#poetry comp

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@muted thicket @dry moth

dry moth
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<3

muted thicket
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ello

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Wow we really writing poems Hipster

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the lust the crave
designing ones grave
the mist of touch
lost in mind full of grudge

steep shell
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I like poetry

muted thicket
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i can't write poems for my life lol

glass portal
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we see we loose
no destiny no use
scars and sins
will we pretend to let it in?

muted thicket
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Oh damn, sahil good Hipster 💯

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ye i dont too im writing real time na

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ok give topic

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hmph

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nvm

steep shell
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Life

muted thicket
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Love

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daffodils

glass portal
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lets start imma mix em all

muted thicket
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oh noice

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Yes yes

steep shell
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Life love and daffodils

glass portal
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the rings of stars
the deliquent strings tiding self to wrath
the cold breeze of love
striking the spine with gold of my clate

dry moth
glass portal
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the daffodils of spring
the velvet grass i lay on
the clear glow of sky
wheres noone is in demise

muted thicket
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this is not a competition this is a massacre

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run run for your lives

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It will take me few days to write two lines of poem✋ 😭

steep shell
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What about a poem about reminiscing nostalgia

glass portal
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alas! i lost , the dream was shattered in crumbs
the lost in dread of hopeless romanticism
we see no death but will we ever live again
for again it will be done , one day on dusky dawn

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will be waiting prolonged till i see her face in this song

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woo

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i thought u all were writing too

muted thicket
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glass portal
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this is how i write

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free verses

muted thicket
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Free verses Hipster

glass portal
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yes theres no rhyming schemes , tahts free verse poetry

muted thicket
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okay lemme try

glass portal
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ok next topic

muted thicket
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wait

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okay next topic

steep shell
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Nice!

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I gotta get back on track soon but I want to see this poem

muted thicket
steep shell
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That’s really nice, I would like to analyse both poems

glass portal
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i look back on the day
so life no dread of unknown
we laughed we cried
on the dreary road of long lost summer
reminscing of the wind
of grudge and pale skin
seen no light in a million years
butterfly colors and golden fiers

i

dry moth
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sahil istg i admire your talent sm

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like leave some for the rest of us

muted thicket
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well this was my 1st time

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i could do too yk

glass portal
muted thicket
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i dont write poems bruh sahil

glass portal
muted thicket
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o

steep shell
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Put aechtwo’s poem and sahil’s together

dry moth
steep shell
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It actually makes sense to me

dry moth
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storytelling issit 😳

muted thicket
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ok less go

muted thicket
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the tears richocheting on the fine lawn of bones
panic , all my demons laugh
for weak and pale skin turn blue around
I curse myself for the sake of love
theres literal no sign of hope in world

yes thats me who laughed in vain
the one with seemingly happy smile on face
but wheres its gone i see no life
my scars show the sign , even tears dont fall behind

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: D

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bun writing poetry Miks

dry moth
# muted thicket depression

not really poetry but :")

"i remember how your eyes widened and your lips slowly curved with joy as you unwrapped a gift you got.

but now, the spark is gone.
no joy left behind.

i remember how every day youd be up around the same time the sun was and the first thing you did was come down with a face ready to take on whatever life threw at you.

alas, all thats left of you, is a shell.
a shell of the person that once was.

now all you do is stay wrapped up under covers.
crying.
screaming.
hoping that someday
something
would change.

that you,
would go back to how you were.

that you,
would feel what you did.

alive.
and happy.

but that day
is not
today."

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i should really go to sleep

glass portal
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demn

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T,T

dry moth
muted thicket
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thank you(?)

muted thicket
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is it over?

glass portal
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dry moth
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grief <3

dry moth
muted thicket
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I liked it 😩

muted thicket
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i think i would go sleep almost quarter 12...have a class early inthe morn..but if you are doing this tomorrow then i would love to join in

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the sorrow of a thousand moons
laying upon me in this room
the thoughts of loosing myself behind
is reignign my soul and all my mind

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good night people

dry moth
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sleep well <3

muted thicket
dry moth
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@glass portal That must be some dark place if these poems came from the heart🥺 ❤️. You write beautifully!!
I will probably copy these and keep them in a note, with the poet as you, to read again.
@muted thicket can't believe this is the first time you tried writing a poem🤯 . Sooo good7187_kannawave
And @dry moth that writing makes you get lost in the passage and feel the sadness🥺 ❤️ . It was amazing and 😢

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You all are sooo talented7187_kannawave 🙌
I can't write like this even if I sit all day long.

dry moth
candid blaze
muted thicket
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Just write whenever inspiration hits you

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I WANT TO WRITE TOO!

