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[onyx oriole]

wasted my time hella on this

[gleaming cairn]

Maybe add a little song behind the voice

cuz here the audio feels a bit empty yk

also your texts are missing caps

"I been going"

[proud tendon]

def like it without caps tbh

i think its overall pretty great man this isnt a waste of time

[gleaming cairn]

Caps where it needs only

Not everywhere ofc

[proud tendon]

ohh understandable

[forest plinth]

posterize time effect might look good for some parts

[forest plinth]

i disagree

the audio matches with the edit

not all edits need super overused songs

[onyx oriole]

true yea

i got lazy asl w the time remapping especially at the end posterize time woulda compensated

what would u rate this outta 10 tho i seen ur being hella honest

[forest plinth]

very inspired islandy, some graphs are smooth however i think the graphs would look better if they were more choppy and sharp.

overall maybe like 6-7/10

[gleaming cairn]

Never said that, I said it was a bit empty

Means he should maybe add some sfxs

[rustic crescent]

fr I think there just needs to be a bit more sound effects or something to make the edit a bit more intersting. But other then that it's very clean and fits well.