingers
1
2
3
all i said
was
i like the way your hair looks today
and the way you smile
and the way you make those silly jokes
that make me laugh for a little while
@glass portal
NOT SHARING EVERYTHING
BUT DIS ONE NICE + MINE
he shall not be known for the degrading thoughts lost in the vicinity of this ever evolving world
the thoughts of one running down the isle with blood red hands and cliche of killing knowledge is what ignites the rage
the rage is still not felt till the lastmoment of the allical devour and the pavenment leading to ones destruction
for thy shall cast upon the one who doth acknowlege his wrath and in the mercy of the secondary locked on dillusion
for people bein a man of materail and lust is the last thought of peeking through the gates of lauvre and thinketh one shant be worried on
'tis but a graveyard for my brain
your mind is beautiful 🤌
and so are u bricks
QMSNWNXJENXEMXMEKXKKEKXKK3CKWSIIR
YOU TALENTED MUNCHKIN
MARRY ME??? /LH
whats LH im dumb in tones verbs
lh is light hearted
oh
mhm
yes gets married
o
well yes
sahil cheatin
oops
cheater 
badboi

the topic is marriage/divorce heheheh
hmph oki oki
divorce 
the shatter of glass inthe veins of her cold blooded mind and the vicinity of hatred
the lost keen life of one which shall never be recovered from the scars of this trauma it left
two people coming together in love and butterflies crawls on their spines of this long blur emotions
we tend to feel life's in control js for it to loose free once again in the depth of concealed mirages
starts the days with smile on face and really insights of kisses on her cheeks
the day moves fillin the rage only it to implode at the end of lifetime
she think the person is life but little she know death disguised in cocoons
it signifies its rage and devour her only leaviing a skeleton of emotionless crank
@rough kraken
done ♿
this talented bean 
u
🪞
🕵️
imma write something that ppl might actually understand...but you guys have to wait for a day ot two,i'm not a genius like sahil conjuring words in a nick of time
hmm
arre
what what?
@glass portal
He doth not know
That he has a star in his eyes
That lures her to him
Every day and Every night
The star in his eyes
He doth not know
That his eyes are like a clear starry night
his eyes, like a deep blue ocean
his eyes, like a dense green forest
have a mystery
A mystery for her to solve
All she wants to do is talk
And by heard by him
but
He doth not know
I do know the lust, the feels we do just in order for it to be crushed by this world of agony
Stars and glitter disguised under the blanket of thorns and spikes scarring you as you keep going on in life
Mind so exaggerated there's not a single soul for it to be defined of
The blueth dara of the ocean is what consume you in your darkest days leaden one unto the path for it to be defined of none
All I wanna do is enjoy the silence of this misty breeze underneath the oak tree we used to cry about
oh shit
THIS IS SO GOD
♿
i want to hear nothing
see nothing
feel nothing
but still exist
this life
this pity pity life
has hurt me so
making me want to fall off th cliff any second
but why
but why do you have to exist?
that pretty face of your
still lures me
that non chalant
happy happy
pretty pretty
laugh thou has
has anchored me to this world
forevermore
die
die before me you fool
so that thou shant exist
when mine existence finishes too
die
die before me you fool
for i shall not be able to die
till the time thou walks this cursed earth
this is scary
really?
u want to kill that person cuz that person has pretty face?
cuz they've troubled me so
consider this:
oke wait no nvm too dark
dm me then
im open to ur thought!
i got in mind to write what if the person if already dead and what u seeing is a past memory?
oh.
sure
that really happens. u can get hallucinations
yes but i seee this going way dark
i've been darker than dis
dw
time to see some sunshine
welp same and dont wanna be there again
i might wanna maybe?
no promoting unhealthy midset for me tho
its like
lfe=happy
mind=shit
poetry= golden
@glass portal
we need more
not now bruh im tired
ji
that scare me plsss
What? "ji"?

?
I read the poem again and now its funny
@wraith summit
dis one?