GIVE ME TOPIC!

glass portal
wraith summit
rough kraken
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rough kraken
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Rick rolled and bumped his head
And for once he has not said
Never gonna give you up, no
For he was the one down.
On top of the hill he jumped, so
Rick rolled until next dawn.

muted thicket
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wowoowow

rough kraken
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sorry it's a bit dark hehe

wraith summit
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it would be impoessible

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he is not giving heaven up

sand elbow
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hellow

rough kraken
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unarchiving potatojames

muted thicket
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i was wondering where this went

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why doth not he understand what comes out of mine mouth?
its simple
as simple
as counting on thy fingers
1
2
3
all i said
was
i like the way your hair looks today
and the way you smile
and the way you make those silly jokes
that make me laugh for a little while

@glass portal
NOT SHARING EVERYTHING
BUT DIS ONE NICE + MINE

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he shall not be known for the degrading thoughts lost in the vicinity of this ever evolving world
the thoughts of one running down the isle with blood red hands and cliche of killing knowledge is what ignites the rage
the rage is still not felt till the lastmoment of the allical devour and the pavenment leading to ones destruction
for thy shall cast upon the one who doth acknowlege his wrath and in the mercy of the secondary locked on dillusion
for people bein a man of materail and lust is the last thought of peeking through the gates of lauvre and thinketh one shant be worried on

rough kraken
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'tis but a graveyard for my brain

glass portal
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i came back home and bam this was on my mind

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your mind is beautiful 🤌

glass portal
dry moth
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YOU TALENTED MUNCHKIN

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MARRY ME??? /LH

glass portal
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lh is light hearted

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oh

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mhm

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yes gets married

muted thicket
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o

dry moth
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LMFAO

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jay×sahil doe

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well yes

muted thicket
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sahil cheatin

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oops

dry moth
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cheater omg

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funny how idc feelings lmao

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its all blur

muted thicket
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badboi

dry moth
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@muted thicket write something by fellow poet

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ok imma write a lil more

rough kraken
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the topic is marriage/divorce heheheh

glass portal
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hmph oki oki

dry moth
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divorce omg

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the shatter of glass inthe veins of her cold blooded mind and the vicinity of hatred
the lost keen life of one which shall never be recovered from the scars of this trauma it left
two people coming together in love and butterflies crawls on their spines of this long blur emotions
we tend to feel life's in control js for it to loose free once again in the depth of concealed mirages

starts the days with smile on face and really insights of kisses on her cheeks
the day moves fillin the rage only it to implode at the end of lifetime
she think the person is life but little she know death disguised in cocoons
it signifies its rage and devour her only leaviing a skeleton of emotionless crank

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@rough kraken

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done ♿

rough kraken
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this talented bean UWU

rough kraken
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imma write something that ppl might actually understand...but you guys have to wait for a day ot two,i'm not a genius like sahil conjuring words in a nick of time

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@glass portal

He doth not know
That he has a star in his eyes
That lures her to him
Every day and Every night
The star in his eyes

He doth not know
That his eyes are like a clear starry night
his eyes, like a deep blue ocean
his eyes, like a dense green forest
have a mystery
A mystery for her to solve

All she wants to do is talk

And by heard by him

but
He doth not know

glass portal
# muted thicket arre what what?

I do know the lust, the feels we do just in order for it to be crushed by this world of agony
Stars and glitter disguised under the blanket of thorns and spikes scarring you as you keep going on in life
Mind so exaggerated there's not a single soul for it to be defined of
The blueth dara of the ocean is what consume you in your darkest days leaden one unto the path for it to be defined of none
All I wanna do is enjoy the silence of this misty breeze underneath the oak tree we used to cry about

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muted thicket
# glass portal I do know the lust, the feels we do just in order for it to be crushed by this w...

i want to hear nothing
see nothing
feel nothing
but still exist

this life
this pity pity life
has hurt me so
making me want to fall off th cliff any second

but why
but why do you have to exist?
that pretty face of your
still lures me
that non chalant
happy happy
pretty pretty
laugh thou has
has anchored me to this world
forevermore

die
die before me you fool
so that thou shant exist
when mine existence finishes too
die
die before me you fool

for i shall not be able to die
till the time thou walks this cursed earth

wraith summit
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this is scary

muted thicket
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u want to kill that person cuz that person has pretty face?

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@glass portal
we need more

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ji

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that scare me plsss

candid blaze
muted thicket
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wraith summit
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I read the poem again and now its funny

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The way u said die die u fool

muted thicket
glass portal
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yeah and that oo

muted thicket
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bruh this thread cant die pls

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flying out through the spiral webs of richocheting life
not a single is livin happy in the world of chaos and ruin
wee see no signs of far out heaven for its hell all over with no life and dread
but ig we will make it out js in time for life to be enjoyed and love to be seen

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i think there is room to be radical in poetry, you can only get a few words in so each line has to pack a punch.. in the words of charles bukowski "bim bim bim!"

