Pretty sure this is finished but any feedback would be much appreciated.
#Made this remix of Camila Cabello's "Shameless".
floral ruin
foggy wedge
Pretty sure this is finished but any feedback would be much appreciated.
i fuck w the bass, at 0:57 it sounds like the drums get cut off and it sounds a bit wierd also feel like the transition into the breakdown is a bit too quick and sudden also feel like it needs more in the breakdown feels a bit boring maybe add some more drones and add strings that follows the reese bass melody, for the build try adding just a generic lead synth and have it filtering it up until the end of the build and then cut it off, try cutting off the end bit of the vocal where it says "to" on the drop so then the drop hits harder, i love the synth alot and what youve done with it, feel like at 2:03 or 2 bars after the drop hits u should add back the full drums along with some white noise to make it hit harder, regarding the drums i feel like they need to be alot fuller and are a too empty right now and quite boring, at 2:30 when the vocal kicks back in try getting rid of the vocal and instead just have the first note of the reese bass play with a low cut and some sidechain for 8 bars or if that doesnt sound good just a drone and atmosphere too hint the next breakdown is coming, and then have the vocal kick back in with just the reese bass or the bassline and kick whatever sounds better in ur opinion, try starting snare roll at 3:31 or add something to show it proggressing because right now its not proggresing as much as it should imo and needs more, i really like this track just needs some work imo 🙌
floral ruin
Thank you very much for the feedback! On hols at the mo but will have a closer look and implement what you've written. 😉