The way u said die die u fool
that does have a funny element too it
but if you even stand in the speaker's position yiu may be able to understand how stressed the speaker is
||not me tho||
the question is whos the speaker
think
and thou may find
what had happened
to the girl
who wanted her lover to die
she died?
to the girl
who wanted her lover to die
yes she died
u were asking who was speaker?
i was asking what happened to the speaker
yeah and that oo
as it shows in the verse,
shes confused af
nice
bruh this thread cant die pls
flying out through the spiral webs of richocheting life
not a single is livin happy in the world of chaos and ruin
wee see no signs of far out heaven for its hell all over with no life and dread
but ig we will make it out js in time for life to be enjoyed and love to be seen
yay
oh my god
this is really unsettling, i love it
i think there is room to be radical in poetry, you can only get a few words in so each line has to pack a punch.. in the words of charles bukowski "bim bim bim!"
thanks!
hey
wrote this in exam hall
after sci pre board lol
o' ye bird
perched atop the g8 oak
bring the words that my ears and heart yearn for
bring me the news from lands far and near
o' ye g8 wind
flowing hither and tither
bring me news of death
death of the soul i no longer want to care for
bring me news of death
o' ye g8 lands
bring me news
bring me the the news of the tyrant's fall
fall of who had troubled me for so long
bring me news that he hath fallen
8/8
ji?
nvm
the stars , the clouds , the glimmer of light
the passionate breed of lustful lies
we see the heart of love and demise
dilemma of continum , the academia of highs
the moon , the dark , the shatter of nights
bringing me souls , to feed and abide
hurts to know it all in vain
for she love someone else , misery and suffice
the blood, the cuts , the devil on my right
feeding me grudge , to harrash me to die
i am already gone for it was in grave
calling out for help, i see no hand on rise
this thread shall never die
ye
you won't get it
ok
means it was good?
@plain dove
look what we do here
wtf is this hahahaha
we do poetry competition here
wait i like
all written in real time
can i send something
Competition ?
yes go
ye
mainly we 2 write lol
you are the boss
well...
naii
roses are red
i think
I'm colorblind
i am writing too
ig its more serious than that 😑
@plain dove
look at dis
tagged msg
roses are red , blood on spikes
blues of violet , scars on the bruises of my heart
lsd made me blind, colours glimmer around the world for it to be found in haze
yes that true i see no life
wao
this is real time less goo
roses are red
so is my vision
forget what happens
when it takes over
i shall forget for it is to be lost
in the shades of violet green
in valleys of crippling souls
take your time sahil...poems are not to be rushed lol,you sound gibberish
hmph well yea kinda
js defind being lost in mind
but you are a genius tho
impossible to save
keep getting pulled down
does a spiral have an end
or does it last forever
hey i actually like rushed poetry
i liked it
its about to be looped
for i see no end to this demise
but still dont we try?
for left spirit to spark some light
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Vodka costs less
Than dinner for two
o ye light!
burn our souls
for no more chance it what we yearn
end
end
end this life in a mist
for all shall be pretty when this life ends
@plain dove
u joining in?
ye sorry was banning someone
imma be back after an hour , will reply to poetry then
except end is a myth
for an eternity of tears
is destined for us
when all there is left but a soul
the end becomes beginning
and pain start anew
and all there is left
is a memory
of how it once was but never will be
awesome finish
🥺
no wait
haha
lemme write
poetry fight
what about the new life
shall we carry
our pains
our sins
into what thou says is
a new life
and not
the end?
it never meant to be
for my soul is deep buried in the hollow of this earth
pain crippling all over my body
seeing nothing but dark driven trolleys
ive been asked to take you they say
frightened my soul ran from this haze
in the midst of chaos and ruins of life
searching a new beginning, a meaning of this hide
oki cy
omg i love this
thats a nice ending
or is it
is it really an ending 😭
is anything an ending 😭
the life of an immortal
is of an endless torture
never going ahead nor behind
stuck in the shackles of time
it will stay evermore
is this the fate you wish for someone
that you love or abhor?
i cry as well
depends on ya
all that was left is a shell
a shell of the man he once was
lionhearted
brave
all seems lost
for he stands there
rigid
as stone
as the art he fell in love with
i love how you guys interpret it and steer it somewhere else
this should all be published
thats the thing i never think before writing
i have an anonymous blog thingy
where i wanted to write my thoughts
but i only ever posted one thing
lemme find it
completed me part
i think here we have about 15 to 10 already , u can use then if u want
I'LL BE BACK IN 15MINS MAX.
WRITE A PART TILL THEN
@glass portal
im going out pls
@muted thicket
try continuing
ye
theres only one post as i said
wow
and will prob delete the link in a bit btw so 👀
it never happened ok, there was never a link haha
the handwriting is so pretty 🥺
thank you :((
wow...the poem i mean
ye its just thoughts i have but i forgot to keep posting skjdfgsd
all seems bleak
and nothing is what it seems
would it have been better
if he hadn't left his mind meander?
all seems dark
as the time rushes past
the curse of the generations
had finally sought his path
all that's left is bell
the bell to sound his knell
the welcome release or the temptuous infernal
was a deed he could never asunder
@muted thicket @glass portal i did it
it's a continuation of navya's
send again or ill kill you 😃
nice
he's empty
as empty as my mind without him
that pensieve look on his face
that i hate
i just saw the blood rush into his cheeks
and now it is gone
was he crying
inside?