muted thicket
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hey

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wrote this in exam hall
after sci pre board lol

o' ye bird
perched atop the g8 oak
bring the words that my ears and heart yearn for
bring me the news from lands far and near

o' ye g8 wind
flowing hither and tither
bring me news of death
death of the soul i no longer want to care for
bring me news of death

o' ye g8 lands
bring me news
bring me the the news of the tyrant's fall
fall of who had troubled me for so long
bring me news that he hath fallen

muted thicket
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the stars , the clouds , the glimmer of light
the passionate breed of lustful lies
we see the heart of love and demise
dilemma of continum , the academia of highs

the moon , the dark , the shatter of nights
bringing me souls , to feed and abide
hurts to know it all in vain
for she love someone else , misery and suffice

the blood, the cuts , the devil on my right
feeding me grudge , to harrash me to die
i am already gone for it was in grave
calling out for help, i see no hand on rise

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this thread shall never die

muted thicket
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@plain dove
look what we do here

plain dove
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wtf is this hahahaha

glass portal
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we do poetry competition here

plain dove
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wait i like

glass portal
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all written in real time

plain dove
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can i send something

muted thicket
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plain dove
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roses are red
i think
I'm colorblind

muted thicket
muted thicket
glass portal
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this is real time less goo

plain dove
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muted thicket
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js defind being lost in mind

muted thicket
plain dove
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i liked it

glass portal
muted thicket
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
Vodka costs less
Than dinner for two

muted thicket
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nice one

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time to yeet gotta go somewhere

plain dove
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ye sorry was banning someone

glass portal
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imma be back after an hour , will reply to poetry then

plain dove
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🥺

glass portal
plain dove
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haha

glass portal
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lemme write

muted thicket
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poetry fight

muted thicket
plain dove
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"yes"

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hahah

glass portal
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it never meant to be
for my soul is deep buried in the hollow of this earth
pain crippling all over my body
seeing nothing but dark driven trolleys

ive been asked to take you they say
frightened my soul ran from this haze
in the midst of chaos and ruins of life
searching a new beginning, a meaning of this hide

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oki cy

plain dove
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omg i love this

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thats a nice ending

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or is it

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is it really an ending 😭

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is anything an ending 😭

muted thicket
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the life of an immortal
is of an endless torture
never going ahead nor behind
stuck in the shackles of time
it will stay evermore
is this the fate you wish for someone
that you love or abhor?

plain dove
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i cry as well

glass portal
muted thicket
plain dove
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i love how you guys interpret it and steer it somewhere else

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this should all be published

glass portal
plain dove
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i have an anonymous blog thingy

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where i wanted to write my thoughts

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but i only ever posted one thing

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lemme find it

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i think here we have about 15 to 10 already , u can use then if u want

muted thicket
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I'LL BE BACK IN 15MINS MAX.
WRITE A PART TILL THEN
@glass portal

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im going out pls

muted thicket
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@muted thicket
try continuing

glass portal
plain dove
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theres only one post as i said

muted thicket
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wow

plain dove
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and will prob delete the link in a bit btw so 👀

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it never happened ok, there was never a link haha

muted thicket
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the handwriting is so pretty 🥺

plain dove
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thank you :((

muted thicket
plain dove
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ye its just thoughts i have but i forgot to keep posting skjdfgsd

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u should post more

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i love that

plain dove
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i'll try

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haha

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@muted thicket @glass portal i did it

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it's a continuation of navya's

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plain ridge
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AAAHH

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huh

muted thicket
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Ha

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The closure of breaths in the wink of an ever lasting epitome
The congour of thoughts in the midst of ruins of love
The hardwoven ties of rage in the vicinity of metracia
Blurring out the words for it to be a invincibility of hysteria

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Istg this is not gibberish OK... Try to decode

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o'ye @glass portal

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,

wraith summit
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aaah yes. i remember that stuff

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the treacheous soul of one devouring my hand in the scars of the abyss
the longing pain of one's crust of howling winds
the call of the sea by the midst of night interstating every thought of death
and the final leap into the unkown treachory of land of the undead

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wah

glass portal
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actually im goonna

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the light of eternal youth rising upon the deemed beauty of the child
the scenery of everlasting rejuvence in the joyfull aroma of thoughts
the mountains embering new born on its way to life of intricate complexities
just so you know a boy is born with lights in his eyes and outcasted shimmer amidst the rise

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Who is the treacherous soul

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Or treacheous.

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Is it death personified?

glass portal
muted thicket
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as when he removed his mask
like a warrior on the battle field
with the feeling of victory flowing through his veins
his face as red as his own blood
and full of the waters of toil
that is what i want to be
happy
elated
with success
with accomplishment

@glass portal

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muted thicket
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the carves of the impicits cuts in his hands
the thousands splender snatched upon the rising veins
the warm blood raging through the impeccable heart
yet i stand here unconscious, undelusional and slashed off highs

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@muted thicket

glass portal
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second line is well a girl simping on his veins lol

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the third is the warmth u feel when u see someone in ur heart

muted thicket
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it does

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imperfection is part of love

muted thicket
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its not all sunshine yk

muted thicket
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ye

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thats why i added that line

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i really wanna write for some publication , maybe in college ill do : D

glass portal
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ye ye ill improve too

