Learning, wanted advice to improve my edits

[floral orbit]

do you think you need advertise

what a chad

[tawdry wave]

No.. I just want to get better

[dawn crag]

the timeremap has a lot of warps

and it's kinda stiff

[tawdry wave]

I didn't understand what u meant by stiff

Do i need to make it go in a single flow

Kinda

[dawn crag]

lacks movement

[tawdry wave]

Okay

[dawn crag]

the edit overall has good ideas

just needs better execution

[tawdry wave]

Thank you

Yes ill try to get better

I don't like the flashy stuff

Do u have any ideas for better movement that i can adopy

Adopt

[dawn crag]

add some kindof

wiggling s_shake

and change the values for the slide

[tawdry wave]

I already added that... Actually

In some scenes...

Ill add it more then

[tawdry wave]

Yes i will

[dawn crag]

idk if u added cc

ion rlly know how the clip looks

[tawdry wave]

I did add it

[dawn crag]

i mean the basic one

[dawn crag]

ye then it's cool

needs flicker tho

[tawdry wave]

I added a basic flicker in most scenes

I decreased the value to make it less noticeable

Was that a bad idea

[dawn crag]

prolly ye

[tawdry wave]

Okay... Ill try to do that next time

Please do let me know if there are other concepts i need to work on

Thank you for helping me out btw

[dawn crag]

basics

ig

[tawdry wave]

Okay ill watch more tutorials...

I guess im rushing the learning process

[dawn crag]

maybe

idk

since when uve been editing

?

[tawdry wave]

Since jan

[dawn crag]

alr

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This is my 7th one

I don't get much time to work on it... Trying to balance everything at the moment 😅

[whole bronze]

I'm a personal lover for these emotional edits and these sort of comical like style. Showing the whole story of a chracter full through. Only thing i'd change are those eye transitions at the start. You should add opacity to each scene then with the next exact frame and scene then match it up with a null, positioned and scaled so it looks super smooth and almost seamless.