no no the poem has ended....he's dead now,knell is played in a funeral
MAKE HIM DUCKING RISE FROM DEATH
on that right away
look ye
look
its he who rises from his grave
not to save his country
neither to tell his mother that he stole the scones
but to tell his beloved
for one last time
before laying in his eternal slumber
that he
he
had loved her
always and forever
@glass portal
nice
DUCKING AMAZING
ty ty H2
bro going to hell for scones
no no
he stole em maybe idk
i really like this one, but i don't get the rigid art part
rigid art = sculptures
AAAHH
huh
Ha
The closure of breaths in the wink of an ever lasting epitome
The congour of thoughts in the midst of ruins of love
The hardwoven ties of rage in the vicinity of metracia
Blurring out the words for it to be a invincibility of hysteria
Istg this is not gibberish OK... Try to decode
yayy way to go...💯
bol
o 'ye sahil
let this not die
hn so u write
all i can think rn in
y call her bad from her kings are born
she baddy lmao
its a thing by guru nanak dev ji
||u fool||
oh
,
@wraith summit
aaah yes. i remember that stuff
the treacheous soul of one devouring my hand in the scars of the abyss
the longing pain of one's crust of howling winds
the call of the sea by the midst of night interstating every thought of death
and the final leap into the unkown treachory of land of the undead
wah
its not wah when u realise its about someone commiting suicide
but still
_everything everything _
i can write one of birth too
actually im goonna
the light of eternal youth rising upon the deemed beauty of the child
the scenery of everlasting rejuvence in the joyfull aroma of thoughts
the mountains embering new born on its way to life of intricate complexities
just so you know a boy is born with lights in his eyes and outcasted shimmer amidst the rise
referring it to the damned soul in hell
imma be thinking bout him
someone
lucifer?
as when he removed his mask
like a warrior on the battle field
with the feeling of victory flowing through his veins
his face as red as his own blood
and full of the waters of toil
that is what i want to be
happy
elated
with success
with accomplishment
@glass portal
i have a feeling u in love with someone hahah
nai
the carves of the impicits cuts in his hands
the thousands splender snatched upon the rising veins
the warm blood raging through the impeccable heart
yet i stand here unconscious, undelusional and slashed off highs
@muted thicket
yeahh
u get it
expalin 1st line pls
the person has went thru some trauma of self harm and the cuts are still visible on his hand
second line is well a girl simping on his veins lol
the third is the warmth u feel when u see someone in ur heart
that doesnt go with the thing does it?
i understood the rest
when there are no cuts?
see the cuts are used to metaphor the imperfections
yeah
its not all sunshine yk
yeahh
ye
thats why i added that line
i really wanna write for some publication , maybe in college ill do : D
thats g8 uk
ye ye ill improve too
js need to study vocab, poetic devices and different rhyme schemes but no time rn
yeah
it comes to me naturally some how uk
all of this
same
i feel no pressure writing it all
you might be using them
but just dont know them by name
lol
ik few but not a master in it
Also, open mic poetry
yeah didi
After boards also you can find those ig. Chd must have some hosted every now and then. Pec students must be hosting many of those
the introver in me is screaming tho im finw in social interaction
yeah
might be
who the heck is gonna tell the parents tho?
||ps my parents dont know i write A WHOLE LOT of poetry, has been since 8th||
saem , u dont need to say it 
why would writing poetry be a threat to parents
Try it in college then, or when you get more independence to go to open mics🤣
You still sing here on the server. But not the concern for now. Think about it in college. It would be a good way to make connections to get your poetry published.
oki
@wraith summit
THEY DONT KNOW THAT I DO
ji
they doth* know
so u r parents know and her parents know
@glass portal
they do not know
ppl
tell them ur a poet in disguis and that u work for the biritsh government
nope
we left that biz in 1947
aaah shit when did u guys leave. why didnt u call me. am i the only one here
ig so
britain is more dear to me than india
.
.
,
!
'
=
~
This is the poetry i ve been waiting for
`
)
to us it euphoria still
Such simple signs but deep meaning that i won't and will never be able to interpret
Idk what that means
wrote a shit deleted it all
Good
Dude why it's so hard to make windows 11 Bootable
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
its still unstable
windows always get stuck on a number. and then suddenly goes to 100.
&
fel gud
It's still on 98
my windows 10 cumulative update once took 2 hours. if ur installing windows 11 or updating, there are chances of it happening
Finally bypassed it, it's installing now

.
