I feel like someone is missing

[chrome moat]

Pls tell me what I’m missing like does it need to be longer? Maybe remove transitions and add more of him? Pls

[thorn glacier]

I feel like it's perfect the way it is buttttt the clips kinda feel stiff if u know what I mean.. like it needs like a transition between them I believe 😋😋

[chrome moat]

Between what?