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js need to study vocab, poetic devices and different rhyme schemes but no time rn

muted thicket
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i feel no pressure writing it all

muted thicket
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candid blaze
muted thicket
candid blaze
# muted thicket yeah didi

After boards also you can find those ig. Chd must have some hosted every now and then. Pec students must be hosting many of those

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muted thicket
wraith summit
candid blaze
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@wraith summit
THEY DONT KNOW THAT I DO

glass portal
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so u r parents know and her parents know

muted thicket
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tell them ur a poet in disguis and that u work for the biritsh government

glass portal
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we left that biz in 1947

wraith summit
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aaah shit when did u guys leave. why didnt u call me. am i the only one here

muted thicket
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,

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!

candid blaze
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=

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~

wraith summit
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This is the poetry i ve been waiting for

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to us it euphoria still

wraith summit
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Such simple signs but deep meaning that i won't and will never be able to interpret

candid blaze
glass portal
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Bang bang

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Pew pew

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wrote a shit deleted it all

glass portal
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Dude why it's so hard to make windows 11 Bootable

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its still unstable

glass portal
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Fr

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I'm stuck on 97 percent

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windows always get stuck on a number. and then suddenly goes to 100.

muted thicket
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&

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fel gud

glass portal
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my windows 10 cumulative update once took 2 hours. if ur installing windows 11 or updating, there are chances of it happening

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Finally bypassed it, it's installing now

wraith summit
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^

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hmmmmmmmmmmm

glass portal
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slip slop tock crock

candid blaze
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Bippity boppity boo

plain dove
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new blog post

rough kraken
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your handwriting 🤩

plain dove
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hehehe

wraith summit
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Big bang small fang

glass portal
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the presence of apathy in the menace of the chaos
the broken promises and apalogies on the edge of a blunt knife
still we keep waiting and waiting and waiting
does it even make sense of things to cry in the sewers of sorrows?

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,

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~

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wow exam got me not able to write poetries

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the facade of crucides driving me to madness
the queues of this wait on the road of frosting snow
the numbness in my hand in the middle of the haze
the fogging up of mind and blood pumping through my veins

today's the day for i shall confide
my future, my past , my present and demise
the chains of the cues buried deep within eyes
looking for the person to hold up and call you mine

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Suddenly in silence they born,
and steadily in silence they fade away.

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1

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staying at my place
crying an ocean just to let you die
chilling on my couch listening to metal
js when I hear a crash of clashing metals

and what if i told
worlds falling apart and nothing made sense
the craving and dilemma of this lost journey
for me to be lost just when its time

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To dance with death, a dream
to swim in the red river, euphoria
To jump off the hill named life,
A dream, A want

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a dream reminiscing in the dark
under the creaking stairs of the old broken darts
for death is lurking in the shadows of my life
edging on this ride startling my chilling crine

muted thicket
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Andwobble!
Pigloaf bandoofle binklippofill!
Frauphurber zintwhistle?
Grandistloader quientofritz ing bloy-bloy?
Bloy exastipation grilp...
Pisstooberint candorting andwobble.
Andwobble.
Andwob...ob...obble
Andwah...
Ah.
-chris thurlow

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glass portal
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im thinking of something so dark to write on but cant find it

muted thicket
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candid blaze
muted thicket
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I've been crying myself to sleep for the past 3 days
or 3 months
who knows?
who cares?

Ive got so much to tell
so much to speak
so much to talk about
does anyone care?

ive been crying for days, crying for weeks
longing to not be me

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@glass portal

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yes no one cares
the world moves on for the anarchy of this dread
its about time you find someone who does
someone who sits and talk , letting go of your leaden heart

i can feel myself looking theough the glass
the glitters, the shatters, the lustre of the stars
once a golden tear dropped of my cheeks
felt the bittersweet pain and joy of this henderous rains

yes it dont last , it dies and rot
i see myself crying on couch , scarring myself , cuttin all clouds
the dream that they showed when i was a little kid
crumble before my eyes for its all starting to reminiscent

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@candid blaze i found my dark surrealism , its heironymous bosch paintinds . he painted a lot of nighmare paintings which are extremely detailed and belong to 19th cenutry europe, perfect

candid blaze
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Truly horrific😃

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😃

muted thicket
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Hello peepa

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*peeps

muted thicket
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@muted thicket here!

muted thicket
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Okay i wanna write a poem
Give me a topic

muted thicket
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Here we go
In the dark night sky
There was the moon shining so bright
And a little star twinkling near by
The star asked a question to the moon
‘All eyes at you .....
Is it a curse or a boon ?’
Moon replied with a smile
‘If you are the one shining out of millions
With ur good deeds ,enjoy all the pride ‘
If the shine is fake it dies
And no one can tell where it died .

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Light glimmer across the streets
The stars crushing golden dust
On the pale moonlight of this shivering night
The lights auring up the air
For its Christmas spirit heading jolly upon everyone

frosty rivet
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@acoustic meteor

muted thicket
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What is the condition of a paradise?