^
hmmmmmmmmmmm
slip slop tock crock
Bippity boppity boo
your handwriting 🤩
hehehe
Big bang small fang
the presence of apathy in the menace of the chaos
the broken promises and apalogies on the edge of a blunt knife
still we keep waiting and waiting and waiting
does it even make sense of things to cry in the sewers of sorrows?
.
,
_
wow exam got me not able to write poetries
the facade of crucides driving me to madness
the queues of this wait on the road of frosting snow
the numbness in my hand in the middle of the haze
the fogging up of mind and blood pumping through my veins
today's the day for i shall confide
my future, my past , my present and demise
the chains of the cues buried deep within eyes
looking for the person to hold up and call you mine
Suddenly in silence they born,
and steadily in silence they fade away.
1
.
staying at my place
crying an ocean just to let you die
chilling on my couch listening to metal
js when I hear a crash of clashing metals
and what if i told
worlds falling apart and nothing made sense
the craving and dilemma of this lost journey
for me to be lost just when its time
To dance with death, a dream
to swim in the red river, euphoria
To jump off the hill named life,
A dream, A want
|| ||
a dream reminiscing in the dark
under the creaking stairs of the old broken darts
for death is lurking in the shadows of my life
edging on this ride startling my chilling crine
Andwobble!
Pigloaf bandoofle binklippofill!
Frauphurber zintwhistle?
Grandistloader quientofritz ing bloy-bloy?
Bloy exastipation grilp...
Pisstooberint candorting andwobble.
Andwobble.
Andwob...ob...obble
Andwah...
Ah.
-chris thurlow
h2 high ?
not my poem
but it's good na
makes no sesnse
yours does?
/jk jk
u r gonna get on from me now
what's that?
special, toasted ||slap||
||jk ofc||
uff
im thinking of something so dark to write on but cant find it
A black-hole?
heh
well , something fictional
I heard Squid Games fits that description
what happened to something super sweet?
its feels better to writ about dark
still on it huhuh
I've been crying myself to sleep for the past 3 days
or 3 months
who knows?
who cares?
Ive got so much to tell
so much to speak
so much to talk about
does anyone care?
ive been crying for days, crying for weeks
longing to not be me
@glass portal
yes no one cares
the world moves on for the anarchy of this dread
its about time you find someone who does
someone who sits and talk , letting go of your leaden heart
i can feel myself looking theough the glass
the glitters, the shatters, the lustre of the stars
once a golden tear dropped of my cheeks
felt the bittersweet pain and joy of this henderous rains
yes it dont last , it dies and rot
i see myself crying on couch , scarring myself , cuttin all clouds
the dream that they showed when i was a little kid
crumble before my eyes for its all starting to reminiscent
wow 🥺
@candid blaze i found my dark surrealism , its heironymous bosch paintinds . he painted a lot of nighmare paintings which are extremely detailed and belong to 19th cenutry europe, perfect
Really? I'll check them out💯
Truly horrific😃
😃
ayy you started to make sense now
good job yagi!!!
i always did
@muted thicket here!
Thank you so much!! < 3
Okay i wanna write a poem
Give me a topic
stars
Okay thanks
Here we go
In the dark night sky
There was the moon shining so bright
And a little star twinkling near by
The star asked a question to the moon
‘All eyes at you .....
Is it a curse or a boon ?’
Moon replied with a smile
‘If you are the one shining out of millions
With ur good deeds ,enjoy all the pride ‘
If the shine is fake it dies
And no one can tell where it died .
.
Light glimmer across the streets
The stars crushing golden dust
On the pale moonlight of this shivering night
The lights auring up the air
For its Christmas spirit heading jolly upon everyone
@acoustic meteor
What is the condition of a paradise?
but do you know a fairy?
been dreaming away.
Heat and run,
Oh my wandering son.
To my dear universe,
I hear the sunspot
But I cannot reach you.
If I could, I would ask
What did you eat today?
The heart of Thomas, you'd say.
Sweet blue flowers,
bloom into you.
What is the condition of a paradise?
That blue sky feeling,
And the sweet blue flowers.
Whisper me a love song,
I want you to stay a little long.
There are things I can't tell you now
But maybe will just let it go.
Our dreams at dusk, our dreams at dusk.
—made a poem out of LGBTQIA+ manga titles
—And another one that I wrote yesterday
(Through) your eyes
What does your world look like?
Is it deary or is it scary?
I wish I could see it through your eyes,
Then I would know what your world is like.
—it's incomplete tho.
