bye bye 🤫🧏♂(what should I add?)

[cosmic roost]

Your edit is very repetitive I think you should vary the pacing, the shakes, the warp, etc

And add zoom ins and zoom outs to add more motion, especially because of the fact that it's manga so you need to have a lot of varied and good transitions to make up for the lack of movement

[candid horizon]

It’s already zooming out

[candid horizon]

It seems repetitive because I did a loop

[neat ledge]

well also all of your transitions and effects r the same

thats what makes it repetitive not the loop

[cosmic roost]

your shakes and yea, all the directions re the same

its almost monotnous to watch because its literally like watching the same thing over and over again but with different pictures

[candid horizon]

Yea I did use the same effects

Im not good with shakes for manga edits

[candid horizon]

@neat ledge @cosmic roost is this better

[neat ledge]

id recommend looking into more transitions then just zoom out experiment with your effect and transitions because again it's pretty repetitive

[cosmic roost]

It's still all the same zooming out

Change up direction and pace sometimes

[candid horizon]

This one I just made I tried doing different directions

@neat ledge @cosmic roost It’s still a loop but I changed the movement

[cosmic roost]

You didn't really, a different shake is good but it's still all zoom outs

That's the movement we're talking about, just learn different and more creative transitions

[candid horizon]

Alr imma try even tho it’s harder on cc

[cosmic roost]

there are a lot of really good editors on cc but you should switch

[candid horizon]

I’m good at flow edits but not manga panel or youth shake and other sh

Getting better at animating manga

[cosmic roost]

cool send a flow edit

[candid horizon]

not really flow but

@cosmic roost @neat ledge

Ig it is

[cosmic roost]

It's not a flow edit

There's no links

[candid horizon]

@cosmic roost ts is an old one I made

This is actually

a flow edit

This too

[cosmic roost]

Your clips are kinda too choppy

Twixtor them

And your velo is not that great either

But the links make sense

[cosmic roost]

This one is good

But flow edits should have pretty fast velo

[candid horizon]

this is my best one I did time remap