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but do you know a fairy?
been dreaming away.
Heat and run,
Oh my wandering son.
To my dear universe,
I hear the sunspot
But I cannot reach you.
If I could, I would ask
What did you eat today?
The heart of Thomas, you'd say.
Sweet blue flowers,
bloom into you.
What is the condition of a paradise?
That blue sky feeling,
And the sweet blue flowers.
Whisper me a love song,
I want you to stay a little long.
There are things I can't tell you now
But maybe will just let it go.
Our dreams at dusk, our dreams at dusk.

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—made a poem out of LGBTQIA+ manga titles

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—And another one that I wrote yesterday

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(Through) your eyes

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What does your world look like?
Is it deary or is it scary?
I wish I could see it through your eyes,
Then I would know what your world is like.

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—it's incomplete tho.

acoustic meteor
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Ok guys i'm preparing a thing idk what exactly and it may looks weird but i hope you'll like it

acoustic meteor
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Here is a poem I called:

Dust

I see myself, constantly fading into dust,
Whil. I’m looking at my hand, my fing.rs, I s.. dust,
flo.ting, slowly, up to the c.iling, th. sky, som.wh.r. …

I d.n't kn.w why, h.w, .r if it’s r..l .r n.t. I just f..l lik. it is. but sinc. n. .n. .ls.
s..ms t. s.. it t.., th. d.ubt t.k.s pl.c. ..d th. dust g.ts sw.pt u.d.r th. rug.

.f .’m b...g h…st d.ys .r w..ks p.ss.d b.tw... ..ch ..d .v.ry l… ..d p.r.gr.ph.
.’m f.ll.w..g my d.ct.r’s pr.scr.pt..., t.k..g my m.ds f.r .ll th. c..d.t...s .’m suff.r..g fr.m ..p..g f.r r.sults t..t w.ll ..v.r c.m. .

. just ...l.z.d t..t m.yb. t.. f.m.us v..s. “.ll c.m. f..m t.. dust ..d .ll ..tu.. t. t.. dust” w.s ..t t.lk..g .b.ut d..d b.d..s g.tt..g bu...d, but ..f..s t. T..S !

W.’.. … dust, ..t …y my f..g..s, my …ds, .. just mys..f but .v..y...!
t.. m... . f.cus t.. m... . s... .t’s ..t .b.ut m.d.c.t… .. ..y c..d.t…s t.. dust ..v.. st.ps!

.. m.tt.. t.. p…s, t.. t….p..s, .. p.…s .’m st.y..g t. ..st. T.. DUST .s ..w.ys t…. .. .v..y s..g.. b…g!

… .pp…..g .t .s t. b. t.. …y .... ..t..ss .f t..s s….t, v....us, ..d ..v.s.b.. .…..…

.. …t ..y .. . d.ff....t?

...'t . just d.. ..k. .v…... ..s.? .. .g……. .f t..s g….. s… t..t .u.bs .. ...d ..st..d .f .. b.d..

T..s. .….s .f DUST... ..… d. t… ..?

... … . k…, … . s.., t..y ..v.. .. d… …

...

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.s . t.y t. f…s. t..s. f.. t..u..ts, . ..t… .. u.s...k.b.. …… t..t t.. DUST ..s st….d ...v… .., . just tu…d 27.

ENDust...

acoustic meteor
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for any questions ping and/or dm me^^

acoustic meteor
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Here's another one since i couldn't find sleep

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I’m I a stalker?

I’ve spent and keep spending time trying to convince myself that I’m not.
But at the same time, I can’t imagine a month, a week, even a day, without being aware of her.
I don’t know. I don’t care about what she is doing where, when, and with who.

She literally saved me from a jump. I just want to keep a promise I’ve made to her a few months after we met
“I will always be there for you, no matter the cost, no matter if our path tears up apart, no matter if it leads me to my tomb, I will.”

Maybe I was dumb, maybe. Some people told me so.
I just think she was the chosen one in my personal life adventure.
The mighty heroine who was supposed to brighten my desperately grayscaling life.

And for a while she was. She gave me all the colors I could ever dream of.
In return, I was the Pierrot, always creating new characters, new jokes, new ways of messing around.

Now I’m craving for a picture of her life, to see her joyful face.
I’m standing in front of my screen searching everywhere for her.
But she is nowhere to be found.

Breaking up with someone is like losing her forever.
I don’t need a lot, just proof that she is still alive!
I need to honor my words

I Never promise anything I can’t do
This is the one breach in my mind.
I can’t be there for a dead, what would be the point?
I’m in denial, I won’t accept that, I can’t accept that.

I don’t want her back in my life and I suppose she thinks the same,
she must live a better life without me as a burden.
But these words I’ve said once are deadweights and if I don’t respect them there is no reason for me to stay sane.
Since she passed away physically and virtually a lock took place on my emotions.

Since then I lost the ability to cry.