Ok guys i'm preparing a thing idk what exactly and it may looks weird but i hope you'll like it
Here is a poem I called:
Dust
I see myself, constantly fading into dust,
Whil. I’m looking at my hand, my fing.rs, I s.. dust,
flo.ting, slowly, up to the c.iling, th. sky, som.wh.r. …
I d.n't kn.w why, h.w, .r if it’s r..l .r n.t. I just f..l lik. it is. but sinc. n. .n. .ls.
s..ms t. s.. it t.., th. d.ubt t.k.s pl.c. ..d th. dust g.ts sw.pt u.d.r th. rug.
.f .’m b...g h…st d.ys .r w..ks p.ss.d b.tw... ..ch ..d .v.ry l… ..d p.r.gr.ph.
.’m f.ll.w..g my d.ct.r’s pr.scr.pt..., t.k..g my m.ds f.r .ll th. c..d.t...s .’m suff.r..g fr.m ..p..g f.r r.sults t..t w.ll ..v.r c.m. .
. just ...l.z.d t..t m.yb. t.. f.m.us v..s. “.ll c.m. f..m t.. dust ..d .ll ..tu.. t. t.. dust” w.s ..t t.lk..g .b.ut d..d b.d..s g.tt..g bu...d, but ..f..s t. T..S !
W.’.. … dust, ..t …y my f..g..s, my …ds, .. just mys..f but .v..y...!
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ENDust...
for any questions ping and/or dm me^^
Here's another one since i couldn't find sleep
I’m I a stalker?
I’ve spent and keep spending time trying to convince myself that I’m not.
But at the same time, I can’t imagine a month, a week, even a day, without being aware of her.
I don’t know. I don’t care about what she is doing where, when, and with who.
She literally saved me from a jump. I just want to keep a promise I’ve made to her a few months after we met
“I will always be there for you, no matter the cost, no matter if our path tears up apart, no matter if it leads me to my tomb, I will.”
Maybe I was dumb, maybe. Some people told me so.
I just think she was the chosen one in my personal life adventure.
The mighty heroine who was supposed to brighten my desperately grayscaling life.
And for a while she was. She gave me all the colors I could ever dream of.
In return, I was the Pierrot, always creating new characters, new jokes, new ways of messing around.
Now I’m craving for a picture of her life, to see her joyful face.
I’m standing in front of my screen searching everywhere for her.
But she is nowhere to be found.
Breaking up with someone is like losing her forever.
I don’t need a lot, just proof that she is still alive!
I need to honor my words
I Never promise anything I can’t do
This is the one breach in my mind.
I can’t be there for a dead, what would be the point?
I’m in denial, I won’t accept that, I can’t accept that.
I don’t want her back in my life and I suppose she thinks the same,
she must live a better life without me as a burden.
But these words I’ve said once are deadweights and if I don’t respect them there is no reason for me to stay sane.
Since she passed away physically and virtually a lock took place on my emotions.
Since then I lost the ability to cry.
I can hear some of your thought which says that I should move on.
Trust me I've tried, but I’m an old-fashioned man and as Davy Jones,
My heart has been buried and my hopes with it.
istg this, is soo good
thx, i didn't think a lot for this one^^"...
wb the first one did u get allthe layers ?
nope not at all
I get uptil the second stanza but then it gets more confusing because the missing letters. I think that's like a fading effect to the poem? Thats cool
that's the whole point yup ^^ finding the layers of reading. yep there is more and more missing letters each line/part in fact u can add one more letter to the list it's a kind of puzzle but there is a simple logic behind the letters gone
but tbf i dont think it can be solvable, i mean without the answer next to me i would have surrendered too xD
and yeah it gives this fading into dust feeling
thx^^
Oh i thought about the missing letters meaning part too, kinda tried searching but couldn't, tellmetellmetellmetellmetellmetellme lol
sent
ayy that is pretty good you know
i mean that is absolutely mind blowing
good job!!
did you write the poem or just removed layers?
“I don't believe in magic.'
The young boy said.
The old man smiled.
'You will when you see her.”
― Atticuspoetry
wym
for those who are interested here's the unlocked version of Dust
Dust
I see myself, constantly fading into dust,
While I’m looking at my hand, my fingers, I see dust,
floating, slowly, up to the ceiling, the sky, somewhere...
I don't know why, how, or if it’s real or not. I just feel like it is, but since no one else seems to see it too,
the doubt takes place and the dust gets swept under the rug.
If I’m being honest days or weeks passed between each and every line and paragraph.
I’m following my doctor’s prescription, taking my meds for all the conditions I’m suffering from hoping for results that will never come.
I just realized that maybe the famous verse “All came from the dust and all return to the dust” was not talking about dead bodies getting buried, but refers to THIS!
