rate my edit

[fallen verge]

8/10 very good

[noble rain]

thanks for rating tell me how to make it a 10/10 like tell me whats bad and what should i add and stuuf

[fallen verge]

Idk I'm not a pro idk how to give advice on edits

[noble rain]

okay can u give me a simple reason why its not a 10 or something

just trying to fix my edits uk

[fallen verge]

Too short

[noble rain]

bet bet but in total is the edit smooth and looks good?

[fallen verge]

Yea to me

[noble rain]

bet bet ty

[full cairn]

sorry what?

honestly 0/10 bro Like. Even the one effect you used which was some rgb effect you didn't even use much of it so it just looks super dull and plane. The random postion and half cut off bit. I can see you were experimenting with one framers that work really well but with the type of song and scene you need way more going on and movement.

[fallen verge]

Nitro are u fr...

0/10 is too harsh

[full cairn]

Bro.

Its 5 seconds worth of an edit

[fallen verge]

He's not done

[full cairn]

actually 3 seconds

[full cairn]

oooo

[noble rain]

wdym dull and wheres the half cut and can you show me like a good edit so u can try to edit like him

[full cairn]

also tf u mean "him"

this is for your own edits

[noble rain]

this is offset

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hZuaVIEXrOI&t=117s

and what about the movement what should i add?

[full cairn]

ok well the first thing i see is the dude blurred it which is also a thing u could of done

well ad more scene collection. Maybe have her doing some crazy attack. Make the edit longer with the song because tbh it sounded like it was about to get really good but suddenly ended ;(( just honestly add more clips tbh. I just didn't personally like the offset

[noble rain]

u mean like it's bad because its short?

[full cairn]

well yeah. Just finish it i'd say if you were to make it that short I would of instead looped it and only rendered it to a certain point

[noble rain]

sure i will do that

[full cairn]

bet bet

sorry if i came across a bit harsh