#New ID thoughts?

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queen niche
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More up to date version ^^^

errant relic
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love the vocals and reese bass but i feel like the drums come in very like out of nowhere try add a riser or like have the drums filtered with the reverb or something like that, i love the use of the we do what we want sample very groovy, i feel like the build could use more than just that riser, aswell as on the drop it doesnt really pack the punch and doesnt really feel like a drop try putting some more vocal chops and maybe having the first part of the drop just the kick maybe but thats just my opinion, sick track tho i really like it and i think it has alot of potential :)

queen niche
errant relic
queen niche
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maybe it is 👁️

errant relic
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maybe try a different font on why

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bc its not really standing out

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try swap the fonts

queen niche
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okok

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need to recentre some stuff

errant relic
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yeah that looks better but fix it to the middle

errant relic
queen niche
errant relic
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yeah much better

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maybe try putting something in that little space at the bottom maybe

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or makking the image bigger

queen niche
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this is the latest version btw, finished the full track added some more risers like you said

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still need to add a mid bass but its really hard to find something that sits right with this sample

errant relic
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sounds sick but i feel like theres too much low end missing from the vocals to the point where it sounds a bit wierd like its cutting some other frequncies? also the we do what we want sample has too much high end now it kinda hurts ur ears try keeping a little more of the bass in bc ur current bass is very subby

queen niche
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okay lemme have a look

errant relic
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👍

queen niche
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I did do a low cut on the synth

errant relic
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yeah but try keep some more of it in

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bc ur bass is very subby

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and i feel like youve cut a bit too much low end maybe

queen niche
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yeah I just cant find a good mid bass

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yeah I think you're right

errant relic
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try it out see how it goes :)

queen niche
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oooo

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sounds a lot better

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you smart man

errant relic
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😂😂 oooooo

queen niche
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I might need to automate the EQ so that the low cut is still there in the breakdown, I feel like it's made it too bassy for the breakdown

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thoughts?

errant relic
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yeah

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do that on the vocals and sample

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also try add a string on the part where its just the sample and the vocal

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or some ambience

queen niche
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there is a string and a clock there, can you not hear it?

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might need to make it louder

errant relic
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yeah try that

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just needs to fill some more space

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try add a riser

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one thats longer

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if that makes anysense

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so u can hear it earlier on

queen niche
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yeah

errant relic
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or maybe one thats more noticable

queen niche
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Okay I think im getting there, made an extended mix

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I think the bass is too quiet now

errant relic
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sick but theres a bit too much reverb on the clap id say, the strings a bit too loud, try add some delay in the bits where hes not singing like those little gapes automate the delay dry / wet also the sample comes into fast try do like a reverb build so make another channel with like the start of the sample like just play one note and have the reverb decay time at max at dry / wet at like 50 and automate the volume to go from none to full and then when the actual sample starts playing put the volume straight back down

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also get rid of the low end on everything before u do that

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so automate the low end

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on the reese and stuff