We’re all dust, not only my fingers, my hands, or just myself but everyone!
the more I focus the more I see. It’s not about medication or any conditions the dust never stops!
No matter the pills, the therapies, or places I’m staying to rest. The DUST is always there on every single being!
How appalling it is to be the only one. Witness of this silent, vicious, and invisible horror…
In what way am I different?
Can't I just die like everyone else? In ignorance of this gloomy snow that numbs my mind instead of my body.
These grains of DUST... where do they go?
For all I know, all I see, they never go down…
…
As I try to finish these few thoughts, I notice in unspeakable horror that the dust has stopped leaving me, I just turned 27.
LMAO dust original unlocked
leader of what? xD poetry is an art there is no leader
and my texts kinda suck to me
@rough kraken the fuck are u doing here hidden ? i don't wanna be bricked
The bricks are gifts for ducky to bring you back to your senses
Your writing is really good
I'll post of 1st Jan
I don't like to spend too much time on a piece because I keep restarting to do better and at the end post nothing xD i just take a simple word or idea or feeling and let the story flows. i adjust some words or detail after and that's it ^^
I write mostly in real time
See, a leader
Leaders
Just a metaphor in this society of dead poets
aɪ æm ðə ˈraɪtər ænd aɪ dɪˈkleə ðæt maɪ ˈpəʊɪm ɑː ʃɪt !
Integration it=it square /2
You are getting bricked anyway
They are not
one thing too: even in class during exam i just keep repeating out loud what i am writing xDDDDD
I am the reader and I say it’s good. End of story
U have my energy
Imagine giving an exam and now half of class know the answer :
But ducky you forgot a z in my poems👀
Pleo teacher 
Hehehe sorry
true but i don't like phonetics
and grammar
Phonetics is soooooo coooollllll
and rules
I like grammar
Gn gn
We look into those eyes
Loosing myself and life around
Diving into the trench
So lost it wouldnt be found
Looking for love in strangers
Wandering the streets, the garden of stawns
The sinful thoughts of living so fast
Drinking in days, and snuffing all night
Metaphor the craze , the touch so glazed it shouldn't be dimed
Your hands like silk
The marbles of crips
The memory of this glass
And the spikes of broken hearts
You'llfeel my love
My hate my crimes
Cuts of shattered dreams
And sinicity of bleeding walls
I wonder if I know him
In whose speech is my voice,
In whose movement is my being,
Whose skill is in my lines,
Whose melody is in my songs
In joy and sorrow.
I thought he was chained within me,
Contained by tears and laughter,
Work and play.
I thought he was my very self
Coming to an end with my death.
Why then in a flood of joy do I feel him
In the sight and touch of my beloved?
This 'I' beyond self I found
On the shores of the shining sea. ---Rabindranath Tagore
The silence in me
Beyond the heartbeat
The sound of air and blood
Feeding the body
You can hear me
The silence in me
||Death,death,death||
Lies hidden in that silence
@glass portal there u go
oof
good stuff ✍️
TYY ace!! I really like this poem✨
The grass is green across the hill,
But yellow blooms the daffodil.
It's sunshine on a little stalk,
A friendly flower, I bet they talk...
Of little kids, too long inside
They burst outdoors to play and hide.
Tracking mud and bringing bugs.
Look, there's footprints on the rug!
Tiny whirlwinds, these little tykes,
They skin their knees while riding bikes.
They rip and roar, they're running wild!
What fun it is to be a child.
It grows warmer every day.
Shoo the children out to play!
Pick the flowers, play in mud.
Too much rain, here comes a flood!
My snowy, winter days are gone.
I mourn them, but I hear a song
Of birds in trees; wind chimes ring.
I guess it might as well be spring!
This is beautiful ❤️
Barely existin', ain't living
Bodies these days
Striving, weeping, concludin'
Neither joy nor Contentment did ever hit here.
Even him on the left got it all best,
Wholly rewarded, ain't trying his best
Hurdles got crossed, ain't following your steps,
The epotic swirls of the Swan on the hill
The cherrious gloss of peary nights
Listening to waves of this breeze amidst silence
The serenity of spuless camps in cursade dogma
Beyond the path without you
is a forgotten promise to keep.
We may have walked side by side,
but now we go on back to back.
And though our paths may not cross,
all paths are connected somewhere.
When I arrive at where you are,
we may not appear to be as we were...
But we'll make another promise to keep.
Quack quack
I like to play blackjack
With my mate jack black
Quack quack
I am a quacky boi
Let's go make some noice
Quack glock In dahouse
Bathtubs filled with rubber ducks .
