What am I missing for new grad?

[wintry lion]

Wym that looks cracked

I think you should remove the revelant course work & remove the blue

[hushed gazelle]

orz

not missing much

think ur just unlucky

[heavy flume]

i just wanted hit all the key words in case they pre scans it

[meager seal]

I feel like the first experience is prob the one ppl will look at the most so ill give some shower thoughts on it

ig the first thing would be that "gained experience" isnt a great verb to start this bullet off, so I would probably just incorporate this bullet into the others somehow

IG for the second bullet u might wanna do some "storytelling" as what you did. the ai powered search engine tells me nothing about how it was useful to the company (was it like for documentation, reports??? etc). so some context and lore on that bullet would make it stronger

if that doesnt float ur boat u can also capture some technical aspects of the work involved. like how was this search relevance even measured? Did u do some data related shenanigans to curate info to find a NDCG? or something else like binary relevance measures

and yadadadayada u can apply this to all the bullets tbh so yea