#Looking for feedback for this edit.

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shy pivot
vale bough
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i like the idea and your sound selection
a few things seems off, some notes might be out of key? unless it was by choice
and something about the bass, im not too thecnical so im not sure but it doesnt hit for me, like it has too much sidechain?

shy pivot
viral sphinx
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Play with chords that gel around the vocal eg, E, F#m, G#m. (Eb dim 5ths), That's just a guide, ultimately if it sounds right...

shy pivot
viral sphinx
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Original opus III key was C#m, so A, C Dm will fit

shy pivot
shy pivot
viral sphinx
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C#m is a tricky key, not many songs that use it, however it can be a useful link between 2 keys harmonically mixing