Squeaky squeaky is the new black
Squeaky clean 😎 lmao
Thanks 😄
check here tp u might find smthin @muted thicket
@muted thicket @muted thicket @woven quest
Die before me you fool so that thou shant exist ....man some golden lines there🌸
Deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep
Deeper than mariana trench
deeper than joe
hi so i just joined this thread how do we play?
hi so i just joined this thread how do we play? x2
just have to send your pieces of poetry i suppose
lmao im new too but this has been dead eversince
same
dont play, pray
pray for all this pain to be lost
for delecacy of sorceres hand
for lustre of a thousand splendid stars
and creed of this enigma of life
your prayer shall be heard
for life is merciful in midst of pain and cruds
you shall give up, or rise above
this deliquent dream of glass threaded bloke
this is nice love the imagery
i also just wrote something it’s complete but here u go
scathing little thing, you wear out the envy in the glass water bottle
a fortunate forbidden fruit of this house,
you split the mirrors with your untouched sound
i am what protrudes from the tip of your nails
the wretched seething soul forming a shapeless shape
somehow youre writing style matches mine
amazing
we both be using a lot of metaphors
aa yes that’s what i thought as well
the unusual ones might i say
the sequenting souls of this crux of life
the middle of nowhere we both sit tight
look into the sea of heavenly smiles
the dark , the dreary of cold blue highs
not unusual but yea rare
in the purple when we draw our breaths, form a mirage of an uncanny land
we each take turns thinking about the shore
allude to the perseverance of the sliver spoon
haha apologies if i ruined it
do u write regularly?
the mirage was shattered with glass of molten time
the trance of loosing yourself in amidst of ruins and fun
tame yourself for you might be broken
of what lies ahead and all the time is frozen
whenever i want
this should be the apt ending i think. the warning comes off as a weary sign which is in itself a repetition of universe’s words
i never ended it
yes i never said u did lmao
its amazing, both of you
lol
aa thanks
the thing is i can go on for way long butidk
hahah but its your turn rn
aah oookay
pray to the dead and their lies
a hallow pit awaits your eyes
the mirror will glance from far ahead
with an unheralded hostage flesh
the chains of hell ablaze
the aura of lost wrath burn the eyes
the quivers of lashes on the back
the drausta of so called "death"
wdym by drausta here?
can i ask you all something?
drastic/adversity , modified the word acc to the poetry
go on
oh how did u figure that out?
i mean this stuff is phenomenal
sure
i dont think too much
when and how did you all start
it just... happens? and when it doesn't then it doesn't
you strt by writing gibrish proceed onto write more gibrish end up writing less gibrish
this has to be the most inspiring thing ive ever read today lol
write gubrish so deep that it becomes meaningful
i have a decent grip on the language but i cant ever get myself to get poems out like you do
lmao everything u say u talk with whatever words u use ar epoetry u just gotta see it w those eyes
i can't either
aight imma start trying
how do you start tho
i mean is there certain topics you choose and start thinking or is it random
for me usually something or some phrase or line clicks then we write it down
u dont always need a certain topic or theme
i see
this makes a lot of sense
thats a good strt
yeah im sure i can make something out of that, albeit some gibberish
but obv im no one to like know everything so ehh this might all jsut not make sense
always some gibberish
yep
rome wasnt built in a day
thanks for your advicee
anytime pls
or like hues of this hazed blues
my brain knows those words
but they dont seem to come out of my head
i cant put them together like you do
the vocab
dont force it , be easy
yeah, i will try to go easy
atleast that way, at somepoint ill make something useful
yea
Bro this is some next level poetry 🤌
Beep bop
Been pulled down,
Beaten and invalidated.
In tandem, over and over again.
A product of denial and sin.
Red on me, red on my actions.
Schadenfreude,
Oh, how I wish.
Retrouvaille.
You’re so far away.
Why you had to go and not stay?
La douleur exquise.
Kind of all over the place but that's the ambedo of poetry in my opinion
Its structure is entirely arbitrary
It's an expression and only man who deems themselves critiques of such structure constitute of what's "perfect" in poetry
*critics
how many lang do you know?
