#This is my totally unfinished track, but i need some feedbacks.. Should i put more things in it?

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placid escarp
radiant wing
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Play at 1.25 it has a tech beat also some low drops in there

gritty thorn
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Nice track, I like the idea. Some things that came to mind : I feel like the vocal is a bit out of tune at some points, probably the chord progression that you're playing? Also, on the drop I think that the vocal and the lead synth are clashing, because it's two busy things playing at the same time

honest sky
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Lead is too much on the drop