I can hear some of your thought which says that I should move on.
Trust me I've tried, but I’m an old-fashioned man and as Davy Jones,
My heart has been buried and my hopes with it.

acoustic meteor
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wb the first one did u get allthe layers ?

muted thicket
muted thicket
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but tbf i dont think it can be solvable, i mean without the answer next to me i would have surrendered too xD

acoustic meteor
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thx^^

muted thicket
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ayy that is pretty good you know
i mean that is absolutely mind blowing
good job!!
did you write the poem or just removed layers?

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“I don't believe in magic.'
The young boy said.
The old man smiled.
'You will when you see her.”
― Atticuspoetry

acoustic meteor
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for those who are interested here's the unlocked version of Dust

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Dust

I see myself, constantly fading into dust,
While I’m looking at my hand, my fingers, I see dust,
floating, slowly, up to the ceiling, the sky, somewhere...

I don't know why, how, or if it’s real or not. I just feel like it is, but since no one else seems to see it too,
the doubt takes place and the dust gets swept under the rug.

If I’m being honest days or weeks passed between each and every line and paragraph.
I’m following my doctor’s prescription, taking my meds for all the conditions I’m suffering from hoping for results that will never come.

I just realized that maybe the famous verse “All came from the dust and all return to the dust” was not talking about dead bodies getting buried, but refers to THIS!

We’re all dust, not only my fingers, my hands, or just myself but everyone!
the more I focus the more I see. It’s not about medication or any conditions the dust never stops!

No matter the pills, the therapies, or places I’m staying to rest. The DUST is always there on every single being!

How appalling it is to be the only one. Witness of this silent, vicious, and invisible horror…

In what way am I different?

Can't I just die like everyone else? In ignorance of this gloomy snow that numbs my mind instead of my body.

These grains of DUST... where do they go?

For all I know, all I see, they never go down…


As I try to finish these few thoughts, I notice in unspeakable horror that the dust has stopped leaving me, I just turned 27.

muted thicket
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LMAO dust original unlocked

glass portal
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Hnph imma give up writing

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Duck is the new leader

acoustic meteor
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and my texts kinda suck to me

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@rough kraken the fuck are u doing here hidden ? i don't wanna be bricked

glass portal
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Lies

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U write amazing

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Imma take my time and perfect one single poetry this time

rough kraken
glass portal
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I'll post of 1st Jan

acoustic meteor
glass portal
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I write mostly in real time

rough kraken
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See, a leader

glass portal
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Like I'll type it out and send

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No I'm no. Leader

rough kraken
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Leaders

glass portal
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Just a metaphor in this society of dead poets

acoustic meteor
glass portal
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Integration it=it square /2

rough kraken
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They are not

acoustic meteor
rough kraken
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I am the reader and I say it’s good. End of story

glass portal
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Imagine giving an exam and now half of class know the answer :

acoustic meteor
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this isn't math there is no one answer

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xD

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lucky me

rough kraken
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But ducky you forgot a z in my poems👀

glass portal
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Pleo teacher mikascreen

rough kraken
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Hehehe sorry

acoustic meteor
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and grammar

rough kraken
acoustic meteor
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and rules

glass portal
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I like grammar

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anarchy

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iz ze way

glass portal
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Gn gn

glass portal
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We look into those eyes
Loosing myself and life around
Diving into the trench
So lost it wouldnt be found

Looking for love in strangers
Wandering the streets, the garden of stawns
The sinful thoughts of living so fast
Drinking in days, and snuffing all night

Metaphor the craze , the touch so glazed it shouldn't be dimed
Your hands like silk
The marbles of crips
The memory of this glass
And the spikes of broken hearts

You'llfeel my love
My hate my crimes
Cuts of shattered dreams
And sinicity of bleeding walls

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I wonder if I know him
In whose speech is my voice,
In whose movement is my being,
Whose skill is in my lines,
Whose melody is in my songs
In joy and sorrow.
I thought he was chained within me,
Contained by tears and laughter,
Work and play.
I thought he was my very self
Coming to an end with my death.
Why then in a flood of joy do I feel him
In the sight and touch of my beloved?
This 'I' beyond self I found
On the shores of the shining sea. ---Rabindranath Tagore

muted thicket
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The silence in me
Beyond the heartbeat
The sound of air and blood
Feeding the body
You can hear me
The silence in me
||Death,death,death||
Lies hidden in that silence

@glass portal there u go

wicked sinew
muted thicket
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The grass is green across the hill,
But yellow blooms the daffodil.
It's sunshine on a little stalk,
A friendly flower, I bet they talk...

Of little kids, too long inside
They burst outdoors to play and hide.
Tracking mud and bringing bugs.
Look, there's footprints on the rug!

Tiny whirlwinds, these little tykes,
They skin their knees while riding bikes.
They rip and roar, they're running wild!
What fun it is to be a child.

It grows warmer every day.
Shoo the children out to play!
Pick the flowers, play in mud.
Too much rain, here comes a flood!

My snowy, winter days are gone.
I mourn them, but I hear a song
Of birds in trees; wind chimes ring.
I guess it might as well be spring!

wicked sinew
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Barely existin', ain't living

Bodies these days

Striving, weeping, concludin'

Neither joy nor Contentment did ever hit here.