this is a good one

How many sess
10
Fire in the lungs
Ablaze are all my words
The breath of listening the ocean cry
The fire blaze in tyranny of heirs
How it feels to loose someone
I wish I never knew it hurts in the core
The squint of clashing thunder of the shore
And the pain of dark nights of this chore
My days were blank and night a sober clause
Illicit ember in the mind amidst this Dread
Sequent colours of a dying person's bed
Is enough to break the greatest of men
But hey! , we push still in hope of grace
In light of this flora and the waves of the haze
The savoury smell of leaves in the dark
The glyceryl touch of moss in the broken shattered flass
You really think it's easy to shift my mind
But mind, O mind listen to this heart
It sees only pain and sorrow in these shards
Yes I might be wrong ,after all games are in my brain
But sure it hurts so bad and pain is fresh in this angst of loosing grace
yet you never know how its bonds
my scars alone inside my head
nothing left to do in this dreadful world of craves
surrounded by strangers in a pity party of overgrown teens
youll see it really dont work
i die for you , yet you demise to live for me
cuts up on my arms , the blades you sewn into my soul
it hurts till the end and i smile just to bear the pain
yet i let you inside , under my broken skin
the latter of the smoke thus caused
choking on my words i said that night
you wont regret living by my side
it works , it might not
youll find me hanging on the floor of the room 38
youll cry ik but how long will that last
days ?maybe nights reminiscing my past and future of cost
your'e my ride or die
that what you said when we first met
ig i died for you but you ride off with cret
you wont find me next to you now
it wont hurt, it wont scratch the veins of sequenting devil's frown
this is awesome @glass portal
you are getting loads better at this
uwu thnx
i hope everthing's alright tho hehe
welll..... XD
that pause scares me
Stay strong buddy
f s you worked hard on this
i don't think i would be able to do this
good job 🔥
BHAI NOO abhi likha free hand bas XD
Im working on a real piece tho huhuh
keep a log of your poems oki
isliye to i send here , archive delete nhi hote here
ill copy emm one day
gn
question my life , so are my thoughts
looking through the haze in the valleys of helma cross
the stars are glazing my soul in the disruptive aura
answering all my love , the gaze of thougnum flora
i walk upon the rocks , hyming the songs of the dead
feets sinking down , so is the misery of this dread
the golden masked eagle guide my way to the south
glycening my mind with ease , I follow him through this drought
to be continued....
the sunken feet shivers my spine
the dilemma of loosing faith through the spirits of undead souls
the cripple smile of the screams of past
yet so wise and pondering in haze
drops of dew on the path thee walk
the blades of the crunken solicit cross
the undead shall rise objecting choice of baith
Shall question my mind with naura , the delusion of faith
arc 1 ended : the soul is still trapped in the valleys , questioned by the mortals of the this undead land arc 2 : he shall find the answers or be trapped in this ethopia
damned are my thoughts to condemn for all my sins
heavy mind aching under the oath of unspoken grieving pain
reminiscing is my blood from the burns of these scars
the trapped souls screeching me down in crunken berosen
look for faith in the oblivion
forge thy soul with chaos and reign
so broken are ties of future and the past
Free thy from this misery of unclausing pain and wrath
arc 2 : answers are still blurry, is it faith ? or its just his words trapping him down , he's trying to find the answers for the same
thy shall condemn in this land of undead cruxes
tarnished soul must be cleaned of dirt and million roaches
so shall he pray, devouring his faith into the void
still unknown of the faith he had lost, in creasing pain and vulgaring clause
His legs are no more bound
sink of the sand is frozen in time
glycening through the amend he had fought
Paved are his ways to the myst in the frown
arc 2 ended : he had been freed and now shall walk towards the myst in the the glora creek arc 3 : he is visited by someone , we shall find it in this arc as we progress
The dark knight standing in the eerie shadows on the clemence
yet so hazed under the demise and sorrow of this fenacity
tarnished shall speak for his sins in cradle of lies
blazing eyes of the red wrathing dragon greeting thee down with all of his might
yet he see the flame unbroken
clustering was his mind and lustering all that's floken
moved by the aura , he praises the ending brones
shivering him by his feet and flying away in the azure
There are rifts that cannot be closed.
Wounds that cannot be healed.
Flaws that cannot be corrected.
And others that you don't notice until it's too late.
There are those that haunt you, invisible
and which suddenly reappear implacable.
They take you by the throat and grip your heart,
While you abandon yourself to the scarlet veil which covers your sight.
They never leave you.
Even if you think you have forgotten them,
A simple image, a simple sign, a simple word;
And your defences crumble, leaving you exposed.
Time is unforgiving,
And sooner or later, you have to face it.
the scenes reminiscing in my conscience
giving on a deep sense of regret under the gloom of this aura
the hermit hitting the hammer under the cloak of thundering daylight
scrotching my heart with the beats of the flourishing tale
the battle lost on the shore of jutenheilm
thousands dead yet living in the past of the lands
the blood shed on the satin of mother
satan can yet be seen lurking in the dark eager about the rage which drives the human race
years have passed yet the battle cry never ends
thumping of the million feet hitting grounds of the undead
the tears ricocheting in midst of the day
under the grazing stars shall find the truth of this vicarious slaughter


