#d1 ngmi junior, remade resume pls advise

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crimson jungle
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in all seriousness need advice, been trying to land something for this summer but haven't gotten much luck so far, us citizen btw

vapid basin
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hey @crimson jungle need to add more bullets with more details in experience and projects section. also need to make tailored resume based on JD. if you have more questions or help, DM me.

crimson jungle
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bump

slow ingot
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Looks solid overrall, but i think you can expand on some of the bullets. For example , the diagnosed and resolved systems failures... You could list out some of things that you did. Another one would be for the for the Employee Registry(first bullet). Did you use EKS? Self managed k8s on EC2? Helm? etc...

chilly zephyr
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The first internship bullet is solid but still reads a bit task-focused. You say what you built, but not clearly what it unlocked for the business. So highlight impact like latency reduction, revenue impact, or system reliability improvements if possible.

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The second internship (startup) feels slightly scattered across too many technologies. It makes it harder to tell what you’re actually strong at, so I’d bias it more toward one theme (backend systems or infra) instead of listing everything. Especially if there are unique points/tasks you worked on that could differentiate you from other applicants. Maybe theres a unique Ai bullet you could add many others dont have

crimson jungle
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thanks i appreciate it, will update