Even him on the left got it all best,

Wholly rewarded, ain't trying his best

Hurdles got crossed, ain't following your steps,

glass portal
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The epotic swirls of the Swan on the hill
The cherrious gloss of peary nights
Listening to waves of this breeze amidst silence
The serenity of spuless camps in cursade dogma

muted thicket
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Beyond the path without you
is a forgotten promise to keep.

We may have walked side by side,
but now we go on back to back.

And though our paths may not cross,
all paths are connected somewhere.

When I arrive at where you are,
we may not appear to be as we were...

But we'll make another promise to keep.

wicked sinew
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Quack quack
I like to play blackjack
With my mate jack black
Quack quack

I am a quacky boi
Let's go make some noice
Quack glock In dahouse
Bathtubs filled with rubber ducks .
Squeaky squeaky is the new black

wicked sinew
muted thicket
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check here tp u might find smthin @muted thicket

muted thicket
muted thicket
muted thicket
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Deeper than mariana trench

woven quest
strange dagger
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hi so i just joined this thread how do we play?

muted thicket
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hi so i just joined this thread how do we play? x2

woven quest
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just have to send your pieces of poetry i suppose

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lmao im new too but this has been dead eversince

glass portal
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pray for all this pain to be lost
for delecacy of sorceres hand
for lustre of a thousand splendid stars
and creed of this enigma of life

your prayer shall be heard
for life is merciful in midst of pain and cruds
you shall give up, or rise above
this deliquent dream of glass threaded bloke

strange dagger
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i also just wrote something it’s complete but here u go

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scathing little thing, you wear out the envy in the glass water bottle
a fortunate forbidden fruit of this house,
you split the mirrors with your untouched sound
i am what protrudes from the tip of your nails
the wretched seething soul forming a shapeless shape

glass portal
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somehow youre writing style matches mine

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amazing

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we both be using a lot of metaphors

strange dagger
strange dagger
glass portal
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the sequenting souls of this crux of life
the middle of nowhere we both sit tight
look into the sea of heavenly smiles
the dark , the dreary of cold blue highs

glass portal
strange dagger
strange dagger
strange dagger
glass portal
glass portal
strange dagger
woven quest
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woah

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deep meanings

strange dagger
woven quest
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its amazing, both of you

glass portal
strange dagger
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aa thanks

glass portal
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the thing is i can go on for way long butidk

strange dagger
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haha go on try maybe

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might be better than u r expecting rn

glass portal
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hahah but its your turn rn

strange dagger
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aah oookay

strange dagger
glass portal
strange dagger
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wdym by drausta here?

woven quest
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can i ask you all something?

glass portal
glass portal
woven quest
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how do you guys make poetry?

strange dagger
woven quest
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i mean this stuff is phenomenal

strange dagger
glass portal
woven quest
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when and how did you all start

strange dagger
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you strt by writing gibrish proceed onto write more gibrish end up writing less gibrish

woven quest
glass portal
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write gubrish so deep that it becomes meaningful

woven quest
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i have a decent grip on the language but i cant ever get myself to get poems out like you do

strange dagger
woven quest
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aight imma start trying

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how do you start tho

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i mean is there certain topics you choose and start thinking or is it random

strange dagger
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for me usually something or some phrase or line clicks then we write it down

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u dont always need a certain topic or theme

woven quest
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i see

strange dagger
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just write about anything

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like strt by saying i love the colour blue

strange dagger
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thats a good strt

woven quest
strange dagger
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but obv im no one to like know everything so ehh this might all jsut not make sense

strange dagger
woven quest
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rome wasnt built in a day

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thanks for your advicee

strange dagger
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anytime pls

glass portal
woven quest
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but they dont seem to come out of my head

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i cant put them together like you do

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the vocab

glass portal
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dont force it , be easy

woven quest
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atleast that way, at somepoint ill make something useful

glass portal
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yea

muted thicket
glass portal
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Beep bop

static igloo
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Been pulled down,

Beaten and invalidated.

In tandem, over and over again.

A product of denial and sin.

Red on me, red on my actions.

Schadenfreude,

Oh, how I wish.

Retrouvaille.

You’re so far away.

Why you had to go and not stay?

La douleur exquise.

