Still learning give me ideas to improve pls

[halcyon musk]

I made this on mobile app is alight motion
Any idea or opinion will be appreciated:)

[grand thorn]

use some overlays

this should be good like this edit video

[halcyon musk]

Like??

[grand thorn]

it is good for begining

[halcyon musk]

Oo any other suggestions?

[crisp plover]

Better then your previous edit I like that rotation with his eye. Only thing i'd change is the intro I feel its a bit plane and boring. Maybe just adding a position to the exact manga text of him saying what he's saying.

[halcyon musk]

Yeah I agree