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Kind of all over the place but that's the ambedo of poetry in my opinion

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Its structure is entirely arbitrary

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It's an expression and only man who deems themselves critiques of such structure constitute of what's "perfect" in poetry

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*critics

muted thicket
glass portal
glass portal
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Fire in the lungs
Ablaze are all my words
The breath of listening the ocean cry
The fire blaze in tyranny of heirs

glass portal
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How it feels to loose someone
I wish I never knew it hurts in the core
The squint of clashing thunder of the shore
And the pain of dark nights of this chore

My days were blank and night a sober clause
Illicit ember in the mind amidst this Dread
Sequent colours of a dying person's bed
Is enough to break the greatest of men

But hey! , we push still in hope of grace
In light of this flora and the waves of the haze
The savoury smell of leaves in the dark
The glyceryl touch of moss in the broken shattered flass

You really think it's easy to shift my mind
But mind, O mind listen to this heart
It sees only pain and sorrow in these shards
Yes I might be wrong ,after all games are in my brain
But sure it hurts so bad and pain is fresh in this angst of loosing grace

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yet you never know how its bonds
my scars alone inside my head
nothing left to do in this dreadful world of craves
surrounded by strangers in a pity party of overgrown teens

youll see it really dont work
i die for you , yet you demise to live for me
cuts up on my arms , the blades you sewn into my soul
it hurts till the end and i smile just to bear the pain

yet i let you inside , under my broken skin
the latter of the smoke thus caused
choking on my words i said that night
you wont regret living by my side

it works , it might not
youll find me hanging on the floor of the room 38
youll cry ik but how long will that last
days ?maybe nights reminiscing my past and future of cost

your'e my ride or die
that what you said when we first met
ig i died for you but you ride off with cret
you wont find me next to you now
it wont hurt, it wont scratch the veins of sequenting devil's frown

muted thicket
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this is awesome @glass portal
you are getting loads better at this

muted thicket
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i hope everthing's alright tho hehe

glass portal
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welll..... XD

muted thicket
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f s you worked hard on this

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i don't think i would be able to do this
good job 🔥

glass portal
muted thicket
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🙏.

glass portal
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Im working on a real piece tho huhuh

muted thicket
glass portal
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ill copy emm one day

muted thicket
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chalo sone jao bye

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gn

glass portal
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gn

glass portal
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question my life , so are my thoughts
looking through the haze in the valleys of helma cross
the stars are glazing my soul in the disruptive aura
answering all my love , the gaze of thougnum flora

i walk upon the rocks , hyming the songs of the dead
feets sinking down , so is the misery of this dread
the golden masked eagle guide my way to the south
glycening my mind with ease , I follow him through this drought

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to be continued....

glass portal
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the sunken feet shivers my spine
the dilemma of loosing faith through the spirits of undead souls
the cripple smile of the screams of past
yet so wise and pondering in haze

drops of dew on the path thee walk
the blades of the crunken solicit cross
the undead shall rise objecting choice of baith
Shall question my mind with naura , the delusion of faith

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arc 1 ended : the soul is still trapped in the valleys , questioned by the mortals of the this undead land arc 2 : he shall find the answers or be trapped in this ethopia

glass portal
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damned are my thoughts to condemn for all my sins
heavy mind aching under the oath of unspoken grieving pain
reminiscing is my blood from the burns of these scars
the trapped souls screeching me down in crunken berosen

look for faith in the oblivion
forge thy soul with chaos and reign
so broken are ties of future and the past
Free thy from this misery of unclausing pain and wrath

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arc 2 : answers are still blurry, is it faith ? or its just his words trapping him down , he's trying to find the answers for the same

glass portal
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thy shall condemn in this land of undead cruxes
tarnished soul must be cleaned of dirt and million roaches
so shall he pray, devouring his faith into the void
still unknown of the faith he had lost, in creasing pain and vulgaring clause

His legs are no more bound
sink of the sand is frozen in time
glycening through the amend he had fought
Paved are his ways to the myst in the frown

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arc 2 ended : he had been freed and now shall walk towards the myst in the the glora creek arc 3 : he is visited by someone , we shall find it in this arc as we progress

glass portal
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The dark knight standing in the eerie shadows on the clemence
yet so hazed under the demise and sorrow of this fenacity
tarnished shall speak for his sins in cradle of lies
blazing eyes of the red wrathing dragon greeting thee down with all of his might

yet he see the flame unbroken
clustering was his mind and lustering all that's floken
moved by the aura , he praises the ending brones
shivering him by his feet and flying away in the azure

acoustic meteor
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There are rifts that cannot be closed.
Wounds that cannot be healed.
Flaws that cannot be corrected.
And others that you don't notice until it's too late.

There are those that haunt you, invisible
and which suddenly reappear implacable.
They take you by the throat and grip your heart,
While you abandon yourself to the scarlet veil which covers your sight.

They never leave you.
Even if you think you have forgotten them,
A simple image, a simple sign, a simple word;
And your defences crumble, leaving you exposed.

Time is unforgiving,
And sooner or later, you have to face it.

glass portal
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the scenes reminiscing in my conscience
giving on a deep sense of regret under the gloom of this aura
the hermit hitting the hammer under the cloak of thundering daylight
scrotching my heart with the beats of the flourishing tale

the battle lost on the shore of jutenheilm
thousands dead yet living in the past of the lands
the blood shed on the satin of mother
satan can yet be seen lurking in the dark eager about the rage which drives the human race

years have passed yet the battle cry never ends
thumping of the million feet hitting grounds of the undead
the tears ricocheting in midst of the day
under the grazing stars shall find the truth of this vicarious slaughter